I'm just a woman who loves her God, her husband, her 6 children, her grandbaby, her son-in-law, her family, herself, her peace, her job, her Pittsburgh Steelers and to read all in a nutshell. I LOVE LIFE!!!
Sequel to "Love, God & Ultimatums"
If I were Diya I would have brought out the whole damn resturant,brought 5 pairs of shoes and 10 dresses plus hit up Victoria's Secrets. Marisol is a slippery snake "THOT" calling Brandon at that time in the morning knowing that he's in a relationship now, trying to cause problems. Brandon should not have asked Diya do she want him to tell Marisol not to call him so late, he knows the answer to that question. If the shoe was on the other foot how would he feel. If her ass can't sleep she needs to get a dog or a vibrator or some warm milk and cookies and stop calling my man. Diya needs to speak up don't allow no women or man to disrespect you or your relationship period.
Thanks Jacqua! LOL @ at the dog, vibrator, milk and cookies!!! Diya's in a tough spot. She and Brandon have been in a relationship for a little over a month. Brandon and Marisol have been friends for fourteen years. He's big on friendship and trust. Too much input too soon without probable cause could create bigger problems for Diya than any suspicions she might have about Marisol's intentions toward Brandon. Unfortunately, you'll eventually see what I mean.
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed
I'm guessing that Brandon's grandpappy Is the grand IDIOT of the kkk, and his father is next in line. I love his mother,I see where he get's his personality from. I'm also guessing his brother Tyler is the man his first love got with and had a baby with. I'm also guessing Brandon's pappy chose his brother Tyler's side. Pappy probably said bros before hoes are something stupid like that. Diya needs to slow her roll with Brandon, he's still have some kind of connection with his first love, and he's still harboring hurt feeling's for his brother who hurt him. I'm thinking maybe old Tyler tricked old girl into sleeping with him, and maybe he got her hooked on drugs and she OD'd killing herself and her unborn child. If this is so what a tragedy.
You're spot on with at least one of your theories. I can't say which at the moment, but you'll soon find out.
Diya probably does need to step back and regroup. But with the way she feels about Brandon and interference from others, she might not ever have the chance. More on that in coming up. Thanks Jacqua!
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed When I was reading the part where Diya saw Brandon loving his self in the shower, I was thinking If that was me I would have jump in that shower so fast and said" I got It baby, all you need to do Is tell me do you want It nice and slow or hard and fast". She ran like a little b*tch. Girl you had some quotes in this story that had me cracking up!!. #1 is "Caught wet handed", #2 is "Like a big ol' piece of bait" and #3 " Affinity for penis and an almost nonexistent gag reflex" man I laugh so hard. Great update JJ
Thanks Jacqua! So glad you enjoyed the chapter.
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed Diya doesn't feel like she belongs anywhere, not around her family and not around Brandon's friends. Brandon needs to establish some boundaries with Marisol, he's acting like her husband and the father of her children. This man has a past with this woman my grandmother always say " If you bring old bricks(Marisol) for your past relationship to your new one, you will end up building the same house that fell apart before" If he's her friend then act like her friend and not her significant other. Diya you need to tell Brandon how you feel because he is thinking everything is alright because Diya is leading him to believe that. If the shoe was on the other foot and Brandon was Diya and Manny was Marisol how would Brandon feel. Diya speak your truth and let the chips fall where they may. Sometimes a fight can save a relationship, where silents can break it. Speak up for your heart Diya so that you wont have any regrets. The thing with Diya family is sometimes the worst thing in the world isn't being alone, it's being surrounded by people who makes you feel alone. Example ( Diya's sister telling everyone but Diya that she is pregnant) that hurts. It may come a time when Diya say the hell with everyone and go " SOLO ". I'm happy you are back, we really missed you. Thanks for the update.
Wise words all around. It's like you read my next chapter. Things will eventually come to a head, starting next chapter but definitely not ending there. Brandon and Diya have A LOT to work through and a slew of people primed to stand in the way of their progress. More on that as the story progresses.
Thanks so much for the warm welcome back and sharing your wonderful insight, jacqua43! It is much appreciated.
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed Daddy is a trip!!! a psychic! I done heard it all. Thanks for the update JJ
YW. Thanks for reading and reviewing, jacqua43!
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed At first I was not feeling Marisol, to be honest I didn't trust her around Brandon. I thought Diya asked Brandon did he and Marisol had any type of physical contact before and he said no. I get that Diya wants to be the trusting girlfriend and everything, but some women you just have to keep your eye on. I thinks Marisol is a little shy around people she just meet and now I see Brandon as her bodygraud or protector. Men can be so dense at times when it comes to women, but a woman knows another womans game. I don't know how Diya is going to handle this situation. Thanks for the update.
The verdict is still out on Marisol. She seems fairly innocent, but one never knows. Diya definitely has her doubts. Several chapters back, she asked Brandon had he and Marisol ever had sex. Kissing was never discussed. Now that the secret's out, we'll see how she copes. Thanks Jacqua43!
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed I'm speechless and that's a first for me. Good job JJ!!
Thanks Jacqua43!
