Penname: lilsunseeker [Contact]

Real name: Alison

Member Since: January 18 2013

Membership status: Member

Bio:

Single, Professional, Black woman, live in South Florida no children 34.



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On Hiatus: No

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Love, Sister: A Short Romance by TheHistorian
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 116]
Summary:


   Caleb Garrison has been in love with Grey ever since they were children. He even told his parents while a child that someday he would marry her. However, there was one problem...although adopted, she was legally his sister.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 13
Completed:Yes
Word count: 29115
Read Count: 36929
Published: October 07 2014
Updated: November 05 2017

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Title: Chapter 5: Timid

I'm glad he told her but he's just making it bad for her later if he wants her to be with him. Needs to break with her friend...

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Date: October 09 2014
Title: Chapter 3: Anger * Shame

That was so dumb....

Author's Response:

HAHA!

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Date: October 09 2014
Title: Chapter 2: Jealousy

If he keeps up with Jenna she's gonna get hurt.

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Date: October 09 2014
Title: Chapter 1: Sister

Feel sorry for him...

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Date: October 09 2014
Title: Chapter 9: Ready

Their relationship is a bloody mess, he needs to break up with Jenna it's not fair on her.

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Date: February 18 2015
His Webcam Girl by PassionFruit
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 63]
Summary:

Felicia Adams doesn't have a regular life. She's a single mother working two jobs trying to keep a roof over her and her son's heads. One of those jobs includes being a webcam girl. She does it all for guys who are too shy to meet girls in reality, from harmless flirting to sexual acts. She then meets Andrew Harper, the sexy mysterious billionaire. Andrew just can't keep a girlfriend. His dates are selfish gold diggers, and all they want is to shine in the spotlight. All he wants is a girl to one day marry, he can't possibly find a wife on Virtualdates.com, right?




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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 9176
Read Count: 25372
Published: December 21 2014
Updated: April 08 2015

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Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Nice update, thanks

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Date: February 15 2015
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great start, love that you made her dark without light eyes. What's wrong with dark brown eyes?! Thanks Alison

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Date: December 21 2014
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Loved the fact her boss supported her, cute.

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Date: January 10 2015
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Love the story, Andrew in this chapter was disappointing :-(
Great job

Author's Response:

Andrew needs to shape up. :) Thanks for reading and enjoying.

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Date: March 08 2015
Take Your Time by god gave me style
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 39]
Summary:

It's been fifteen years since Aria has smelled the sweetness of Tennessee. She's been running as hard and fast as she can, but he's always there, just a step behind her. She'll never be free of him... but the question is, does she want to be?



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:Yes
Word count: 19659
Read Count: 6076
Published: December 30 2014
Updated: February 01 2015

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Title: Chapter 1: -one-

I don't know if I feel sorry for her or not, great start though.

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Date: January 19 2015
Title: Chapter 4: -four-

Cute story :-)

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Date: February 01 2015
Never Ordinary by LawyerForLove
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 40]
Summary:

Tina Hamilton's mother always told her to travel in style for she never knows who she could run into. Who knew her mothers words would actually prove true.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 7744
Read Count: 4669
Published: January 14 2015
Updated: February 15 2015

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Title: Chapter 1: Terminal D

I like it and him...

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Date: January 18 2015
Title: Chapter 2: Berlin - Munich

I love the story I don't blame Tina, I'm sure his body was amazing. ...

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Date: January 18 2015
Unique Alterations by Cliche
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 16]
Summary: Ginger Ross is a woman with a plan and that plan doesn't include any room for romantic entanglements. However, her plan undergoes some unique alterations when a fender bender causes her to cross paths with Jerry Medina, a widower who is trying to piece together a future vastly different than the one he had planned.

Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 1092
Read Count: 2107
Published: January 17 2015
Updated: January 23 2015

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Fender Bender

Nice start

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Date: January 17 2015
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Heart of Lies by K Carr
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 239]
Summary:

Not everyone gets a happy ending...

Hey guys,

Heart of Lies Book 1&2 have now been published under one of my pennames Alma Muerte.

