Penname: Chocolate Girl [Contact]

Real name: Renee

Member Since: March 03 2009

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Retired
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 252]
Summary:

Matt was the love them and leave them type till he met Azalea. She turned the tables on him but not for the reasons he thinks. Will he forgive her when he learns the truth?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 18
Completed:No
Word count: 45561
Read Count: 65818
Published: August 25 2012
Updated: June 02 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Why don't you throw a man in for Z.. It's time she met someone that's intereseted in dating her.. Let's really get things popping.. Hahaha..

Looking forward to the next chapter.. I would how he will react when he finds out his mother had a hand in Z disappearing..



Author's Response:

Be patient. He's coming and it won't be pretty.

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: January 13 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 29]
Summary:

Two years after her second abduction, Keisha finds herself as a target again.  Only this time, she managed to involve her friend, Julie, and it’s not by Tyler.  It’s a copy-cat killer who idolizes Tyler, who is still in prison.  With Keisha and Julie kidnapped, it forces Will and Greg to team up with Tyler and a detective, Liza Rotand, to find the copy-cat killer before it’s too late.

Third in the sort of-ish series to Party Monster and Unresolved.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Horror, Psychological, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Strong Sexual Content
Challenges: Chamber Grindhouse Challenge 4
Series: None
Chapters: 15
Completed:Yes
Word count: 19632
Read Count: 11831
Published: October 02 2012
Updated: November 11 2012


Title: Chapter 1: Cast Pics

There's going to be a problem once Evan realizes that Tyler won't be able to kill or torture Keisha because he has begun to have feeling for her..

I hope once this is over Will and Keisha will admit their feels for each other because they may not have a chance to do so again..

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 29 2012

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 332]
Summary:

When recent college grad, Lily Taylor became the personal paralegal to the notorious lawyer of the stars, Aiden Hawkins, she never knew that she would have her hands tied with him...literally.

makeme



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 66387
Read Count: 66282
Published: October 03 2012
Updated: July 30 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Hometown Glory

Hopefully, Lily gets home safe and sound with her virture in tack and Aiden no the wise that she was at a rave swapping spit with Nate until the his partners granddaughter decisions to drop in and visit and just puts all of her business out on front street.. Oh that would be good..  Heheee..  Hopefully, Aiden wouldn't punish her to badly..

Can't wait to see how this plays out.. Lily has just bought herself a good old fashion spanking..

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 10 2012

Title: Chapter 1: Hometown Glory

I forgot this part. Aiden should have warned Blair to stay away from Lily.. Just to say she is not her concern is not enough. Once Lily told him she ran into Blair and she was questioning her he should have known what was going to go down from their.. Aiden's head is definitely not in the game.

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 10 2012

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 11]
Summary:

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All she did was open the door... 



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Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Mercedes Jones
Classification: Cannon, General
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 576
Read Count: 2101
Published: November 09 2012
Updated: November 09 2012


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved it!! Can we get another one shot?

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 10 2012

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 6]
Summary:

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      SERENDIPITY


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   Seems Mr Evans has some competition...

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Mercedes Jones
Classification: Alternate Universe, General, Off Cannon
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 1646
Read Count: 1497
Published: November 13 2012
Updated: November 13 2012


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Thank you! Thank you!! This is going to be so good..

Loved it!!

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed
Date: November 14 2012

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 61]
Summary:

A young couple must face the damage and aftermath when one disappears without explanation and suddenly returns. While one deals with resentment at being abandoned, the other reveals their own shocking reasons.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:No
Word count: 6061
Read Count: 36389
Published: November 27 2012
Updated: April 18 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Characters

He could have handled that better. Now, she will really feel as if he doesn't want her.

welcome back!

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 18 2013

Rated: Members ONLY:Mature Content
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[Reviews - 46]
Summary:

We all heard it, and read about it. The main question remain: What happened in that suite?

This is what happens when one of the most prominent men on the planet stumbles on a chambermaid in a five star hotel...

 

This story is my property. Please do not copy or post it or extract it to any other websites. Copyright 2012 VMckeon




Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: None
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 13
Completed:No
Word count: 22359
Read Count: 28182
Published: December 03 2012
Updated: November 30 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1. The call

My first review didn' post so i'll give it another try..

Great update!! Looking forwasrd to seeing where you take us on this ride.. I would if your thoughts are the same as mine... Only time will tell..

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 15 2012

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 10]
Summary:

While working on a film set together two people have a totally unexpected evening.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Erotica
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:Yes
Word count: 5222
Read Count: 5237
Published: December 28 2012
Updated: December 28 2012


Title: Chapter 1: Cast

We definitely need a sequel, you can't leave it like that..

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 29 2012

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 40]
Summary:

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It has been Centuries since Human and Other Beings decided to live apart from each other thus the Southern and Northern Kingdoms.Two beings and Fate had other plans, what was decided by the humans, Weres and other beings had nothing to do with Kiero and Palesa most definately not Fate...



