Penname: jacqua43 [Contact]

Real name: jacqueline

Member Since: March 25 2013

Membership status: Member

Bio:

I'm just a woman who loves her God, her husband, her 6 children, her grandbaby, her son-in-law, her family, herself, her peace, her job, her Pittsburgh Steelers and to read all in a nutshell. I LOVE LIFE!!!



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His Mercy by Missus James
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 458]
Summary:

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COMPLETELY UPDATED


(Chapter 19,  20, & Epilogue uploaded as of 12/19/2018)


Growing up in a southern town like Glenmount, Alabama was never easy for Mercy Stovall especially if your personal demon eventually grow up to be 6'4'' and over 200 lbs. Then one night at a Halloween party, everything changed. It all started with one spanking and spiraled downward from there.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Kink, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 22
Completed:Yes
Word count: 73730
Read Count: 113731
Published: November 03 2015
Updated: December 19 2018

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Title: Chapter 15: Priorities

I'm going to put myself in Violet's shoes right now. I think she overstepped, it's find to give your opinion and voice your concerns but it's Mercy's life. She has to sink or swim on her own and I know she's trying to show tough love but it can backfire and she could lose her daughter.

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Date: April 16 2017
Title: Chapter 16: Run & Hide

Mercy needs to woman up! and stop running. Not only is it a good idea for Gage to talk to Violet but Mercy need to sit down and talk to her mother too. Woman to woman she's not a little girl anymore. Great update honey

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Date: April 16 2017
Title: Chapter 18: Three Little Words

Great update MJ! I know when my daughter expressed her desire to move out our house at 18, I didn't like it at first, but it wasn't my life to live. Sometimes we as parents forget that we were that age. I love the fact that she's trying to be independent, her mother will come around. I'm all for her moving in with her friend an not with Gage. She's making a step in the right direction, an good for her.

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Date: August 07 2017
Cain and Abel by hazelbazel92
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 63]
Summary:

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When Roger Moore kills his cheating girlfriend, he flees the state in search of the one person he know would take him in, his foster brother, Jeremy Wells. With Roger's past unbeknownst to Jeremy, he decides to take him into his home that he shares with his fiancée, Alyssa. At first, everything is great. Jeremy and Roger becomes close just as they were when they were kids. But as time pass, Jeremy's life slowly crumbles before his eyes. In the mist of all the chaos there is always a certain person within the mix... his brother, Roger which brings Jeremy to question: Is Roger still the same person he grew up with? Or is he just a wolf in sheep's clothing?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Psychological, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Kink, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 9577
Read Count: 4614
Published: November 12 2015
Updated: May 18 2017

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Title: Chapter 1: Characters

Nice cast

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Date: May 13 2017
Title: Chapter 2: Prologue

I'm interested... but who is Sean? Please continue.

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Date: May 13 2017
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 1

Yes!! this is going to be so good. One brother is a psychopath ( who goes around killing everyone in his path ) and the other brother is a cop ( that's going to put his reign of terror to an end )I like! Great job!!

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Date: May 13 2017
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 3

Trouble is brewing and it has Roger name on it. Jeremy went cray cray in that car, he was so wrong. Thanks for the updates.

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Date: May 28 2017
Drunken Love by black_beauty904
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 21]
Summary:

 

What will a woman do when her back is up against a wall? Will she take the beating or will she charge forward? Follow the story of Ariana as she escapes an abusive relationship and tries to redefine herself. As she moves back to Texas, she struggles with adjusting to a life without the abuse. Take this journey as she tries to move forward with her life because she refuse to let her past control her future. 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 4413
Read Count: 2247
Published: December 08 2015
Updated: February 02 2016

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Title: Chapter 1: Broken Heart [1]

I hope you continue with this story. "Drunken Love " yes mrs. Beyonce!! now she can sing " Me, Myself and I " and I hope he realize's that she is " Irreplaceable" because he should have " Listen" but it's to late because she is not " Crazy In Love" anymore.

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Date: December 09 2015
Dry Wall Whispers by SheLikeSheWrites
Rated: Members ONLY:Mature Content
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[Reviews - 7]
Summary:

Contiued Series!!!!When there is a sound that sounds like your own reflection, can it be you? Or can it be a sound from your past thats dried within your walls? Follow this Erotic Mystery the details will leave you craving for more words! 



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 1408
Read Count: 386
Published: December 19 2015
Updated: December 20 2015

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Title: Chapter 1: Sound Effects?

More please!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the support. Please excuse my grammatics. I was very excited to break free from my fear of writing. I feel great and now I can be free. Thanks for the support. It means much.

