For married author Dove Morgan, the trip to the big city was the first in a series of things she never thought she'd do.
Yay, so glad to read more about Dove and Xavier! Is he finally going to tell her what he intends to do with her book or is he going to procrastinate another day? The more he waits the more angry Dove will be when he finally does tell her.
Do you mind talking about your NaNo project? I love hearing about what people worked on, the stories they came up with.
Reviewer: dustdaughter Signed
You warned that betrayal would be a part of this story. I read that warning expecting to see Dove betray her wedding vows. I'm okay with that; the marriage isn't working for her at all. But now I'm thinking that Xavier plans to betray her as well. I'm not okay with that. But I'm invested in this story now. I want to see how everything pans out.
Reviewer: dustdaughter SignedLove this new feeling of empowerment that Dove has. It looks good on her. Maybe soon she'll figure out that she doesn't have to go back to that old, stifling life. She could be her own woman in a new city.
Reviewer: dustdaughter SignedAre all book publishers this flirty? :) Great story. Can't wait to read what happens next.
Reviewer: dustdaughter SignedThis is a great chapter, a very hot chapter. And I like Xavier because of how he helps make Dove feel*. But he really needs to tell her about the book. It would've been best if he'd told her before they got busy. Now that the deed is done, she will feel betrayed if he tells her. But you did say that betrayal would feature in this story.
Sorry to put a damper on things. It's just what was in the back of my mind while I read the chapter.
*I say helps because it seems like Dove's awakening started while she was writing the book, long before she met or even knew of Xavier. She was probably going to have this discovery sooner or later. Meeting Xavier just made it sooner.
Reviewer: dustdaughter Signed I like how Xavier's getting Dove to focus on how she's being treated instead of the way she treats others. This is a good learning experience for her. I hope they get more time together but Xavier still has some explaining to do!
I don't understand how Shon could not feel any passion toward a woman like Dove. Something about him must want to make her a miserable and stifled as he is, whether it's conscious or not. Can't wait for Dove to be free of these folks. They're only bringing her down. I can relate to that.
Great story. Thanks for continuing with it!
Reviewer: dustdaughter Signed 
*Response to the Take Me Please Challenge*
Five miles outside of hell and a few meters from the devil's doorstep, Mari finds her favorite kind of challenge, a pretty boy with a big stick.
You had me at "Yes...please...thank you...Should have been his reply". Ha ha.
Love your stories!
Reviewer: dustdaughter Signed
When rockstar Adam Brand makes a racist remark during a drunken magazine interview, it becomes an international headline. Within hours his PR Agent concocts the perfect plan to revive his rapidly sinking career before it’s too late, but will Adam be able to pull it off?
**** STEREO has been removed for editing, refining and if all goes according to plan, publishing! I couldn't have finished it without all my readers leaving their words and thoughts--even if I didn't always like them--so THANK YOU from the bottom of my heart. <3
This looks like the start of a fun story! Thanks for writing it.
Reviewer: dustdaughter SignedDisclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.