Penname: jacqua43 [Contact]

Real name: jacqueline

Member Since: March 25 2013

Membership status: Member

Bio:

I'm just a woman who loves her God, her husband, her 6 children, her grandbaby, her son-in-law, her family, herself, her peace, her job, her Pittsburgh Steelers and to read all in a nutshell. I LOVE LIFE!!!



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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 71]
Summary:

A knight in shining armor is not always the righteous and kind-hearted man. Sometimes, he's the one that speaks his mind and uses his fists. He is not perfect but if he loves you....he loves you



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Family, Friendship, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: The only thing that matters
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 17229
Read Count: 11388
Published: March 01 2016
Updated: December 29 2017


Title: Chapter 2: ~Chapter Two...~

Randall better watch his back, because Nickolas is not playing. Nick said it was about his time being wasted but we know it's about his woman being tested by a NUT! like Randall. Our girl Kelsey got moves ( I like her ) men need to know we as women can fight too. I like Norvi discernment of Joey, that backstabbing, no good, spawn of satan. Oh Randall is about to feel some real pain after Nick get through with him. Thanks for the update.

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Date: March 19 2016

Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 24]
Summary:

Kind of a companion piece to Stone Cold, but it can be considered a stand alone piece. It's another drabble for another song.



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Categories: Music, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Drabbles
Genre: None
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: Stand Alone but Together
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1247
Read Count: 3065
Published: March 06 2016
Updated: March 06 2016


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Now it's time to move on.

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Date: March 11 2016

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 58]
Summary: Siriphana Howard, was alone in this world until she met Nicholas Clayton. Who becomes her best friend, and anchor. With a trip back to his home for the holidays, she discovers that the man she secretly pins for has an unexpected surprise.

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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Kink, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:No
Word count: 31246
Read Count: 12555
Published: March 10 2016
Updated: June 05 2016


Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Happy belated birthday honey!! Man... Noah has it bad for Siri, Noah came on a little strong at first but I guess lust got in the way of common sense. Poor Siri didn't know what to do getting her first taste of passion. I'm glad when the hazed lifted Siri had " Her mind right" as my kids would say, to tell Noah about hisself and to remind him about his fiance down the hall, pump the brakes Noah!!. Nick finally told Siri how he see her ( as just a family member ) so now hopefully she can slowly let loose of her Siri/Nick fantasies, plus I think she feels a little something for Noah. That was big of Noah to make amends with his brother, because they are twins they share a special bond. I'm happy the fakeness of Jennifer has showed it's ugly head and now they can stop pretending like they are a couple in love, and face the fact that they are just two people who like to have sex with each other, nothing more and nothing less. Thanks for the update.

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Date: April 07 2016

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really enjoyed the first chapter of this story. Girl... every room inside my house is painted in warm fall colors like Orange( pumpkin ) Sage, Brown, sunset yellow, Red and my quiet room is Magenta. I love the way Nick treats Siri, and girl I'm a hugger too. Please continue with this story I'm already invested in it.



Author's Response: Lol, yeah I really love warm colors my place is done in chocolate brown and purple, blues and beiges. I'm also real big on affection, and I enjoyed making my characters the same way haha. Thank you for the awesome review, i appreciate you. I got the next 4 chapters complete just gotta upload today. Stay tuned :)

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 11 2016

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Mr. Noah is trying to play hard but I bet he's a pussy cat. I like how Siri put him in his place. I feel some underline tension between Nick and Noah. I love their mother, she's a woman after my own heart. I love playing board games my children tried to teach me to play those video games, I don't have the patience for it. Girl.. Pinterest is my guilty pleasure I get a lot of my home decor from them. Thanks for the update.



Author's Response: Lmao yeah, I bet he felt like a pussy cat, after Siri lit into his ass ;) I love Paula as well she is such a sweetheart <3 i love video games, but i also have a huge collection of board games i enjoy playing with my family, nothing is better than that. And i'm not going to lie, i think im obsessed with pinterest, lol it's like in my top 5 fav, sites. Theres alot of decor ideas around my place from it too!!

