Penname: jacqua43 [Contact]

Real name: jacqueline

Member Since: March 25 2013

Membership status: Member

Bio:

I'm just a woman who loves her God, her husband, her 6 children, her grandbaby, her son-in-law, her family, herself, her peace, her job, her Pittsburgh Steelers and to read all in a nutshell. I LOVE LIFE!!!



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Stars Colliding by Jaye Sims
Rated: Mature Content
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Summary:

Lia Mariani and Dominic MacCleod were two up and coming leading actors who'd met on set and immediately struck up a friendship.  As the friendship blossomed, they both realized they'd fallen in love with each other.  They were just two chickenshit to admit it because of the differences in their races and his families outdated ideas about black people.  HER parents were afraid of their daughter getting hurt if Dominic decided to bow to the pressure of his families disdain for Lia.  

And hiding in the shadows is a man obsessed with possessing Lia.  Will these outside forces bond them together or tear them apart?



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 24
Completed:No
Word count: 40900
Read Count: 138928
Published: April 01 2015
Updated: May 26 2015

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Title: Chapter 7: To Thailand with Love

I will have my panties and my bras, my toothbrush, and a little clothes in my bag.Because i wont be needing to many clothes because i plan on being bucknaked all of the time. WAITING AT THE DOOR!!!!

 

 

 

 



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LMAO!!!!

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Date: April 07 2015
Title: Chapter 9: The Most Wonderful Time of the Year

I love these two souls together. I don't like guy on elevator he is creepy maybe he is a stalker fan. As for mommy and daddy they would be alright.

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Date: April 09 2015
Title: Chapter 1: Stars Colliding

MORE MORE MORE! I love it.

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Date: April 01 2015
Title: Chapter 2: All I do...is think about you.

I love it!!!

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Date: April 02 2015
Title: Chapter 3: The Waiting is the Hardest Part

It's about to go down, headboard knocking, toes curling, eyes rolling in back of head, speaking in tongues, screaming untill the cops come knocking, say my name, say my name. GOOD JOB!!!! LOL.



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LMAO!  Yup...it is definitely about to GO DOWN.

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Date: April 02 2015
Title: Chapter 4: Give it All to Me

 Girl, you had nothing to worry about, you nailed it, no pun intended. Ass up , face down WHAT!!!! that was HOTT. Encore please.



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What can I say...Dominic is a scottish rogue.  :-)

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Date: April 03 2015
Title: Chapter 23: Mending Fences Part 1

No I was not surprise at all. I had a women stop me at church one sunday, she told me she didn't like me and that white men should only be with white women. After I finish laughing in her face, I asked her what made her think she was better for him then I. She said that I was looking for a man to take care of me, but I had a job and she didn't. She said  I would try and trap him with children, we were married 5 years before children came along. She said he was with me because of the sex, by that time my husband walked up and hear her. He told her the sex was phenomenal, the love was pure and the children will be a blessing, and that she was not in his scope. That heifer got the picture and never spoke to me again. Irene needs a reality check, Donal needs a divorce attorney and Maw MacCleod needs a posse because she is gangsta!. I love this story.



Author's Response:

You are a far better woman that I am because I would have karate chopped that chick in the throat, gone to the altar and asked for forgiveness, kissed my white husband and kept it moving.  I can't believe someone would step to you like that in CHURCH!  Those balls aren't steel, their titanium.  Sheesh!

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Date: May 24 2015
Title: Chapter 24: A Reprieve From the Insanity

Nessa is a trip, I like her. I think Lia and Dom needs to get Irene straight together. Donal needs to know what Irene is up to, I rather know the truth than not. Mimi and Gio it's about time. As for william I think he will come around sooner than later.

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Date: May 27 2015
A Love Story by Mello2014
Rated: Most Ages
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Summary:

Falling in love; instructions not included.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Drabbles , General
Genre: Comedy , Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Fluff, Original Characters, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 2171
Read Count: 7097
Published: April 04 2015
Updated: May 02 2015

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Title: Chapter 1: Tony and Cleo; The First Time

I love this story.

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Date: April 04 2015
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Can't pick your family by Hatty
Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

You can pick your friends. You can pick your nose. But you can't pick your family.  



