Penname: jacqua43 [Contact]

Real name: jacqueline

Member Since: March 25 2013

Membership status: Member

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I'm just a woman who loves her God, her husband, her 6 children, her grandbaby, her son-in-law, her family, herself, her peace, her job, her Pittsburgh Steelers and to read all in a nutshell. I LOVE LIFE!!!



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Transcendence by DarkandLovely
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 404]
Summary:

The prison had been confined within their hearts but when... when would they truly be set free?

 

 

 

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Transcendence is a original work by CM and is intended for publication so please do not upload, distort, edit, or remove and place on any other site. Respectfully yours, thank you. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Inspirational, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Spritualism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 49
Completed:Yes
Word count: 291391
Read Count: 261087
Published: September 13 2015
Updated: May 01 2020

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Title: Chapter 11: Leeway (Slow but Sure)

I guess we will see Kiko true nature, what will she do, go get a life or try and push herself into Hiroto's life. OOH HELL TO THE NO!!! this mofo did not man handle Rae like that Oh! it's on now! get him girl!!. Hiroto came at the right time, Kwasame is straight up looney!!.

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Date: October 13 2015
Title: Chapter 12: Cocoon

They are destined to be together. Thanks for all the updates D&L.

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Date: October 13 2015
Title: Transcendence

Take your time D&L and get your learn on, I'm one of the one's who will be here when you are ready. I wish you God's grace, his blessings and his love. Take care of yourself D&L

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Date: October 14 2015
Title: Chapter 19: Clean

This chapter was just wonderful!! It comes a time in our lives where we have to let go, let go of the hurt and pain, let go of the hate. And forgive those that hurt us, and to forgive ourselves for thinking it was all our fault. It's time to cleanse ourselves with fresh new water and the love of Jesus Christ. Girl... I'm so in-love with God!! that everyday I wake with a smile on my face and in my heart, because I know who holds my tomorrows, my father Jesus Christ. Thanks D&L for this BEAUTIFUL!! update.



Author's Response:

Awww thank you Ms. J! I wouldn't have said it better myself! Absolutely! Yes ma'am!! I LOVE IT! I love Him too, so much and I am so glad that someone finally sees past the writing and sees the deeper intention for the story!! This gift God blessed me with and you know what, I'm gonna exalt Him with it! How beautiful is it to know that in Christ Jesus we have strength, everlasting love and grace?! Wow! Thank you for the review as always Ms. J! Muah, love you much and appreciate you! <3

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Date: March 09 2016
Title: Chapter 20: Her

It's time for his healing now. Thanks for the update D&L



Author's Response:

You're oh so welcome! :) Thank you for reading! <3 Yes the time is now!

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Date: March 11 2016
Title: Chapter 21: Many

Wow! Hiroto's life was very hard. My heart goes out to him, what this child had to go through was horrible and uncalled- for. I love the letter writing,and sometimes you just need for someone to just listen. Thanks for the update D&L

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Date: March 12 2016
Title: Chapter 22: Genesis

I like how Hiroto signed his letter to himself " The One Who Overcame " DEEP!!!!

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Date: March 15 2016
Title: Chapter 23: New

Girl..." Don't feel as though you have to carry the world on your shoulders... You're not alone anymore. When you get tired, I 'll carry you. When you get frustrated, I'll listen. When you need someone to comfort you, I'll wrap my arms around you. I'll defend and protect you. I'll cherish you all the days of my life and provide the best way I can. If you let me. " D&L THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL!!! thanks for the update.

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Date: March 15 2016
Title: Chapter 24: Reunited

Now it's time for their friendship to commence again. Thanks for the update D&L.

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Date: March 19 2016
Title: Chapter 28: Promise

DL honey I thought there were a chapter called " Land " I didn't see it. I'm glad Rae have two people in her corner who cares about her and who would fight many wars to have her back with them. Peter and Rossi needs to be locked up.