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Date: December 19 2015
Title: Chapter 3: Close Encounter

Gurl...... I know you didn't stop right there. I'm wondering what the heck is going on with her and who Is this shadow of a man or is he a figment of her imagination. Thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

lol. Thanks a bunch. I'm updating tonight before the sound of music comes on!!!!😍

 

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Date: December 20 2015
Title: Chapter 4: Slow Motions

Girl you know I like this story if I'm reviewing on a sunday ( football day ). I'm thinking she's a sex addicted in the middle of a wet dream, I could be wrong. Thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

Yea. I was able to listen to the game while my hubby called the calls. Happy about the steelers, not disappointed about the Eagles smh. Thanks. This lady if so is in for a ride!!!

 

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Date: December 21 2015
Finding Hope In Justice by simplydijah
Rated: Mature Content
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Summary:

 

It was over 1000 years ago that a prophecy was for told. It told of a change in the universe, love, death, and a new Earth. Now 1000 years has passed and Earth isn't what it use to be. The things that go bump in the night are now hidden from the human eyes. A change of season's is ahead, and it's up to those who fight for justice to help stop it.

 

 

 



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Romance, Science Fiction
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 1555
Read Count: 2042
Published: December 20 2015
Updated: December 20 2015

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I think you have a winner here, please continue with this story because I want to know what happens next.

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Date: December 20 2015
December 27th by Caterina
Rated: Most Ages
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[Reviews - 9]
Summary:

From the heart.



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Categories: Poetry
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Poetry
Story Status: Active, Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 214
Read Count: 2429
Published: December 27 2015
Updated: December 27 2015

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Title: Chapter 1: December 27th

If he can't handle you at your worst then he doesn't deserve you at your best. Real love means seeing beyond the words spoken out of pain, and instead seeing a person's soul. How are you honey?

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Date: December 28 2015
My Protector by Beam45
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 27]
Summary:

 

 

The truth has always haunted the lives of Kim Min Jae and Nam Nari. The baggage that was passed down to them from their parents clings to them like a shadow that can't be out ran. When they're placed on two different paths in life, they may face struggles alone, yet together they dream of the day they can be reunited.

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 51981
Read Count: 11159
Published: December 30 2015
Updated: March 10 2017

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Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

That mother was so wrong, that would be the last time she would see my face and my child's face again. Thanks for the update

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Date: February 24 2016
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Girl... I'm so intrigued!! you did a great job on this chapter, is Nari a hired assassin? Girl, I laughed so hard when Seung Hoon told her to go for the eyes, nuts, and shins first, because that is what I tell my girls and don't forget about the throat!

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Date: January 03 2017
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Girl... Nari is a BAD CHICK!! I loved this chapter! please give me more!! I can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks honey for this update.

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Date: January 03 2017
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Great update!! Happy New Year honey.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading! I hope you entered the New Year with a bang=)

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Date: December 30 2016
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love the begining of this story. My grandfather is Black/Korean his mother was Korean and his father was a Black GI in the Army too. I'm Black/Korean/Native American. I'm so looking forward to more of this story.

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Date: December 30 2015
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I say good riddance to her mother and hello world. I like how they stood together and making life work together only counting on each other. This man is getting on my last nerve, now because your wife can't give you a son, you are going to try and steal mines. Hell to the no!!. Thanks for the update.

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Date: March 04 2016
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Great update!! and Merry Christmas!!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much, I hope you enjoyed the holidays as well!

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Date: December 20 2016
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Girl... That man is evil!! How she got out that tank? I hope she has a secret guardian angels, because she is going to need it. Maybe they are the couple in the shop. Thanks honey for this update and welcome back!!

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Date: November 23 2016
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Damn!!! why she had to go and call her mother. I hope her mother has changed her ways, if not then she's a goner. Thanks honey for this update.

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Date: December 01 2016
Heartbeat by Bryleigh Lisette
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 35]
Summary:

Some people have a type and for Alana Harrison she did and she succeeded falling in love with him. But love is so much more than a type. Love is how that one person can make your heart skip a beat with a simple look - not because they fit your look.

So what happens when someone who is completely against the grain enters your life and messes up your entire look but finally makes your heartbeat?



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 15746
Read Count: 6730
Published: January 01 2016
Updated: February 08 2016

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Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I would have stayed!! We get on the man case when he don't want to be in a relationship with a woman because she have children. How is it alright for a woman to turn around and do the same thing to a man with children. I would tell him that if he seek this woman out for sex just because she is there ( then we are going to have some problems ). I understand about her image, but this is his job!. Her image is not going to hold her at night, make love to her in the moring, or talk to her in the evenings. She better wake up before her image is all she have. Thanks for the update!

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Date: January 14 2016
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

His mother has some nerve coming to talk for her BOY! not man but BOY!. I always say if it don't feel good to you, then it no good for you. Ms. Alana is getting her grove back!! and Wesley is getting his grove on. Thanks for the update.

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Date: January 03 2016
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That bastard knew that wasn't his first time cheating, that was the first and last time he got caught. I'm glad she knew her worth and let that no good piece of SH*T go. She needs her girl right now and a little fun. I like this story.

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Date: January 03 2016

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.