Penname: jacqua43 [Contact]

Real name: jacqueline

Member Since: March 25 2013

Membership status: Member

Bio:

I'm just a woman who loves her God, her husband, her 6 children, her grandbaby, her son-in-law, her family, herself, her peace, her job, her Pittsburgh Steelers and to read all in a nutshell. I LOVE LIFE!!!



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A CHILD NAMED SOLOMON by marchpisces92
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 200]
Summary:

Nathaniel Hendricks lived alone in his lakehouse on Lake Michigan spending his days remebering the young son he tracgically lost and the wife who left him when he needed her the most. The only thing that kept him remotely happy was the lake he lived by boating and fishing. He already failed as a father and a husband so why would God give him another chance?

Eden Wilson spent most of her life running from abuse and now as a young adult she finds herself running from an obsessive abusive ex-boyfriend. Not wanting the child she's carrying to be in danger she spends most of her pregancy running until she tries to get in contact with her uncle for help. Eden finds herself with her uncle's friend a lonely handsome man Nathaniel who gives her shelter in a snowstorm. 

Little did either of them know how close the baby would bring them together or how much this little bundle of joy would help them learn about secound chances.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 15
Completed:No
Word count: 28561
Read Count: 37469
Published: June 16 2015
Updated: June 14 2016

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Title: Chapter 13: MARCH 6TH 1990

I love the name "King Solomon" what a wonderful king he was in the bible. The parable about the 2 mother's was "priceless".We also purchase our babies paint from home depot, I watched my vision on the twin's nursey come to fruition. I chose topaz, copper and a hint of orange for the color scheme. We purchase 2 cherry wood sleigh crib's, my husband hung 2 Native American teepee's over their crib's, It's like they would be living in teepee's It's beautiful. I chose topaz because they will be born in november If the lord permits, and that is one of that month birthstones. As for Eden and Nathaniel my hope is for Eden to allow Nathaniel to love her the way she needs and deserve to be loved. But If she's not ready then she's not ready. I know when the time Is right Nathaniel will love Eden and Solomon with all he has In him. What a wonderful father he was, Is and will be, because to me he Is already Solomon's FATHER. I'm glad your computer Is fixed and that you are back Inspiring us. Great update!

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Date: August 10 2015
Title: Chapter 14: MARCH 12TH 1990

Wow! this woman don't have any parenting skill, trying to potty train a 1 year old ( good luck with that). Try potty training 3 babies at once. We didn't start potty training until our babies turn 2 1/2 years old, we knew they were ready when they start tearing off their diaper and running around the house butt naked. It was much easier potty training our daughter then our sons, never potty train them in the same bathroom all at once, it's play time for them when one got up all three got up and ran in 3 different directions. Oh hell! I just realize we would have to do this again in a couple more years. I don't think Wendy really wants to be a mother she's to selfish and she's to focus on other people lives, what! she wants to be Charlotte. I'm loving the way Eden and Nathaniel interact with each other and baby Solomon is too cute. Thanks for the update MP

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Date: August 31 2015
Title: Chapter 15: REWRITE COMING SOON

Whatever plot line you use is alright with me. I like them all!! I'm just happy this story is coming back!!

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Date: June 14 2016
The A-Team by Mercie21
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 7]
Summary:

Athena works for an undercover agency, but all she does is sit behind a desk and hack into people's accounts. So when Archie, an agent who loses his brother in a shootout askes Athena to go undercover with him to find his brother's killer, she's a bit hesitant.

How will Athena survive going undercover and "befriending" some of the most dangerous criminals in the city?



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 2265
Read Count: 581
Published: June 18 2015
Updated: June 18 2015

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Title: Chapter 1: Operation: Find Andy

I like this story. Athenia and Archie seems like a good tag team. The A-Team is going to be trouble I remember the tv show, and they got in so situations.

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Date: June 18 2015
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The Monarchs/MC story(Riggs) by Leya Sade
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 34]
Summary:

Charity had a dark past that nearly condemned her. Running away was her only option from her demons, but it seemed to have landed her on the doorstep to the one man that took control and demanded her body without promise of love....

