Penname: Gordana [Contact]

Real name: Gordana

Member Since: June 18 2013

Membership status: Member

Bio:

>> currently living in Australia <<


Hey y'all. I'm probably one of the biggest INTERRACIAL ROMANCE fiction fans in the world... i love it... I honestly think it's an obsession... everytime i see a IR couple walking around, i swear my heart just leaps hahaha yeah i'm that creepy girl who just smiles at a couple that are walking by hahahaha 


i also love non IR! like i have NO problems with non interracial novels since i read them daily. but when i find an interracial read (which is well written and bloody awesome) i get this weird feeling. . . MAINLY because i can picture myself as the female protagonist hahaha i mean when they describe a brunette with blue eyes ... im like 'oh ... haha she's pretty' 


but when they say black hair, brown skin... yaddayaddah... im like 'OOOHHH I SOUND SO PRETTY' lmao yes yes i know ... im a loser hahaha but yeah


MY HATRED FOR WEAK FEMALE PROTAGONISTS IS SO DAMN STRONG, I WISH THE WRITERS FEEL MY DAMN DAGGERS 


ok one thing i cannot stand about SO many freaken reads is that the female is not only clingy, she's a bloody sook and depends on the male SO much... they allow the males to tell them what to do and practically run their lives. NO NO NO! I WILL NOT READ THE BOOK IF THE FEMALE ALLOWS THE MALE TO TREAT THEM LIKE DAMN CHILDREN. 


... i kind of just went cray cray ... lmao but seriously guys please!!!! what's wrong with writing about strong females? who fight back and push the men over board?! who do not allow the men to walk all over them? who actually work for themselves rather than allowing the male to bring home the damn bacon or whatever ! 


OK so i did once again go crazy ... but just letting y'all know... im dead serious. 


ALL RANTS ASIDE... i love this website... i love reading your guys stories. it just amazes me... thank you all! to all the writers on here - YOU ARE ALL CHAMPIONS! 


i hope to one day go into a bookstore and purchase your novels :) 




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Reviews by Gordana


Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 301]
Summary:

She got the guy, the fairytale. But when complications of his new life come to light will she be strong enough to keep him?

 

***Please do not post this story to other sites. I post all my stories here with the intention of publication. I thank you all for your attention :)***



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 129
Read Count: 34242
Published: January 18 2014
Updated: March 31 2015


Title: Roxie and Griffin: Ever After

Gym= a distraction for her, so she won't be thinking about griffin... But it's also a way for her to please others in a sense. The bball wives and gfs... I don't particularly like them. I think Roxie's body was fine before she started working out... Griffin hasn't seen her yet, so he won't know the extreme of her new health kick. Of course she's going through so much right now. Who would blame her. I'd be so damn self conscious around all these slim and hot women who made it evident that she needed to work on her body... Which she doesn't! I hope griffin screams some sense into her about it... 

Uhhhh I'm so lost on what to say! Because at the same time working out is helping her not feel like crap but then it's not making it better either?! 

So fucken good seriously. 

Reviewer: Gordana Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 22 2015

Title: Roxie and Griffin: Ever After

YASSSSS BABY YASSSS YOU TAKEEEE HER! Lmaooooo 😂😂😂 I  FREAKEN LOVEEEE AGGRESSIVE GRIFF😍😍😍OHHHH MY HEART



Author's Response:

Haha! Yassssss! Love this, and thank you!

Reviewer: Gordana Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 18 2014

Title: Roxie and Griffin: Ever After

Her emotions are valid! I mean come on... Who wouldn't be insecure about that? If I saw my hot fiancé with another hot woman... Who's a bloody model... How would you not be insecure? And now that she's found the prenup it just makes matters worse. Ooohhhhh imagine if she starts ignoring his calls and shit?!!! Drammmaaaaa ! It'll probably drive him insane hahaha cannot wait for more. This was an awesome chappie 



Author's Response:

Oh Gordana I love this! So great. I admit I'd be a bit insecure too and for someone like Rox who already a has a history of insecurity? Sigh... She's got a battle ahead of her for sure. Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: Gordana Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 20 2015

Title: Roxie and Griffin: Ever After

She's pulling away !!! Ohhhhh and he can see it... I cannot wait for more!!! Omfg this is getting intense! Knowing that he's going to go insane... And he'll probably tie her down and make her talk haahah oooohhhh is another guy going to come in? Will griff get jealous? I mean I know Roxie wouldn't fall for anyone else, but what if other guys take interest in her? Fcken love it 



Author's Response:

Haha! Gordana you called it! LOL. I love your ideas here, lol. Let's see what happens... ;)

Reviewer: Gordana Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 21 2015

Title: Roxie and Griffin: Ever After

Ohhhhhhhhh noooooo this is going to make Roxie on edge EVEN MORE. To me, she is obviously freaking out over this whole rose thing but now that she knows that D is kind of seeing her, she's much more happier. 

