Penname: Musicluva [Contact]

Real name: Monica

Member Since: March 09 2013

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 18]
Summary:

Too much Beauty Can Be deadly.

Rivert City's Make up Company is going big with their new Line.

'Slyvia's Secrets' named after the owner's granddaughter Slyvia who indeed has her share of secrets and skeleltons lets be frank bodies in her closet.

But this makeup line is unusual.

Why are people going missing?

That's where Zyra Comes in, She is hired to find out things But whats going to happen when she finds out the truth about everything about the Luxurous Makeup Company and Its Dark Family?

Will she make it out alive?

OR better yet with her sanity?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction, Miscellaneous
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Erotica, Horror, Mystery
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Dubcon, Graphic Violence, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 10726
Read Count: 2426
Published: December 12 2014
Updated: January 29 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Red has always been my color.

Wow!  All of these people are nuts!  I've never read anything like this. I'm curious to see where it goes. Who is this person that they hired?

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Date: December 17 2014

Title: Chapter 3: i'm starting to see red

Really curious about Zyra. 

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Date: December 18 2014

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 63]
Summary:

Felicia Adams doesn't have a regular life. She's a single mother working two jobs trying to keep a roof over her and her son's heads. One of those jobs includes being a webcam girl. She does it all for guys who are too shy to meet girls in reality, from harmless flirting to sexual acts. She then meets Andrew Harper, the sexy mysterious billionaire. Andrew just can't keep a girlfriend. His dates are selfish gold diggers, and all they want is to shine in the spotlight. All he wants is a girl to one day marry, he can't possibly find a wife on Virtualdates.com, right?




Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 9176
Read Count: 25314
Published: December 21 2014
Updated: April 08 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

 

 

Hmmm.  A bit eerie that he didn't wanna show his face. Great start. 

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Date: December 22 2014

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Robert is a jerk! It burns me up when ppl self-discriminate! 😡



Author's Response:

Yep it's disgusting. 

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Date: January 11 2015

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 18]
Summary:

 

 

MINE

Who can you trust in this fucked up world? Nobody that's who!

 

Jelena was forced to live in the real world after her parent's were gunned down. It ain't all cotton candy and gumdrops either. You either have two choices here in Vegas: TO LIVE OR DIE. Jelena thought she knew life but nothing prepared her for life with Milo Castillo.

 

This is the story of Jelena Vera.

 

She fell in love with a Boss.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Action-Adventure , Erotica, Family, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 7860
Read Count: 2960
Published: January 06 2015
Updated: January 16 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Introduction

Seems Gina should school her since she introduced her into that world. Good start so far. 

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Date: January 06 2015

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 40]
Summary:

Tina Hamilton's mother always told her to travel in style for she never knows who she could run into. Who knew her mothers words would actually prove true.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 7744
Read Count: 4665
Published: January 14 2015
Updated: February 15 2015


Title: Chapter 2: Berlin - Munich

Surprised she gave up the 'goods' so soon, but I suppose if the chemistry is right, why not?!  I hope now that ehy've gotten this out of their system, that they can build upon their relationship.

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Date: January 18 2015

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[Reviews - 16]
Summary: Ginger Ross is a woman with a plan and that plan doesn't include any room for romantic entanglements. However, her plan undergoes some unique alterations when a fender bender causes her to cross paths with Jerry Medina, a widower who is trying to piece together a future vastly different than the one he had planned.

Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 1092
Read Count: 2102
Published: January 17 2015
Updated: January 23 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Fender Bender

You have me intreagued.  Looking forward to the next update.

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Date: January 18 2015

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[Reviews - 44]
Summary:

Daniel has always been late for everything in his life. He's been late for puberty, dating girls, and even the "monkey in the bush". When he discovers his new neighbor next door is a woman, a very pretty woman, will he take a chance and ask her out? Or will his former bully, Nick Young, beat him to it?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 7978
Read Count: 10465
Published: January 23 2015
Updated: May 12 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Too funny! 😄

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed
Date: January 23 2015

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 239]
Summary:

Not everyone gets a happy ending...

Hey guys,

Heart of Lies Book 1&2 have now been published under one of my pennames Alma Muerte.

FB Author page: Alma Muerte.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 2951
Read Count: 32560
Published: January 27 2015
Updated: September 10 2015


Title: Heart of Lies

Great start. Looking forward to more. 



Author's Response:

Hey Musicluva,

Glad to hear you like it so far. Thanks for reviewing.

