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Real name: Monica

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Summary:

Sequel to "Love, God & Ultimatums"



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 38
Completed:No
Word count: 227600
Read Count: 78667
Published: July 03 2015
Updated: May 09 2021


Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - [Bran]ded

I am officially obsessed with this story! Absolutely beautiful!!!! 🤗🤗🤗😘😍💖💖💖



Author's Response:

Thanks Musicluva!!!

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Date: March 04 2016

Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - [Bran]ded

So happy to see that Brandon finally confirmed what many of us could see all along, that he does love Diya.  You can tell she is pretty much on Cloud 9 right about now.  With the events in this latest chapter, you would think she would be shouting it from the mountain tops. Unfortunately, I know she won't be doing that any time soon if daddy dear is anywhere within earshot of hearing her.  One things for sure is when the fam lays eyes on her new tat, she's going to have to start talking.

Brandon is such a mystery based on how Diya describes his expressiive eyes/glances

... 'None of his handful of glances lasted more than a second, interest and amusement coloring each, as if he’d discovered something new and fascinating about me in the last fifteen minutes and couldn’t believe he’d been foolish enough not to see it before.' ...

What was he thinking here?

As for Brandon's question, 'Should we talk about this?'.  I think they've done more than enough talking, and expressing how much they've totally fallen for each other.  It's time!!! =0)

 

 



Author's Response:

Lol!  After eighteen chapters of near slips, I have to agree.  

As you've mentioned, the tattoo is bound to spark questions.  When and how Diya answers remains to be seen.

As for what Brandon was thinking, that's a good question.  It had to do with what she asked and what he was about to do, but I never settled on an exact thought.  I guess he's a bit of mystery to me too : )

Thanks Musicluva!

 

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Date: March 05 2016

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - First Date Redux

I'm missing my favorite story and couple. 😰 Update soon?



Author's Response:

Probably not, I'm sorry to say.  I recently started a job that has drastically decreased my free time, and I'm getting ready to move.  But AS SOON as I get settled, I'll work on completing and posting the next chapter (or two).  I apologize for the wait.  Thanks for your readership and continued interest, Musicluva!

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Date: September 07 2016

Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Rite of Possession

Was Diya's anxiety due to her feeling doubts of Brandon's true feelings/love for her?



Author's Response:

To a degree.  It was part feeling vulnerable and fearing not being loved in equal measure, part reacting to a depth of emotion she's never felt before.  

Thanks Musicluva!

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Date: May 24 2016

Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Honeymoon's Over

Hmmmm... Did Brandon perform a surprise drive-by or is it his brother 😮? Sounds like Branny and Diya was really getting it 'in' 😀.  Much needed release for their delayed gratification.  LOL @ Killa Camilla!  Maybe Mal picked up on her scent, and decided to let it be known.

So glad to see this update, but as always, I'm greedy for my favorite story 😋, so update soon. I'm anxious to find out who this visitor is! 



Author's Response:

Thanks Musicluva!!!  The wait for the unmasking of the mystery visitor is over.  Update posted : )

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Date: June 15 2016

Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - Surprise, Surprise

Awes man JJ, 😱😵, I don't know if I can get through without my Diya and Branny fix every now and again. I enjoy rereading anyway because it seems as if I discover something new each time. My vote would be no, puhleeez, I beg you 🙏🏾 ... don't make us wait. It's up to you though, as this is your masterpiece. 😌



Author's Response:

Thanks for the input and compliment, Musicluva!  For right now, I'll probably just keep posting as I go.  That way, people who don't want to wait can read now, and those who don't still have the option of waiting until the story is complete.

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Date: June 16 2016

Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - Surprise, Surprise

D@mn girl **swooning**. Where can I find a Branny Swagger and Romance 101 class!? Need to sign up a whole lotta men for that one. D@mn, d@mn, d@mn ....!!!



Author's Response:

Lol!  He is pretty yummy : )

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Date: June 16 2016

Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - Surprise, Surprise

Dag, so the honeymoon really is over, and the ish is gonna start hitting the fan. I can tell by the way Daddy De La Roy has responded so far. I have to give Diya some credit though ... it seems she was trying to hold it down with being open about her relationship.  I agreed with Diya in that, 'that' particular moment probably wasn't the best to introduce Brandon formally as her boyfriend to her dad.  Especially with Mannie (her dads chosen) present.  Also, given that she didn't get a chance to really plan for an introduction, then I would say she held it down pretty good.  Sadly, you can tell she would love to share her new love with the world, but is afraid of how it may impact them.  One thing is for sure is that they're in for a challenge ... one I 'really' hope they're up for.

