Penname: iamwhatiam6904 [Contact]

Real name: Bretagne Ballard

Member Since: January 19 2009

Membership status: Member

Bio: I love interraciall and multicultural stories. I'm more of a reader...not much of a writer but we will see! Someone may inspire me.


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Summary:

I'm just a regular, college girl trying to make it through life. He's the talk of the town, quickly rising to his predestined fame. I mean, he's hot, he's Irish, and he likes me; me! He's everything I think about, he's the strength when I'm weak, he's the air that I breathe. It's overwhelming but I can't get enough of it, of him. Can I deal with everything that comes with him? Will little old me be enough for this rising star? Or am I getting my hopes up for nothing?

 

Fuck.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 22
Completed:No
Word count: 89832
Read Count: 28691
Published: June 11 2015
Updated: February 21 2016


Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I just really freaking love this story. The romantic in me gushes everytime there is an update. Katya has a good head on her shoulders and a lot of personality. And of course I love me some Jamie. I can't wait to see where this relationship goes. Great update!

Reviewer: iamwhatiam6904 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 25 2015

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Summary:

Sequel to "Love, God & Ultimatums"



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 38
Completed:No
Word count: 227600
Read Count: 78679
Published: July 03 2015
Updated: May 09 2021


Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Missing Pieces

I love everything about this story! I love the angst while their relationship grows. Brandon is such a layered character with a dark past. That is always attractive. But that may also cause some issues. I like Diya too but she irks me because she sometimes comes off as immature. Like I know she wants to know all of Brandon's secrets but they have only been together for less than two months. And the last time I checked, NO ONE in her life knows about him. I know she has her reasons but she can't expect him to bare it all while she bares nothing. That isn't remotely fair. 

I hope they make it. I feel like they have a long, hard journey ahead of them. 



Author's Response:

Whether Brandon and Diya make it remains to be seen.  But they definitely have a hard road ahead of them.  As you've predicted, Brandon's past will create serious issues in their relationship.

Most of Diya's family doesn't know about Brandon (for reasons that will become increastingly clear), but she did tell her best friend Zeria and her sister, Chandi, about him in ch. 1 and 3 respectively.  When is comes to Brandon, Diya's been pretty forthcoming about everything except her feelings, and she's still trying to work through those herself.  Her family are the ones in the dark.  

Knowing all Brandon's secrets isn't a thing for Diya.  She was perfectly content calling off story time the first time he shut her down.  Brandon insisting she pick another tattoo only to stonewall her again was where her the attitude came from (compounded by all the day's annoyances that proceded).  She'd just blindly given him the trust he asked for with regards to Marisol only to find something else that, in her mind, he can't trust her with (hence the "reciprocity is for pussies" jab).  Then, when she challenges him about story time and his "I will love you eventually" statement in the next chapter, he seems to make light of it.  After realizing she's falling in love and he's not, but is still affected by his ex, she felt hurt by that.  Her reaction wasn't the best, but was, in my mind, understandable.  However, that is subject to interpretation.

Thanks for reading and reviewing, iamwhatiam!  Glad you're enjoying the story so far.

Reviewer: iamwhatiam6904 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 19 2015

Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - The Cause (Revised)

All I have to say is I love this story and I hope to God that they make it. 



Author's Response:

Me too : /  Thanks iamwhatiam6904!!!

Reviewer: iamwhatiam6904 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 28 2016

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