Penname: jacqua43 [Contact]

Real name: jacqueline

Member Since: March 25 2013

Membership status: Member

Bio:

I'm just a woman who loves her God, her husband, her 6 children, her grandbaby, her son-in-law, her family, herself, her peace, her job, her Pittsburgh Steelers and to read all in a nutshell. I LOVE LIFE!!!



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[Reviews - 243]
Summary:

You can pick your friends. You can pick your nose. But you can't pick your family.  



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 25
Completed:No
Word count: 87982
Read Count: 45727
Published: April 06 2015
Updated: February 14 2019


Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

No Shyla didn't breakout singing "Rainbow Connections" I love that song and so do my kids even though they are 16 now, everyone loves Kermit the frog. I'm glad Shyla was able to calm Matt down sometimes you need someone to talk to who is not judgemental or just being nosy but someone who really cares about your well- being. Girl my favorite break-up song was "Let's wait awhile" by Janet Jackson. When Shyla took Matt to the hair store that was hilarious!, no! not the Venus and Serena beads. I know Matt did not asked that lady was she getting a lace front wig, that was so funny to me. Shyla please don't take Matt to a black beauty shop asking black women those type of white people questions. I loved this chapter. Thanks for the update



Author's Response:

My break up song is 'Have you Ever' by Brandy. Gets me every time. 

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 01 2015

Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

First off don't hate on the "Princess and the frog" I love that movie. Second I don't think Shyla should get involved with the diamond situation because the same thing that happen to Ollie and Xam could happen to her, Matt and the kids. It's funny to see Matt's ego getting hurt, play that game Shyla and make him come crawling to you. I always say not everyone is going to like you and who cares as long as you are true to yourself no one else matters. Matt's mom is all in Shyla's kool-aid and she don't even know the flavor, this women needs to get a life. Thanks for the update it was worth the wait.



Author's Response:

I was waiting for controversy to brew over inflammatory comments about 'princess and the frog.' :)

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 25 2015

Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Matt Is acting like a big kid in the store. Matt made a rookie mistake leaving a toddler alone to their own devices, dumb rookie move. Girl... you brought back a flashback of when our triplets were three years old, what Izzy did to that room was hilarious ( I laughed so hard It had my stomach hurting for awhile), Matt being traumatized and shaking that shit was funny ( no pun intended ). What's Matt going to do buy new sheets everytime Izzy and Tristan have a accident ( he better stock up ) I did. I don't know why Lauren Is mad she broke up with him and cheated on him, she can kick rocks for all I care. Matt needs some parenting classes ( leaving a child alone in a big store like target) things happens Matt. They need to bone already, they know they want too. Thanks for the update and MERRY CHRISTMAS!!.

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Date: December 23 2015

Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Welcome back honey!! I have missed this story. I just love Shyla( she so real ) I like Matt too ( he has a big ego!! and he plays to many head games for me) Thanks for the update honey.

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Date: December 30 2016

Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Someone really did a number on both of them. I wish they learn to communicate better and trust each other more, because those babies are counting on them. Great update honey!

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Date: September 08 2017

Rated: Mature Content
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Summary:

 After escaping the terrors of human trafficking at 14 and the abuse of the adoption system at sixteen Serenity Hall dedicated her life to helping others trap the no good goons of the world, as a undercover C.I.A agent. Her work is dangerous but who ever said fun should be safe. While tracking down her latest target she runs into a bit of trouble that will change the world she knows forever. Shifters, secrets, lust and survival will leave you wanting more in this sensual adventure.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 6938
Read Count: 9486
Published: April 22 2015
Updated: May 07 2015


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Is she crazy? Trying to leave that fine man, bitch please. She need to let that man into her life fully. Is he the man that was watching her, the man with the dog.



Author's Response:

Hi jacqua43,

Lol she isn't crazy just cautious and realistic to the dangers of her life and job, she knows he is too fine and good to her to leave that's one of the reasone she has hung on to him for so long. As for the quesion of if the man with the dog is Jacob or not you'll have to stay tuned for the next chapters to find out!

