Penname: jacqua43 [Contact]

Real name: jacqueline

Member Since: March 25 2013

Membership status: Member

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I'm just a woman who loves her God, her husband, her 6 children, her grandbaby, her son-in-law, her family, herself, her peace, her job, her Pittsburgh Steelers and to read all in a nutshell. I LOVE LIFE!!!



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Summary:

While returning home to Chicago from a business trip Anika Wallace and Hunter Sterling IV find themselves the only surviors of a plane crash on a South Pacific island. There's no telling when they'll make it back home or if they ever will make it back home for that matter. One thing is for sure they're going to have to learn how to get along their survival is depending on it.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 36
Completed:No
Word count: 54201
Read Count: 121655
Published: August 12 2015
Updated: March 02 2017


Title: Chapter 14: DAY 18

I can't wait for Anika to be comfortable in the skin she's in. Right now Anika just think a persons outer beauty is important, but to me it's the beauty within that makes a person beautiful in my eyes. Anika can't let what one person who is not even irrelevant dictates how she sees herself and how other people will view her. I'm hoping Hunter sees her alone bathing and notice her vitiligo and she's not aware he's watching and when she do decide to show him her body he's shows her that it doesn't matter to him. Hunter is coming around to be a very cool dude. Thanks for the update MP

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Date: September 17 2015

Title: Chapter 15: VALENTINE'S DAY 2001

Jason's main goal was to get in Anika's pants, he didn't love her because if he did he would have let her explain her situation to him. He was cruel and tasteless and a down right bully, she was better off without him in her life. Anika needs to know that there is someone out there who will love her for her inside and out. Thanks for the update MP

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Date: September 21 2015

Title: Chapter 16: BACK AT HOME 3

Don't you just love grandmas. Mrs.Ernestine is a strong woman she's holding on to faith. Mr. Sterling makes me like him more and more, taking the time to go to Anika's grandmother house personally and inform them of the situation is being a real boss and human being with morals, compassion and a good heart. Issac and Isaiah personalities are showing I love it. thanks for the update MP

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Date: September 26 2015

Title: Chapter 17: DAY 21

Anika couldn't save her parents but she was going to try with everything in her to save Hunter from that Panther and she did, Now Hunter will have scars to. There is nothing that can bring two people closer then when one saves the others life. Hunter saw Anika's light and he recognized it, Anika is seeing hunter heart and she is recognizing he is a good person and not at all what she thought he was. They are building a bond that not even Corrine can break. Thanks for the double update MP

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Date: September 26 2015

Title: Chapter 18: DAY 28

I'm honored MP, I loved the fact that you discuss a situation every female has to are had to experience in their life, It makes it all real. I'm glad Hunter wasn't vulgar about the situation and that he showed restraint, dignity and compassion towards Anika his father would be proud. I also love the fact that Hunter is willing to teach Anika to fish, a man who teaches you how to supply for yourself, so if something was to happen to him you can survive on your own is a REAL MAN in my eyes. Their Relationship is evolving nicely. Thanks for the update MP

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Date: October 01 2015

Title: Chapter 19: TIMELINE CHECKPOINT

I can't wait!!!

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Date: December 19 2015

Title: Chapter 20: DAY 33

I love It! I love It! you did a great job on this chapter MP. I loved how they talked to each other and really listen to each other reliving the past, some memories good, some bad. They are breaking down those walls slowly but surely. Thanks for the update MP.

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Date: December 21 2015

Title: Chapter 22: DAY 36

Good Job!! MP, I like the way they are playful together.

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Date: January 16 2016

Title: Chapter 29: DAY 49

Anika is finally finding out that all men are not like that shallow little boy Jason. Mohawk acts just like a child, they are playing mother and father to a monkey. Our little Anika hormones are going wild! she's thinking a lot about Hunter anatomy, how funny!. I bet Hunter is about to give her a taste of what she's dreaming about. There friendship is evolving nicely. Thanks for this update MP

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Date: May 02 2016

Title: Chapter 30: BACK AT HOME 6

Corrine is about to get a real rude awakening, because the Hunter that left is not the Hunter that is coming back. I dislike people like Corrine who shows no respect to you ( like she did Isaac and Isaiah ) but expect them to respect her. Hunter is a grown man not a little boy, so who she thinks he should be with is irrelevant, because he has already picked his bride ( but he's not aware of it yet ). I could see Corrine's face when Hunter and Anika is found and they are the only two alive and they are joined at the hip, and everything she tries to throw at them can't break their bond. Thanks for the update MP

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Date: May 04 2016

Title: Chapter 32: THE TRIP 1

Girl... it's hard being the only black person in a company of privilege white people. Some people say " It's not what you know, it's who you know" and they seem to know each other very well. Anika's light was shining so bright and on top of that she was getting recognition for her work, and those hens couldn't handle all that. In my profession I find that I have a lot of haters but it doesn't bother me, girl when I know someone don't like me I will go up to them and say " Honey how are you doing? this beautiful day" and some will give me a look and all I can do is laugh. I try and get alone with everybody, and people know that I'm a nice person but they know if you piss me off, there's a whole new side to me. You can't live your life worring about what someone who's not your family or friend thinks about you. Your sun doesn't set or rise with them. I'm glad Hunter is a new man and he sees the error of his ways. Thank you MP for this update

