Penname: jacqua43 [Contact]

Real name: jacqueline

Member Since: March 25 2013

Membership status: Member

Bio:

I'm just a woman who loves her God, her husband, her 6 children, her grandbaby, her son-in-law, her family, herself, her peace, her job, her Pittsburgh Steelers and to read all in a nutshell. I LOVE LIFE!!!



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[Reviews - 151]
Summary:

Sometimes hurting the person you love is easier than showing them love, especially when you're hurting inside.

Saint-Luc and Naomi Adebayo-Roux aren't any different.

This is their story.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Friendship, Inspirational, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 28
Completed:No
Word count: 46514
Read Count: 376395
Published: October 14 2015
Updated: July 15 2017


Title: Chapter 17: 17.

I love the fact that Naomi is taking time for herself, and sometimes you have to take a step back for people in order to find peace ( family included). I thought that Saint-Luc and Saint- Yann throwing shade ( as my kids would say ) at each other was hilarious, my grandmother always said " Sweep around your own door, before you sweep around someone else's". There is no love lost between these two, but they are putting on airs for their mother's sake. It's seems as though Naomi is finally finding her purpose. Girl..." The EFEctive Times " is effective!! I hope you are doing great and keep up the good work honey.



Author's Response:

Yes, I agree with you sometimes distancing yourself from certain people is essential. Oh my gosh thank you so much for visiting my blog, your support is eternally appreciated Jacqua! Stay blessed :-).

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Date: June 12 2016

Title: Chapter 18: 18.1.

I love how Naomi has evolved as a person, how she's doing things her way vs someone else's way. I also love the fact that she made every little penny count. I also loved how Saint-Luc wanted to better his wife and lessen her load, but used wisdom and set back and enjoyed the show. That was so romantic and clever making him a suit for their secret rededication ceremony. I'm hoping for good things for these two. Welcome back honey! and your blog post was amazing as always. Sometimes when you are young you don't see the furture you just see the right now. we all have to live within our means. When I got my first job at 16 years old, my father made me open up a bank account and with my fisrt paycheck I had to put in 1$ my first week, 2$ dollars my second week, 3 dollars my third week. whatever week it fell on I had to but in that amount and on week 52 I put in 52$ dollars. and at the end of the year I had about 1,384 in my savings account for fun stuff. That's how I learned to save and then I learned how to invest and buy land. Thanks honey for this update.



Author's Response:

Hey Jacqua, so sorry for the late reply. I've been all over the place the last week.

 

Yes writing this, I just loved the growth in Naomi and showcase her in a better light as opposed to what readers are used to seeing her in. 

And I felt these two need that romance in their life.

 

Thank you so much for reading my blog post and honestly your father is such a wise man. With me, as I believe with so many others, we need the discipline in managing our finances, such a challenging feat. A great learning curve.

 

Thank you as ever for your support! I hope you are well :-).

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Date: August 01 2016

Title: Chapter 20: 19.

They are making so much progress and I love it!! Saint needs to open up more, maybe she has ideas and solutions to help him. you can achieve greatness at any age, she just so happens to be 19. She can add on to his empire. Why? do I think her sister is going to cause problems. Thanks honey for this update and your blog was on point. Sometimes people makes us feel guilty by association, but you did right by pulling her aside and explaining the situation. Girl, I always surround myself with people like me, who care about other people and sees a friend in everybody, a person that builds up! not tear down. I appreciated that posted. I hope you are doing well honey.

Author's Response:

Yes I'm glad about their progress, let's just hope they continue.

thank you so much for reading my blog post and yes, it's something I've had to learn about surrounding myself with people who will not drag me to their base level because that's no good for me.

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Date: October 24 2016

Title: Beignet

Take your time honey. We will still be here. I hope you are doing well.

Author's Response:

Sorry for the late reply, but I just want to say how much I appreciate your support.

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Date: October 17 2016

Title: Chapter 26: 24.

Awe... this made me cry. I'm glad they got to be with her during her final days and Naomi got to meet her mother-in-law. They have to be strong for each other. Great update honey and I hope all is well with you. I didn't read the blog yet but I will.

Author's Response:

Yes this was emotional for me to write too, but it's the cycle of life. Thank you as always for your support it means the world to me. I hope you had an enjoyable Easter :-)

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Date: April 16 2017

Title: Chapter 27: 25.

I can't wait to find out about what she's hiding. She had to know at sometime he was going to want a child of his own, I mean he's not getting any younger. But... they have to be on the same page and Naomi should know that having children won't stop her drive it will make the force so much stronger. Great update honey!

Author's Response:

Clearly a bit of miscommunication on both sides, and the thought of having a child at my age is scary to even me, so in that sense I can understand her (obviously lol). 

 

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Date: May 04 2017

Title: Chapter 28: 26.

I hate to say it... but Saint-Yann is not going to change. Amirah need to get out and stay out. Saint-Yann has issues he has to deal with on his own. Thanks for the update honey and I hope all is well.