Author's Response:

Ms. J Thank you!!! You're right!!! I'll upload that one again too! <3 I appreciate it!! Yes they both need to be behind bars. I got somethin for each of them!

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Date: May 20 2016
Title: Chapter 29: Dense Blue

I hope when Rae gets better that she confronts Shaundra and Kendrick, and release them out of her life for good. I'm glad James was there for her, he was her guardian angel past and present. Until Peter and Rossi are captured Hiroto needs to take Rae far away. Thanks for reposting D&L.



Author's Response:

You're welcome Ms. J! <3 Yes Rae gon confront both of them! What they have done cannot and will not be excused! I agree! 

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Date: May 20 2016
Title: Transcendence

I'm happy they made it out okay and that no one was seriously hurt. Thanks for reposting this chapter D&L.

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Date: May 20 2016
Title: Chapter 30: Bonnie and Clyde

Atmikha is a very beautiful woman with a big heart and gentle spirit ( I like her ). She's just what Rae needs in her life. I'm a firm believer that some people needs to be dealt with and Peter, Rossi, Kendrick and Shaundra needs to be dealt with real quick!!. I hope Rae doesn't let the actions of others stop her love for Tre and Amee. Hiroto and Rae will find peace soon. Thanks for the update D&L

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Date: June 12 2016
Title: Chapter 36: Inflorescence

Great chapter!! He put a ring on it!! about time! who cares if her mother and father don't approve ( go get your man Rae!!! ) I can see them adopting Kyou in the future, that little boy needs them. I loved the birthday surprised for Roto, with all the people he love and that loved him back. Thanks D&L for a wonderful update and I hope your 2017 be nothing but AMAZING!!

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Date: December 30 2016
Title: Chapter 31: Blue Wine

Yes!!! what goes around comes around. I'm so happy Peter got his ( doing a little happy dance!! ). Girl, yes! bring on the fun in Japan. Oh wait! didn't his fiancé go back to Japan also? I hope there is no more drama for Rae. Our girl Rae got paid!! Thanks D&L for this wonderful update.

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Date: September 19 2016
Title: Chapter 34: Saikai Suru

Mommie Dearest has to be stopped and Kiko has to be deported back to Japan. These women will be a thorn in Hiroto and Rae's side, it's time to nip this in the bud. Thanks D&L for this update and CONGRATS!!! again honey.

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Date: November 15 2016
Title: Chapter 35: Fruition

I'm glad he closed that chapter of his life with Kiko and done it with honor. Now, his mother is a different story all together. This wicked witch killed her sister out of jealousy and tried to kill her son out of greed and in my opinion hate. I'm glad he gave her the same fate she gave his beloved grandmother. What goes around, comes around. Girl... I can't wait for there to be total peace in their lives. Thanks D&L for this wonderful update.

Author's Response:

You are so very welcome Ms. J! Thank YOU for the lovely review! <3 Oh yes, being a man of class, Roto wasn't going to end it any other way! And I wanted you to see that as he said... he did have some affection for her! I think for him the relationship felt even more wrong being that he looked at Kiko as a little sister. :)  YES ROTO SERVED THAT DISH COOOLLLLDDD! Mizu reaped what she sowed! MAN MS. J I CANNOT WAIT EITHER FOR THE PEACE! THEY DESERVE IT! <3 

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Date: November 20 2016
Title: Chapter 37: Entr'acte

Welcome back honey! I'm happy for you D&L and I hope all is well. I love this chapter it shows the growth of both Rae and Hiroto and their relationship, it's a spiritual awakening in a physical atmosphere ( it's powerful ) I loved the letter he wrote to his grandmother. Great update honey.

Author's Response:

HI MS. J!!! <3 Thank you for the warm welcome back hehe! It's been forever and I couldn't wait to update haha. I agree 100!!! Rae and Roto have grown most beautifully! I know I got emotional when I read it after. I was like oh man my baby... <3 So sweet. I'm so glad you liked it hehe. Stay tuned cause our babies about to join in marriage! YAY! <3 

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Date: April 24 2017
Title: Chapter 39: Rivet

That was simply amazing D&L. Great job!!