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 24 2015

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very interesting, I'm on board for this ride. Liking the characters too.



Author's Response:

Hi jacqua43,

Thank you for taking the time to read my story and get to know my characters. Any comments and qusestions are always more then welcomed.

This is a ride that I think you will enjoy if you continue to read along, the characters will begin to mold into more relatable people and the story line will leave you wanting more with each chapter.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 23 2015

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 78]
Summary:

Her mistake was underestimating his obsession with her.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Dark Fic
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 24639
Read Count: 40316
Published: April 23 2015
Updated: July 14 2016


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter two

I feel the connection between these two. Why do i believe thing are about to go down real quick and in a good way with these two.

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Date: April 24 2015

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter five

Maya girl let this man take his time getting to know you. Build that friendship first and not being friends with benefits first.  Ayden is a keeper he just need some fine tuning. That was deep about him killing his father, but he had to protect his mother ( he's a good son ). Thanks for the update

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Date: May 31 2016

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter seven

Girl... that was Hott!!! Maya you better be glad he stopped when he did, because Ayden was going to break you!!. Thanks for the update.

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Date: June 20 2016

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter eight

Maya girl! you asked for it, now you are about to receive it. I hope Ayden don't go to hard on her because she is a newbie to what he has in store for her. And poor Kaya she needs to have a serious talk with Xavier about how he really feels about his ex and her. I don't think she should leave him alone, she can still protect her heart and see where this relationship is heading.  Girl!! no you didn't stop there, I want more please! thanks for this update.

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Date: June 29 2016

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter nine

Girl... that was hott!! and Maya is sprung now. Poor Kaya this child is playing with fire, sleeping with both friends and not using a condom with Xavier is just wrong. What if she become pregnant she will know the baby is Xavier, but then Calum will know her secret. Plus the damage it would do to Calum and Xavier's friendship, this is going to get messy and I love it!. Thanks for this update.

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Date: June 30 2016

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter ten

Girl... Ayden went a little dark there for a minute ( not a good sign ). Maya girl I think you have stepped into some deep crap!!. The part that got me was she saw and heard the possessiveness in Ayden, and she still agreed to be his girlfriend. I can't wait to see what happens next. Thanks for this update.

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Date: July 07 2016

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter eleven

I hope all is well honey. Please come back with an update. This is a great story.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 02 2017

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Summary:

Despite the absurdity of bargaining with the Almighty while topless and bound in the bedroom of a man whose last name she can’t remember, Diya De la Roy gives God an ultimatum:  Send her a man and a love worth having by next Valentine's Day, or she would give up on both.  Forever.  

Unbeknownst to Diya, she'll get that and more, along with a lesson in how perfectly wicked divine humor can be.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:Yes
Word count: 13212
Read Count: 11185
Published: May 02 2015
Updated: May 02 2015


Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - All a Part of His Plan

please tell me there's more, I like it.



Author's Response:

There isn't at the moment.  But if something comes to me, I'll be sure to write and post it.  Thanks Jaqua43!

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Date: May 04 2015

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 13]
Summary:

 

She's always been a safe bet. The go-to girl. No expectations, low risk.

But this time around it's getting harder not to feel sorry for herself.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction, Miscellaneous
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dubcon, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 2034
Read Count: 2703
Published: May 05 2015
Updated: May 05 2015


Title: Chapter 2: 01

Girl i love jj watts, He does my fantasy football team good. I'm wondering does she have feeling for him, and by him being a typical man he's not seeing it.

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Date: May 07 2015

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 8]
Summary:

submissive: adjective

 

1. inclined or ready to submit or yield to the authority of another;unresistingly or humbly obedient: submissive servants.

