Penname: jacqua43 [Contact]

Real name: jacqueline

Member Since: March 25 2013

Membership status: Member

Bio:

I'm just a woman who loves her God, her husband, her 6 children, her grandbaby, her son-in-law, her family, herself, her peace, her job, her Pittsburgh Steelers and to read all in a nutshell. I LOVE LIFE!!!



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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 55]
Summary:

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Emery and Nicholas have been friends forever. But when Nicholas finds out he's sick he asks for something that could change their friendship forever



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 4365
Read Count: 5813
Published: April 13 2016
Updated: August 21 2019


Title: Chapter 2: Requests

I also lost a very good friend to cancer, and when we found out she had cancer there was nothing I wouldn't do for my friend. BUT there are boundaries in marriage and in friendships, there are lines you just don't cross and sleeping with your friends spouse is the #1 lines you just don't cross. I love my friend and she loved me and there is no way she would have asked me anything to that nature. Oliva should have not been put in that situation and she should have said " HELL NO!" end of discussion, because these lips that on top or on the bottom are made for one man and that's my husand EMERY. Thanks for this update honey.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 18 2016

Title: Chapter 1: Sick

I love this story already please continue with it. It reminds me of my friend, we use to talk everyday and we saw each other everyday. When she found out she had cancer I was with her, we cried together, we prayed together and our love for each other became even stronger ( If that is even possible ). When we found out that her cancer had spreaded through out her body, we was like we are going to make everyday seem like the last of our lives, my friend was so happy which made me so happy. When she died we had a celebration of her life ( I miss my friend ). Thanks for this story.

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Date: April 13 2016

Title: Chapter 3: We All Make Choices

I don't think Olivia really loves Emery, I think he was her fall back guy. I don't like her, if the situation was reverse she would have a nervous breakdown thinking of her man with some other woman. She just disregard his feelings, like he's just some stranger on the street. The power was in her hands and she chose friendship over love and marriage, so she gets what she gets. Which I hope is heartache and pain. Thanks for the update.

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Date: May 02 2016

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 85]
Summary:

"You have thought about it, haven't you? How it would feel to be with both of us."

"If we do this...promise me that nothing changes. The thought of losing you both..."

Dante took a moment and then nodded. He shifted his gaze to her shoulder and Hope felt Emil grip her tighter, leaning further into her when his mouth brushed her ear and he said.

"This changes nothing."

 

Caution:

MFM Short Story!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Kink, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:Yes
Word count: 4029
Read Count: 15470
Published: April 25 2016
Updated: December 25 2016


Title: Chapter 1: Cast

The cast is HOTT!!!



Author's Response:

thank you!

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 27 2016

Title: Chapter 2: The Confession

Alcohol loosens the tongue, the truth has been spoken. I think she has some insight to how Dante felt about her.



Author's Response:

so true!

yes and no - maybe not before because Dante is very good at hiding his true feelings but now...Hope got the message loud and clear!

 

thanks for reading and reviewing!

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Date: April 27 2016

Title: Chapter 3: Need

Wow!! Emil is horny! do I feel a beatdown on the way.



Author's Response:

currently Emil is a one-tracked man, haha! let's see what happens after the deed is done and the dust beings to settle...

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 27 2016

Title: Chapter 4: The Proposition

I guess when you want it, you want it. But cousins though, Their mouths are saying nothing will change, but their hearts will be saying something else. GOOD JOB!! I can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

hehe cousins, i know ;) at first i thought about writing Emil and Dante as brothers but that has already been written especially twins in mfm story so i played with the thought that Dante and Emil are best friends but then i felt that if things turn ugly it will be much "too easy" for the boys to cut each other off.

so i started thinking i want Emil and Dante to be as close as brothers and share blood which lead to me writing them as cousin and i dont know why but there's something about having two cousins being in love with the same woman that makes one feel in a certain way - hopefully it's something that makes you more curious and contintue to read then off putting, lol!

however thanks for the read and review! more to come soon! :D

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 27 2016

Title: Chapter 7: Ruins

Thanks honey for this wonderful story. I knew it was going to be difficult for Emil to get pass this but he initiated it. I think Dante feelings are even stronger for her now. Hope is so confused right now, hopefully everything will work it self out for them but I don't see how. Thanks again honey and Happy New Year.

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Date: December 30 2016

Title: Chapter 5: Submerge

That was HOTTTTT!!!!!!



Author's Response:

thank you!!

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Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 31 2016

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 6]
Summary:

Thomas Bedford is actor, rich and handsome. He's got beautiful women, fast cars, and fans begging for selfies. He's looking for something serious now, no more flings, just a woman for him and only him. He meets Misa, a painter who shies away from the limelight. She hasn't been with anyone in almost a year, and this handsome man comes out of nowhere, making her feel new sensations. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 1220
Read Count: 2578
Published: May 02 2016
Updated: May 02 2016


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like this story Misa seems so humble and mysterious. And Thomas seems like he would do whatever it takes to have her in his world. GOOD JOB!!

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Date: May 02 2016

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 11]
Summary:

Change is coming will she run or embrace it?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 9520
Read Count: 3543
Published: May 02 2016
Updated: May 04 2016


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Tye seems like a dream. The older lady in the store was wishing she could go back in time, that was funny!.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 02 2016

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Tye was smooth, slipping oh girl his number. I bet it got hot real fast for B when he licked her neck, Tye is a freak!!. There's nothing wrong with a freak, she would learn some new things.

