Penname: jacqua43 [Contact]

Real name: jacqueline

Member Since: March 25 2013

Membership status: Member

Bio:

I'm just a woman who loves her God, her husband, her 6 children, her grandbaby, her son-in-law, her family, herself, her peace, her job, her Pittsburgh Steelers and to read all in a nutshell. I LOVE LIFE!!!



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Fries Before Guys: And Other Lies We Tell by god gave me style
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 48]
Summary:

I'm just a regular, college girl trying to make it through life. He's the talk of the town, quickly rising to his predestined fame. I mean, he's hot, he's Irish, and he likes me; me! He's everything I think about, he's the strength when I'm weak, he's the air that I breathe. It's overwhelming but I can't get enough of it, of him. Can I deal with everything that comes with him? Will little old me be enough for this rising star? Or am I getting my hopes up for nothing?

 

Fuck.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 22
Completed:No
Word count: 89832
Read Count: 28685
Published: June 11 2015
Updated: February 21 2016

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Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

He found her I knew he would. Why is she ashamed of her job, at least she have one. That kiss was HOTT!. You are doing a great job and I love this story.

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Date: June 22 2015
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

More power to her for being sick and still having the strength to clean up, not me. Jamie is adorable.

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Date: June 28 2015
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I'm giving you a standing ovation, follow by a round of applause, CLAP!CLAP!CLAP!. That was so hot I had to read it twice. Good Job!!!.

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Date: July 20 2015
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I'm happy to see this update, that was hot!. I love these two together I think they should enjoy each other more then define their relationship later.

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Date: August 16 2015
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I love this story, thanks for the update.

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Date: August 25 2015
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Katya needs to find worth in herself, most men don't like insecure woman. I love the relationship Katya has with Jamie, but following him around the world. Only if Jamie write her father a check for the money he sacrifice for her education, I will be down with that. Thanks for the update.

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Date: August 31 2015
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I enjoyed the grown up conversation between Katya and her father. It got a little heated for a minute, but her pops is right it's her life and she's grown now so she can live how she wants. Man! I feel him on the 16 year old, girls are calling my house and stopping by my house for my sons, where in hell are their parents. No little boy better not be bringing his ass around here for our daughter or the men in my family will scare the living daylights out of them. Thanks for the update.

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Date: September 07 2015
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I'm glad she finally got to she him, I like the fact he wont have sex with her on the set. She should think  he's on set where there's  a lot of people around, and I know the trailer is not soundproof do she really want her business out there like that. I think it make it much hotter and sensual when they are alone. Thanks for the update.

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Date: September 14 2015
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

My girl got it bad!! she should tell him how she feels, holding it in could lead to self doubt wondering if you are good enough for him, express yourself. That love scene was hot!!!. Thanks for the update.

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Date: September 27 2015
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

She done went and piss that man off because she's scared to be honest. She better open up and speak her truth before he moves on. Thanks for the update.

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Date: November 13 2015
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I'm glad they finally talked. She spoked her truth and let the chips fall where they may, and he ate it up and came back for more. Thanks for the update.

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Date: December 02 2015
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

 I loved the conversation between Katya and Jamie, he really listen to what she said and he was in tune to how she felt, I liked that!. I think she needs to watch her back around Millie because some women can be ruthless, plus Millie seems like she still has some feelings for Jamie. I think dad handle the situation horribly at first, then he realized that telling Katya to let Jamie go was not going to work out in his favor so he changed his tune. Thanks for the update.

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Date: December 20 2015
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I'm glad Jamie apologized to kat, because millie is a trouble maker and she can't be trusted. Girl my husband has been gone for 4 days now and he would be back Monday evening and I can't wait, Jamie and Kat will have nothing on us. That love scene was hot!, I don't know but I kept thinking that Millie was going to show up at the door and block their loving. Thanks for the update!

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Date: January 17 2016
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A CHILD NAMED SOLOMON by marchpisces92
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Summary:

Nathaniel Hendricks lived alone in his lakehouse on Lake Michigan spending his days remebering the young son he tracgically lost and the wife who left him when he needed her the most. The only thing that kept him remotely happy was the lake he lived by boating and fishing. He already failed as a father and a husband so why would God give him another chance?

Eden Wilson spent most of her life running from abuse and now as a young adult she finds herself running from an obsessive abusive ex-boyfriend. Not wanting the child she's carrying to be in danger she spends most of her pregancy running until she tries to get in contact with her uncle for help. Eden finds herself with her uncle's friend a lonely handsome man Nathaniel who gives her shelter in a snowstorm. 

Little did either of them know how close the baby would bring them together or how much this little bundle of joy would help them learn about secound chances.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 15
Completed:No
Word count: 28561
Read Count: 37469
Published: June 16 2015
Updated: June 14 2016

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Title: Chapter 12: FEBRUARY 28TH 1990

So Wendy and Walter gave Curtis the where about's of Eden. They basically helped in the attack on Eden and Solomon. Now they are wondering why their baby died," Do unto others as you would have them do to you". In Wendy's mind the more stuff you have and the more money you have makes a person happy "NOT". Charlotte is wrong on so many levels, a dog that brings a bone also carries a bone. I hope that the plot that's in their heads about Leonard and Eden be their downfall. Nathaniel and Solomon are so cute together. Eden needs to run her own home daycare and early childhood development center. The relationship with Eden and Nathaniel is about to heat up I'm guessing YES!YES!YES!

