Penname: jacqua43 [Contact]

Real name: jacqueline

Member Since: March 25 2013

Membership status: Member

Bio:

I'm just a woman who loves her God, her husband, her 6 children, her grandbaby, her son-in-law, her family, herself, her peace, her job, her Pittsburgh Steelers and to read all in a nutshell. I LOVE LIFE!!!



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Summary:

Lena Harrison just needed a summer job before she transferred from her small community college to the larger state university in the fall. But when she laid her eyes on David Roberts, the young manager of a music store, all bets were off. Summer work just got a lot more interesting.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 3523
Read Count: 8512
Published: January 07 2016
Updated: January 13 2016


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

It's on now! great start.

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Date: January 07 2016

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Summary:

Isabella "Izzy" Salvatore is just like any other first grader who likes to draw and color pictures and is living the happy carefree days of childhood. However some of Izzy's drawings are not so happy and carefree some are just really dark and twisted.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Psychological
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:No
Word count: 27153
Read Count: 7089
Published: February 07 2016
Updated: November 26 2016


Title: Chapter 7: SAD AND LONELY

I dislike Regina more and more,Why is she not in jail too. She put her child in harms way, isn't that child abuse?. Children love their parents with all there hearts, even though some parents like Regina doesn't deserve their love. I hope Luc gets full custody of Izzy and Regina gets a few years in prison. My heart goes out to Kenya, she's probably feeling alone in the world, because we know her mother is no good for her. I think Luc, Izzy and Kenya needs each other in order to surive. Thanks for this update MP.

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Date: April 04 2016

Title: Chapter 3: THE MONSTER'S GRIN

Take that baby to the hospital!! I got my gun!!!MP

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Date: February 16 2016

Title: Chapter 4: CAST

The pic of Izzy makes me want to cry!! I'm with you for this ride MP because I know Hurt is coming to the Devils.

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Date: February 16 2016

Title: Chapter 2: MEAN MOMMY REVISED

moving alone.

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Date: February 16 2016

Title: Chapter 1: ELEPHANT TRUNK

1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10, Girl i'm a boxer I have been boxing for years I want to take this piece of shit out in my backyard and kick her ass untill my hands are bloody and then then get my husband hunting knife and skinned Mr. Keith until he is unrecognizable and carved into tiny pieces. This story MP is going to get to me I can feel it!!

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Date: February 16 2016

Title: Chapter 5: HIS HEART

Girl... This chapter here!!. That baby went through pure hell!! with that so call mother and that animal. I thought the right thing to do was take Izzy to the doctor and get documentation of her abuse and then go to the police and have those animals arrested. The Salvatore men are just like the men in my life, I wouldn't change them for all the riches in the world. Wow! Kenya was abused too and she came out stronger!!. If anyone I know was to hurt my children then you would be talking to me from a jail cell ( because NO!! ONE HURTS MY CHILDREN, NO ONE!!). I'm glad Izzy has her nonna there with her. There's nothing like a fathers love, but little girls need female role models and the female gentle touch and to know that they are loved!! and cared for unconditionally in a good way. Not in the way Regina and Keith, I can't call him Mr. because he don't deserve the title, touched her. These two devils has the nerve to show up at Luc's and Izzy house, how low can this women go, It's on and poppin Now! Thanks for the update MP

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Date: February 24 2016

Title: Chapter 8: I'LL BE THERE

Through the eye's and mouth's of babes, Izzy helped Kenya to find peace, because we all know that mother of Kenya is a snake and the devil reincarnated ( I hope there is nothing left to her in the will ). Oh how I love myself some Luciano, that's a Italian man for you, they always put the needs of the people they care about before their own. I should know because I have a special Italian man at home with me everyday. I'm happy Kenya will have someone there to lean on. Kenya, Izzy and Luciano really need each other. Thanks for this update MP.

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Date: April 12 2016

Title: Chapter 6: HIS HEART II

You know the sad part about this is some women can't have children and they really want them, but you have women like Regina who has a beautiful child like Izzy and she could care less. Keny's mother and Regina are soulless sisters and there's a special place in hell waiting for both of them. Bravo!! Luc for kicking that @ss it would've took the jaws of life to get me off that slimy no good piece of sh*t. Girl... my grandbaby has me wrapped around her little finger too, I'm trying to teach her sign language she's a smart little girl. I plan on teaching the twins when they turn 12 months, they are so cute and they are so calm and content I'm just amazed by them. I think Kenya needs to talk about her life to Luc, because life is to hard trying to live day by day with your past constantly in your PRESENT!!. Thanks for the update MP!

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Date: March 06 2016

Title: Chapter 9: PROTECT

MP!MP!MP! Girl...What kind of mother that is that doesn't know her childs birthday, you carry this baby around for 9 months giving up your body so they can have a chance to live, and you don't remember the first day they breathe outside of your womb SCANDALOUS!!!! I'm so happy!! Regina will be living her life for now in a jail cell. I know that Luc is happy and relieved that Izzy will be protected and truly loved and cared for. With Regina it's seems the apple didn't fall to far from the tree's ( her mother and grandmother ). I believe Izzy will grow and prosper in life because of her father. I'm glad that Kenya had Luc to lean on and that she wasn't alone. I can't wait until she realize that Luc, Izzy and his family are there for her. Thanks MP for this update

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Date: June 06 2016

Title: Chapter 10: NEVER SETTLE FOR LESS

Kenya just needs a little space that's all, plus she don't want to confuse Izzy with the in's and out's of an adult relationship. But Kenya and Izzy is looking for the same thing LOVE!. I like how Izzy is finally getting to act like a child and not having to deal with grow-up situations( she can just be a kid ). Thanks for this update MP.

