Penname: jacqua43 [Contact]

Real name: jacqueline

Member Since: March 25 2013

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I'm just a woman who loves her God, her husband, her 6 children, her grandbaby, her son-in-law, her family, herself, her peace, her job, her Pittsburgh Steelers and to read all in a nutshell. I LOVE LIFE!!!



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Summary:

Renay is one of the hottest music performer's rght now. With her ex famous-boyfried out of the picture she is newly single. She has a unique opportunity to find love on her own dating show. The catch is she is in a remote location and her family members get to have their own picks of men for Renay to choose from. 

Will Renay find real love or real drama?

 



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 4675
Read Count: 4761
Published: July 29 2015
Updated: October 01 2015


Title: Chapter 4: First Choice

I think Robert is a real man who takes care of is son. I like him. Welcome back!!!

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Date: October 01 2015

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Summary:

Strong woman.

 

I've always considered myself to be one, but there's always been something about him thats made me weak.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 887
Read Count: 1720
Published: August 07 2015
Updated: August 08 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Love the cast.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

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Date: August 10 2015

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

This will be a fun ride, can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

I hope you'll enjoy the rest! Thank you!

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Date: August 10 2015

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While returning home to Chicago from a business trip Anika Wallace and Hunter Sterling IV find themselves the only surviors of a plane crash on a South Pacific island. There's no telling when they'll make it back home or if they ever will make it back home for that matter. One thing is for sure they're going to have to learn how to get along their survival is depending on it.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 36
Completed:No
Word count: 54201
Read Count: 121647
Published: August 12 2015
Updated: March 02 2017


Title: Chapter 28: DAY 45

Anika is fighting her feelings for Hunter, and he's determine to break down her walls. Thanks for the update MP

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Date: April 20 2016

Title: Chapter 26: DAY 42

Hunter was loving himself to the thought of Anika, she's his fantasy girl and he don't even know it yet. I was wondering what was to become of Mohawk once they leave the island, I'm glad she's going to try and take him too. Girl... I hate snakes, ants and bees, so when Anika ran I was like go girl! move a little faster. Now it's time for Hunter to take care of Anika ( his prey ) from that fantasy he had. Thanks MP for this update.

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Date: February 29 2016

Title: Chapter 27: DAY 44

I love how Hunter took care of Anika, looking at her flaws and asking questions about it, but at the same time showing her it doesn't take away from her beauty. thanks for the update MP.

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Date: April 04 2016

Title: Chapter 23: DAY 39

Friends that's the best place to be right now!! They are making progress. love the update MP!

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Date: February 16 2016

Title: Chapter 24: BACK AT HOME 4

What a stand up guy Mr. Sterling is. Corrine is going to have a FITT!!

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Date: February 16 2016

Title: Chapter 25: BACK AT HOME 5

I'm not one for divorce but Corrine has got to go!!! or at least change her ways. Those boys are going through a lot and they need Mr. Sterling in their lives, and what he is doing for Ernestine is a blessing!! Thanks for the update MP!

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Date: February 16 2016

Title: Chapter 9: EASTER SUNDAY 1995

My hope is after the storms stop Hunter take it upon himself to find Anika's journal and presented to her in good faith. That is 10 years of her inner thoughts and feelings, that the last physical gift from her parents and that the only piece of normalcy from home. Anika needs to know that the fire was not her fault, and she was only thirteen years old what could she have done. Thanks for the update.

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Date: August 28 2015

Title: Chapter 21: DAY 35

The best relationships are the ones that are based on friendship, be friends first. I think Anika and Hunter are on the right path. Thanks for the update MP

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Date: January 12 2016

Title: Chapter 35: DAY 58

I love how they are getting comfortable with each other. Their relationship is going to be unbreakable, but I can still see old Corrine trying to break it. What's going on with Mohawk? Thanks for this update MP.

