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Real name: jacqueline

Member Since: March 25 2013

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I'm just a woman who loves her God, her husband, her 6 children, her grandbaby, her son-in-law, her family, herself, her peace, her job, her Pittsburgh Steelers and to read all in a nutshell. I LOVE LIFE!!!



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Transcendence by DarkandLovely
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Summary:

The prison had been confined within their hearts but when... when would they truly be set free?

 

 

 

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Transcendence is a original work by CM and is intended for publication so please do not upload, distort, edit, or remove and place on any other site. Respectfully yours, thank you. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Inspirational, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Spritualism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 49
Completed:Yes
Word count: 291391
Read Count: 261002
Published: September 13 2015
Updated: May 01 2020

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Title: Chapter 18: Him

I love it!! thanks for the update D&L



Author's Response:

Aww thank you for reading and your never-ending support Ms. J! <3

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Date: February 19 2016
Title: Chapter 38: Matrimony

Oh! My! Goodness!! D&L, this chapter is so beautiful! I love myself some Rae and Hiroto! The words they spoke in the ceremony made me want to cry! and that bowl is spectacular!! Nice Job!! honey!

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Date: July 03 2017
Title: Chapter 13: Visor

The truth is about to come out and Rae is going to be hurt by it. Thanks for the update D&L.



Author's Response:

You're welcome! <3 

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Date: December 27 2015
Title: Chapter 26: Explosion

I don't like Mr. Rossi he's possessive, cocky and very annoying. Hiroto did right by not fighting him, let a group of your peers see how unstable he is. Rae needs to take her talents somewhere else because this man is not going to give up this dream of having her. Rae and Hiroto relationship is about to heat up YES!!!. Thanks for the update D&L

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Date: April 04 2016
Title: Transcendence

I'm glad she checked Kwasame about her ring, I would've checked his behind the day he did it. Rae don't need to be in a relationship right now, her emotions are all over the place. Boy! men say some crazy stuff when they are hurt and mad, for Kwasame to say " you weren't any damn good anyway" was a low blow, and a lie because she put his "quick draw self " to sleep afterwards. I know sex isn't everything in a relationship but it's a major part, if i'm going to satisfy you, you are going to satisfy me. I got my eyes on you Mr. Rossi with your slick self, trying to remove Rae out of Hiroto space before he gets there " slick bastard". Thanks for the update D&L, girl go ace that midterm.

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Date: October 08 2015
Title: Transcendence

Yes!Yes!Yes! one down and many to go. I can't wait for Peter to become someone's lady in prison. The things he made those children do, may it comes back on him. I hope Shaundra receives the same fate. I'm still on the fence with Kendrick after he told his story. Thanks D&L for a great update and welcome back honey!!

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Date: September 06 2016
Title: Transcendence

I'm happy for you D&L your life comes first.We will be here when you are ready. Thanks for keeping us informed.

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Date: November 17 2015
Title: Chapter 15: Process

The person who really loves you sees what a mess you can be, how moody you can get, and how hard you are to handle. But still wants you in their life. This is true love between Rae and Hiroto, time will only strenthen it. Thanks for the update D&L



Author's Response:

YESSS Ms. J! Absolutely!! Theirs is so true and will only grow stronger! <3 You're so welcome! Thank you for reading!

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Date: January 07 2016
Title: Transcendence

I learned that when something bad happens to you, you have three choices. You can either let it define you. Let it destroy you, or you can let it strengthen you. I believe this will strengthen Rae. Thanks for the update D&L



Author's Response:

I agree one hundred percent! You have the choice and the power to change the influence your circumstances have. Either you control them or you let them control you! Rae's a strong woman and I believe with all my heart and spirit that she is going to make her the strongest she's ever been!

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Date: January 06 2016
Title: Chapter 14: Revelation

My heart is breaking for Rae, but sometimes getting hurt is a necessary path. Do not deny yourself of this experience, but never dwell in it. You have to go through it and not around it for you to get over it. Thanks for the update D&L



Author's Response:

You are so welcome! Thank you for reading Ms. jacqua! <3 I agree 100 with you! 

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Date: January 04 2016
Title: Chapter 33: Homecoming

This is a very sensual love story without the sex, It's sensuality of the mind, the body and spirit ( pure genius ) I love these two soul together, they make sense to me. I'm happy Rae got to see Roto's father again and Tobu. I think the lady she sees at the end is Minako. Thanks for this update D&L.

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Date: October 03 2016
Title: Chapter 25: Step (One At A Time)

Daniel is just like some men who think a woman who has a position of power recieved it lying on her back. Daniel was out of line! and Rossi should have been the one who set him in his place, because he knew what Daniel was talking about and he knew that it wasn't true. I loved how Roto stood up for his woman, he was the only real man in the room. I can't wait to see how this friendship blossom more. Thanks for the update D&L.