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Date: May 28 2017

Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

I tried to wash the scars and marks from under my skin...but you're etched in me like stone.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Psychological
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 366
Read Count: 878
Published: October 15 2015
Updated: October 15 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Can't Say No

Drugs are a powerful vice, love is a powerful emotion, one will win the other will lose, which is stronger. I love where I think you are going with this story.

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Date: October 15 2015

Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

Once bitten, twice shy, Marrisa is one bitter lady after her husband cheats on her under her nose, with her sister. Bitter and broken heart Marrissa tells herself she is done with men, One little detail foils all of her plans and now she has to find out what happened to her on the night of her post break up drinking rampage.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 7204
Read Count: 6734
Published: October 31 2015
Updated: March 11 2016


Title: Chapter 2: Feeding The pain

Marie is going through a lot right now and I hope she has some girlfriends she can talk too. She has to realize that it wasn't her fault and people have choices and her future ex made his choice, so now he has to suffer the consequences of his actions. The way she took her frustrations out on the mystery man was wrong and he still came to her aid. Thanks for the update.

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Date: November 02 2015

Title: Chapter 1: No Fury

Man!! I don't know which one of those MOFO's I would have went for first. I think the husband, the hell with the gun I would have started with crushing his balls and yanking that little pecker until it POP! off, then I would have taking my nails and go Edward Scissorhand on his face, having him rolling around on the floor like a little B*tch!. Then it's sister time!! I would've start yanking all the hair from her head and b*tch slap her so many times, she would have thought she was in the movie " Fight Club", then I would have start breaking every teeth in her mouth, this chick is a liar and a snake and not to be trusted. But my girl (Marie) went all " Silence of the Lamb" on them and she had divorce papers, she knew this MOFO wasn't husband material anymore, never show the enemy any emotions. I like this story.



Author's Response:

LOL "Silence of the Lamb"??. Hahahaha,

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Date: October 31 2015

Title: Chapter 3: How the great fall

What the hell happen to Marie? was she raped? and by who?. That damn sister has got to go, this B*tch thinks that just because she said she was sorry that negates her actions B*tch Please! she needs to go where the baby father is. Thanks for the update.

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Date: November 10 2015

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Girl.. you are right! with family like that , who needs enemies. Aunt Lorraine needs to sweep around her own door Ms. Backstabber. Thanks for the update.

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Date: March 11 2016

Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

No spoiler alert but it's erotica wink wink.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1123
Read Count: 985
Published: October 31 2015
Updated: October 31 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Short Story

Girl you are a freak!! I like it!!!. The man used "ALTOIDS" priceless and " ICE" that was HOTT!! ( no pun intended) LOL. Girl I like " HOT COFFEE" in the morning time, if you know what I mean ( think about it) wink wink.

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Date: October 31 2015

Rated: 17 and older
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(Chapter 19,  20, & Epilogue uploaded as of 12/19/2018)


Growing up in a southern town like Glenmount, Alabama was never easy for Mercy Stovall especially if your personal demon eventually grow up to be 6'4'' and over 200 lbs. Then one night at a Halloween party, everything changed. It all started with one spanking and spiraled downward from there.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Kink, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 22
Completed:Yes
Word count: 73730
Read Count: 113731
Published: November 03 2015
Updated: December 19 2018


Title: Chapter 1: Leading Cast

Love the cast.

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Date: November 03 2015

Title: Chapter 17: Memory Lane

Wonderful update MJ!!

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Date: July 11 2017

Title: Chapter 4: People Change

I see now that I'm not going to like this Riley Pennington chick.

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Date: November 03 2015

Title: Chapter 5: Prison for Fools

Damn!!!

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Date: November 03 2015

Title: Chapter 6: Open Seas and Olive Branches

No you didn't!!!! stop right there. More please, this is good!!.

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Date: November 03 2015

Title: Chapter 12: Heads, Beds, & Webs

Great update MJ!

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Date: September 06 2016

Title: Chapter 7: Sugar on Top

Stop running girl.

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Date: November 05 2015

Title: Chapter 8: Pies & Lies

Colton will never give up, she just needs to sit back and enjoy the ride. Thanks for the update MJ.

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Date: November 05 2015

Title: Chapter 10: Sunrise

Great update!!

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Date: February 24 2016

Title: Chapter 9: Want

Nana Is a woot!!! This 1st date is going to be good Isn't It! I'm so looking forward to the next update. Thanks for the update and MERRY CHRISTMAS!!

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Date: December 23 2015

Title: Chapter 11: Needs

Sometimes it's time to say hell with everything and everyone and go get yours. And a man and a woman likes for their significant other or their future significant other to tell them what they want and what they like. I'm happy Mercy is about to have no mercy on Colton. Thanks for the update honey and enjoy your summer break away from all those little crumb snatchers LOL.

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Date: May 09 2016

Title: His Mercy

They both needed that release. I hope Gage's mother pulls through. MJ honey CONGRATULATIONS!!! on all the wonderful things that's happening in your life. I pray for restoration in your parents marriage. I pray for peace, joy and unconditional love in your marriage. I pray for a blessed home for you and your husband. I pray for prosperity with your book and in your life. Honey I just pray for you!! Thanks for being a positive role model for our children. Honey thanks for the update and have a blessed New Year.

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Date: December 30 2016

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