FB Author page: Alma Muerte.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 2951
Read Count: 32564
Published: January 27 2015
Updated: September 10 2015

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Title: Heart of Lies

I don't like him, she needs to look out for herself. If he really cared he would let her go to a safe place away from him. How would he like to live and see her with a family. Urghhhhhh

Author's Response:

Hi lilsunseeker,

Totally understand the way you feel. Thanks for reviewing.

K.

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Date: January 29 2015
Title: Heart of Lies

Okay, so I normally don't like his selfish ways. I don't like the parents either wth!?! What about her feelings :-(

You made it where I kinda feel sorry for him but I don't know if she or I would want to live there with that bitchy wife of his....

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Date: February 03 2015
NIARA by Elizabeth Griffin
Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 22]
Summary:

NIARA: in one summer a young girl could lose it all... (The Urban Girl Book 1) by [Griffin, Elizabeth]



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 15660
Read Count: 9377
Published: February 02 2015
Updated: March 04 2015

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Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I hope for her daughters sake when she wakes up she gets her act together.

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Date: February 03 2015
Foolish Hearts Never Stop Beating by mocasoul
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 54]
Summary:

It had been five years.  Cynthia had moved on with career and her life after not hearing from Caleb, her drug addict mess of a rock star boss, for four of those years.  When Caleb returns from Ireland, she faces her feelings for him while trying to survive a new strained relationship with another man.  Will Caleb be clean and will he find his way back into her life and her heart?

 

Sequel to Foolish



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:No
Word count: 56219
Read Count: 30796
Published: March 01 2015
Updated: April 24 2016

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Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I don't remotely like her friend Flo...she needs to make her own choices not what Flo thinks she should do.

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Date: May 09 2015
Avoiding the Storm by black_beauty904
Rated: Mature Content
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Summary:

 

 

 

 

 

Zaira Jacobs and Eli Jacobs (her son) runs away from their past, from the pain, and from a 6 foot 4 German (Adrian Hitzag).

 

However, Adrian is not too eager to let his beloved mate escape from his grasp.

 

Follow the story of a determine mother, a curious son, and a possessive German.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: BDSM, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 24066
Read Count: 43648
Published: April 01 2015
Updated: January 07 2016

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Title: Chapter 8: Darkness, take me please[7]

What's going on with her son, that will be her first question. Welcome back btw.

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Date: January 08 2016
Title: Chapter 2: The Beginning [1]

Yes, I remember it! I'm glad you're going to finish :-)

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Date: April 20 2015
Title: Chapter 7: Never let them tame your soul [6]

Excellent update, welcome back

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Date: June 07 2015
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Below The Surface by Alexandria Glass
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 181]
Summary:

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Chance Gyllenborgh seems to have it all. A pregnant, loving girlfriend, a close knit family, and great life.

 

Angelina Walker is running. She's a top chef and restaurantuer and a workaholic. She throws herself into work to avoid her personal life. Needing a break, she settles down in a town and meet a variety of different people, including Chance.

 

Things seem great at first glance but Below The Surface is where monsters lie and sociopaths dwell.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:Yes
Word count: 58269
Read Count: 48956
Published: May 21 2015
Updated: January 22 2016

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Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Well done...going to get my cigarette and I don't smoke :-)

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Date: June 19 2015
Lovers' Dance Part 2 by K Carr
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 225]
Summary:

Part 2



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 11288
Read Count: 22100
Published: June 09 2015
Updated: October 05 2015

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Title: Lovers' Dance Part 2

Several things this story is so charming it is often so funny I start laughing you tend to forget that you're reading a story. Anyway, why does she let herself get into these problems he hasn't been in town in 2 weeks because he was WORKING. I know she wants to celebrate but have him meet you there or go out with them the next night, come on Madi you're smarter then that. :-(

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Date: July 03 2015
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So glad to see this back!!!
I like Matt I know he is controlling but he means well, she can work on that habit of his.

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Date: June 09 2015
Title: Lovers' Dance Part 2

I think he's feels insecure about her that's why he does and says somethings. LOVE. IT....

Author's Response:

Hey Lilsunseeker,

Glad to know you still love LD! And you're right with pointing out the issue of personal insecurities. We all experience them in relationships, one way or the other. Thanks for reviewing.

K. 

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Date: June 09 2015

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.