Penname: jacqua43 [Contact]

Real name: jacqueline

Member Since: March 25 2013

Membership status: Member

Bio:

I'm just a woman who loves her God, her husband, her 6 children, her grandbaby, her son-in-law, her family, herself, her peace, her job, her Pittsburgh Steelers and to read all in a nutshell. I LOVE LIFE!!!



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Foolish Hearts Never Stop Beating by mocasoul
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 54]
Summary:

It had been five years.  Cynthia had moved on with career and her life after not hearing from Caleb, her drug addict mess of a rock star boss, for four of those years.  When Caleb returns from Ireland, she faces her feelings for him while trying to survive a new strained relationship with another man.  Will Caleb be clean and will he find his way back into her life and her heart?

 

Sequel to Foolish



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:No
Word count: 56219
Read Count: 30793
Published: March 01 2015
Updated: April 24 2016

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Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

It's about time she own up to her feelings for Caleb. I'm glad Flo has step back with her feelings about Caleb also. Cynthia do need to talk to Robert face to face and tell him the truth. Plus Cynthia and Caleb needs to take it slow, not continue where they left off start new.

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Date: July 12 2015
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Poor  Caleb ! ! I feel  for  him  because  daddy  Is  holding  no punches  back . Thanks  for  the  update . 

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Date: December 26 2015
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Well you love who you love ,and i only see her love for caleb. I hope she gives him another chance.

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Date: April 19 2015
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I myself as a parent of 6 children want them all to be happy, I want them all to be treated with dignity and respect. I can get where cyn's parents are coming from, but the decision to stay together fall on the people in the relationship. I have to believe that I instilled in my children by example how they should be treated, and If they feel violated in any way to tell that person how he or she makes them feel and that they don't have to put up with it. Or they can go the other routes and tell their father and I, along with their uncle's that they are being mistreated and girl...I'm a boxer too, and their would be hell to pay!!. I'm happy that her mother and father are coming around to at least giving Caled a chance. I'm also happy that he proposed and she accepted, so she can stop giving her milk away for free. Thanks for the update and I'm glad you are back with this story.

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Date: April 24 2016
Title: Chapter 1: cast pics

Man i love the first story and this one, I hope she give him another chance. This time around hopefully he will stay clean and sober. GOOD JOB!!!!

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Date: March 15 2015
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I think she should give him another chance. When they first got together he was a total mess, now it's like he has truly man up. I believe in second chances. GOOD JOB!

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Date: May 03 2015
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

She has to get her feeling in order before she can be with anyone. Good try Caleb didn't work but good try.

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Date: May 27 2015
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Cynthia knows that she don't love Robert, she knows her heart belongs to Caleb. She needs to own up to her feeling for Caleb. I mean how long is she going to punish this man, he has been through enough. She better wake up before he walk out again.

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Date: June 15 2015
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

About damn time!!!! love it.

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Date: June 28 2015
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I understand her mother and father protection, but Cynthia is a grown women and her life is her life. Thanks for the update.

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Date: August 25 2015
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I like the fact that they are giving Karen something to do that she love like dancing. The music selection was on point. Wow! Cynthia tried to kill herself over Caleb not calling her, I see why her family and friends disliked him so much. Maybe Caleb and Daniel can sit down and talk man to man. Cynthia needs to realize that everything in life may not go her way and trying to harm yourself is not the answer. Thanks for the update.

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Date: September 17 2015
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I think daddy should hear Caleb out, he understand that he hurt Cyn but if she has forgiven him and he's the one who hurt her, then mommy and daddy will just have to deal with it. Thanks for the update.

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Date: October 13 2015
Finding Ace by PassionFruit
Rated: Mature Content
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Summary: Natia Palamo was taken from her father, Ezra Palamo, by her uncle, who killed her mother. Now her father works for her uncle, Mika, in exhange for his life as he plots to find Natia. But his search has to come to a stop when Mika's business has been threatened by an unknown masked vigilante that goes by the name of Ace. Mika sends Ezra and his other lackeys, Adam and Ray, to hunt Ace down and bring him to Mika, dead or alive with the help of Alexis. Ace knows the secrets to Mika's business, will he tell Ezra where Mika has Natia? Only time will tell.

Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy , Drama, Friendship, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 7686
Read Count: 32340
Published: March 12 2015
Updated: May 08 2015

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Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 5

My girl got moves.

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Date: April 22 2015
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 3

 WOW, I KNEW IT! I KNEW IT WAS HER. THAT'S ONE TOUGH CHICK. MAN I HOPE THEY FORM THEIR ON ALLIANCE, AND BRING DOWN MIKA.

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Date: March 31 2015
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 4

That's what i'm talking about.

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Date: April 02 2015
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Confluence by DarkandLovely
Rated: Mature Content
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Summary:

 

He was always known as "Just Iwase Hiroto's friend." But if you dug deeper, you'd find that he was much more than that. 