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Date: September 06 2016

Title: Chapter 31: DAY 56

Girl... when I was younger those cramps were horrible. Now that I'm older they are not so severe. Girl my beloved goes and get our daughter and myself our feminine products sometimes, one day he was in the store looking for pads and some woman yell out real loud " Get the ones with the wings " he said he was so embarrass, girl that man came home with 10 bags of pads so he won't have to go get any more any time soon. Girl.. that is what we are trying to do with our children and grandchild make sweet childhood memories with them, the type of memories they can share with their children someday. This weekend we are decorating the backyard and bringing out the boats, firing up the grills, opening up the pool and inviting all our family and friends to enjoy Saturday,Sunday and Monday with us. Hunter and Anika are becoming so close that they are feeling true empathy for each other. Thanks MP for this update and have a wonderful Memorial Day Weekend honey!

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Date: May 28 2016

Title: Chapter 10: SUMMER 1997

Corrine is so selfish, she didn't want more kids because of what it will do to her body. I had triplets at 29 years old my body was out there I gained 60lbs, they were born at 32 weeks they spent time in the NICU, when I was healthy enough my husband who's in the military is into fitness so he trained me and I got my body back in shaped. When our triplets turn 16 this year they wanted jobs, our daughter at forever21 and our sons at their uncles body shop, they received their drivers license very quickly. The goal was to get them 1 car to share, they didn't want that so my husband made them put aside 100.00 dollars out of each paycheck, when the amount total 600.00 dollars for each of them my husband and his brothers took them to a Auto Auction so they could bid on a car, Their uncle is a mechanic so he check the cars out and that is how 3 teenagers got their own car. They still work part time on the weekend only, no working on school days. Hunter was to young to see that little hussy for what she were a golddigger in the making. Popa Sterling is so right, no 16 year old should be driving a better car then his parents and he needs to work for it. Hunter not wearing a condom is just plain stupid he's 16 not 6 he knows the consequences of having unprotected sex, like my grandmother always say " A hard head, makes a soft behind" things can happen Hunter. Thanks for the update MP

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Date: August 29 2015

Title: Chapter 1: DAY 1

I can see now Hunter Is going to get on my last nerve. Life Is totally different when you are handed everything, then when you have to earned everything you work hard for. The person that earned everything cherish It more and hold on to It longer. Hunter Is a privilege white boy who thinks he's entitled to everything. Anika Is a humble black women that's thankful for everything she has. I have people on my job that thinks I got my position from "Affirmative Action" really! I worked my ass off In college and on my job, to get where I am today, and no redneck uneducated bigot Is going to stop my flow. Mr. Sterling will find out that It's hard trying to survive on a deserted Island without the help of Anika, a person that knows the struggle of surviving with little. Hunter I feel will be brought down a peg or two, on a deserted Island he has no maid, no cook and no late night booty calls. He Is about to find out what a STRONG EDUCATED BLACK WOMEN looks like GO ANIKA!!!. Great new story.



Author's Response:

Thank you jacqua43 yes Hunter is about to have a whole new outlook on life and ironically it's going to come from the

woman he finds very annoying and irritating. I know what you're saying it's like you always have to prove yourself twice 

to people that you have the skills but they can't get past your skin color. Anika is used to hard work the palm of her 

hands are both literally and figuratively rough while Hunter's are still baby soft.

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Date: August 12 2015

Title: Chapter 2: BACK AT HOME 1

I'm happy that Anika's grandmother and her brother's are standing on faith. I'm having a little empathy and sympathy for Mr. Sterling but not his wife. How Is she going to put a dollar amount on human life. So If the search party happens to find Anika when they  find Hunter, because her family hasn't contributed substantially, she should be lefted behind. That women is heartless.



Author's Response:

Corrine is the type of woman who thinks anyone not I'm her class or status is beneath her. She'll be in a definite shock that her son was stranded with Ankia all this time and not Giselle Mitchells. 

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Date: August 13 2015

Title: Chapter 3: DAY 3

One thing I can't stand Is a lazy man, If I can get up and work his ass can too. Plus this fool Is eating up all the food OH HELL NO !!!!. If I were Anika I would wear my scars as a badge of honor, If a person trully loves me  they have to love my scars too.



Author's Response:

Yeah it will take a while for Hunter to rise above his arrogant selfish ways. As for Anika I want her to be a strong and assertive young woman yet at the same time at least have one weakness.