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Date: March 23 2016
Title: Transcendence

Mr. Rossi is a trip!! just because she works for you Rossi doesn't mean you own her. I like how Rae put him in his place. Hiroto will protect his woman at all cost, Rossi better watch out. Rae's whole family is tripping, her mother seems like she don't want Rae to be happy, is she still jealous of Rae? I like Erica and Amee. Thanks for the update D&L.

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Date: March 25 2016
Title: Chapter 1: introduction

True love never die.



Author's Response:

NEVER EVER

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Date: October 02 2015
Title: Chapter 3: That Girl

Rae light is going to shine everywhere she goes, I love the fight in her.



Author's Response:

Aww I love this! I couldn't agree more Jacqua! <3 I love her too! She's such an amazing character! Her light can't be stopped from shining bright!

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Date: October 02 2015
Title: Chapter 4: That Boy

Man up Hiroto and go get your women. I feel sorry for Kiko but she not the women for him. I love myself some Tobu. Thanks for the update DL



Author's Response:

Agreed!!! And Tobu is sooo my baby woosa! You're so welcome! Thank you for reading!

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Date: October 02 2015
Title: Chapter 2: characters*

Antonio Rossi, Nakamura Tobu, Tre Marshall, and Kwasame Jones are HOTT!!!!!



Author's Response:

hehehe yes they areeee woooooooo!!!!!! I wanted to find a man to be like a supa upgrade even though in my opinion Kentaro (who is Roto) is really freaking fine too lol. But like I needed my girl to get her a upgradeeeeeee. lol. Adonis is so it. Like he is just black silky smooth fine. Don't get me started on Antonio and Tobu lol. Tre too! He is beautiful man...

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Date: October 02 2015
Title: Chapter 5: Black Coffee

I don't trust Kwasame, I think he may be dangerous he very possessive. How dare he take her ring off her finger.  I don't like the fact that he threw her toothbrush away, like she is just a casual guest in his house and not his suppose girlfriend. I'm keeping my eyes on him. Thanks for the update D&L



Author's Response:

!!!! T.H.I.SS. That toothbrush thing was a loud big red flag. Bruh what? And then the reason he threw it out was not excusable. You're welcome!

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Date: October 03 2015
Title: Transcendence

Wow! Kiko is acting real thirsty( as my kids would say) isn't she. Kiko needs to realize after being with someone for 10 years and he is showing you no kind of affection then it's not real boo!, there's nothing she can do his heart belongs to someone else. Hiroto better go get his women. Thanks for the update D&L



Author's Response:

LOL! Yes she is drinking from the super thirsty can't get a clue well. She acting PARCHED jacqua43 lol! PARCHHHHED. Kiko is a woman who is... she's clearly defined by her culture and of her family. And the decisions she makes (not smart or wise or respectful really) are influenced by these things. *sigh* Kiko is a hot messsss. HOT ASS MESS. Yes Roto to the rescueeee! He need to book that flight asap lol. You're welcome! <3 

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Date: October 03 2015
Title: Chapter 6: The Past

Yes!!!! I can't wait until they see each other for the first time in 10 years, Rae let your heart guide you to your lifetime, like I always like to say people comes into our lives for a reason, some for a season and some for a lifetime and Hiroto is Rae's lifetime. Thanks for the update D&L

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Date: October 04 2015
Title: Transcendence

I'm glad he finally stood up to his mother, and the part where he told her he wanted her to live so she could see his little brown babies was priceless. I'm also happy that his father owned up to his treatment of his son and apologized. Hanna and Hisae are still in his life and doing great, I loved that. Now it's time for the celebration between Hiroto and Rae, I know it's going to be a struggle for him to get her back but if anyone can get what he wants it's Hiroto. Thanks for the update and good luck on your midterms D&L.

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Date: October 06 2015
Title: Chapter 7: Search

Was the women on the street that recognize Hiroto, was that Leah.

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Date: October 13 2015
Title: Chapter 8: Conclusion

Parents just don't understand, they act like they never experience heartbreak before always saying you'll get over it. Kwasame is a very strange brother, I don't like him or trust him, when he said"I don't think i'm ready to let you go" I was like this MOFO is out of his mind. I think Kwasame is a "International Psycho". Mr.Rossi is up to something I got my eyes on him.

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Date: October 13 2015
Title: Chapter 9: Found

Yes!! Hiroto saw his woman and Kiko was jealous, will this woman ever get it through her head that Hiroto don't want her. I knew it! Mr. Rossi was feeling Rae, well get in line buddy because you are not the only one. They are finally going to meet face to face.

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Date: October 13 2015
Title: Chapter 10: You

That it Rae make him work for you, don't let him back so easy.

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Date: October 13 2015

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