Penname: jacqua43 [Contact]

Real name: jacqueline

Member Since: March 25 2013

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I'm just a woman who loves her God, her husband, her 6 children, her grandbaby, her son-in-law, her family, herself, her peace, her job, her Pittsburgh Steelers and to read all in a nutshell. I LOVE LIFE!!!



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STANDING FAITH by marchpisces92
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Summary:

The year 2016 looks promising for Faith Jamison she's finally going to acheive her purpose in the world and feel good about herself for the first time in her life. Women are now finally allowed to train to be Navy SEALS. Faith isn't going to let that oppurtnuity slip by her not when she sees a future that is brighter than her painful past.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Inspirational
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 25940
Read Count: 51801
Published: September 29 2015
Updated: March 21 2016

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Title: Chapter 8: TRAINING II

"Three things cannot be long hidden: the sun, the moon, and the truth" by Buddha. The truth will eventually come out, and when it do it's going to hurt a lot of people, most of all the baby. A part of me thinks Conrad has some inkling that something is not right, why wouldn't she show him the baby, hair and all. I like Faith's drive, some people succeed because they are destined, but most because they are determined. Thanks for the update MP



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Conrad is of Irish American descent with reddish brown hair so he would have known something was up if Lukas didn't have on his newborn hat. The truth already came out in the child's genetics and he can't help that and Heather knew damn well what she was doing.

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Date: January 12 2016
Title: Chapter 4: BUTTERFLY

I'm happy she tried to get away, when Howard said " It don't need to be a girl cause then it would be you all over again you dumb b*tch" meaning I will do to her what has been done to you. I'm currently 32 weeks pregnant with twin girls and you are right I'm carrying high, I don't know their names yet because my husband named them months ago when we found out we were having girl's and he wont tell me their names until they are born, but I know their names will start with a M that's my only stipulation, right now I call them my "Beautiful Surprises". Man! it burns me up! that no one tried to help this child, even after witnessing her get hit, OH HELL NO!!!!. Now she's all alone again no baby, no family, no life and to her no hope. Thanks for the update MP

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Date: October 08 2015
Title: Chapter 1: PREVIEW

Who says it's a man's world, and women or only allowed to live in it. I say get your Faith you deserve it just like any man would. Would they make it hard for her YES! but she seems to have the spunk and will to get through it. I feel sorry for conrad it seems like JODY has stepped into his relationship with Heather, Jody means the guy at home having sex with your wife or significant other while you are on deployment. I guess Heather was not strong enough to resist. I hope Corad find out before he marries Heather or all his benefits goes to a child that not even his. I like this story MP

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Date: September 29 2015
Title: Chapter 6: SOMBER SIXTEEN

Faith should have never told Howard her game plan. It was time for Howard to die, this girl did what she had to do in order to survive. Howard came running toward Faith, he's the stupid one to run to a bullet that's self-defense to me. The law is stupid to witness bruises old and new on someone and not give them the benefit of the doubt, is ludicrous to me. Faith is better off by herself who needs family if they are going to side with the abuser over their daughter, they will need Faith one day. If it takes 2 years in order for her to get her life back, I believe she will do it without any problems. Faith is strong and she's a fighter, which equals to a WARRIOR in my book. Thanks for the update MP.

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Date: October 24 2015
Title: Chapter 3: TRAINING

I'm a firm believer that a women can be and do anything a man can. How dare they try to put her in a box, Faith is strong she's a fighter and more important she's a survivor. I now understand why Faith has that attitude about authority, she had to call her rapist sir. I don't know about you but if Dominique open her mouth one more time I'm opening up a can of "Beat that hoe down" on her, I hate jealous women. I'm hoping Conrad and Faith team up and train for the PST together. Thanks for the update MP

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Date: October 07 2015
Title: Chapter 2: PERMANENT NIGHTMARE

What they did to that child is unhuman to me, this child was 13 years old not 33 and they are going to marry her off to a man who's 27 years older then her. I think her mother and father and husband should be charged with child prostitution, statutory rape, human trafficking and child abuse. I'm glad her life situations didn't break her but made her strong and a warrior princess in my eye's. Thanks for the update MP

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Date: October 01 2015
Title: Chapter 11: THANKSGIVING

I'm glad that Faith got to spend Thanksgiving with someone and not by herself. I like the Rios family, they are what Faith needs right now, maybe they can be her " Forever Family ". That little Nova got a lot of questions, just like our grandbaby. It was a surprise to hear that Faith's brothers called her, I was thinking that they were not allowed to talk to her. Girl... I feel so sad for Conrad and baby Lukas, they will not know how it feels to be father and son. The part that get me, is Heather thinking that she can just explain that she did all this because she was lonely and she would be forgiven, this chick was living in la-la land, bye bye Heather. How can this chick abandon her child after he lost the only father he known in this short life, and stick her mother with the responsibility of raising her child. Now I hope Conrad and Faith can build on their friendship. Thanks for the update MP.

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Date: March 21 2016
Title: Chapter 5: FAMILY?

