Penname: Heartless808 [Contact]

Real name: Kelly M.

Member Since: May 14 2013

Membership status: Member

Bio:

Uuum i dont really know where to start but im so glad to be a member on this website now. for months i've been reading all the stories that are posted and let me just say they are so AWESOME! i cant wait to read more. reading all these stories have really inspired me.




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Reviews by Heartless808


Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 615]
Summary:

 

When rockstar Adam Brand makes a racist remark during a drunken magazine interview, it becomes an international headline.  Within hours his PR Agent concocts the perfect plan to revive his rapidly sinking career before it’s too late, but will Adam be able to pull it off?

 

**** STEREO has been removed for editing, refining and if all goes according to plan, publishing! I couldn't have finished it without all my readers leaving their words and thoughts--even if I didn't always like them--so THANK YOU from the bottom of my heart. <3



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 18
Completed:Yes
Word count: 922
Read Count: 90703
Published: March 24 2012
Updated: August 30 2014


Title: Chapter 17: “I just want you to be happy Adam.”

Wow I'm really gonna miss this story it was soooooo good and sad!!!!!! Make sequel or something I don't want it to end lol their love was pure and sweet, just like it should be :)

Reviewer: Heartless808 Signed
Date: May 17 2014

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Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

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In desperate need to be loved, Camille Sullivan was willing to do anything... even if it meant sleeping with the devil.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Psychological, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 3430
Read Count: 49948
Published: December 12 2012
Updated: July 18 2019


Title: Teach Me How To Be Loved

Wow this chapter brought tears to my eyes ... So beautiful 

Reviewer: Heartless808 Signed
Date: January 09 2014

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Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 86]
Summary:

What's a girl to do, when she doesn't listen to her head but instead throws caution to the wind for one night?

We've all had an encounter with that guy, right? The one who knows that he is sex on two legs. That guy who you know should be avoided, but still manages to reel you in easily. That guy who is still in your bed, even though he is long gone.

No? You don't know him. Well, Ambi does. 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:Yes
Word count: 30393
Read Count: 47523
Published: December 29 2012
Updated: February 06 2014


Title: Chapter 5: You Shook Me All Night Long

Omg! I really enjoyed this story! Why can't I meet a guy like Irish! I'm so jealous lol but I'm so glad your making a sequel and I just wanna say Irish is just to sexy and mysterious for his own good!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. I am happy that you enjoyed it. We should all be so lucky to find a man like Irish...le Sigh.

Reviewer: Heartless808 Signed
Date: February 09 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 64]
Summary:

In response to the Lonely Highways Challenge: Getting stuck on the side of a major highway was new. Having bad luck? Not so much.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: Lonely Highways
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 1224
Read Count: 2562
Published: July 23 2013
Updated: August 17 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Findingmyself please make this into a story girl. I'm sorry if I'm asking for too much but It's just too good I'm hooked. 

Reviewer: Heartless808 Signed
Date: August 17 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 277]
Summary:

Lance was a man who had it all and lost it all. He was down and out and was ready to give up because he had nothing to live for. Nina was a woman who had enough of being used and was trying to start her life over in a new city. When these two meet will Lance have something to live for? Or will he continue to live in misery. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 27
Completed:Yes
Word count: 40637
Read Count: 72035
Published: December 09 2013
Updated: July 06 2015


Title: Chapter 3: Dinner

Awwwwwww that was so sweet what lance did for her. I like this story so far ;)

Reviewer: Heartless808 Signed
Date: December 14 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 92]
Summary:

Porter had been gone for while, traveling and moving on with his life. His father’s illness brings him home, but what he didn’t expect was to be drawn back in by the reason why he left—her.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 14802
Read Count: 11211
Published: December 28 2013
Updated: April 12 2016


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Georgia p you are a Great writer and I'm sure this story will be amazing! so please please continue can't wait for next update :)

Reviewer: Heartless808 Signed
Date: December 28 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 76]
Summary:

 

British Mogul, Sir Benjamin Harvey Nichols VI has always gotten everything he wanted out of life. He worked hard and played hard. He lived in a world of celebrities, models, and money. However, a series of tragic events has him re-evaluating his priorities. When fate serves him a cup, which will he choose?