 

2. marked by or indicating submission or an instance of yielding to the authority of another



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:Yes
Word count: 11086
Read Count: 1869
Published: May 11 2015
Updated: May 27 2015


Title: Chapter 1: one

Well Damn !!



Author's Response:

Ha! Thanks for the read :)

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Date: May 12 2015

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 8]
Summary:

Joelle's husband had been gone for deployment for five months, twenty-four days, twelve hours, and thirty-two minutes. With each minute that passed, thoughts of him consumed her. Attempting to rid herself of the thoughts of loneliness that has consumed her for the past months, she attends a friend's wedding. There, she gets more than what she expects. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 812
Read Count: 969
Published: May 13 2015
Updated: May 13 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

My husband has been in the AIR FORCE for 26 years. I have went though a lot of deployments and believe me it gets hard more so when you have 3 babies at home. If it wasn't for family and friends plus the good lord, I wouldn't have made it.

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Date: May 13 2015

Rated: All Ages
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Summary:

The final moments of the last day of Magdalen's former life.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 768
Read Count: 2449
Published: May 13 2015
Updated: May 13 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

"In the moment, you will remember how deeply I love you and count the pain as a small ransom to pay for the oneness of our flesh and surety of our future." DAMN! the man is smooth.



Author's Response:

Lol.  Thanks Jacqua43!

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 13 2015

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Summary:

Working as a Home Health Aide and struggling to make ends meet. All Aries Washington wanted to do was prove the child she had three years ago, was in fact the son of Cameron Marino. She didn't have any delusions about them putting their differences aside and falling madly in love. Why would she? Cameron was engaged to her ex best friend Ambrosia, A.K.A Ms. Perfect. So imagine her surprise when he not only demands she moves in with him, but marry him too.

Aries had no idea that once she gave birth to her own little Marino, that, that meant she automatically belonged to the whole Marino family. With a group of people who take their strong family ties seriously, she's about to find out that once your in, there's no out. 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: Marino Family
Chapters: 12
Completed:No
Word count: 19092
Read Count: 53277
Published: May 14 2015
Updated: June 01 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is a great story, I wish she had a good support system. She needs to find that man, it takes two to make a baby. Being drunk or not is no excuse. Man when it rains it pours. She already hit bottom the only way is up now. I'm so happy she didn't blame the baby for her circumstances.

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Date: May 14 2015

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

A part of me thinks that ambrosia knows that Aries has camerons baby. I mean they have been engage for three years now I think?. She has had 6 miscarriages and they still are not marry. Maybe ms. Ambrosia done had a few abortions back in the day. You said she had scarring on her uterus does she have fibroids?. You know what they say God don't like ugly and he's not talking about you face. What comes around goes around. I hope Aries gets some help for her emotional and psychological health.

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Date: May 15 2015

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Ambrosia is so wrong trying to trap the man into a nother pregnancy his heart can't take. I have to applaud Cameron for standing his ground. She is not thinking clearly right now. Plus the sh*t is going to hit the fan when she finds out that Aries has his child. Girl you are going to make me tell my TESTIMONY!

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Date: May 14 2015

Title: Chapter 3: Characters (So far)

All the men are YUMMY! Antonio Marino sr. is my favorite, there's something about a mature man with a little sprinkling of gray in his hair. Back in the day when my honey was younger, Stephen Marino give me flashbacks.

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Date: May 15 2015

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

What's this hoes game? she's hiding another man in the wings. This chick is broke as hell, trying to have a kid from a rich man so she can be " In her mind set for life". I like Christian already, when they see the interaction between Aries and Jaylen, they will know that this woman loves this child with everything in her. Then hopefully papa marino will be aware of the dog that's carrying the bone, Ambrosia.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 16 2015

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

I'm so happy Cameron found out the truth. I'm happy Ambrosia is getting her "just due". I'm happy papa Marino is eating crow. I'm happy Aries and Jaylen have a stable place to lay their heads, and hopefully a real family. I'm thankful evil didn't prevail.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 17 2015

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