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Date: May 02 2016

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

There's nothing like a good step show. I have many of friends who are Delta's and they are some of the most intelligent, high energy, loveable women I have ever come across. I think Linda and Casey are just what their posse needs.

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Date: May 02 2016

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Age ain't nothing but a number, she's 22 and he's 29. They are both legal.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 02 2016

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

B!! girl... you better watch out! Mr.Tye is on the prowl. I like this story and I'm glad you are not stopping. GOOD JOB!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the reviews. I know the grammar isn't great. But I'm trying and I promise I will have more by Wednesday thanks again for the support. I was hopping all over the kitchen with joy you made my day.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 02 2016

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 7

It's about to go down!! I can't wait for more.

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Date: May 04 2016

Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 20]
Summary:

It takes 129 days after Serena’s death for her to finally cry.



Table of Contents
Categories: Daytime Television, Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Original Characters, Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2851
Read Count: 2755
Published: May 04 2016
Updated: May 04 2016


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This story was powerful, beautiful, sorrowful, and necessary. When a person commits suicide the thought never enter their head about the people they leave behind. All they can see is their hurt and their pain not the destruction and heartache left behind. When baby Giovanni called her mama, that was beautiful!! because you don't have to give birth to a child to be their mother, if you are giving LOVE that's all that child needs is to feel Cherished. This is a great story for Mother's Day. Thank you!!

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Date: May 04 2016

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 7]
Summary:

A young black prince Solomon Banks in his mid 20s, must marry but he doesn't like any of the suitors that his parents presents him. So he goes looking for his queen himself. He finds a young african princess that he likes but she is not buying into his charm because he has money. But he has his heart set on her and he is not a man to give up, he will make her his wife wether she is ready for it or not. 

Naira Okeke is a post college graduate is who  is struggling to live in New Jersey on her own with two part-time job. She's a retail worker by day and high end bartender at night. She was finally able to move out of her parent's home after saving up while in college to escape a toxic household. She plans to further her education to get her Master's Degree in English in the future. Her luck with men hasn't been that great as she becomes frustrated with her current sexual relationship with Ryan Brown. Then life brings Solomon Banks into her life that she can't seem to shake off but it is not impressed by his materialistic gifts that he presents her. 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 4808
Read Count: 1170
Published: May 19 2016
Updated: June 01 2016


Title: Chapter 1: Uncertainty

I like it!! This is going to be so funny, and I love the fact it will be a black romance.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! I don't see many black romances on here so I might as well make it right! It will be funny! 

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 19 2016

Rated: All Ages
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[Reviews - 11]
Summary:

All Noah has known in life has been war, pain and loss. Now, he has a chance to start a new life, in a new city, with a new family, And above all those, he has a chance to find love.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 9581
Read Count: 9792
Published: May 21 2016
Updated: January 10 2017


Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Wow! what a traumatic experirnce this child had to endure, not only witnessing the death of his mother and father but his brother too, how sad. Thank God for people like Alan and Elena. Noah just have to progress at his own pace and not only see he's safe but feel he's safe. In time I believe he would come to recognize the Hamiltons as his parents. I like the fact that they are trying to give him good memories and a safe and loving home with two people who genuinely care about each other and him. Girl.. this story is dear to me in so many ways. Thank you Mercie21 for another great story.



Author's Response:

Oh wow thank you so much for this Jacqua43. This really means a lot to me  I really really hope i can serve you well and make you love and cherish this story. 

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 21 2016

Title: Chapter 2: My Mommy Says

Mother's can get their children to do things they don't want to do. I love their special bond. I think the profession he chose was very fitting. Who's better to help a child with mental, emotional and behavior issues, then a person that went through all those issues. One thing I know you can't force them to open up, you just have to give them a little bit of space to figure out if they can trust you are not. Girl... the feeling you feel when you know in your heart what your purpose is in life and watching it transform someone else's life is so rewarding. You did a great job on this update honey.

Author's Response:

hahah so true! No matter how much I moan and groan about my mom wanting me to do something, i still do it. 

Wow your words touched me. Thank you so much jacqua43! I can never thank you enough!

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 26 2016

Retired
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 61]
Summary:

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The past never leaves. It's all in how you deal with it that determines how well you move on . . .

 

Vera Cooke thought she'd moved on, thought she'd buried her past well enough to get married and have a son and enjoy the life she'd been wanting.

 

But the past has a way of creeping back up. For Vera, it erupts disturbingly, violently, forcing truths to be revealed and a demanding need for revenge too hard to ignore.

 

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Table of Contents
Categories: Music, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Mystery, Psychological, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Crackfic, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:Yes
Word count: 9367
Read Count: 12188
Published: May 22 2016
Updated: May 24 2016


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is good!! I wonder if Eddie killed William since he has a strong hate for black people. I feel for poor Cyrus he's thinking he has to take care of his mother, because his father is no longer able to.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 24 2016

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Why do I get the feeling that Nicholas father is behind every thing that is happen to Vee. Good thing someone was there when that punk tried to rape her. Nicholas is not about to let Vee go this time.

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Date: May 24 2016

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I love how protective of his mother Cyrus is, every son should be that way. I think Nick will be good for Vera and Cyrus, because it seems as though he is not going anywhere any time soon. Wow! she just blurted out that she was pregnant ( was?), is Cyrus nick's son.

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Date: May 24 2016

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I wonder who was the woman and man that assaulted her and made her lose their baby? I hope it wasn't Adriano, because he doesn't seem the type. Girl... your Italian is on point!!.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 24 2016

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Man the attraction between these two is HOTT!!, but there's always someone blocking though. Thanks for this update.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 24 2016

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.