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Erotica, Family, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 14759
Read Count: 17241
Published: January 08 2014
Updated: January 25 2014


Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I just wanna say I'm am so loving this story and want more! Please please update and let me add a man with a deep British accent just does things to me its so attractive ;)

Reviewer: Heartless808 Signed
Date: January 25 2014

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Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 98]
Summary:

A story how even though you think you have your life planned out, cupid's arrow will hit you when you least expect it. Chris and Kat both attend Tulane University. This is Chris last year and after graduation he's leaving town. But, what happens when a beautiful African American woman catches his eye?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Female/Female, Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 23
Completed:No
Word count: 55615
Read Count: 159173
Published: March 01 2014
Updated: August 20 2014


Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

That was an epic thanksgiving dinner. I'm really glad Chris and kats feelings for each other are strong. I died laughing when kats mom told that Anniston hoe that chris wasn't interested, I was like " dayuuuuum" lol. And yay I can't wait for you to do an update of chases and Maya's story cuz I know it's gonna be goooooood. Amazing job as always shadow :)



Author's Response:

Chris and Kat are very much in love, 5 more months to go. Hopefully they will stay that way. I love the way Kat's mom handled that situation, not even her dad dared to say something.lol!  I am really looking forward to writing Chase and Maya's story working on it right now. Thank you for your review.

Reviewer: Heartless808 Signed
Date: August 20 2014

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Summary:

How far will you go when you're lonely?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 75
Completed:No
Word count: 151713
Read Count: 143287
Published: March 13 2014
Updated: July 17 2015


Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Please daughter, don't stop posting this story! I know I don't comment often but I have really enjoyed this story even though some others are not. This story is not only inspiring but it is real, so of course it's not gonna be fast and straight to the point. These characters all have issues even the characters that seem like they have good intentions such as Craig. Your taking your time because the characters need it especially Jodi. She has a serious condition that can't be cured or just resolved in just a few chapters but many. Like I said some time ago I have been sexually abused when I was very young and till this day I'm still dealing with it.It really messed with they way I see myself and my self esteem. I'm saying this because I like Jodi even though she has made some stupid ass decisions i still find her to be a likeable person and i sympathize with her. Her behavior is not acceptable but it's understandable. I guess what I'm saying is feel a  connection to Jodi. Please keep posting I like this story



Author's Response:

Hello again, Heartless 808!

Thanks so much for hanging in there with Jodi. I know that it hasn't been easy. Your understanding of the lengthy story is very much appreciated.

I didn't want to take things to fast because I felt that by doing so it would somehow cheapen or minimize Jodi's character.

Since I have really dug so deeply within myself I feel so much empathy for Jodi. I know that many will admit that when these traumas take a toll. The victim is either one extreme or the other.

Jodi's happens to be promiscuity, someone else's may be withdrawal and totally asexuality (not having any interest in sex).

Again, thanks for your review and know that I will continue to do must best to respect your feelings, as well as others.

Reviewer: Heartless808 Signed
Date: June 03 2014

Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

Daughter, I don't know you personally but from reading this story and specifically this chapter I can tell you are truly and genuinely a kind person. Thank you for this update. I was hurt when I heard about what happened to Michael Brown.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your comment, Heartless808!

Reviewer: Heartless808 Signed
Date: September 01 2014

Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Honestly this story really breaks my heart and tears just come down involuntarily. Some chapters I cringe because when I was a little girl, I too have been sexually abused and a couple weeks ago I finally told someone. Jody needs help, and I really dislike Steve I feel like he is a trigger to her traumatic past. To bad things didn't work out with Greg...I just wanna say Kirk is one sick bastard...I really wish people like him didn't exist in this world. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your comment. I think that sometimes keeping the secret and not bringing oneself to say it aloud can be far worse than telling it. I am so happy that you were able to speak out. I am grateful that you have continued to follow this story. As always I will remain sensitive to your feeling and as well as others.

Reviewer: Heartless808 Signed
Date: April 20 2014

Title: Chapter 59: Character Pics

I just wanna say holy sh*t the characters are perfect! And is that Henry cavil as Matt omg he is too fine! And omg Steve is really handsome I know that celebrity but I forgot his name lol I knew the men in the story were good looking but they are extremely attractive lmao  and I think Jodi  is gorgeous daughter you really put thought into who you chose as your characters and you got taste girl. I wasn't expecting for you to post cast pics since it's been so many chapters but Im glad you did. As for Kirk honestly I thought he was gonna be ugly but you surprised me again hahaha I still don't like him even if he is decent looking though. But yea keep up the good work



Author's Response:

LOL! I really had no plans of posting pictures when I started this story.

I was very happy with my picture of Jodi. She is absolutely gorgeous! I wish I looked like that - LOL!

As time went on, I kept finding myself thinking of how the characters should look and I began my search. I must admit that it took almost 2 months to find images of individuals that "fit the bill"!