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Erotica, Inspirational, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 6153
Read Count: 8648
Published: March 16 2015
Updated: December 21 2019

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Title: Chapter 1: introduction.

Dang you let the cat out the bag about Hiroto and Rae, but i'm not mad at you. My baby Tobu has his own story I'm so happy and Leah is a hoot!!.



Author's Response:

hehehehehe yup!! Leah is for sure a hoot fa sure lol. Glad you like it Ms. J!

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Date: October 02 2015
Alpha by Twelve20One
Rated: Members ONLY: Teen or Above
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Summary:

 


When Caleb, heir of the four and alpha of his pack, attends a party celebrating his twin deltas’ birthday, he doesn't anticipate finding Luna’s greatest gift: his mate, Ava-Rain. Immediately consumed with curiosity and undeniable interest, he manages to make his presence known to her, but their introduction is kept brief. To reject one’s mate is to reject Luna herself, and that is exactly what Caleb intends to do. Not because he wants to but because he has to. But will he be able to stay away in order to ensure both her and his pack’s safety, or will their unbreakable connection lure him back and add even more trouble into the mix?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship
Story Status: Taking a short break from this story
Pairings: None
Warnings: Character Death, Original Characters, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 26
Completed:No
Word count: 165660
Read Count: 34486
Published: March 27 2015
Updated: October 30 2016

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Title: Chapter 9: 6 (2) - '. . .that's me locked inside reality's maze.'

GOOD JOB!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, jacqua43! Glad you enjoyed it! :)

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Date: April 20 2015
Title: Chapter 5: 4 (1) - 'Let the sky fall, when it crumbles. . .'

This is good.



Author's Response:

Thank you so, so much for taking the time to read Alpha, jacqua43! I'm super excited that you're enjoying it so far & hopefully I won't disappoint!

Thanks for your review! I really appreciate it! :)

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Date: April 05 2015
Title: Chapter 24: 18 - '. . .burn everything you love then burn the ashes.'

Great update!!



Author's Response:

So glad you enjoyed it!

Thanks so much for reading & commenting, jacqua43! 

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Date: November 23 2015
Title: Chapter 25: 19 - 'Break away from everybody, break away from everything. . .'

What a great update honey! some choices have to be made. What will he decide? Thanks for this update.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, jacqua43! Caleb definitely has a hard choice to make, but, like you said, it has to be made.

Thanks a bunch for reading & for your review!  :)

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Date: August 08 2016
Title: Chapter 26: 20 - '. . .& the moon shines red tonight, as I break your heart & sever mine.'

I will follow you to the moon and back. Thanks for the update honey.

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Date: November 04 2016
Retired
Stars Colliding by Jaye Sims
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 213]
Summary:

Lia Mariani and Dominic MacCleod were two up and coming leading actors who'd met on set and immediately struck up a friendship.  As the friendship blossomed, they both realized they'd fallen in love with each other.  They were just two chickenshit to admit it because of the differences in their races and his families outdated ideas about black people.  HER parents were afraid of their daughter getting hurt if Dominic decided to bow to the pressure of his families disdain for Lia.  

And hiding in the shadows is a man obsessed with possessing Lia.  Will these outside forces bond them together or tear them apart?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 24
Completed:No
Word count: 40900
Read Count: 138929
Published: April 01 2015
Updated: May 26 2015

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Title: Chapter 8: With Joy Comes Pain

I'm so tick with Doms family right now. Everyone is entitle to their own opinion, but i draw the line in the sand when you start trying to live my life for me. If they are truly his family and they love him like they say they do, they will get over it. If not they can KICK ROCKS. Because i love who i love end of story. That man on the elevator is shady seamus knows what time it is.

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Date: April 08 2015
Title: Chapter 8: With Joy Comes Pain

Honey take your time updating, DO YOU!!!, The computer and the keyboard will be there when you are ready. If it something to hard for you to carry, give it over to JESUS!. You are in my prayers.



Author's Response:

Thank you, dear.  I appreciate that.

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Date: April 08 2015
Title: Chapter 6: Secrets and Brunch

I knew there were some sexual frustration between Mimi and Giovanni. Why? they are so hush-hush about it.



Author's Response:

For the Mariani's Mimi is family.  They see her as a second daughter.  Given that fact, they are afraid the family wouldn't approve because they both feel that the relationship is just sex and not that serious.  Right now, they just don't think it'd be worth it to be open about it.



Author's Response:

For the Mariani's Mimi is family.  They see her as a second daughter.  Given that fact, they are afraid the family wouldn't approve because they both feel that the relationship is just sex and not that serious.  Right now, they just don't think it'd be worth it to be open about it.

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Date: April 06 2015
Title: Chapter 5: Meet Mi Famiglia

I love this story, there is nothing like family.



Author's Response:

I love these characters.  I'm glad everyone has been responding so well to them.  

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Date: April 05 2015

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