Diya and that ice pack had me crying!!! (LOL) 😅

One question ... will Mal and Camilla ever meet 😾😼?  Wonder what that encounter would be like? 

As always ... Great update. Thanks for giving us two! 😊



Author's Response:

You're so very welcome : )  Diya is a mess.  She did attempt to tell her father about Brandon, twice.  But it wasn't the right time and neither Brandon nor her father really gave her the opportunity.  You're absolutely right:  Brandon is Diya's world.  She would love to tell her family about him and have them love him as much as she does, but knows better and fears the impact their reaction will ultimately have on her and Brandon's relationship.  And for good reason.

Yes, Mal and Milla will meet, God help them all...

Thanks for reading and taking the time to review, Musicluva!!!  As my peoples would say, 'preshate cha!

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Date: June 17 2016

Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - The Friend of My Lover Ain't My Friend

Thanks for the updates! 😍   You know I was waiting for 'em!!! 😄  

Diya and Branny are too cute together. I love this love jonesing stage of a relationship. Hopefully it'll get them through what's to come. Seems Branny started stirring the pot with his "swooning" 😍 drive-by visit. I think it's the nudge Diya needed. They've already established their dedication to the relationship, now it's time to step up to the plate, and knock this ball pit of the park.  Stand ya ground with the family girl! c4;🏾 💪🏾

Girl, Branny is a sweet heart with trying to coparent the puppies, but two dogs and two cats?!?!  Not to mention that both of them are in apartments. More importantly, the 'time' it would take, as Diya mentioned. Maybe it would be better to take them to his moms house since they have the house and land. 

 

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Date: July 15 2016

Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - The Trouble with Assuming

Diya's family is crazy!  Chandi could've had Diya's back a little. Diya couldn't avoid this forever if she wants Brandon to be a part of her life, for the both of them. This seems pretty important to Brandon, and by the way he's reacting, seems up for the challenge  I would think she would give Brandon some fair warning by giving him and idea of what he may be up against based on her families precious antics.  I'm a bit curious about Diya's relationship with her mom. Based of what I'm seeing so far, it seems they really don't have much of a connection outside of her dad.

I can't wait to see how Brandon handles dinner with the De la Roy's. 😈 

Thanks for the update! 😄💖



Author's Response:

Brandon will receive some form of a warning, but it may not be all that fair considering what the De la Roy's have in store for him.  

Your take on Diya and Devaneesh's relationship is spot on.  The hows and whys of it will be explored in future chapters.

Thanks Musicluva!

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Date: July 15 2016

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - First Date Redux

Hi JJ! I hope all is well with you. Can we expect an update from Diya and Bradon anytime soon?  Really missin' these two, and looking forward to reading more of their story. 



Author's Response:

Hey Musicluva!  I wish I could say an update was imminent.  I've gone through several life upheavals over the last seven months, all of which have monkeyed with my time and creativity.  I'm hoping things will stabilize over the next few months, and writing will come a little easier.  Sorry to keep you all waiting.  I have every intention of finishing Brandon and Diya's story, and appreciate your continued interest.  Be blessed!  Joelle

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Date: February 19 2017

Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - The Trouble with Assuming

I just reread this whole story 💖. I can’t wait for Sunday dinner!  Hopefully an update is in the works? 🙏🏾



Author's Response:

Hey Musicluva!  I'm SO sorry for keeping you guys hanging.  Life has been a little rough, and a creativity assassin.  But I haven't given up.  Hopefully I'll come up with something presentable in the next couple months.  Thanks for not giving up on me!  Be blessed!