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Date: August 07 2017
Title: Chapter 40: The So.u.nd

I love this!! Marriage where the foundation is God, will always stand the test of time. My beloved and I read the Bible every night before bed with a bowl of fruit loots( that's our thang! ) been doing it for 23 years. This update makes me so happy D&L. I hope all is well with you honey.

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Date: September 15 2017
Title: Chapter 41: A/N: Reflection

Darkandlovely, honey at some point you will have to learn to let go of the hurt your earthly father put on you. That fear is stopping you from experiencing love. The right person for you can't come in if the door is always closed. Trust and believe GOD will send you your KING! and you will be his QUEEN and that love will be EVERLASTING! I love you honey! and you are always and forever in my prayers.

Author's Response:

You are so right Ms. J! The hurt definitely has still lingered. I know that just as God allowed me to be able to forgive him, He will help me be able to let go of the hurt he left. THANK YOU MS. JJJJJJ!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thank you for your wisdom and your real advice! I love you more than words can express! <3 Thank you again *kisses* <3

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Date: November 17 2017
Purple Haze by bellanoire
Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

Sometimes a long, stressful day at work can lead to a walk down memory lane 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:Yes
Word count: 388
Read Count: 1046
Published: September 16 2015
Updated: September 16 2015

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Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2-Purple haze all up in my brain

Girl I'm ticked!!! got me all into this story and you stopped right there. More please!! More please!!! If you give us no more it still was EXCELLENT!!

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Date: September 17 2015
Filthy Rich by Joelle Jax
Rated: Members ONLY: 17 and Older
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Summary:

Need I say more?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 4858
Read Count: 1220
Published: September 16 2015
Updated: September 16 2015

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I know how Anthony is acting towards Natalia because my husband is acting the same way. I'm not on bedrest but I have cut back on the hours at work and I'm taking it real easy at home. Girl I'm so happy I have a man who can cook, because ain't nobody got no time to be standing at no hot stove cooking anything. We decided not to have a baby shower, we had a reverse baby shower where we gave gifts to the people who supported us our first time 16 years ago and the ones who supports us now. We were young then and needed a lot of help, but we are truly blessed now where we can do it on our own. Rich is so sure of himself, I hope Kara don't give in and make him beg for it but the flesh is weak. Thanks JJ for another great story.



Author's Response:

Thank God for good husbands and supportive family and friends.  When you're pregnant, it makes all the difference, especially with multiples.  Congrats on your little ones!  Thanks Jacqua43!

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Date: September 16 2015
Retired
Power of Love by Nancy Williams
Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

Finding love the second time around



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 10289
Read Count: 5009
Published: September 25 2015
Updated: September 28 2015

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - 8 Unedited

GIRL!!!!! this is so good, please continue!!! you had me invested from the start. Things like this happens when there's no communication in a relationship or trust. I not feeling the way Garrett called a baby out her name, part of me thinks that Malcolm is gay and only taking on the responsibility as Delaney's father. I'm hooked!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you. You have made my day!!

 

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Date: September 25 2015
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 9

Wow! I hope Simone is ok, girl I became a Registered Nurse at 22 years old and one of my first jobs was in a prison hospital and there was total chaos, we had to have a armed guard come with us when we did anything for the inmates if the guards didn't like you they left you behind and one Nurse was raped and beaten by a inmate patient, girl I tried to get along with everybody and treat everybody with respect but after that I quit. I started working at a local hospital in my area and decided I wanted to work in the NICU. I have worked with babies for over 20 years now, I went back to school and got my Masters and now i'm a Certified Registered Nurse Anesthetists, I'm still working with babies and I love my job. People need to know that there is danger in all professions. Now Garrett will come to the realization that he wants his Simone back. Thanks for the update

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Date: September 28 2015

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