Yes, that is the gorgeous Henry Cavill.

Pics of my Steve character were VERY hard to find. He needed to be dangerously sexy hot looking and not too pretty or uptight looking - you know what I mean?

I spent days deciding because it was  toss up between Jason Lewis (who I chose) and the gorgeous Til Schweiger!  

Reviewer: Heartless808 Signed
Date: August 30 2014

Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Omg! Omg! Omg! Please tell me your doing another update today the suspense is killing me! And Steve doesn't seem to happy with some other man touching what he thinks is his lmao this was so far the best update girl I'm lovin it!!!!!

Reviewer: Heartless808 Signed
Date: March 25 2014

Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

It's been while since I commented but I enjoy this story it's very different and bizarre in a good way. Honestly I don't really know what to thnk of Kirk at this point. I mean I'm disgusted by him but then idk it's not sympathy that's for sure. I understand why he is the way that he is now do to his past but it still doesn't justify what he did to Jodi or any other innocent girl he violated. He was touched by someone older and who knew better and the fact that his dad didn't have his back was pretty awful but he still makes me sick.As for Lisa i hope nothing happens between them but reading your chapters you are full of surprises and twists. In the future I know you said your working on kirks past but are you going to do chapters from Steve's point of view?I'm little curious about him since he's been showing a different side in the last couple of chapters. Maybe I'm over analyzing lol but anyway good update. Oh wait one more question um are you majoring or did you major in psychology? because i don't know how you do it with these characters they seem very realistic and flawed as if they are based off real people. It's pretty cool how you developed all these characters. What's your technique? Ok I'm done babbling now and please update 



Author's Response:

Wow, Hearless808, to know that you're enjoying Jodi's story means so much.  I write according to how I feel situations further enhance or explore my characters.  These characters  are deeply flawed. It has been hard especially developing the teenaged characters. 

Kirk for instance is the lowest of the lowest; however not only does his past give an inside view to him, it can make him likable to some. Then again they may not like him but they can empathize with him.

In life we may come in contact with someone whose one act can turn us  against them.  Kirk's past makes him a more humane character. His horrible actions aren't justified, but we can get a clearer picture of him and what makes him tick.

I'm wasn't a psychology major in college. It was business; however I have met people like this, but I have taken their behavior to another level. That is why the characters are so realistic.

I do plan to explore Steve's past more thoroughly.

Reviewer: Heartless808 Signed
Date: August 13 2014

Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

I wasn't expecting that... At all. See i told you, you are always full of surprises Daughter And I love ya for that lol you ended it with a cliffhanger I need to know what happens it's getting really good. So please update pretty please. And even though Kirk is like probably the most hated character in the story his chapters are dark and interesting and I want to learn more about his twisted past. 



Author's Response:

More coming...and thanks, Heartless808! :)

Reviewer: Heartless808 Signed
Date: August 14 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 44]
Summary:

Morphine Jones isn't your average girl. She's a new member of the avengers named the Blue Inferno. She's what she likes to call, a "Super Pyrokinetic". She has pyrokinesis and she controls fire. Loki has escaped his prison cell in Asgard, and he is heading to Midgard to cause more damage.What happens when Blue Inferno meets Loki, the god of mischief and lies? Will fire and ice collide, or will everything fizzle out. (This takes place after the Avengers movie. I DO NOT own the Avengers or Loki, I only own Morphine and other original characters.)



Table of Contents
Categories: Movies
Characters: None
Classification: Cannon
Genre: Action-Adventure , Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Fluff, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: Laufeyson and Surturdottir
Chapters: 20
Completed:Yes
Word count: 34425
Read Count: 12477
Published: June 09 2014
Updated: July 17 2014


Title: Chapter 20: The End

I really enjoyed this story passionFruit, from the first chapter to the end. I love Loki and morphine together lol and Auburn is too cute! Thank you so much for this tale. :)



Author's Response: You're so welcome! Thank you for reading and enjoying my story.

Reviewer: Heartless808 Signed
Date: July 19 2014

Title: Chapter 19: Get out

No I don't wanna see it come to an end it's sooooooo goooooooooooooooooood! 



Author's Response:

The last chapter may be coming, but I promise there'll be more.