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Date: January 12 2018

Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - Tug of War

Yeeeeeessssss!!!!! 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁.  You've made my year!!! 👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾

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Date: September 27 2018

Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - Tug of War

This chapter was a true page turner!  I love your writing style. Diya is crazy 😄. Brandon is ... *sigh*, *swoon* d84;a039;.  However, he really needs to have a true heart to heart discussion with Marisol. I don't know what kind of spell she has over Brandon, but if he truly wants to be in a serious relationship with someone, then there should be some boundaries set. I'm not saying they can't be friends, but I can imagine how frustrating it is that you can't have an "intimate", drama-free night with your man without all of the constant stalker-ish interruptions. It wasn't as if Oscar was banging on her door at that very moment. Why didn't she caller her brother Rafe if the need was that immediate?!  When Brandon told her, "I'm with Diya!", I took that as having three meanings:

1. I'm in a serious relationship with someone, please fall back. 

2. I'm trying to spend some quality time with my woman. 

3. I'm trying to f@ck my woman, so please stop calling!

I would think Marisol could have come up with an least one of those conclusions, right?! Either she is in denial, she's trying to block, or she doesn't think it's going to last. Either way, she's playing on Brandon's emotions (again). Diya is a good one. I would have been mad as ish that he stopped mid-screw on the ascent.  Sheeeiiit!!!  If it weren't for the binding ropes, she should have jumped on his ass and finished without him while he was on the phone. (I’m just kiding ... well, no, not really 😈). Maybe Mariosol would get the picture then! 

Can’t wait until Sunday dinner!  I can already small that drama. Great update!



Author's Response:

Lol!  You maybe right on all accounts.  Marisol clearly doesn't see Brandon and Diya's relationship as something deserving for respect for yet to be disclosed reason.  The next few chapters should shed some light on that.

Thanks sooooo much for the review, Musicluva, and for sticking in there with me, Brandon, and Diya through thick and thin!

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Date: October 03 2018

Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Angles

Wow ... Diya is a good one! I wonder what is she trying to prove?  Was Brandon right in his suspicions?  Especially after that intimate greeting between Brandon and Marisol. The crazy thing about it is that Brandon acts as if that’s the norm. Maybe it was before Diya came into that picture, but ... wow.  Would Brandon be ok with it if some dude greeted Diya that way?  Heeeyyyllll naw!! It’s so obvious that Marisol carries a torch for Brandon. No doubt in my mind after this last encounter. Again, think that Marisol uses the girls to maintain her hold over Brandon. She feels like she’s starting to lose that hold after he refused to come to her rescue when she felt that Oscar was going to come for the girls. 


Oh yeah, Marisol would have definitely been checked for that “hook up” comment. 🤨. I want to know what’s her deal?

The plot thickens. That’s for this awesome update!


Author's Response:

YW, Musicluva.  Thanks for the awesome review!!!

Marisol does have a serious issue with boundaries when it comes to Brandon.  The "why" is a little murky right now, but will become clearer as the story progresses.  Until then, Diya's gotta figure if she's willing to stay mums on how she feels about the entire situation, and what it'll cost her if she doesn't.

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Date: November 05 2018

Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Angles

After reading through the chapter again, I do get Diya’s reasoning behind why it would be a good idea for Marisol to join the girls on the trip with all that has been going on lately. It really goes to show how much she really does care about him and his well being. After the trip, it may be a good idea for her to share her concerns with Brandon. Something to seriously think about. Hopefully they have a good time, and it’s drama free, (as in, ain't no shady ish goin' down! 🧐). Now, onto Sunday dinner! 😈 I know this will be all drama!



Author's Response:

You already know.  I'm editing the chapter and hope to have it up soon.  Thanks Musicluva!

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Date: November 05 2018

Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - In the Beginning (The Last Supper Part I)

Wow!  The De la Roy’s most definitely showed up, and showed all the way out!!! 😆😖 I feel so bad for Diya in that she seems to have no real support from any of her family members. Even though some of them tried give the illusion of supporting her, I wouldn’t trust them any further than I could throw them!  Oddly, the only cool person was Paw-Paw, and that was generated from a lie. It’s crazy how people can accuse others of not being “worthy”, while they themselves spew negativity and hate (sounds a lot like the current state of our political atmosphere , but I digress).  William and Devaneesh are so busy looking down their noses, that they can’t see past it. They invited them to their house, and neither one of them greeted them during the visit. If I were Diya, I would be concerned with all the sneaky phone calls and why they are so intent on keeping them at the house. What’s really going on?  Devaneesh is the one that I would be most weary of. She seems to not care at all. I can’t imagine having that type of mother. At then end of the chapter, all I could think of was, “dum dum dum duuuum ... ruuuuuunnn!!!!”   What a cliffhanger!!!  I wonder what those papers are, and what they have in store now?  Phenomenal update! 🙏🏾♥a039;👍🏾👏🏾c4;🏾Just can’t wait for what comes next. I’m seriously nervous!! 😬 



Author's Response:

The nerves are warranted.  Diya should be VERY concerned about what William is up to.  The family follows his lead, and he has declared Brandon his enemy.  Between him and Devaneesh, who has a less than loving relationship with Diya, things are about to go all the way left.  Stay tuned, and thanks so much for reading and reading, Musicluva!!! 