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Date: August 14 2015

Title: Chapter 4: DAY 5

This man makes my butt itch!!! I'm not liking Hunter at all. He would have to do something human and spectacular for me to like him just a little bit. She's doing all the work while this fool is acting like he on vacation. Maybe he needs someone In his life to tell him no, because he don't have a clue. Let him keep on he's going to eat something that going to make him sick and the only person to help him will be that"Bitter black bitch" that's stuck on the Island with him. This woman has been working In hostile territory, no wonder she didn't have any empathy for her dead co-worker. I can just imagine have more people survived what her life would have been like. She would have been the only one with shelter, food and clean water because those fool's would be waiting for the imaginary maid and butler to appear. Thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

Actually I think I might use that for a plot line though I would have to see what Hunter could get sick or injured from. Hunter is going to come around eventually with time it still very early and needs time to develop a new outlook.

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Date: August 16 2015

Title: Chapter 5: DAY 8

We finally saw a little human emotions from Hunter wow!. Anika has got to stop stressing about their survival and let hunter do his part. If something was to happen to Anika like she got stung by a jellyfish or stepped on a sea urchin and got sideline for awhile then hunter will be force to step up. Plus he will have to use what he knows about plants to help treat her wounds. Thanks for the update.

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Date: August 18 2015

Title: Chapter 6: BACK AT HOME 2

Matthew 18:19-20 Again I say to you, If two of you agree on earth about anything they ask, It will be done for them by my father in heaven. They have a whole church in agreement. Mr. Sterling and Mrs. Sterling are like night and day unevenly yoked, he's a believer and I'm guessing she's not. In her mind money Is the answer to everything accept when It comes from someone she thinks Is beneath her. My suggestions for the cast is Jake Gyllenhal as Hunter, Anika Noni Rose as Anika, Ruby Dee as Ernestine Wallace, The Les twins(French twin dancers) as Isaiah and Isaac, Sean Connery as Mr. Sterling and Meryl Streep as Mrs. Sterling. Thanks for the double update.

 

 

 

 

 

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Date: August 18 2015

Title: Chapter 7: CAST

The whole cast is wonderful, it something when you have a visual of the characters. Nice job!!

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Date: August 19 2015

Title: Chapter 8: DAY 11

Wow! when it rains it pours. I understand how she feels about her journal the only connection she feels to her mother, but her life is much more important. Wow! the human side of Hunter has finally come out. I see their situation evolving more now, Anika is emontionally and mentally traumatize right now and Hunter is the stable one now. I think they should find a new shelter, they need to discover the island. thanks for the update MP

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Date: August 25 2015

Title: Chapter 11: DAY 12

Is Corrine so unhappy with her life that she has to go around emasculating the joy and life out of her husband and son. What a wonderful memory Hunter had about his father, not being aware of the knowledge and know-how his father instill in him to survive some of lifes many challenges. Maybe this is the turning point in Anika's and Hunters cohabitants on the island, or maybe it's time for Anika to turn the reins over to Hunter. Thanks for the update MP

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Date: September 04 2015

Title: Chapter 12: DAY 13

What a wonderful surprise Anika and Hunter are working together, I like that. They are opening up a little about their lives back home. I bet Hunter never thought that helping his father build a tree house when he was little would give him tools to survive on a deserted island. I do think Hunter will be a changed man when he goes back home. I'm wondering what kind of upbringing was Corrine sudjected to, how she's acting I don't think it was a happy one. When I first meet my husband in high school I couldn't stand him at all, I thought he was a jack-ass play boy who thought the sun rised and set with his ass, boy was I wrong. You should never judge a person without getting to know them first. I think Anika and Hunter will have a everlasting friendship and romantic relationship well pass their time on the island. I think Corrine will have a heart attack, pops will be very happy that his son chose his on mate in life. I think being stranded on that island is the best thing that could have happen to Hunter and Anika. Thanks for the update MP

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Date: September 07 2015

Title: Chapter 13: DAY 14

They chose the right plant because bamboo is tough and it grows in abundance. I guess they are unintentionally (feng shui) their new home. I'm liking Hunter more and more. I think apart of Anika is afraid and concern about what other people think of her. I believe when Hunter finally gets a good look at her body, he will be so in love with her that the only thing he notice is her LIGHT. They are not aware of their new found friendship yet. I love the funny banter between these two. Thanks for the update MP

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Date: September 09 2015

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