Penname: madison [Contact]

Real name: madison kai

Member Since: February 20 2013

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[Reviews - 286]
Summary:

stories/2209/images/To_Love_the_Devil__copy_Fotor2.jpg

 

 

Loving a man is hard enough try loving the devil?

 

How do you love a man that doesn't want to be love?

 

How can you care for a person who could careless about you?

 

How do you try to find a soul mate from a soulless man?

 

Jacqueline finds herself sold to devil she try's to unfreeze a heart that seems untouchable.

 

The harder she try's to love him the more lost she gets into the battle of loving the devil.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 16
Completed:No
Word count: 58549
Read Count: 113945
Published: September 24 2012
Updated: March 31 2016


Title: Chapter 16: 99 Problems

Glad you are back with an update. I hope to read another chapter soon.

Reviewer: madison Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 01 2016

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 22]
Summary:

Tomaso lived for Nicholi and they both survived harsh times together but now Nicholi was moving on with someone else and Tomaso was on his own. That is, until he meets Nathaniel. The attraction is instant and Tomaso wants nothing to do with him for several reasons, the first and most important one was that no one knew he was gay and he wanted to keep it that way. If only forgetting Nathaniel was as easy as forgetting the rest.

 

Nathaniel knew he was gay and he didn't try to hide it. He hated commitment and loved playing around, that’s why Nathaniel thought he would be a bachelor forever. However things changed when he met Tomaso. The Italian wasn’t the type that Nathaniel would usually go for but he couldn’t get him out of his head. Now he wants more than the Italian’s body he wants his heart.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance, Slash, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 9019
Read Count: 4038
Published: June 13 2013
Updated: April 02 2014


Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 3- Back and forth

Oh lordie! I have been waiting for an update forever! Please don't make me wait this long again for a chapter! I love this story!

Reviewer: madison Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 02 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 277]
Summary:

Lance was a man who had it all and lost it all. He was down and out and was ready to give up because he had nothing to live for. Nina was a woman who had enough of being used and was trying to start her life over in a new city. When these two meet will Lance have something to live for? Or will he continue to live in misery. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 27
Completed:Yes
Word count: 40637
Read Count: 72033
Published: December 09 2013
Updated: July 06 2015


Title: Chapter 4: Meeting in the Ladies Room

This is really great! Keep going. The chapters are way too short girl! lol

Reviewer: madison Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 13 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 92]
Summary:

Porter had been gone for while, traveling and moving on with his life. His father’s illness brings him home, but what he didn’t expect was to be drawn back in by the reason why he left—her.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 14802
Read Count: 11210
Published: December 28 2013
Updated: April 12 2016


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

I hope Hudson is gay because now two men will fight over a woman and someone will get hurt. :-)



Author's Response:

Haha! I love everyone's theories. I'll unwrap everything and we'll see!

Reviewer: madison Signed starstarstarstar
Date: April 09 2016

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Please continue!



Author's Response:

Will do!

Reviewer: madison Signed starstarstarstar
Date: April 07 2016

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 292]
Summary:

She's a mess he can't help wanting to fix.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: Southern Gentlemen
Chapters: 3
Completed:Yes
Word count: 90
Read Count: 69509
Published: January 11 2014
Updated: October 19 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great start.

Reviewer: madison Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 11 2014

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 65]
Summary:

He was stuck, having a midlife crisis before the ripe age of fifty. But then he met her. And she became much more than life. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 29164
Read Count: 30421
Published: November 28 2014
Updated: March 13 2015


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Mr. Ken needs to file for divorce ASAP. He needs to stop being a Pussy! His wife is a first  class bitch. Lets see how Jamica and he works out. Let him have some fun for a change. Why should his wife have all the fun. He deserves something new and fresh in his life. He is so sad. Jamica should put a pep in his step! lol



Author's Response:

You are right. He should have some fun, but I want his fun to be the right way, and for him to live life without holding on to the hurt that his wife has caused him. We will see where this all goes!

