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The Pale One by WrittenC
Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

I experienced him on paper long before I witnessed him on film. In my mind, he was so much more than a villain to be conquered and killed. He deserved his own story, love and maybe a family. I decided to give it to him. My friend said, "He would make a great character for a story" I couldn't agree more. 



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Categories: Movies, Books
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Fantasy
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:No
Word count: 10330
Read Count: 9404
Published: November 13 2013
Updated: September 23 2014

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

please please please pretty please continue, the story has just begun and i cant stop reading. like really. its great. 

id love to see goza show a vulnerable side. he seems to need emoladla more than she him. maybe she will be sucessful in her attempts of running away and we will see this side.

the sexual domination between them is hot as hell but what about the fam she left? why was she sacrificed? seems like a great warrior, would she not be an asset? or is this a trait of all her people?

also the wolf (who is she/him?, some sort of spirit guardian?) im unfamiliar with the story/tolkien you are referring to so its all brand new to me. 

this is all so interesting and good, thank you for sharing it with us!

good luck on your exams! come back to us when you pass lol

 Reviewer: business Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 03 2014

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