Did he see her body properly? I honestly thought he would make a big deal out of the weight loss. A glow? She's more like slaving away in the gym... Basically to make others happier. She was happy before with her body... But being around those women clearly doesn't make things easier. I really don't want griffin to be so passive. I love how much he loves and adores her, but I really want him to tell her up straight and to not allow her to beat around the bush. They don't move from that point. 

It's so sad knowing that she's going to be thinking about this prenup... He'll realise it soon when she becomes distant. I mean he had a little taste of that, and he sure didn't appreciate it lol

i love it so much. I cannot wait for more. Rich is a bloody ass who I hope Roxie dobs on. OMFG CAN SHE PLEASE TELL TROY ABOUT THAT STUPID BITCH?!!! I HATE HOW MUCH OF A PUSH OVER SHE CAN BE... but I don't blame her... Some people are built differently. BUT I would really like to see her become that vixen again... And take no shit from anyone 

P.s Roxie please make griffin go insane lmao 

Reviewer: Gordana Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 28 2015

Title: Roxie and Griffin: Ever After

YEAHHHHH POPS IS TELLING YOU TO OPENNNN YOUR EYESSSS AND SEE HOW DIFFERENT SHE IS! She's lost a shit load of weight, and I don't think he realises how much. She's also faking a lot of emotions... And his dad can see she's unhappy as helllll. I think there's going to be one hell of a blow out. Griffin will see soon I think. Next time he sees her, he'll see. And the signing of the prenup... OMG. 

Fucken loved it xxxx

Reviewer: Gordana Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 04 2015

Title: Roxie and Griffin: Ever After

So basically you made me tear up like a little sook lmao These past few chapters have been pretty much an emotional rollercoaster... but most definitely with roxie. She really really doesnt want to believe that she has an actual issue. I have never been angry at Roxie... but i couldnt help but want to smack her a little bit in this chapter.

You realize why Griff is so passive in this relationship. He never wants to hurt her feelings or break her spirit EVEN if he's right. He puts blame on himself constantly for her problems which is so noble and loving of him... I just felt that Roxie is seriously not going to come around until Griffin puts his foot down and makes her actually listen. In their conversation, he basically poured his heart and blamed himself for the issues... and she basically saw HERSELF as the issue. She is in denial... like MAJOR INDENIAL. Griffin is the only one who can get across to her to see it... and that's why I hope he kind of goes ape shit in the next chapter. He is so giving, and these two chapters showed how much he truly loves her. She barely eats and old roxie always ate. I hate that she hangs with the bball wives and girlfriends... They are not good influences. Nor is that stupid hoe who works for troy. i hope he fires her ass. I actually loved that she jumped through the window lmao I probably would've done the same thing. He probably broke down the door.

My prediction... and hope... is that griffin goes ape shit lmao She wouldnt expect it because he is so loving and so damn caring. I think that he'll find her and just go insane. He'll hopefully make her listen to him. I hope she sees what he sees...

FUCKEN LOVED IT!!

excuse my french lmao p.s he'll probably go freaky on that ass when he catches her ;) hahahahaha



Author's Response:

Please don't apologize for any of this because every bit of it was seriously the best thing ever! You got me in tears! Haha. I love this Gordana! Your feedback is great!things are going to get really emotional here, but I am known for my HEAs ;) Thanks again for this!

Reviewer: Gordana Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 09 2015

Title: Roxie and Griffin: Ever After

I honestly hope griffin puts his foot down. I really hope he doesn't back down ! Because they've been too passive with each other. And seeing griffin angry in the chappie before this was honestly really good. He really needs to show her. 

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Date: February 12 2015

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 40]
Summary:

Illyana is a young wolf during an age of lone wolves and fewer females...



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:No
Word count: 15180
Read Count: 10907
Published: March 19 2014
Updated: January 20 2015


Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

NOOOOO PLEASEEEE DONT KILL HIM OFF WAHHHHHHH

Reviewer: Gordana Signed
Date: January 13 2015

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 16]
Summary:

A tantalizing tale, told about a romantic novelist's erotic sexual healing with his late lover in 1989 Skiathos, Greece.

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:Yes
Word count: 10557
Read Count: 9298
Published: April 16 2014
Updated: July 18 2016


Title: Chapter 1: Julian Polk Notes

CHAPTER FIVE 

 

you know the julian one? pleaseeeee pleaseeeeeeeeee i love this duo SOOOOOO much !!! one happy ending pleaseeee lmfao you dont understand how much im fan girling over here. i finished my assignment not too long ago... and quickly jumped on to beg you pleaseeeeee pleaseeeee let these two be together !! lmfao i sound so crazy ... 

