Penname: kiyosabi [Contact]

Real name: Kiyo

Member Since: March 12 2013

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Lila's Thunder by Voices
Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

  

 

Lila James knows that her friendship with seventeen year old Chase Almeida is extremely inappropriate, but she still isn't prepared when his older brother Jack decides to tell her just how inappropriate it actually is-- inadvertently igniting a fire that had been burning quietly inside of them for years.

*****Lila's Thunder has been removed for editing, refining and if all goes according to plan, publishing! I couldn't have finished it without all my readers leaving their words and thoughts--even if I didn't always like them--so THANK YOU from the bottom of my heart. <3



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:Yes
Word count: 670
Read Count: 65034
Published: October 07 2011
Updated: September 09 2014

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Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

IS THIS THE END?! THIS CANT BE THE END! PLEASE SAY THIS IS NOT THE END!?

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Date: March 26 2013
Stereo by Voices
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 615]
Summary:

 

When rockstar Adam Brand makes a racist remark during a drunken magazine interview, it becomes an international headline.  Within hours his PR Agent concocts the perfect plan to revive his rapidly sinking career before it’s too late, but will Adam be able to pull it off?

 

**** STEREO has been removed for editing, refining and if all goes according to plan, publishing! I couldn't have finished it without all my readers leaving their words and thoughts--even if I didn't always like them--so THANK YOU from the bottom of my heart. <3



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 18
Completed:Yes
Word count: 922
Read Count: 90705
Published: March 24 2012
Updated: August 30 2014

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Title: Chapter 9: “What are you trying to hide?”

ohhh myyy gooosshhhhhh I freaking love him! she needs to come clean! forget the article! love this

 Reviewer: kiyosabi Signed
Date: April 11 2013
Title: Chapter 13: Rule #10: No More Games

CELIA IS A BITCH!

 Reviewer: kiyosabi Signed
Date: September 28 2013
Title: Chapter 13: Rule #10: No More Games

Is this story done for? Cause I really love it and I keep checking back :'(

 Reviewer: kiyosabi Signed
Date: February 03 2014
Title: Chapter 16: “If anything happens to her I swear to god I’ll fucking kill you.”

Oh my gosh. I'm at work but seriously just want to cry at this turn of events. I should have known it would be too good to be true that it'd all just magically work out after he took her innocence. I do wonder why Adam doesn't believe in forgiveness though. Is it because of his father? Why does he think he will resent her for the rest of his life? At this point, he will resent himself for his actions and Shaun will resent the both of them. I love that he saved her without a second thought but he is such an arrogant confident guy, why is he so insecure about this situation?!  God Adam you drive me crazy. I hope we don't have to wait as long this time for the next chapter! LOL because I seriously love this story. I check back once a week. Looking forward to Shaun's move.

I think she should move to New York. She'll get a change of scenery which sounds like exactly what she needs right now. On top of that, she will be doing what she loves instead of being forced into modeling and she gets a breather from the drama LA has been giving her lately. Poor baby. I feel for her and our Rockstar. Serves Adam right; he's going to be heartbroken when he finds out about her move. Anyway. Love it!

 Reviewer: kiyosabi Signed
Date: May 15 2014
Title: Chapter 17: “I just want you to be happy Adam.”

OH MY GOD! *DIES* I'm too happy for words. Love. AH. It ended so quickly. NOOO its really over. What am I gunna do now lol. Loved this. Cutest couple ever award. It does kind of suck that they are so far away now but maybe that will help repair them. <33333

 Reviewer: kiyosabi Signed
Date: May 21 2014

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