 

 

 

Wesley Riggs was no saint, Vice President of the Monarchs MC saw to that. His world consisted of bloodshed, his Harley Davis and the chaos from whiskey and women. He made no apologies. The only thing that mattered was the club, until she came and turned his life up on its axis, breaking his shield that masked him for years...  how could she tame a beast even if it wants to devour her.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:Yes
Word count: 13059
Read Count: 12630
Published: June 21 2015
Updated: July 08 2015

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Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Great story!!

Author's Response:

Thank you jacqua43!! I'm so glad you enjoyed It!

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Date: December 05 2016
Fever by Limitlessly
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 45]
Summary:

Who knew Montana had so many temptations?



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 5577
Read Count: 5087
Published: June 21 2015
Updated: June 23 2015

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Fever you got that right. This story gives me fever, because  it's so HOTT!. GOOD JOB! more please.

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Date: June 22 2015
Title: Chapter 2: Cast

Great choices for the cast, all the men are YUMMY!!.

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Date: June 22 2015
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Damn girl you jump right into it, I like that. Savannah wrote a check her ass couldn't cash, black women don't play that shit. So I'm guessing Nate is the guy who put his hand down Camilla shorts. Adam is fine as hell with those beautiful blue eye's. Sawyer 9 inches enough said. So Sawyer said that they usually pick a girl and share her, maybe they all shared Savannah and she think's her pussy is gold and that they shouldn't want any other. My husband said that most white guy's secretly have fantasies and crushes on black women, but they don't know how to approach us. I told him he didn't have a problem approaching me back in the day. He said he did that's why he approached my brother's first.

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Date: June 23 2015
Protecting Christopher: A Specter Series Story by LilCoqui
Rated: Members ONLY:All Ages
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[Reviews - 2]
Summary:

 

 

        In some there is only a thin line between heroism and the mere struggle to survive. Yet thin as it is, it is still there and they have the ability to cross over either side. We call them brave, some are even heroes.

       In even fewer you will find that that line is particularly blurred and there is no crossing to one side or another. There is no name for them. Yet it is in that breed of person that you will find the fiercest sense of protectiveness. It is in that kind of person where you find the undeniable proof that man can be better that what we as the majority have proven ourselves to be.

      When young Christopher Whitmore’s life is threatened the moment men from a shady government organization that most from the underground call “The House” come to take him because of his father’s work. It is up to naïve and scared shitless Nita Vasquez to keep him out of harm’s way.

*A short adventure in the Specter Series*

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Action-Adventure , Family, Friendship, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Character Death, Fluff, Original Characters, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 4099
Read Count: 1689
Published: June 22 2015
Updated: June 22 2015

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like this story. Little Christopher is a darling, his daddy is a hunk!. Plus Anita being Spanish is refreshing in my book. NICE JOB!!!

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Date: June 23 2015
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Clarke's Grove by Jay1113
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 43]
Summary:

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Inside of Clarke's Grove, South Dakota, their lives soon to be college graduate Reagan Canes. Right outside of Clarke's Grove on the Native American Reservation lives shamans, mystical creatures, and more surprises that involve an unsuspecting Reagan. Ever wonder why you never finish in 4 years? 



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy , Drama, Romance, Science Fiction , Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 10715
Read Count: 23086
Published: June 26 2015
Updated: August 15 2015

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Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Great update I can't wait for more.

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Date: July 12 2015
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Wow, didn't see that coming I thought she was going to be Chris's mate. This is about to get very interesting, being as though Dante don't like humans and come to find out his mate is a human. Can't wait for the next update!.

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Date: July 05 2015
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

My interest is pique I'm 1/2 Navajo. I have never heard of the Crow Creek Moosi Tribe, I know about the Crow Creek Sioux Tribe of South Dakota. I'm liking this story already.

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Date: June 26 2015
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Interesting can't wait for more.

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Date: June 28 2015
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

 I'm sitting on my hands waiting for the next update, It's about to be on.

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Date: July 19 2015
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Dante is going to get his women come hell or high water.

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Date: July 30 2015
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I'm glad she finally decided to give him a chance, that's all he needed is just a foot in the door. Go get your women Dante!!!!