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Date: March 11 2016

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Girl... this chapter made me cry, because I know what Siri was feeling. My oldest child was just like Siri, she cried a lot too thinking of her past and the way people treated her. I connected with this child on a deep level, I felt in my heart that I wanted to be this childs mother and my husband and children felt the same way. She needed us, just like Siri needs Paula, Donny, Nick and Noah. Our child is happy now, and Siri will be happy also because Paula is not letting her go. What Noah was witnessing was Siri light and true beauty shining from within. Noah can look but he better not touch until he rectify this situation (Jennifer ) real quick. Thanks for the update.



Author's Response: awww I'm sorry it made you cry :( Siri does have issues that she's gotta deal with. she's suddenly getting something she hasn't had. that being a family. And all of them are witnessing the sight of her true beauty. because It's like she is coming into herself step by step, and they are taking notice.

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Date: March 12 2016

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I think Noah is acting out for attention, even though he's 22 years old he wants to feel as though he matters. I really do think that Nick only sees Siri as a very close friend or as a little sister. Now Jennifer wanting to have sex in Noah's mother house is very disrespectful, they are engage not married yet. I like the fact that Jennifer wasn't mean toward Siri. Noah and Jennifer scene from the bathroom was Hot! but not in your parents house Noah. I also believe that Noah is jealous of Nick and his relationship with their parents, so he acts out for attention and Nick doesn't give his parents any trouble. Girl I have triplets they are 16 they will be 17 in May and they have (3) different personalities and I love it. Noah was wrong for kissing Siri on the dance floor, he knew that she thought he was Nick and Siri needs to stop all that drinking because she's a light weight. This story is about to get juicier!! Thanks for the update.

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Date: March 12 2016

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I think Nick should tell Siri that he's not feeling her in that way, because he is throwing out mixed signals. I loved how Paula became mother hen to Siri. I knew Noah was a pussy cat underneath that bad boy persona. Thanks for the update.

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Date: March 15 2016

Rated: Teen or Above
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Summary:

In a day and age where race relations is the go to subject for most academic instructors, the behavioral science department at Saylor University decide to push the envelope. Eight diverse college students are chosen to participate in a study where they will spend two weeks together, separated from society and cut off from the outside, to learn more about one another. Each student has a different background and the aim of the study is to force the students to examine more than just the current racial issues plaguing the nation, but themselves and who, in actuality, they really are.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Original Characters, Racism, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 2616
Read Count: 7128
Published: March 12 2016
Updated: March 16 2016


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

1 down 7 more to come. I like Namea, she going to be one of my fav's I can tell already. This is going to be interesting giving the fact that we are dealing with Donald Trump right now. Please continue with this story.



Author's Response:

I like her too! Lol. I really enjoy writing her POV as it's challenging in some ways, but fun as hell in others. Ugh. Girl, don't get me started on that troll. -_- 

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 12 2016

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I love Namea!! boy does she have a quick tongue. Dickhead has a lot to learn about Black women, this is not the 1950's or 60's this is a new breed of African American women. How are you going to be roomates and don't talk to each other, I would go stir crazy because I'm a talker. Adam ( interesting ) can't wait for more. Thanks for the update.

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Date: March 17 2016

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 18]
Summary:

A 21-year old college grad accepts a scholarship to study in Russia. During her time there she makes lasting memories with the community. Upon returning stateside she finds that there is one aspect of her trip that won't let her go. And she finds that maybe it's just what she needs.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 2139
Read Count: 4117
Published: March 15 2016
Updated: April 20 2016


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

It's a blessing when you receive a warm welcome when you are in another country. I think Staci is going to be just fine. Thanks for the update.

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Date: April 20 2016

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Can't wait for more!! Thanks for the update.

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Date: April 11 2016

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I think she's starting a journey to life and self-awareness. I can't wait for more.

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Date: March 15 2016

Rated: Most Ages
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[Reviews - 19]
Summary:

Another song-based one-shot to go with Stone Cold and All I Ask. If the three shorts had to go in an order it would be All I Ask, Stone Cold and then this one. They can all be read alone though.



Table of Contents
Categories: Music, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: Stand Alone but Together
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1267
Read Count: 2947
Published: March 16 2016
Updated: March 16 2016


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Some people don't miss the water till the well runs dry. It was his decision to leave that relationship, and it was her decision to accepted it. She's happy now and I don't think seeing him or hearing about him will stop her happiness. Now the tables has turned, he's on the outside looking in, regret is a b*tch!!!