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Date: June 29 2016

Title: Chapter 11: TRICK OR TREAT

Oh Izzy was cock blocking! That was funny! poor Kenya she is not her mother's keeper. I hope what her aunt lefted her mother if anything was a quote about what makes a mother and how you should treat people. Thanks for this update MP!

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Date: July 31 2016

Title: Chapter 12: SCARS FROM THE PAST

Kenya girl... you didn't need a man like David in your life anyway, If that man truly loved you he will see that you got help and not make you feel as though you are damage. I don't know what to say about her parents but good riddance. Thanks MP for this update.

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Date: December 01 2016

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Summary:

It's gonna be a bumpy road!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 20
Completed:No
Word count: 31436
Read Count: 43010
Published: February 08 2016
Updated: March 05 2016


Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

What a wonderful story you have written. I love it!!

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Date: February 24 2016

Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Opposites attract, they are right for each other and they don't know it yet.

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Date: February 26 2016

Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

What is this heifer up to? I don't trust her. Reuben and Amelle better watch their backs, because crazy psychotic jealous women are dangerous. What? she's going to try and get him inebriated and take advantage of his drunken state. Reuben needs to surprise Gerry and bring Amelle along to the meeting. I hope Reuben have sense enough to not drink anything Gerry give him. I don't like this hoe, I don't trust this hoe and I can't wait until she's gone!!. Thanks for the update.

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Date: March 05 2016

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 6]
Summary:

No more fighting it.

 

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 307
Read Count: 1375
Published: February 09 2016
Updated: February 19 2016


Title: Chapter 2: Character List

Beautiful cast



Author's Response:

Thank you!

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Date: February 19 2016

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Summary:

"Obviously, you don't give a fuck about me! You just want me to stay at home and pop babies. My dreams mean nothing to you!"

"Is that what you think?" Yes was Ashley's immediate answer.

"I asked you a question."

"Does it matters!?"

"I guess you need to be reminded that you're moye serdtse."



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2647
Read Count: 14520
Published: February 15 2016
Updated: February 18 2016


Title: Chapter 6: o4

Girl this story was HOTT!! as hell!! I love it, what a great writer you are. Thanks for sharing this with us, I can't wait to see what you have for us next.



Author's Response:

Thank you so so SO much jacqua43! Reading these words from you means a lot - I'm thrilled that you read my story and loved it! Thank you!

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Date: February 24 2016

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[Reviews - 4]
Summary:

"Love -- not dim and blind but so far-seeing that it can glimpse around corners, around bends and twists and illusion; instead of overlooking faults love sees through them to the secret inside."    



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 1256
Read Count: 983
Published: February 19 2016
Updated: February 19 2016


Title: Chapter 1: Best Friends and Early Mornings

I like it, I want more.

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Date: February 19 2016

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Summary:

"Fuck you!"

 "That can be arranged darling" he says seriously with a mischievous glint in his honey brown eyes that were hooded with lust.

 It was only then when Abela understood she had made a mistake that will bite her in the ass later. But little did she know, later was going to be here a lot sooner.

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: BDSM
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 2999
Read Count: 3690
Published: February 23 2016
Updated: February 25 2016


Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

perfect 10 !!!

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Date: February 26 2016

Title: Chapter 2: 01

Damn!!

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Date: February 26 2016

Title: Chapter 3: 02

Good thing he was there because those guys would've really hurt her. Thanks for the update.

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Date: February 26 2016

Rated: Most Ages
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Summary:

Just a short drabble based on a song.



Table of Contents
Categories: Miscellaneous
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: Stand Alone but Together
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 763
Read Count: 2902
Published: February 25 2016
Updated: February 25 2016


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Girl... Just let him go, I know it's hard because you are wondering what you did wrong and how come he didn't love you enough to stay with you. But he's happy now and your happiness is coming.

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Date: February 26 2016

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Summary:

A knight in shining armor is not always the righteous and kind-hearted man. Sometimes, he's the one that speaks his mind and uses his fists. He is not perfect but if he loves you....he loves you



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Family, Friendship, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: The only thing that matters
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 17229
Read Count: 11388
Published: March 01 2016
Updated: December 29 2017


Title: Chapter 3: ~Chapter Three...~

Norvi and James is about to get their butts kicked. Stupid Norvi putting his lips on Nick's woman is a no!no!. I glad they got that trader Joey bye-bye Joey! ( taking out the trash ). Kelsey finally hears from Lauren , It's about to go down. Thanks for the update.

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Date: April 04 2016

Title: Chapter 1: ~Chapter One...~

What a man!! I say keep him Kelsey and get rid of that snake Randall. I'm along for the ride. Good job!!

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Date: March 04 2016

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