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Drama, Family, Fantasy, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 36745
Read Count: 11213
Published: December 31 2012
Updated: July 27 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm enjoying the story but a bit confused. Not sure if the littl girl is intended to be Kiero's mate or he will be her protector only?

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstar
Date: January 13 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Glad you're back.. Looking forward to part II

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstar
Date: March 23 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I thought his chapter was up a few weeks ago? I'm sure I read this chapter already.



Author's Response:

Yes you read the chapter, I was trying to upload the cast pics, please forgive me...so sorry. next update will be up soon and I'm working on loading the pictures. 

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed
Date: April 07 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I swear everytime it gets good something or someone interrupts them.. Hopefully, they won't mate until they get to the raptor world or Ki will lose his mind and hurt everyone in sight if something happens to his baby..

Awesome update.. Looking forward to the next chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks for the support, it's encouraging.

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 05 2013

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 171]
Summary:

Getting on a airplane and leaving everything she knew behind hadn’t been easy. Knowing who was waiting at the end of the long air flight made it all worth it.



Table of Contents
Categories: Miscellaneous
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:No
Word count: 14749
Read Count: 37411
Published: January 18 2013
Updated: January 26 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Wifey

Looking forward to the next chapter..

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: January 18 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 5]
Summary:

I dont want it. i wont do it . you cant make me . Queen my ass.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 1200
Read Count: 897
Published: January 29 2013
Updated: January 29 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Looks interesting.. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 29 2013

Retired
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 153]
Summary:

 

Mallory Ruskin lost her sight in an unfortunate accident five years ago. Can she push aside the fear of the assumed and the unknown to trust the one man who had her heart?

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:No
Word count: 28493
Read Count: 19565
Published: January 29 2013
Updated: May 19 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 : Chance Meeting

I'm definitely enjoying this story.. What kind of accident did Rory cause that made Mallory lose her sight? Is it possible that she can regain her sight?

Looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

These questions will be answered very soon  but I will answer one... Her blindness cannot be corrected.

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 09 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 72]
Summary:

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"The course of true love never did run smooth." 

 

-William Shakespeare



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Family, Fantasy, Horror, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Incest , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Challenges: What Lies Underneath
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 7990
Read Count: 4286
Published: February 04 2013
Updated: March 30 2013


Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning

This is good!!!!  Lou will get what's coming to him soon enough.. He let that little seduce him and turn him against his son.. I'm sure he knows what Candi is up to but just doesn't want to admit he was a fool for marrying her..

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 10 2013

Rated: Most Ages
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[Reviews - 20]
Summary:

Short Stories/Drabbles between Ororo and Thor. Marvel!Universe. 

 

"So...thou art the Goddess of weather?"

 



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Categories: Movies, Miscellaneous
Characters: Storm/Ororo Munroe
Classification: Crossover, Drabbles , Off Cannon
Genre: Comedy , Fantasy, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Fluff, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 2239
Read Count: 39644
Published: February 04 2013
Updated: January 11 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Once

I'm a huge fan of both Storm and Thor.. I would love to see more..

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 06 2013

Retired
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 776]
Summary:

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Jayden made the biggest mistake of his life when he let the love of his life slip through his fingers.  Could he make it right and start anew?  Tamaeya had been burned by Jayden once and had no intentions of being burnt a second time, but it seemed that the heart had it's own mind.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 4965
Read Count: 108479
Published: February 06 2013
Updated: April 19 2017


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 In The Beginning

Brenda, did you see the picture of Jayden's body. Someone posted a picture on FB and I knew the face was familiar. His body is tight!!!



Author's Response:

I haven't seen the pix, but I'd love to drool over it.  LOL

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 31 2014

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 In The Beginning

Wow!!! I'm definitely looking forward to the next chapter.. I'm sure this story will be as good as the others.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 07 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 In The Beginning

I'm loving the twins.. They remind me of my twins.. They say whatever they are thinking.. Dana, is a mess.. She's gonna lay hands on Jayden..

Looking forward to the next chapter..

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 14 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 In The Beginning

I'm missing my this story. I need my fix ASAP!!!!!

 

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 25 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 In The Beginning

How can you stop there???? I love Dana. She is just want that family needed to being them together. I can't wait for the kids to visit Jayden in the hospital and Dana to pray over him an annoit him with her holy oil.

Awesome update as usually.

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 29 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 In The Beginning

Tam really worked my nerves this chapter.. I understand she's upset with Jayden parents but she shouldn't keep the kids from them.. She shouldn't say negative things about them in front of the kids that was just wrong.. Her behavior made her no better than Nancy..

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 15 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 In The Beginning

Yeah, Tam is reall working my nerves. She's not trying to give Nancy a chance.

 

 

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 26 2013

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.