Reviewer: Heartless808 Signed
Date: July 15 2014

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 18]
Summary:

Forget about everything the Marvel X-Men movies have lead you to believe about Sabertooth, Victor Creed. He is not a lowly servant who is easily manipulated by whatever organization is using him for his mutant powers. True comic book Sabertooth: Besides having superhuman strength, sense, a healing factor, razor sharp claws and canines, is extremely smart and cunning. Victor Creed along with Mystique and Lord Deathstrike are the new "invisible" rulers of East Asia. He also has The Hand, an order of evil mystical ninjas involved in organized crime and mercenary activities at his disposal.

In this story, Victor Creed uses his position to acquire and develop partnerships with legitimate companies in order to enhance his influence and power in the organized crime world.

Jazz Madison is my original character. He mutant power is telekinesis: the power to move objects with your mind. She is also an expertly trained ninja assasin.

Jazz Madison has finally put her life back together after Victor Creed abandoned her 3 years ago. Now, he shows up at her front door saying he wants her. Will she forgive him or will she refuse to risk her stable life for him again?



Table of Contents
Categories: Books
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Racism, Rape
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 4933
Read Count: 8052
Published: June 27 2014
Updated: July 04 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ooooooooh I like this story so far! I like how you have victor creed as dominating and possessive it's kinda hot lol and Jessie palveka is the perfect man to portray him omg he's so sexy! I want more please update!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're enjoying it. I'm hoping to have an update by next week. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Heartless808 Signed
Date: June 29 2014

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Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 136]
Summary:

Chase James is Chris' older brother from Making It Hard For Me. Chase recently filed for divorce freeing himself from a woman he never loved. Although he would like to pursue a meaningful relationship with someone, now is not the time. With Chris starting his internship program, Chase is down a mechanic and in serious need of help. Maya has lived a sheltered life helping her father run his Auto Repair Shop until he passed away 6 months ago. Without enough customers to support the shop, Maya was forced to close it. After several months without work, she is in desperate need of a job.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Incest , Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 19395
Read Count: 40427
Published: August 11 2014
Updated: December 22 2014


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2- December Part 1

YAAAAAY! An update! Omg I'm really lovin this story and it's only chapter 2! What's gonna happen now that Domingo dude is creepy as hell. I know maya is shy and that's what I like about her but it's gonna get her killed! I wish she said something sooner instead of the man showing up out if nowhere, he could have done something awful to her ages ago thank god nothing happened. And Chase is something else I wasn't expecting him to kiss her so thoroughly like that lmao so steamy. I think he really likes her but knowing maya she doesn't see it... Yet. Omg I can't wait for next chapter so pumped love this story!



Author's Response:

OMG, Heartless 808 you are too kind. I think Chase was dying to kiss her anyway and once he got started he really wanted to keep kissing her. I guess she didn't tell anyone because she's not use to having people care about her. I think she's going to have a hard time accepting Chase actually likes her especially with his southern flirting ass. Thank you for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Heartless808 Signed
Date: August 27 2014

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- November

I'm really lovin this story so far. I like how Maya is such a contrast from Kat. kat seems more confident and maya seems a little unsure of herself which I don't understand why cuz in the cast pics she's freakin gorgeous and her personality seems so sweet. I can see chase has taken a liking to her and she likes him as well oh man does  she like him. Thank god he's getting a divorce!And I just wanted to say even though I'm sure I never left a review for making it hard for me  I have always read your updates and loved the story. In the future I will try to comment.good job girl and please please  update i really like this 



Author's Response:

Heartless808, that is soo sweet! Thank you so much for reading my stories, I appreciate it immensely. In upcoming chapters we'll find out why she's so unsure of herself. I was soo happy Chase finally got rid of Angie, that was a big relief. Thank you sooo much for reading and reviewing :-)

Reviewer: Heartless808 Signed
Date: August 12 2014

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4- December Part 3

YAAAAAAY! an update! this chapter was so goooooood! her mother was a cracked out psycho. i feel so bad for maya the only memory she has of her mother is her walking the streets and stabbing her with a knife. man, this girl has been through so much shit. but im so glad chase is there for her and the fact that he realized he loves her i was like awwwwwwwwwwwww. i did a happy dance when he left that other girl. maya really needs someone there for her especially since her dad died. omg whats gonna happen with her and chase next chapter you cant leave me hanging its too good girl lol i love this story! and good job



Author's Response:

Ahhhh! I'm so glad you liked it! Maya has been through a lot and she does need Chase there for her to help her realize what a beautiful person she is. I am soo happy he figured out he loves her, now what will he do with that realization? We'll find out next chapter.  Thank you for your review it really motivates me to continue working on the next chapter and hopefully have it out by next week. Thanks for reading Heartless808!

Reviewer: Heartless808 Signed
Date: September 16 2014

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.