Doninique is getting on my last nerve. I can't stand Howard, he's trying to take everything away from her even her memories of her "Butterfly". This fool wants to act stupid about some dinner, If I were Faith I would poison his food or least put a laxative in his food and have him running to the bathroom in more ways then one. Why do I have the feeling Ron is going to try something with Faith, I don't like him or trust him. There's something about Faith that Conrad likes. I hate women like Heather so jealous of another women and don't even know her story, just hating for no reason. Heather needs to get her life, she's and imposter posing as a faithful woman damn Jezebel. Thanks for the update MP

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Date: October 13 2015
Title: Chapter 7: DEMONS STILL HOLDING ON

My hope is for Faith to release that power she thinks Howard has over her. I'm liking Conrad more and more. Thanks for the update MP.

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Date: December 04 2015
Title: Chapter 9: A YOUNG GIRL'S DREAM

See that's what ticks me off about some people, they always tries to stop a person from growing or living, they just want to see them sad and depressed. I'm happy Faith had Miss Parrington in her corner and a great role model as Admiral Howard. Thanks for the update MP

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Date: January 21 2016
Title: Chapter 9: A YOUNG GIRL'S DREAM

Faith is a young girl who needs someone to stand up for her. She's all alone in the world and she's hurting. That's okay her family didn't show up for visitation, they haven't showed up all her life. This child has drive and determination, she will make it. Thanks for the update MP.

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Date: March 19 2016
Title: Chapter 10: PHYSICAL SCREENING TEST

I dislike people like Mr. Wilkes who think women are the weaker sex. My girl Faith was determine to finish what she started by any means necessary. Running was her release, and the flashbacks of Howard was a way to let herself know to never give up. Not only did Howard break her bones, he also broke her spirit, Faith was sexually, physically, mentally and emotionally abused all her life, those are trauma's that will take a long time to heal. I believe Faith has faith in herself and God, because she's a survivor and a conqueror, she's FAITH!!. Thanks for the update MP.

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Date: March 19 2016
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Save Me From Myself by Missus James
Rated: Mature Content
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Summary:

 

Thoroughly revised and reuploaded!

 

Willow Carter is a plus-sized girl with lots of attitude and very low self-esteem. When her mother and oler sister force her to jog to slim down for her sister's wedding, she is attacked by a madman and rescued by a savior. But just because a man saves your life doesn't mean you should trust him. Soon she throws herself into a thrilling game of cat and mouse that brings more pain than pleasure and puts everyone she loves in harm's way.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Mystery, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Graphic Violence, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 28
Completed:No
Word count: 90171
Read Count: 302338
Published: October 04 2015
Updated: April 17 2021

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Title: Chapter 16: Show and Tell

I love it!!

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Date: February 19 2016
Title: Chapter 17: Yes

YES!!

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Date: February 29 2016
Title: Chapter 19: Self Destruct

Poor Willow, when you love someone you usually love them so hard and that Is how Sebastian loves willow. But in Willow's defense you can still love the person, but hate the sin. I hope it gets better for them. Thanks for this update MJ.

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Date: September 06 2016
Title: Chapter 15: Breaking and Mending

This update was fantastic! thanks for the update.

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Date: January 04 2016
Title: Chapter 13: Oh, Where; Oh, Where!

That was good!!!!!



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Thank you so much!

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Date: October 07 2015
Title: Chapter 1: The Lucky Unlucky Girl

This is good!!!!



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Thank you! More to come!

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Date: October 06 2015
Title: Chapter 5: Home is Where the Heart is

That was hott!!!!



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Thank you! I am glad you enjoyed it.

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Date: October 06 2015
Title: Chapter 10: Creature of Habit

YES IT DID!!!!!



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LOL, you are too much.

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Date: October 06 2015
Title: Chapter 12: Guest of the Hour

BRAVO!!!!!MJ, BRAVO!!!!!!



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Aw, thank you so much!

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Date: October 06 2015
Title: Chapter 14: Punishment

Sebastian has got to deal with his demons. All he's getting is physical pain not psychological help and the man needs help!. Thanks for the update MJ

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Date: October 13 2015
Title: Chapter 18: Monster's Wife

So they became man and wife. I feel for Willow but she should have investigated Sebastian before they got married, with all the tool's out there to help her. I see them staying together with her thinking she could change him, and I think she could try. Sebastain needs to teach Willow how to defend herself and she needs to know about J, and what he does for a living. Thanks for the update

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Date: May 31 2016
Title: Chapter 20: Far, Far Away

Some parts of Brazil is so breathtaking and it seems he found the perfect spot. Sometimes you need a change of scenery to regroup and reconnect. Sebastian is during all the things in his power to get his woman back, but Willow is not going to make it easy for him ( stand your ground willow, and making him work! ) I hope she has the will power, because Sebastian is sex on a stick LOL!

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Date: April 24 2017
Title: Chapter 21: Step in the Right Direction

My girl gave in and I don't blame her one bit LOL! hey... you have to get in, where you fit in. Thanks MJ you put out two amazing updates, I'm glad you have your inspiration back!!

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Date: April 24 2017

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