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed That Marisol is up to something I don't trust her. Sometimes you have to pick your battles and is Brandon going to fight everyone of Marisols battles, this is a grown *ss women. I'm glad Diya and Brandon had their talk little by little things are coming out about each other. There come a time in your life when you have to stop feeling bad for making a decision about your life that upsets other people. You are not responsible for their happiness, you're responsible for your own happiness. Anyone who wants you to live in misery for their happiness should not be in your life to begin with. Thanks for the double updates JJ
YW. The side-eye you're tossing Marisol's way is well earned--at least from the outside looking in. Diya picking her battle will be key for the survival of their relationship. But, being that she's new to this, she's bound to muck it up. Brandon and William are both a part of her happiness, and she knows that her relationship with one is likely to cost her the other. More on that to come. Thanks Jacqua!
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed Girl... I'm a punk when it comes to tattoos, scared ain't the word to describe it I'm petrified. When you trust someone with your heart and your body, that's true love. I know that Diya and Brandon will make it because he has already " Branded Her ". Clever play on the title of this chapter. Thanks for the update JJ.
You're welcome, jacqua43. Thank YOU for rating and commenting, my dear : )
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed This was so sensual and true love making, you did a BEAUTIFUL!! job with it JJ. Thanks for the update.
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed Great updates on both chapters JJ!!
Thanks Jacqua43!
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed JJ this was so funny and I thoroughly enjoyed it. Thanks for the double updates.
YW. Thanks jacqua43!
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed Torn between two lovers can never be easy... Especially when they're brothers.
I think this is going to be good.
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed A month after the stripper convention, and Mike and Zoe have ended their short relationship. Now in Savannah, ga, he and the boys are working for Rome. While rehearsing, he meets a beautiful doll faced dancer named Charity. He likes Charity, but he also doesn't want a relationship. Even when he finds himself attracted to Charity, she feels the same, but pushes away from him. The thing is, Charity has a secret, she's a burlesque dancer.
I love the update, I saw the first Magic Mike it was very sexy. I didn't get to see the second one this weekend, because I had three 5 year olds at my house for the weekend so I had to see the "Minions". But my sisters and sisters-in-law and my niece's have decided that we will have a girl's night out friday and go and see it. I can't wait!!!!!
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed I never saw the first one but I will today. I'm make sure I go to see the second one this weekend. This is a good story, you made me want to see the movie now. Good job!!! please continue.
Thanks!!! And I recommend seeing the second movie, it's amazing!
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed I was broken when he found me,damaged goods..My name held no meaning when shame fit so well in its place but he saw me, the real me, that little thread I held onto and kept in a box hidden beneath my chest. He knew my flaws and instead of running in the opposite direction he ran towards me hitting me dead on like a sledgehammer .He licked my wounds, allowing my scars to heal before peeling back each layer of myself to devour and claim, he brought me unspeakable pleasure using my body as his canvas.Many would of considered him a monster, a killer, an evil man. His Name was Nickolai Harkov with the Russian Bravta and he was the man I fell in love with.
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I was the second in line to lead in the Harkov Bravta. The hardcore exterior I portrayed made me who I was a lethal and merciless killer . Darkness nearly overtook me, until I stumbled upon Tiara. She didn't know it but she was my light that pulled at the vessel beating beneath my rib cage. She made me question life, before her nothing matter, but now I would do anything within my power to be with the woman that gave me a reason to live.
Well damn!!!! I like, more please.
LOL!! thank you so much for taking the time to read my naughty thoughts!!! i'm humbled girl! thank you and keep reading more to come!!
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed That old wrinkle dick bastard needs a whip to his ass.
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed I don't know why some children always try's to right their parents wrong. If the person made their bed then they needs to lie in it. I love the connection between Nick and Tiara. I hope Nick shows no mercy to his father.
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed This was amazing I want more.
Thank you so much for reading!!!! I plan to write more just for you guys!!
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed Nia Little and Jackson McAaron were best friends before they got older, she loved him and he loved her. But there was always something that held them back, was it Lacey and Liam or was it that Jackson didnt see marriage in his future. Either way Nia was going to make it happen, especially before their family's changed for ever.
First of all, I'm glad Lacey's parents adopted Nia older children need homes and love too. Girl the foreplay was on point, now when it time for the grown and nasty that part is out of the way. Damn Bella cock blocking. Great update!
Agreed, thats why I wanted to do this story this way and explain Nia's background, shes a tough chick! But thank you for that forplay comment, Im always so unsure about sexitime scenes. lol and Bella really ruined that for them.
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed Inspired by women caught up in an abusive relationship.
This is deep and It cuts both ways, My baby brother was in a abusive relationship with my niece's mother. He stay in for the sake of his child, but when we found out we beat that hoe down and help our brother to gain full custody of our niece. People just got to realize if it don't feel good to you, it's no good for you. When some one truly loves you they put all your needs before their own. They don't see a "I" or "me" they see a "we"or "us". No one should ever put their hands on anyone. So if a person is willing to HIT, then they are Willing to get HIT. Thanks for this poem.
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed Renay is one of the hottest music performer's rght now. With her ex famous-boyfried out of the picture she is newly single. She has a unique opportunity to find love on her own dating show. The catch is she is in a remote location and her family members get to have their own picks of men for Renay to choose from.
Will Renay find real love or real drama?
I know the story has just begun, but I'm team JOE all the way.
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed Let the games begin..... My choices are Boris Kodjoe, Taylor Kinney, Adam Rodriquez, Russel Wong and Sendhil Ramamurthy.
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed Nice choices in the cast, I would have pictured Waka Flocka as Razzs. I do think that all the men are sexy. I would have pictured Marlon Wayans as Brian, a man that's sexy and funny.
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.
