Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - Tug of War
This chapter was a true page turner! I love your writing style. Diya is crazy 😄. Brandon is ... *sigh*, *swoon* d84;a039;. However, he really needs to have a true heart to heart discussion with Marisol. I don't know what kind of spell she has over Brandon, but if he truly wants to be in a serious relationship with someone, then there should be some boundaries set. I'm not saying they can't be friends, but I can imagine how frustrating it is that you can't have an "intimate", drama-free night with your man without all of the constant stalker-ish interruptions. It wasn't as if Oscar was banging on her door at that very moment. Why didn't she caller her brother Rafe if the need was that immediate?! When Brandon told her, "I'm with Diya!", I took that as having three meanings:
1. I'm in a serious relationship with someone, please fall back.
2. I'm trying to spend some quality time with my woman.
3. I'm trying to f@ck my woman, so please stop calling!
I would think Marisol could have come up with an least one of those conclusions, right?! Either she is in denial, she's trying to block, or she doesn't think it's going to last. Either way, she's playing on Brandon's emotions (again). Diya is a good one. I would have been mad as ish that he stopped mid-screw on the ascent. Sheeeiiit!!! If it weren't for the binding ropes, she should have jumped on his ass and finished without him while he was on the phone. (I’m just kiding ... well, no, not really 😈). Maybe Mariosol would get the picture then!
Can’t wait until Sunday dinner! I can already small that drama. Great update!
Author's Response: Lol! You maybe right on all accounts. Marisol clearly doesn't see Brandon and Diya's relationship as something deserving for respect for yet to be disclosed reason. The next few chapters should shed some light on that.
Thanks sooooo much for the review, Musicluva, and for sticking in there with me, Brandon, and Diya through thick and thin!
Reviewer: Musicluva Signed
Date: October 03 2018