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Date: July 27 2015
Title: Chapter 7: JANUARY 29TH 1990

I like the fact that Nathaniel is opening up about Martin a little. Man all modesty goes out the window when you are in pain and pushing out a baby. Nathaniel stayed calm which kepted her calm. I'm glad there were no complications with mother or child. What a amazing honor to name her son after his son. Great update!!!

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Date: July 12 2015
Title: Chapter 11: FEBRUARY 23RD 1990

That newspaper don't have no couth, printing a child's name. Eden needs a village to help raise Solomon, but not that village of ignorant townspeople. Through the eye's of a child, Solomon knows how Nathaniel feels about him because that little boy feels the same way for him. It's sad that Wendy lost a son again, but sometimes sins of the parents affects the children. Wendy is a spiteful, egotistical, uncouth harlot. I'm guessing things at home is not going to well, with losing the son that Walter wanted so bad, the son they taunted Nathaniel with. Plus seeing Nathaniel with a baby boy that he cherishes is pissing her off. Charlotte needs to be fired if she disclose any information about Solomon birth certificate. I'm hoping that Eden and Nathaniel stop beating around the bush with their attraction and get a relationship going on. Nathaniel needs Eden and Solomon in his life. The best revenge he could give to Wendy and Walter is to live a happy and good life.The ememy don't want to see you happy. I just love this story.

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Date: July 27 2015
Title: Chapter 6: JANUARY 23RD 1990

This witch has some nerve coming to Nathaniel house, demanding their little boys baby clothes and furniture. This man is already hurting from the death of his son, how heartless and evil can this women be.  What has he done to her, she was out on the dock to and she couldn't save him either. I hope the grave that Wendy and Walter is digging become their own. My hope is for Nate to stop Curtis in his tracks. I hate to say it but some people you just have to kill or you will never have peace, If it comes down to you are them choose your self.

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Date: July 06 2015
Title: Chapter 1: LABOR DAY WEEKEND 1985

Wow! i'm crying reading this how sad, I work with children in the NICU, I have seen the grief of parents saying goodbye to their children. How sad.

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Date: June 17 2015
Title: Chapter 2: JANUARY 30TH 1989

What a BITCH!!!, who does that leave the man on your dead childs birthday HEARTLESS. I don't like Wendy or Walter they deserve eachother. Plus she's carrying another man child, I am beyond piss.

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Date: June 17 2015
Title: Chapter 3: JANUARY 20TH 1990

Angel's come into our live disguise in many forms. I think they were destined to be together. I'm guessing she's carrying a little boy name "SOLOMON" which means "PEACE".



Author's Response:

You're right jacqua43 Eden is going to have a boy named Solomon because of the name meaning. Little Solomon is going to arrive early probably January 30th or 31st haven't decided yet. If he arrives on the 30th which was Martin's birthday then it would be like Martin spirit has come back through another little boy. 

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Date: June 17 2015
Title: Chapter 4: JANUARY 21ST 1990

This is one of the stories I been waiting on. See this speaks of the kind of woman Eden is she's strong, she had to be in order to put up with Curtis. She faithful showing her loyalty to a innocent child that was conceived horribly. She humble by putting her child needs before her own. She's a MOTHER. I think she should tell Nate the truth about Curtis, so he can be prepared and he can teach her how to be prepared, he knows his surroundings better than her. Nice update.

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Date: June 23 2015
Title: Chapter 5: JANUARY 22ND 1990

Now Nathaniel is what I call a real man. The child Eden is carrying isn't his but he vows to protect both mother and child. Curtis needs to be stopped in order for Eden to have peace, I know that much stress can't be good for the baby or her. She needs to know how a real man treats a women, and sometimes you have to look outside the box. Nice update.

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Date: June 28 2015
Title: Chapter 8: JANUARY 30TH 1990

I love that Nathaniel gave baby Solomon a nickname. I agree with Nathaniel about the circumcision, but If she is going to have the procedure done I hope she does it before he's 1 month. I'm watching the love blossom between Nathaniel and Eden, It's a content and honest kind of love forming. A no holds barred kind of romance, where he knows all her secrets and hurt's and she knows his. I think Wendy thought the grass was greener on the other side, but found out the grass was neglected, dry and brittle. I think walter is broke and they need Martin's baby furniture and clothes, because they can't afford another baby. I don't think Walter really loves Wendy he just wants to take something away from Nathaniel. Jealousy is a powerful emotion. Great update!!!

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Date: July 16 2015
Title: Chapter 9: CAST

I can picture each person as the character they are portraying.

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Date: July 21 2015
Title: Chapter 10: FEBRUARY 10TH 1990

I'm so looking forward to the 2am feeding's, diaper changes and all the nine yards. In a little under 4 months our twin daughters will be here. I'm glad that Nathaniel came back when he did. I can't believe this a**hole made her drop the baby, the mother in me would have rosed up and I would have went Medieval on him. This fool thought she was going to let him kill her baby and then run off with him, this MOFO was crazy to the 10th power. I think Eden should stay with Nathaniel because her uncle being a cop will be out of town a lot,with Wendy and Walter gunning for her and Nathaniel they are safer together. Plus Eden needs a job being a new mother and all and don't Nathaniel needs help with his business with fishing and hunting season around the corner. I thought I better clean up this post a little.

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Date: July 21 2015

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