Reviewer: madison Signed
Date: November 28 2014

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 63]
Summary:

Felicia Adams doesn't have a regular life. She's a single mother working two jobs trying to keep a roof over her and her son's heads. One of those jobs includes being a webcam girl. She does it all for guys who are too shy to meet girls in reality, from harmless flirting to sexual acts. She then meets Andrew Harper, the sexy mysterious billionaire. Andrew just can't keep a girlfriend. His dates are selfish gold diggers, and all they want is to shine in the spotlight. All he wants is a girl to one day marry, he can't possibly find a wife on Virtualdates.com, right?




Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 9176
Read Count: 25309
Published: December 21 2014
Updated: April 08 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I am Mixed race woman who identifies as black. I don't need to educate myself as you put it, I know what's up. I disagree with you about MOST black men treating black women like crap. It is your story as you say. I was just making the point that one does not have to step on the BLACK MAN to make the White man look good in stories that are interracial. You seem upset' and that was not my intention.



Author's Response:

I'm not upset nor am I stepping on black men to make white men look good. I don't think white men are better than black men cause at the end of the day white men are still gonna be attracted to eurocentric beauty standards, and black men can be that way as well. My female character does not have eurocentric beauty, and the male character is not a saint nor am I implying that he's a saint because he's white. I just want this to be cleared up.

Reviewer: madison Signed
Date: January 12 2015

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Why do a lot of writers of interracial stories make the BLACK MAN THE VILLIAN!?? I like the story except for that part. The stuff the character spews out of his mouth. YUCK. Is Travis black or white?



Author's Response:

Well in my story, I made Robert like that to portray him as a successful but self-hating black man. Now let me just inform you that black people can discriminate their own people. For example, Team Lightskin vs. Team Darkskin. In this country, hell even in the damn world, black women are treated like shit, and most black men are the ones treating us like shit. If we aren't lightskin or white passing, then we're ugly. It's those Eurocentric beauty standards. I'm a lightskinned woman, but I believe that lightskin (or white) doesn't always mean beautiful and darkskin doesn't always mean ugly. I'm not being rude or mean when I say this, but please educate yourself on this subject because we as black women need to know this type of stuff. I know it's a work of fiction, being that it's my work of fiction, I just wanted to clarify some things with you whether you care or not.

Reviewer: madison Signed
Date: January 10 2015

Rated: All Ages
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[Reviews - 11]
Summary:

Alexis went to work expecting a boring and uneventive day, little did she know, a certain redhead was about to change that. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3737
Read Count: 3090
Published: May 29 2015
Updated: May 29 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Left Jacket

Well written. It flowed nicely. The ending was great, I did not expect the dine and dash. lol....I can't wait to hear his story, also the story of why the jacket is so important. I like that the male lead is not some rich dude coming to sweep the diner waitress off her feet. Quite refreshing. 10!

Reviewer: madison Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 29 2015

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 38]
Summary:

  I was broken when he found me,damaged goods..My name held no meaning when shame fit so well in its place but he saw me, the real me, that little thread I held onto and kept in a box hidden beneath my chest. He knew my flaws and instead of running in the opposite direction he ran towards me hitting me dead on like a sledgehammer .He licked my wounds, allowing my scars to heal before peeling back each layer of myself to devour and claim, he brought me unspeakable pleasure using my body as his canvas.Many would of considered him a monster, a killer, an evil man. His Name was Nickolai  Harkov with the Russian Bravta and he was the man I fell in love with.

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     I was the second in line to lead in the Harkov Bravta. The hardcore exterior I portrayed made me who I was a lethal and merciless killer . Darkness nearly overtook me, until I stumbled upon Tiara. She didn't know it but she was my light that pulled at the vessel beating beneath my rib cage. She made me question life, before her nothing matter, but now I would do anything within my power to be with the woman that gave me a reason to live.

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:Yes
Word count: 8575
Read Count: 9781
Published: July 15 2015
Updated: July 23 2015


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Loved it! Short and sweet and not dragged out. An epilogue would be nice though, LOL



Author's Response:

Lol thank you for reading, I'm glad you liked it.!! I think I just may do that!

