Penname: Chocolate Girl [Contact]

Real name: Renee

Member Since: March 03 2009

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[Reviews - 776]
Summary:

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Jayden made the biggest mistake of his life when he let the love of his life slip through his fingers.  Could he make it right and start anew?  Tamaeya had been burned by Jayden once and had no intentions of being burnt a second time, but it seemed that the heart had it's own mind.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 4965
Read Count: 108481
Published: February 06 2013
Updated: April 19 2017


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 In The Beginning

Tam really needs to knock it off already. She's trying to find every excuse in the book to keep Nancy away from the kids and that's not right. As Nancy and Dana said the want stay little for long. Soon Dana will be a teenager an will eventually want to spend time with Nancy and she may blame Tam for keeping her away from her Grammy.

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 08 2013

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 83]
Summary:

Kwon Jae Hwa had been prepared to succeed. He had worked hard for everything he had earned all of his life, and that resulted in getting him to great places in life.

One day, his life is interrupted by a vibrant, young, aspiring dancer. She's carefree, and the complete opposite of what he is used to, but something tells him that she is exactly what he wants.

He has no reason to doubt that she feels the same about him, until she is offered the opportunity of a lifetime that puts a halt on everything they have, and Jae Hwa is left with a great responsibility to handle on his own.

Jae Hwa must face the one hardship he never thought he would have to go through with his first love.

 

 



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Graphic Violence, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 16
Completed:No
Word count: 28452
Read Count: 69808
Published: February 14 2013
Updated: June 12 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

They miss each other. I think Lisa should tell Jae what's going on with her family so he won't be in the dark. Maybe they should talk about what both families expect if them and hopefully they can figure something out before gets too late and there's too much distance between. 

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 24 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 15]
Summary:

This story is about a young girl who went through a lot of things to get to the top. She overcomes many obstacles in order to become a successful lawyer.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 2192
Read Count: 3055
Published: February 20 2013
Updated: February 21 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Tanya makes no sense. Her opening the door to a stranger then leaving the stranger alone in the room then she tries back in the room finds the stranger gone, phone off the hook and the door wide open yet she didn't see anything wrong with this picture??? Not once did she think to turn around an mention this to her mother or check the house to see if the man left the house. No, she just rushes off to school. Makes no sense to me. Regardless if you think you live in a nice neighborhood you don't open your door to strange men, you don't let them in your house and you dediney don't live them unattended in a room. 

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: February 23 2013

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 121]
Summary:

A sequel to Good Grief, Duplicity is full of mystery and intrigue. Will love conquer all things or are some things broken by nature?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Erotica, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 114
Read Count: 19934
Published: March 18 2013
Updated: May 14 2014


Title: Duplicity

I'mnot sure if I'm believing that story that a was told to Sienna and Jason but then that would explain his mood swings, the headaches and him being paranoid.



Author's Response:

Thanks for commenting. Yea poor Sean has a lot of demons to wrestle with. 

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 20 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 23]
Summary:

the maroon

 

Runaway Black-Seminole Tehya barely escapes the noose of Blackhart Plantation, dragging her reluctant sister right behind. But when their old master takes away everything that she holds dear Tehya must learn put her faith in her newfound savior, her master's own brother. Yet even his lifestyle makes her question if freedom is truly better than enslavement.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Historical, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 8233
Read Count: 7478
Published: March 26 2013
Updated: February 14 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Meet The Cast

Two of my favorite men. Looking forward to reading this story.



Author's Response:

Girl yes! Hope you enjoy the first chapter!

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 26 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 89]
Summary:

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Merri Tallon is a fifty year old widow that wants to have some fun.  Her single adult children think that she should sit in the corner and knit, but Merri has something else in mind!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Challenges: Can I Tell You My Fantasy?
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:Yes
Word count: 14750
Read Count: 7551
Published: April 05 2013
Updated: April 09 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Merri's Plans

Tam was working my nerves. If I could have reached around an smaller her I would have. Glad Merri out her in her place.

Awesome story as always.

 

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 09 2013

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 99]
Summary:

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Could she not comprehend that he had a reckoning to deliver?

The Fire Rises



Table of Contents
Categories: Movies
Characters: None
Classification: General, Off Cannon
Genre: Action-Adventure
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 15
Completed:No
Word count: 39404
Read Count: 34866
Published: April 09 2013
Updated: August 26 2016


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is so good. I am really enjoying this story. Can't wait until Bane gets his hands on Valley. Barsad needs to tell Bane about his sister before it's too late. Even though I suspect the sister days will be numbered now that he knows what Nemsis has been though in the Pit. He just might kill his sister himself.

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 29 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 209]
Summary:

Loki

What happens after Loki falls from the Rainbow Bridge? My first fic EVER. M rating for later chapters.



Table of Contents
Categories: Movies, Original Fiction
Characters: Other
Classification: Alternate Universe, Off Cannon , Supernatural
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 22
Completed:No
Word count: 49769
Read Count: 40308
Published: April 13 2013
Updated: April 22 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Not Quite Dead

Interesting looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review, hope you enjoy.

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 13 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Not Quite Dead

Loki is too cute. I'm living this story.



Author's Response:

He is! Thank you.

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 14 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Not Quite Dead

Noni, is going to give my Loki a complex is she don't stop all that backing away from him. Does Noni really believe Loki is a God? I know she doesn't want to rush him to explain but she doesn't seem that curious about him or where he comes from.

Great update.



Author's Response:

Thanks! Who knows what will happen... 

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 16 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Not Quite Dead

Loki is in trouble now. Didn't see Jake death coming. 



Author's Response:

Loki is a mess. I love writing his character.