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Date: June 01 2016

Title: Chapter 33: THE TRIP 2

Man! Anika can't catch a break, falling down getting on the plane in front of all those evil eyes, but my girl took it like a trooper and got up, brush herself off and walked with her head held high ( priceless ). You know it made me mad that all her co-workers was treating this trip as a vacation instead of something that was life changing and work. I also saw Hunter trying to engage Anika to talk and join their group, but Anika was not having it. Girl I just went on a trip with a lot of people (family) and I found that trying to get hotel rooms for everybody was to damn expensive, so my sister suggested that we rent a house that was big enough to accommodate all of us so we won't be separated and believe it or not it was less expensive than individual hotel rooms. What if Anika had to share a space with all those pricks, that child would've been living in PURE HELL!!. Is it me or does Giselle acts as though she's jealous of Anika, I wonder way she is so threaten by her. I hope now  Hunter sees what's the different is of being stranded with Anika vs being stranded with Giselle, the love affair would've ended on day 1 of being stranded. Thanks for this update MP

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Date: June 08 2016

Title: Chapter 34: THE TRIP 3

So Hunter was the one who saved Anika's life and he was not aware of it, divine intervention. Girl.. who says words don't have power, when Giselle said it wouldn't be a bad thing to leave someone behind ( meaning Anika ), then the accident happen and she's the one left  behind ( because she's dead ) that was KARMA!. MP I had a wonderful weekend with my beloved and you just put the icing on the cake, thanks honey for the updates.

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Date: June 27 2016

Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

post-movie
Dido feels audacious and John is reluctant. Nonetheless, smut ensues



Table of Contents
Categories: Movies
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1362
Read Count: 1072
Published: August 17 2015
Updated: August 17 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I LOVED THAT MOVIE ALSO. HEY WHEN THE FEVER HITS YOU IT HITS YOU, THE MAN WAS THE ONE TO PUMP THE BRAKES RARE.  I WISH THE MOVIE WOULD HAVE BEEN LONGER THOUGH. GREAT JOB!!!!

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Date: August 17 2015

Rated: All Ages
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Summary:

With the help of her boyfriend, Luciana embarks on a new adventure in Madrid working as an au-pair. With this move, it forces the previously horribly insecure and low esteemed Luciana to be pushed outside her comfort zone and reach a new awareness of herself. But by doing so she must deal with the consequences of a long-distance relationship and possibly heartbreak...
Miss.Carter can't have it all or can she?

For anyone who feels unworthy of good things - this is for you.

Please be aware that this story is a sequel of the first book, "The Untitled Girl" which is available for purchase on Amazon.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Inspirational, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Spritualism, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:No
Word count: 40843
Read Count: 76122
Published: August 30 2015
Updated: May 11 2017


Title: Chapter 9: -- 7 --

Great update honey!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

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Date: September 06 2016

Title: Chapter 17: -- 15 --

Out of her pain she finds her purpose. Great update honey!

Author's Response:

Yes, it's what life is about. Thank you!

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Date: May 13 2017

Title: Chapter 8: -- 6.3 --

What a gift!! that seems like so much fun, I would love to race around in a car like that. I love Formula 1 racing in the states we have Nascar and I'm not about to get involve with some of their racist fans. I think Angelo is really in love with Luciana, he has to be he proposed to her, but I thinks she's just not feeling him that way anymore. I really hope that she doesn't break his heart. Thanks for this update honey, and how are you?



Author's Response:

Honestly whilst I was writing out the chapter I was jealous - I would LOVE a birthday gift like that. I'm hoping for zero broken hearts too but we'll see.

I'm well and I hope you are too :-).

Thank you as always for reading :-)

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Date: June 07 2016

Title: Chapter 7: -- 6.2 --

They are a fun couple and I like it. Linda is always in my prayers and so are you. Hey honey! have a great Easter.



Author's Response:

Yes, these two are definitely fun lol, it was pretty fun to write this chapter too.

thank you so much Jacqua, we need all the prayers, thank you once again :-).

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Date: March 25 2016

Title: Chapter 3: --3--

Girl my beloved took me to see it and I really did enjoy it, that was a great movie.

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Date: March 11 2016

Title: Chapter 6: -- 6 --

I love it!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading :-).

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Date: March 11 2016

Title: Chapter 10: -- 8 --

Long distance relationships are hard and requires dedication on both their parts. I don't think she has to be pressured into doing something she not ready to do. Tell his mom to step back. Thanks for this update honey.

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Date: October 24 2016

Title: Chapter 15: -- 13 --

Girl... Luciana is a force to be reckoned with. I like how she told him off and got payback. Great update honey!

Author's Response:

Oh Luciano definitely has that feisty streak in her and she showed it 100%. Thanks again for reading !

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Date: April 16 2017

Title: Chapter 16: -- 14 --

Great update honey! I read your blog and it was excellent as always. It made me sad that you feel homeless, but you know home is where you make it. Keep up the good work and I hope all is well.

Author's Response:

Thank you as always for reading and yes you're right, though making a home for myself is proving rather challenging but I'll be okay. Thank you once again.

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Date: May 01 2017

Rated: Mature Content
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Summary:

The prison had been confined within their hearts but when... when would they truly be set free?

 

 

 

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Transcendence is a original work by CM and is intended for publication so please do not upload, distort, edit, or remove and place on any other site. Respectfully yours, thank you. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Inspirational, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Spritualism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 49
Completed:Yes
Word count: 291391
Read Count: 261003
Published: September 13 2015
Updated: May 01 2020


Title: Chapter 27: Waves

That was beautiful!! I think the sex is about to happen. I love how they are growing with each other, they have to let each other be themselves. That no holds barred kind of love, that I feel what you feel kind of love. Thanks for this update D&L

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Date: April 15 2016

Title: Chapter 17: Wading

perfect 10 !!!!!



Author's Response:

Hehehe thank you Ms J! I missed your reviews! <3 

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Date: February 19 2016

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.