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Date: August 05 2015
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

That was kind of weird, put I like weird. Great update.

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Date: August 10 2015
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Things are about to get interesting, Dante finally knows the process. Thanks for the update.

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Date: August 16 2015
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Love, God & Negotiations by Joelle Jax
Rated: Members ONLY: 17 and Older
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[Reviews - 765]
Summary:

Sequel to "Love, God & Ultimatums"



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 38
Completed:No
Word count: 227600
Read Count: 78667
Published: July 03 2015
Updated: May 09 2021

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Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Fallen Angels

Brandon was wrong he has some deep seeded issues, flying into a blind rage because someone said words you don't like. My husband is very protected of me also, but he has sense to know that they are just words(does words hurt? yes)(does words have power? yes)but if we fight everytime someone say a hurtful thing to us we would be fighting 2 to 3 times a day. Now if he was to put hands on me in a harmful way, then we are talking about a different story altogether( because it would take the jaws of life to get my husband off of him ). Brandon is very scary right now, he has no self-control. 1st he assaulted someone, 2nd he kidnapped someone ( Tyler didn't asked to see the inside of his apartment)Brandon is going to wake up one morning to Mr. Consequences and Repercussions. Brandon is also a hypocrite, how you want Diya to open up and you are closed down. As you can tell I'm not feeling Brandon right now... Tyler ( what is going on in your head?) you go seek out someone you know don't like you. Does Tyler has regrets and the only way he can deal with it is to make Brandon ( The Boxer ) and himself ( The Punching Bag ) makes me wonder are they both dealing with the same issue, but going about it in different ways. This update here!! JJ you are the WOMAN!! Thanks honey!



Author's Response:

Thanks jacqua!  I appreciate the compliment and your comments, but I've got to disagree with you on a couple points.  First off, call me common, but I'm not here for a man who would stand by and do nothing more than shh another man while the bastard basically called me a nigger and a whore.  That's not to say I'd expect him to jump straight to skull cracking.  But the sticks and stones mantra is too simple to address that and other situations.  Second, Brandon didn't ask Diya to open up (or "kidnap" his brother).  He asked her not to lie to him about how she feels.  The two are close, but not quite the same.  Either way, he did take things too far with her (Tyler got no more than he asked for).  And that's something he will definitely have to answer for in the near future.  

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Date: January 13 2016
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Undone

Great update!!



Author's Response:

Thanks jacqua43!

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Date: February 24 2016
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Date Night, First Fight (Revised)

Please  don't  tell  me  Marisol  is  waiting  for  Brandon  at the  door . Thanks  for  the  update  JJ  



Author's Response:

I won't : )  Thanks Jacqua43!

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Date: January 04 2016
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Divide and Conquer

This Marisol is going to be a handful I can feel it.



Author's Response:

You just might be right.  But she won't be the only one.  Thanks Jacqua!

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Date: July 07 2015
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - First Date Redux

I love the chemistry between Brandon and Diya. Most black women don't give white men or other Races of men a chance, they are stuck in a bubble. A good man comes in all nationalities. I say be with who makes you happy. I'm glad you are back.



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Thanks Jacqua! 

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Date: July 05 2015
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - The Old Bait and Switch

I'm thinking oh daddy is not going to like Brandon. I can just Imagine when poor Brandon comes face to face with all Diya's sisters.



Author's Response:

You already know it's gonna be rough.  Thanks Jacqua!



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You already know it's gonna be rough.  Thanks Jacqua!



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You already know it's gonna be rough.  Thanks Jacqua!



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You already know it's gonna be rough.  Thanks Jacqua!

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Date: July 09 2015
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Come All Ye Hateful

This chapter was so funny, no you didn't call them sanctified thugs. My mom and dad have 7 children, there is not a dull moment in my life. We all have our different personalities too, I'm the mellow one. My husband has 10 siblings all men, they tell you how it is, just straight forward and honest my big Italian teddy bears. I like Chandi I have 2 of her in my life.



Author's Response:

I can imagine there's never a dull moment with that many mouths and personalities.  Thanks Jacqua!

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Date: July 09 2015

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