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Date: March 17 2016

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 28]
Summary:

They were a "missed connection" in High School. What happens when Jayden and Dean reconnect as adults?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 16228
Read Count: 12661
Published: March 19 2016
Updated: June 24 2016


Title: Chapter 2: Lumiere

More please!

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Date: April 04 2016

Title: Chapter 1: Reunion

I want more please!!

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Date: March 21 2016

Title: Chapter 3: Just Friends

Great update!

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Date: June 27 2016

Rated: Mature Content
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Summary:

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This event was actually happening. This was now their new world.



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Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Michonne
Classification: Cannon
Genre: None
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 758
Read Count: 2837
Published: March 20 2016
Updated: March 20 2016


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I never saw the " Walking Dead " before but I enjoyed this story. I'm sorry to hear about your cousin, I pray God grant you peace.

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Date: March 21 2016

Rated: Mature Content
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Summary:

Don't you love it when your friends don't listen and hire a male escort for you despite you repeatedly telling them that you're not ready to see anybody? Yeah, neither does Jacqui. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 5324
Read Count: 9017
Published: March 21 2016
Updated: March 30 2016


Title: Chapter 2: A Little Fast

I'm glad she understood that her friends did this out of love for her. Ryan is a dream boat and let the games begain. Thanks for the update.

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Date: April 04 2016

Title: Chapter 1: Moving On

I like it! Jacqui's friends are loyal. I can't wait for the male escort to arrive. GOOD JOB!!!

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Date: March 21 2016

Rated: Most Ages
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[Reviews - 28]
Summary:

Two ex-lovers meet in an airport terminal years after ending their relationship. The fourth and final installment of my series of one shots based on a song. And to be fair, this one was inspired by three songs--Hello, Send My Love and These Days.



Table of Contents
Categories: Music, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: Stand Alone but Together
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1554
Read Count: 3938
Published: March 24 2016
Updated: March 24 2016


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love the fact that she is happy and that she holds no ill will towards him. I think that when she goes home she should tell her husband about running into her ex, so there would be no secrets. Girl... I tell my beloved everything because that is our relationship, It's build on love, trust, communication and friendship, and I wouldn't jeopardize my marriage for anything.

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Date: March 24 2016

Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

You know you Love New York!

Tiffany "New York" Pollard is making her way back into the reality TV world in a big way. After finishing filming for Family Therapy with Dr. Jenn and The Next 15 she heads to the UK. There she enters the Celebrity Big Brother house and turns the house upside down.

Heart Throb and all around Geordie Shore  bad boy Scotty T wasn't looking for love when he entered the house. He was planning to tone down his bad boy image and keeping a low profile. When he gets caught between romancing Megan and Tiffany his plans might change.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s), Other
Classification: Alternate Universe, Off Cannon
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Fantasy, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 1727
Read Count: 953
Published: March 24 2016
Updated: March 24 2016


Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: If I Never see Your Face Again

This should be very interesting and funny, because that girl is a TRIP!!. I'm all in.

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Date: March 25 2016

Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

ELIZABETH GRIFFIN 

NOW AVAILABLE  WWW.ELIZABETHGRIFFIN.NET



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3570
Read Count: 5090
Published: April 05 2016
Updated: May 27 2017


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Great story!!

Author's Response:

Hi Jacqua43,

I just saw your post.  How are you and your family?  I'm still writing.  Thanks for the support!  Bye.

Elizabeth

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Date: May 28 2017

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 11]
Summary:

When Celine's two best friends take her on a wild ride out to Las Vegas, she comes to the realization that something that happen in Vegas are best left there. However, some situations have a tendacy to follow you home. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 2474
Read Count: 3136
Published: April 06 2016
Updated: August 07 2017


Title: Chapter 1: Looking Ain't Free

What happens in Vegas stays in Vegas. Las Vegas is about to get turned up!! as my kids would say, and Celine is about to get turned out!!. I'm ready for more so drink lots of coffee.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 07 2016

Title: Chapter 2: Get The Money

I like it!! she better hope that man don't chase her down for his money. He was a sucker though. Great job!! as always.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed
Date: August 07 2017

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.