K.

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Date: January 28 2015

Title: Heart of Lies

That was intense!  Great update. I hope she doesn't do it. 

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Date: January 31 2015

Title: Heart of Lies

Hmmmm. Yeah, I believe Annabelle has something sinister up her sleeve. I'm sorry to hear that she cut her bond with her uncle since he was such an important part of her life. I hope they can find some way to restore what they had. 

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Date: August 12 2015

Title: Heart of Lies

I'm glad that Arric helped her to find it within herself to reach out to her uncle again. With her current situation, she needs as many genuine people in her court that she can find. That Annabelle, I think she has something up her sleeve and is up to no good at all. I find it hard to believe that Lys will be able to give her baby up to the coven once he/she is born. I also think Ero is having true feeling for Lys. This will def not be favorable for her where Annabelle is concerned.  Thanks for the update. Can't wait to see how this all plays out. 

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Date: September 10 2015

Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 22]
Summary:

NIARA: in one summer a young girl could lose it all... (The Urban Girl Book 1) by [Griffin, Elizabeth]



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 15660
Read Count: 9334
Published: February 02 2015
Updated: March 04 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Wow!  Great start. I'm sure a lot of people reading this may know of someoe who has had a similar experience. Interested in where your going with this one. 

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Date: February 02 2015

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Man, my heart aches at the idea of having to give up my child because I couldn't provide for them. Especially at such a young age.  But, in the end, what's most important is what would be best for the child. I wonder why she didn't visit all that time?  I can imagine she may have been ashamed, but I would be visiting as much as I cmoossibly could. Great update. Looking forward to the old school vibe! a86;a039;

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Date: February 06 2015

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 30]
Summary:

Years of craving can only end in satisfaction. Kory Lane and Kai Wu will soon learn that not all cravings can be appeased.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 16033
Read Count: 5579
Published: February 04 2015
Updated: July 10 2016


Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning

Wow!  That was hot like fiya! 🔥🔥🔥

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Date: February 05 2015

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Wow!  That was smokin!  Kai seems a bit mysterious ( in both a good and bad way). They need to have a discussion to determine which way this thing is headed. Especially since Kai is already involved. Looking out for your next update!  

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Date: August 16 2015

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[Reviews - 17]
Summary:

Ebony 'Bunny' Banks is the type of girl Clark Davis never thought he'd be in love with. With her cloud of hair and perfect imperfections, she wasn't the girl his parents or society taught him to go for. Clark Davis is the type of guy Ebony Banks would never notice with his close tie to the cheering hags and his movie star appearance. They are on two completely opposite sides of the popularity scale. Him being a pretty popular guy and her a wallflower. Yet somehow these two seemed to have found each other and the odds of love seems to be in their favor.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 3103
Read Count: 4832
Published: February 16 2015
Updated: February 28 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Him

Good start. Interested in where it will go.

 

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Date: February 16 2015

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 243]
Summary:

You can pick your friends. You can pick your nose. But you can't pick your family.  



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 25
Completed:No
Word count: 87982
Read Count: 45727
Published: April 06 2015
Updated: February 14 2019


Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Uh uhhmm!  Sleepovers won't ever be the same again! 😈

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Date: February 09 2016

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Shyla's mind seems to run a hundred miles per minute. It's comical 😄. Update soon. 

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Date: June 21 2015

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Hmmmm, their lives keep getting more complicated. Glad they got Matt out to have some fun. 

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Date: June 23 2015

Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Oh goodness. I hope Matt isn't having a heart attack. After the blow up with Lauren and Shyla as well as stress from his loss, and work, it wouldn't be too far fetched. 😯

He needs to decompress. Can't wait to see what happens. Don't leave us hanging on this cliff too long! 😜

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Date: September 29 2015

Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

They bicker like a married couple without the benefits. I think Shyla is attracted to Matt. I wonder why she didn't share her info about her visit to the jeweler after she found out he was killed?  Seems things are about to get turned up!  Update soon. 

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Date: December 25 2015

Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Dag, what a cliff hanger!!! 😁😄😝



Author's Response:

😏

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Date: January 28 2016

Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Matt knows he's wrong for that! Glad to see this update. 

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Date: December 31 2016

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[Reviews - 78]
Summary:

Her mistake was underestimating his obsession with her.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Dark Fic
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 24639
Read Count: 40309
Published: April 23 2015
Updated: July 14 2016


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter one

Interesting. I hope he's not a nut, for her sake. 

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 23 2015

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.