Penname: lilsunseeker [Contact]

Real name: Alison

Member Since: January 18 2013

Membership status: Member

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Single, Professional, Black woman, live in South Florida no children 34.



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Summary:

Zoey Vance woke up in the hospital with no memory of her life before that moment. She doesn't even know her own name. Now she has to try and put the pieces of her life back together with the help of the man who hit her with his car that fateful night. As her memories start to return she wonders if she is better off not knowing who she really is. 

Brian Preston is consumed with guilt, the woman just ran out into the street with no warning. He coudln't avoid hitting her. He feels it is his personal responsibility to care for her until she can care for herself and moves her in with him and his fiance, Macy. As time wears on he starts to wonder if he wants her around to ease his guilt or if there aren't bigger emotions at play.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 33
Completed:Yes
Word count: 77720
Read Count: 103528
Published: July 19 2014
Updated: October 14 2018


Title: Memories Lost

I think Darren is jealous, Brian needs to stepup. Thanks for the update.

Author's Response:

That is an interesting theory about Darren!

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Date: January 25 2015

Title: Memories Lost

Lol, I think I like Macy...she's honest at least :-)

Author's Response:

Honesty can count for something. Thanks for commenting.

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Date: August 06 2014

Title: Memories Lost

Great chapter

Author's Response:

Thanks!

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Date: August 06 2014

Title: Memories Lost

Cute couple I like how they interact with each other.

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Date: August 15 2014

Title: Memories Lost

Kind of can't blame Macy for being concerned however her attack wasn't called for. I would love it if he heard the entire conversation. She needs to figure out what she can do for work then move out. If he wants to see her when she's not there then he will make an effort. Excellent update. Thanks

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Date: December 04 2014

Title: Memories Lost

I think he's going to like her and Brian is going to be pissed

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Date: December 31 2014

Title: Memories Lost

Love the update, you did a great job!

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Date: January 10 2015

Title: Memories Lost

I still like him, he's a nice guy. Love the extra update. You rock!!!

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Date: January 11 2015

Title: Memories Lost

Lol, I thought it was too funny when she told him to let her go and started to take off her shoes.

Author's Response:

When the shoes come off you KNOW it's about to go down.

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Date: February 03 2015

Title: Memories Lost

Derrick is too smooth for me.

Author's Response:

Ain't he though? Thanks for reading!

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Date: June 12 2015

Title: Memories Lost

Hopefully he will contact her or her father, not Macy.

Author's Response:

Thats a stong possibility considering he doesnt like Macy anyway.

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Date: June 19 2015

Title: Chapter 13: Dinner

Love it

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Date: November 10 2017

Title: Chapter 24: Games

Great update

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Date: October 21 2018

Title: Chapter 25: Uninvited Pt. 1

Can't stand liars, the truth always comes out.

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Date: October 21 2018

Title: Chapter 29: Broken

What?!

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Date: October 21 2018

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Summary:

tbk


Camille Jones accepted society's problem with her body long ago. Yet, she can't help the insecurity felt when approached by gym owner Ryan Kahuna, he was most women's wet dream. He could have any woman he wanted. 


Including her.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Extreme Language, Fluff, Kink, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 11368
Read Count: 16322
Published: July 30 2014
Updated: August 28 2014


Title: Chapter 2: Gym Rat

Lol, loved the start. I think its great that you didn't make her perfect. Or dark skin with gray eyes, that always kills me. Why must so many writers feel that dark eyes and a brown complexion is not attractive. That they have to make the woman have gray, hazel or green eyes. :-(

Author's Response:

No! I don't want her perfect either! I hate reading that in stories or I'll see that in chapter one the woman is "mocha" with "hazel orbs" then in chapter seven she's suddenly "caramel" and I'm like...whoa there! What happened!!

It's not that I hate reading about women who are dark with light eyes or light skinned with light eyes, however it gets old fast. Most black women have dark eyes (at least) and there are a lot of dark ones too...I prefer to read about them (because it's how I look). I like to see all kinds of black women be portrayed as confident and beautiful! 

 

Thank you lilsunseeker for your review and I'm glad we're on similar character wave lengths!

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Date: July 31 2014

Title: Chapter 4: Parking Lot Pimpin

I hope the next time he sees and talks to her he admits that he owns the gym. She will find out and that will be a problem, he can say he normally doesn't say or something but because of her distrust that will be a problem. Great update

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Date: August 15 2014

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Summary:

Leiya Tate was a woman on the run from the life she thought she wanted and the man she once loved. When she learns that her ex-husband plans to take sole custody of her son, she hatches a plan for the both of them to disappear forever. So how does the ex-wife of one of the most prominent and powerful businessmen in the country disappear? That was the question Leiya asked herself until she comes across a photo she'd tucked away of her mother and the aunt she never knew. Adele Waters was the light at end of a tunnel filled with darkness; her way out of Adrien's grasp. It didn't hurt that she resided in a town so small that someone like Adrien Tate would never take notice. Here, Leiya is able to breath again....to live again, if she dares. Just as she decides to let go, she finds herself facing the devil in a fight for everything she has.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:No
Word count: 22230
Read Count: 12877
Published: September 10 2014
Updated: September 25 2016


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Wow, she went there herself I didn't think she had it in her.

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Date: April 24 2016

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Summary:

Sally McDonald is not who anyone thinks. Her life is filled with secrets. Some she doesn't even know about. But when Storm Monsello sees the terrified girl one night, he never expects how much her secrets would reveal the dark actions of the people he trusted the most.  



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Character Death, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 43
Completed:No
Word count: 133222
Read Count: 426607
Published: September 21 2014
Updated: April 26 2020


Title: Chapter 5: Time Together

Catching up, great update and changes.

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Date: February 16 2015

Title: Chapter 1: Coincidence

Okay, so I read this on here before it was good then and now...it does feel a little different but sounds pretty much the same. Good luck with the re write.

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Date: October 10 2014

Title: Chapter 22: Come Closer To Me

I hope she gives him a chance and moves in with him, don't be a chicken.

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Date: December 06 2015

Title: Chapter 23: Another Side

Hater....

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Date: January 20 2016

Title: Chapter 24: The Friends You Keep

I really like Storm, he has a good character money hasn't made him into something else.

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Date: January 24 2016

Title: Chapter 35: My Best Friend

Love the new chapters

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Date: June 13 2018

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Summary:


   Caleb Garrison has been in love with Grey ever since they were children. He even told his parents while a child that someday he would marry her. However, there was one problem...although adopted, she was legally his sister.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 13
Completed:Yes
Word count: 29115
Read Count: 36929
Published: October 07 2014
Updated: November 05 2017


Title: Chapter 8: Disappointment

Welcome back, he has to break it off with Jenna. That's going to be ugly..

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Date: February 17 2015

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