Jake will be missed.

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 18 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Not Quite Dead

Loki is too funny.

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 19 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Not Quite Dead

That was hot!



Author's Response:

Thank You! I will update soon. Just getting settled into my new schedule. Stay tuned! :)

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 20 2013

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 86]
Summary:

Everyone has that someone who made them feel perfect and brilliant. How do we lose sight of those great loves and what happens when they come back into your orbit? Amelia and David were college sweethearts who run into each other 2 decades later-after marriages, divorces, kids, and careers--can they still be crazy in love?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:Yes
Word count: 9837
Read Count: 16840
Published: April 17 2013
Updated: June 12 2013


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1--I Used to Love Her

Wait, that's all??? You know you need to stop playing an continue this story... We need to know why they broke up and if they will get married and finally have their HEA with each other. Besides they need a baby together.

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 18 2013

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 27]
Summary:

SCANDAL-President Grant found out about Defiance just before an international crisis begins and it's left his relationship with Olivia Pope in ruins. Though pride and pain are ruling them both and trust is shattered between them, can they truly forget what they once had and go on with their lives apart?



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television, Scandal
Characters: Fitzgerald Grant, Olivia Pope, Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Oliva Pope/Fitzgerald Grant (Scandal)
Warnings: Adult Situations, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 59
Completed:No
Word count: 116568
Read Count: 194318
Published: May 01 2013
Updated: March 30 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is going to be good. Looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you for taking the time to review - I will hopefully have more chapters up today

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 02 2013

Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 5]
Summary:

 

Hydrangeas

Although she has "best intentions" for her daughter, a mother's obsession with social status threatens to tear her family apart.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Family
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: How Does Her Garden Grow?
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3235
Read Count: 5894
Published: May 05 2013
Updated: May 05 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Hydrangeas

The only thing she has left of her daughter is the flowers she hated so. 



Author's Response:

Yep. So sad. *shake head* Thanks for reading :)

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 05 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 417]
Summary:

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Benjamin Cunningham III decided to finally open the box that his adopted parents had given him which would reveal his past.  Little did he know that its contents would change his life forever.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Rape
Challenges: Through His Eyes
Series: None
Chapters: 16
Completed:No
Word count: 82948
Read Count: 53961
Published: May 15 2013
Updated: September 05 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Facing Facts

I don't know why but something is tell me not to trust Ophelia to much right now. I'm finding her to be just as manipulating as Raymond when it comes to something she wants and she wants a chance at a family with Raymond, Benny and the new baby.

Bobby, is trash glad Keisha stood up to her. I don't think Benny meant to put us business out in the street like that but now that he know's where he comes from and he's not ashamed of it I can see him not having a problem with telling people he's black especially when the person is making racist comments. I think Kevin will stand by his friend.

Awesome update as usual.

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 04 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Facing Facts

Ophelia's scaring me and I'm scared for her and Raymond. What if she pushes him to hard and he relapses an dies she could really be in some major trouble and lose baby Justice in the process. What will happen when Raymond is well enough to take care of himself? He's a determined man with a sharp mind an strong will. Does Ophelia think he will forget her Dr. Jekyll & Hyde a behavior? Ophelia needs some serious counseling before everything blow a up in her face.

 

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 04 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Facing Facts

Wow!! Let's see how this plays out.

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 17 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Facing Facts

The devil is a liar!!! Raymond will not control Ophelia. She will see through his controlling ass send him on his way. Raymond is a mess... Bennie will have a fit when he finds out what happened between Ophelia and Raymond.

Awesome update.


 

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 29 2013

Rated: Members ONLY: 17 and Older
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[Reviews - 6]
Summary:

3 Simple Rules


Never choose a model on a whim
Never work with the same model more than once
Never get high on your own supply

These are the Three Simple Rules that Hassan has followed for many years as a seasoned photographer. But when he meets her on the subaway, Hassan discovers that some rules are just meant to be broken.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content
Challenges: Can I Tell You My Fantasy?
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:Yes
Word count: 4753
Read Count: 1772
Published: May 31 2013
Updated: May 31 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Never choose a model on a whim

Loved it!!!

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 02 2013

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[Reviews - 1032]
Summary:

   

 

A virtual wallflower for most of her life, what will Sasha do when she encounters the first man to ever make her want to be noticed? Dmitri is a man used to being surrounded by the most beautiful things, including women. Will he accept Sasha, a woman who is usually overshadowed by the beauty of her friends? Is he capable of noticing that while her beauty may not be as blatant, it should still be treaured? This is the story of a wallflower and the man she loves.

 

Sasha: the Wallflower has been removed from this site and is available for purchase on Amazon Kindle. Thank you all for your support!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2670
Read Count: 196756
Published: May 31 2013
Updated: November 25 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Cast

My heart hurts for Sasha. Dimtri was wrong for them way he spoke to her. He knows his sister is a spoil brat a Saha would never intentionally hurt her but he used this as his way of ending the relationship. Once Sasha said the L word Dimtri had an attitude. Fuck him and his fucked up family. Sasha can an will meet someone to love her the way she needs to be loved.

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 18 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Cast

Not only did Nadia slap her she spat in her face if that's not cause for a ass whooping then I don't know what is. I agree with some of the others Sasha should stayed out of his toxic family business but Dimtri didn't have to be so hurtful with his words. Someone things you just can't take back. 

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 18 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Cast

There was nothing wrong with that love scene. Looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you! It was my first complete love scene so i was a little worried. 

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 05 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Cast

Now that was hot. It seems like Dominic little talk lit a fire under Dimitri.

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 23 2013

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.