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Date: November 15 2018

Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - In the End (The Last Supper Part II)

Awwwww man!  💔 I think every bad thing that could have happened went worse!  My heart goes out to both Diya and Brandon. Diya because her family seems just as dysfunctional as Brandon's. Her dad seems a tad bit unaturally obsessed! 👀. I wonder if it's because of the things he's been exposed to as a civil rights attorney?  Her mom seems to be a straight up bitch. 🤨. Lastly, none of her sisters have her back. I get why she was so lonely with a house full. You can feel what she was explaining to Brandon about being the odd one out.  Diya's dad just hammered all of poor Brandon's pre-existing insecurities into him, and added more! 😖 Seems Diya would have spotted a BC 20 miles away based on some of the previous antics her parents have pulled with her past relationships. On the real, Brandon has a lot of d@mn explaining to do, however, I am a bit surprised that Diya appears to have left him hanging during their exit after she was so passionate about then "standing their ground" against papa De la Roy. She should have walked out of the door, and then went postal on his @$$! 🤯.

 

 

Now ... onto the tea ... so, wayment ... is Austin and Oscar one and the same person?  If not, let me find out that Marisol is a low key slut!!!  Also ... what is up with this case that Diya's father spilled about?  Some other 'ish that Brandon hasn't divulged yet?  Now, Brandon know he should have 'fessed to everything by now. Her father is an attorney too. He should have fig'd daddy was gonna run that background check!!!! C'mon now!  Also, I wonder what happened to the girl that daddy Warbucks implied she "deserved"?!?! *I'm on pins and needles*. All I know is that Diya better start shopping her resume around, 'cause she needs to find herself some other form of employment. She needs to get from up under daddy's control so much. I know she doesn't want to sever her bond with her dad, but this feels  like too much control to me.  Fabulous update!!! Of course, as always, this chapter only has me wanting more  *100 stars*!!!!! Can't wait to see what's up next ... so many twists and turns!  I love it!!!! 🥰👏🏾d84;a039;👍🏾d84;a039;c4;🏾🥰

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 20 2018

Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - In the End (The Last Supper Part II)

One thing I forgot to mention/ask in my lastest review ... 😈 ... Are we gonna get any deets / tea on what went down on the outing with Marisol and the girl's? 🧐🤔🤨

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Date: November 20 2018

Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 - Dark Days Ahead...

Wow. My heart goes out to Diya. She has absolutely nobody in her court that she can confide in. Not sure if she can rely too much on Zeria, as we haven’t heard much from her since the beginning of their story.    No family, no friends, no  Brandon (and not just no Brandon, but he’s playing the role of daddy and partner to another woman and her 3 kids!). Very lonely space. I think she and Brandon need to have a serious “all cards on the table” discussion about their relationship.   Given there’s so much at stake, (i.e their own relationship, her family relationship, all the BS that Diya’s parents are throwing at Brandon and his livelihood, etc), they need to be open about everything.  

At some point, she also needs to have one with her family about her feelings. Stand her ground and not be so dependent on them (get another job). Maybe if she shows some independence, the others may follow.

Now, I wonder whose rescue is Brandon coming to AGAIN?!?!  More drama!

As always, I can’t wait for the next update!

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Date: March 08 2019

Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 - Dark Days Ahead...

I also feel for Brandon. I can see why after the drama that went down at the De La Roy’s home, he would have doubts in his confidence in Diyas dedication to their relationship. In his eyes, he probably feels like she won’t take a stance against her family. He also may feel a built guilty of making her choose.  There may be something additional hidden in his past that’s making him feel like they won’t make it. Also, let’s face it, with daddy De La Roy messin’ with his money, that would make anyone wanna cut a mufcka! 😠🤨



Author's Response:

You hit the nail of the head on all accounts.  Diya and Brandon are both struggling, with Diya going it alone (Zeria has her own later-to-be-revealed drama).  Whether she's ready for it or not, being with Brandon means being without her family.  Unfortunately, that doesn't mean William is done messing with Brandon and his money.  So long as he and Diya are together, he's a target--a fact which will have a definite effect on their relationship.