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 25
Completed:No
Word count: 87982
Read Count: 45727
Published: April 06 2015
Updated: February 14 2019

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

More More More please, I can't wait!!!!!

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Date: April 06 2015
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I like this story.

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Date: April 06 2015
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

This right here is funny as hell "Tyson" and "Kitty", no he didn't come knocking about some damn cheerios. Matt just didn't know he was about to become Shyla's cheerios, because she was looking for a dick any dick. TOO FUNNY!!!!!!

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Date: July 13 2015
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

These two are too funny, It's about to go down!!

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Date: February 19 2016
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

They both needed that cold drink of water in that parched desert so much. Thanks for the update.

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Date: February 19 2016
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

They better get it together quick because kids don't wait on no one.

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Date: April 07 2015
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I haven't laugh this hard from a story in so long, Thank You. Boy was that a long name for a church. I hope they get it together for the children with no outside forces, she don't need that boyfriend in the picture.

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Date: April 09 2015
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I think Matt freaked out when Shyla didn't bring Tristan home because he thought something happen to her to, he cares about her. I guess Lauren's tricks and lies didn't get her the outcome she wanted but it brought the truth out. Matt had a panic attack all the stress of losing his brother and sister-in-law plus the break-up of his relationship with Lauren and thinking something bad happened to Shyla all came down at once and he couldn't handle it. The good thing is he's releasing it and hopefully he will calm down and start dealing with it and He and Shyla will strengthen their relationship. I'm glad you are back I miss you, Thanks for the update.

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Date: September 29 2015
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I think you are a visionary, I have never laugh so hard before. I'm hoping matt and shyla become more than friends. They say opposites attract, and they are sure opposites. Shyla mother is a piece of work trying to control things, please give her a life so she can stay out of theirs. GOOD JOB!!!!!

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Date: April 17 2015
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Welcome back Hatty I have missed this story. Girl that emotional rollercoaster that shy was on during her period was priceless. Mr.Charlie got some nerve putting his hands on my girl, acting like a damn fool getting punked into asking someone for their hand in marriage knowing that the person don't love you IDIOT!. Now for matt and his parents, trying to give a voice to raising the kids, but don't physically want to raise the kids how dare they IDIOTS!.

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Date: May 08 2015
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Thanks for the update! take your time we will still be here. As for Matt and Shyla they needed that release, they need to stop fighting against eachother and fight together. I see love there. Good Job!!!!

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Date: May 19 2015
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

If that man is giving shyla creepy viibes, she needs to keep her eyes on that one. Matt should loosen up some and live a little. Scott seems like he will be a fun guy to hang around as friends.



Author's Response:

Matt does need to loosen up a bit!

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Date: May 27 2015
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Shyla is on a emotinal rollercoaster. Matt needs to stop playing dumb and blind, he knows he want's to ride that crazy train which is Shyla. Scott is a true friend who tell's it like it is. Tristan is a typical little boy popping up everywhere to funny. I know about the swear jar, when my kid's were little they had enough money for school clothes. I love this story.

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Date: June 22 2015
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Matt should have broken up with Lauren. I hate when women tell each other about how good their man is in bed or how hung he is. Some women are jealous and curious. What my man has is for my eye's and my pleasure. Addy, Shyla and Lauren are some funny drunks. Charlie is a little boy in a man body. Now how do Shyla keep the fact that lauren slept with someone from her job from Matt, what if Lauren is pregnant and she tries to claim the child is Matt's. I see trouble, trouble and more trouble.

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Date: June 23 2015
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I love the cast, the children are gorgeous.

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Date: July 23 2015
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

She called him mr. sassy pants I like that. They need to work on their communication skills. Thumb war "priceless". Matt Is so anal retentive to It's not funny, maybe Matt's jealous because Shyla has a better friendship with Lauren and Scott then she has with him. I think Matt want himself a piece of "Shyla pie" and he thinks Scott is trying to snag a piece. Matt was totally wrong for going off on Lauren for bring Tristen home, and Lauren was totally wrong for blurting out that she cheated on him In the heat of the moment. No women or man should ever put their hands on anyone, It's about to get REAL up in there. Thanks for the update.

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Date: August 10 2015

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