Reviewer: madison Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 21 2015

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Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 151]
Summary:

Sometimes hurting the person you love is easier than showing them love, especially when you're hurting inside.

Saint-Luc and Naomi Adebayo-Roux aren't any different.

This is their story.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Friendship, Inspirational, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 28
Completed:No
Word count: 46514
Read Count: 375715
Published: October 14 2015
Updated: July 15 2017


Title: Chapter 4: 4.

I busted out laughing when she said "I have bushy pubes." lol

Reviewer: madison Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 03 2015

Title: Chapter 5: 5.

I wish you had written a love scene, I was reading all the chapter fast because I knew the love scene would have been good. Sadly I was disappointed because there was none. I was cracking up at the vaginal farts..lol



Author's Response:

Lol, I usually skip over love scenes when I'm reading but more importantly I'd have to feel it to actually want to write about it, in this instance I just wasn't feeling it.

Reviewer: madison Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 03 2015

Rated: All Ages
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[Reviews - 11]
Summary:

All Noah has known in life has been war, pain and loss. Now, he has a chance to start a new life, in a new city, with a new family, And above all those, he has a chance to find love.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 9581
Read Count: 9713
Published: May 21 2016
Updated: January 10 2017


Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Well done! I gave it a 10



Author's Response:

*blushes like crazy and hides behind collar*

Thank you so much :)

Reviewer: madison Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 25 2016

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 43]
Summary:

                  Now Available

Elizabeth Griffin

     WWW.ELIZABETHGRIFFIN.NET



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:Yes
Word count: 8374
Read Count: 5299
Published: July 25 2016
Updated: June 21 2017


Title: Chapter 1: Preview of the book cover

I was abrupt and my reaction was viseral, let me tell you why. I am a biracial woman who identifies as black. and I am sometimes appalled of how some black women who write these interracial romances describe things. A lot of writers will put a white man on a pedestal in their books/ stories even legitimizing rascist imagery and traits as something normal because they are so hell bent on making the white protagonist "perfect" while justifying their obvious flaws. Some will even write racist traits and have the female lead overlook them. Sometimes the self hate is so evident and if you dare say something they get upset. I appreciate your thoughful reply. I saw one response was deleted. I don't know if that one differed. I was acerbic because I found it offensive. I look forward to reading more of your work. Regards, Madison



Author's Response:

Hello Madison,

 

The first two reviews were not deleted.  The two people never write a comment.  I have thus far never deleted a readers review, because they all have been helpful.  They allow me to see my writing through another person's eyes.

 

I did not take offense with your comments.  I appreciated  your honesty.  You did not lecture me which has happened in the past.

 Thank you for sharing your views and your personal feelings.  I do not usually write BWWM, but I learned of the genre two years ago.  I am a struggling writer and decided to write BWWM romance novels in addition to my medical series.  However, your comments remind me to write responsibly.  My books usually include multiple races.

I love telling stories.  

I value your response so much that I went to the library and took out several books:  1 on the state of Tennessee, 1 on Nashville, 1 on southern short stories.  Thanks again.

 

Elizabeth Griffin

Reviewer: madison Signed
Date: December 21 2016

Title: Chapter 2: Teaser

"Genteel manners of a CONFEDERATE GENTLEMAN?" Really?



Author's Response:

Hello Madison,

 

Thank you for your response.  I posted two responses to your comments, but posted the as reviews.  I blame the errors on answering it at 04:50 in the morning.  Please read them and comment.  Your review caused me to pause and reflect.  Thanks again.

 

Elizabeth Griffin

Reviewer: madison Signed
Date: December 21 2016

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 133]
Summary:

As a young woman struggles to provide a better life for her and her brother. She first has to face the many challenges that come in her path. One being a big bad wolf.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 5788
Read Count: 15228
Published: September 22 2016
Updated: October 11 2016


Title: Chapter 2: The Beginning

I am intrigued. Hope the next chapter is soon. Good job.

Reviewer: madison Signed starstarstarstar
Date: September 22 2016

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