Brandon and Diya both need to to put all their cards on the table.  Question is, are either of them ready for what the whole truth will mean for them going forward...if they can (dun-dun-dun : D).

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, Musicluva!  Update posted.

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Date: March 10 2019

Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - Who You Love

Uhhhhmmmm.... yyeeahhh.   This is the time where Diya should go from 0 to 100 on his @$$!!!!  She coddles him too much, and needs to demand answers after this ish right here!  All this time, and after she directly asked him about her and experessed doubts. He wanna straight up lie about this? He continuously rags on Diya for, “rehashing this ish again!”, when he hasn’t been honest from jump. She told him, “I trust you to set boundaries to preserve what we have.”, and he hasn’t been doing that at all. Marisol for damn sure doesn’t respect the boundaries, because they can’t even spend time, have a date, without her butting in. Then invites herself on an over night trip with someone else’s man?!?! Heeeyyllll naw!  If she was that nervous about the girls safety, they needed to stay their @$$3$ at home!!!  She already places Diya in the booty-call category. It’s obvious he’s still hiding things based on what her dad found. This is a huge mess, and I can imagine that him coming to Marisols rescue is all the way old. 

Most def givin Brandy the side-eye after this mess!!  He betta start singing like 10 damn canaries right about now! 😡🤬🤨🐥🐥🐥🐥🐥🐥🐥🐥🐥🐥

Awesome update!!!!  Please update soon so we can see how Diya handles this. I sure hope she represents (though I know she gonna be hurting).  You know you doing something when your readers come for your characters like this! 🥰🙏🏾



Author's Response:

Lol!!!  I love it! 

Brandon has lots of y'all heated, and for good reason. His relationship with Marisol has always been problematic.  The revelations just takes it from bad to THE worst.  There is a story behind the admission--one he'll share next chapter.  But it may very well be too little too late for him and poor Diya.  

Thanks for faithfully reading and reviewing, Musicluva!!!  I soooo appreciate it : D

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Date: March 12 2019

Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - Who You Love

If Marisol was Brandon's first love, does that mean she is the one who Tyler impregnated?! 



Author's Response:

I could tell you.  But that'd ruin the surprise ; )

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Date: March 14 2019

Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Who I Thought I Knew

Wow!  Yeah, Brandon was tryin' a b@tch in this one! ๐Ÿ˜ก  Had a nerve to lie, play victim, and have a 'tude!  He was on one, and Diya was a good one. She was VERY calm. I'm glad she voiced her feelings, but it would've been even better if she had voiced all of her thoughts. I was thinking a lot of the same things that she was throughout their interaction. Yeah, she needs to step back, regroup, and reevaluate some things. Dag, I was halfway pulling for Brandon before, but he done went and showed his ass!! At this point, he had nothing to lose and should've given Diya full disclosure on everything if he really meant the things he was telling her. After this, I have more questions than answers!  Unless he starts spilling everything, he gets nothing!!!  Stay strong D!!!

Great update!  The suspense is killing me. Looking forward to see what happens next. ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿพ

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Date: August 29 2019

Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 - Truth Be Told

Wow!  This answered quite a bit.  Was nice to see that Diya and Katherine had a true transparent heart-to-heart discussion.  One thing for sure is that Marisol is nuts!  She had to know the impact that she has been having on Brandon's life. I'm a bit surprised that Rafe wasn't more supportive if he's supposed to be a true friend. But, I suppose the heart wants what the heart wants. 

One thing for sure is that Diya has to make some hard decisions. I think it would be good for her and Brandon to have a bit of distance. I did a double take to find out that Diya has been subjected to an abusive relationship (I had to reread that part a few times!). Last but not least, Doha's father is truly a heartless person!  To realize Brandon's hard beginnings and throw salt in the wounds just to get his way is ruthless!

I wonder what Diya is planning to do with Tyler's contact info?  I can't wait to see what's next! ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿพ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿพ

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Date: October 14 2019

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