I love that Bowie and Ludmilla are becoming friends...Bowie will need all the help she can get when that nut case Sveltlan and the prick Jan find out the she is Vlad's intended...which if he keeps lusting openly at her like that will be found out soon!!

I could just picture how beautiful Bowie looked and feel how beautiful she felt...sort aof like her anguish after the bomb...you paint her feeling so well..you can visualize them!!

I am still for Vlad and Bowie to be together but I also like Reid and Lumilla...if not this story maybe they can have their own story...it will be exciting and hawtness as well!

I am so glad Svelt got her butt handed to her by Milla ..what did she think she was doing ..Vlad would have mercilessly killed her had she touched Bowie or Milla..and then Reid might have to have a piece of her as well!! lol

I am so loving this story sweetie..but Jan feels like trouble and I don't think he will simply just go away!!

Great great great updt sweetie..cannot wait for more..you are on a roll!!!

OK I really love this story but I was about to give up on it..please longer chapters and more often..please!!

Alex is stupid..Vlad is hawt...Bowie gonna whoop everybody's butt..and I so want her with Vlad when it is all said and done...good job sweetie..more please!

Sometimes me Vlad is not going to like Mr,Joey all up on his woman..not one single bit..Joey may be in danger but we know  Bowie definiteely is...loving this one sweetie ..on to read more!

Wow Wow Wow..that was incredible!! I read it twice went got some water..did my husand and read it again!!lol

Cause that was hawt!!

I cannot believe Vlad just let her leave..and Bowie did not want to go so why...I do know she is crazy if she thinks this was a one time thing..she belongs more han ever to that severely hawt sexy Vampire!!

OK Jan is creeping me out and really do not trust him..he is up to something other than Bowies panties.

Svelt is going to get herself killed and I kinda think Bowie might be the one to do it..I dont think Bowie is a normal human..I think she has some type of supernatural abilities.

I really like Milla and Bowie as friends..actually more like sisters..they fight, laugh and seem to already care about each other.

IT girl you are writing the heck out of this darn story..I hate to be greedy but more more more!!

This is where we last left offf.....I cannot wait for what comes next!!!Great story sweetie..

Girl IT ..this darn story is off the chain good!! This should be a freaking awesome movie!! It is so exciting..so many twist and turns..so freaking awesome!! I hate to beg..but can muse whip us up more soonn plz!!

I think Ms. Bowie is going to be one kick ass vamp when she finishes changing and her back up players and her are going to tear that mother up!!!

I so want her to end up with Vlad..so I hope she does not hate him..he is hopelessly and probably dangerously in love with her...but together with her possey..Lawd evil watch out!

There are so many break off stories you can make from this main story...so many cahracters we want to know more about and see where they wind up.....you really should think about publishing it and making it a series...cause it is off the chain good!!

Great job sweetie... mmore!

Ok now what do I do..there is no more to read and this is getting so good!!

I knew that crazy heifer would be trouble but I am still not sure about his sister. I think Bowie can handle that trashy blond g/f but his sister is another story!! I wonder is she the one who turnrf Reid?? He is crzy in lust for her and she is playing with him...humm!!

I wonder does Bailey have someone watching Bowie..he knows everything going on with her or is it their connection as twins..

Anyway so many intricate details...so intriging I can hardly wait for moreeee!!

I cannot wait to find all why all these immortals are willing to put down their hatred of each other for Bowie?? There is something supernaturally special about her that seems to affect all supernaturals...Lawd knows she has Vlad's nose wide open!!

Wonder what has happened to Joey,..I don't like him for Bowie but I don't want him hurt either...but if he was made a supernatural too then what is he and what does that mean ...will he join the others in rescuing her??

Now that her and Vlad have done the nasty..does that chaneg anything ...I know he has not bitten her yet so she is not his officially though she is covered in his scent!

This such a great story sweetie..so many pieces to this puzzle..so intricate and complex..but extremely entertaining and exhilarating!!! Great job!!

I am so loving this story!!

I love Milla and Bowies relationship they are like sisters..lol...and fun sisters too!! Milla seems genuinely happ Bowie and her brother are an item!!

Reis has much more power than they think and is very protective of Bowie..I think Bowie has more enough protectors lol..Vlad alone came take out all things supernatural ane none.

Bowie learned that she is not so over vlad as she thought and once again they are smoking hawt!

I think Bowie has some supernatural abilities..I cannot wait to find how!!

Love love love this sory sweetie..hardly wait for more!!

I love the suspense and drama..I am anxious to see what happens next. I am so surprised Vlad left Bowie on her own and allowed Reid to bring her back to the states and to her friends without a fight for her. I know he sees her as his queen so I am surprised.

I cannot wait to see what happens next...I still want bowie and vlad together..but I scared of what will happen next!

This is getting so incredibly good sweetie....Great job!!

Sounds like the doo doo about to it the fan and I can hardly wait!!

I love Bowie and loving Reid more each day...I cannot wait to se what each character is going to bring to the fight..though I still want her and Vlad to end up together....espeecially if she is having a little vamp aby!!

You do know how to make us long for more...great job sweetie....cannot wait till the fire meets the pot!!

I knew Bowie was not a mere human ..something supernatural about her..but I love she whipped Sveltho's butt big time....she should have killed her!! Now her and Alexi are working together to get rid of our Bowiie...looks like Vlad will have to kill his own brother...how stupid!!

So many people will be against them if they do finally allow themselves to fall for each other but both are bad arse people so Bowie and Vlad with the help of Ludmilla ..can handle them!!!

I just cannot wait for them to get together permanently!!!

Vlad has the rough, can screw your brains out and make you beg for more look...he is ubber sexy!!!More more more...

Ok I love Reid..he is perfect gay boyfriend...not sure if he is but I kinda get the feeling he belongs to Cir or Vlad in a special way..lol.

I love Yosh is watching out for Bowie and can at least somewhat protect her from things that would hurt her..she needs him.

Not Cir how I feel about Bowie but I do not think she is safe around him and he his quest to make sure their blood line stays clean he may hurt her or try!!

Poor Joey or not....I just got a feeling there is more to Joey than we know...he seems to be hiding something as well....I don't think he is Mr. Perfect at all!!

I loveeeee this story sweetie..just enough dark to make very interesting and just enough sexy to make you anxious to see what happens next...and I lovve the intrigue more than anything!!!Great job..