Reviewer: Gordana Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 30 2014

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I LOVE LOVE LOVEEEEEEE!!!!! THIS IS EXTREMELY HOTTTT!!! Julian is relentless! hahahah you can see how much he loves her! i seriously hope i end up with someone like him! he's so damn beautiful and sooooooooooooooo funny and romantic. i love how he never gets tired of her. AND she's hilarious. she is the perfect match for him. she's not a weak girl, she voices her opinions and i love it. i love the balance. 

love love love it! xxx

Reviewer: Gordana Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 21 2014

Title: Chapter 1: Julian Polk Notes

i hope and pray this story doesnt end tragically... i readd your other story... and it broke my heart... please pleaseeeee for the sake of a new fan lmaoo who loves you extremely ! pleaseeeeeeee 



Author's Response:

LOL hi! Which story? And I'm still trying to fingue out how it ends...but don't worry it won't be too tragic.

Reviewer: Gordana Signed
Date: April 21 2014

Title: Chapter 1: Julian Polk Notes

EPILOGUE 

WAHHHHHHH I FEEL LIKE CRYING!! im so sad it's over :( the ending was beautiful... the fact that they had three children together and were married for years is just amazing. i love how much he practically worshipped her, making her see her true worth. He is honestly bloody amazing. Frankie as well is such an amazing female. I was saddened by her death but I think it's good that they spent their young youthful days together. SO SO SO beautiful. i loved it. thank you thank you for not making them not happy together !! i was like YAAAASSSS hahaha i mean he ended up with the woman of his dreams and they were both on cloud nine. I do know in those times it wouldve been harder to get the medicine we have today. But i mean he's in his 50s ... so im trying to make it like he looks really old hahaha and yeah LOVED IT SO MUCH . 

Reviewer: Gordana Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 19 2014

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 120]
Summary:

Five years ago, Breezy Collins, left Baton Rouge, Louisiana and vanished without a trace leaving everything and everyone behind in order to save herself from further heartbreak from the only man she has ever loved. Breezy's sister Phoenix is the only person who knows her whereabouts but not her secrets. It's her sister's wedding that brings her back home for a week. She can only hope that she can avoid running into the man that still haunts her dreams and owns her heart.

Jace Bennett, has spent the last five years searching for something that he knows doesn't exist anymore. His Heart. He's colder and more distant. All the things that use to give him joy now only bring him misery because of her but a promise is a promise and he'll uphold his end of it no matter the cost. But when a chance encounter brings him face to face with the one woman who holds the key to his happiness, he'll do everything in his power to ensure that she never leaves him again. By any means necessary, he'll try to convince her to give him Just One More Try.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 19790
Read Count: 43926
Published: May 20 2014
Updated: September 13 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

well damn... i'd probably be waiting butt naked on the desk for him... goodness me 

LAWDDDYYYY what are you doing ?! do you understand how bad it is for me to sit here longing for a fictional character? dammit if i met jace in real life... i'd bring out my inner devil LMFAOOO be like "well hey there, less talk more action" he'd probably be like wtf... hahahaha 

OKKOKKKKK I LOVE BREEEEZZYYY ! she seems so innocent, yet you can see her fierce no bull shit side. I LOVE IT . i honestly hate submissive female characters. AND JACEEEEE OHHH LORDDDD Jace! he seems so ... primal .. so alpha-male like. it makes me go crazy hahaha like he seems like the type to be so possessive and jealous ... yuummmmyyy 

but whats better is that she seems like she can put him in his place when the time is right. like the end of the recent chapter, i think he won hahaah only because they both know of the history they have together... i think she has the power in the end !!! power of the vagina ! 

ahahahhaah 

ok ok i'll stop. 

loveddddddddddd it 



Author's Response:

LOL!!!! You are most awesomely a breath of fresh air. Thank you sooo much for reading my story. Jace is very much a Alpha male and very possessive. He is so sexy and awesome. But fear not, Breezy can most difinitely give him a run for his damn money. Her innocence is equally matched by her strong will.

As the next few chapters progress, you will see who these two really are. Where they come from and what it is that drives them. Jace has made some mistakes and everything that he has done up until this point has been to correct those mistakes.

So stick with me and enjoy the ride. It's gonna be a hot and exciting one.

Your review has made my day!!!

Reviewer: Gordana Signed
Date: June 19 2014

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

CHAPTER 4

OOOOOOOHHHHHH he in troubleeeeee lmaoooo I love Jace and his crazy possessive ass ahahhah he's seriously still crazily in love with her. So passionate. Who wouldn't feel for him? I'd be just as crazy in all honesty. But she deserves the best and I think he's it!

DAMMMMNNN HE HAS AN EX WIFE???!!!

yep. i'd feel the same if I was in Breezy's position. Imagine that- the man who you loved so passionately but had to escape, is standing here trying to once again get back into your life, and then BAM! his "wife" and her PREGNANT self comes walking through the door. I think she handled herself pretty good hahahah i'd be cold as fuck if i were her. She's not a push over in which i loveeee. I hate it when they create weak submissive females. And i love the sort of balance? like yeah he makes her weak but she has the same effect ;)

cant wait for more! so good !!!! go breezy!!! make him go crazyyy lmfao



Author's Response:

Reviewer: Gordana Signed
Date: June 30 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 33]
Summary:

Forbidden Fruit

Magdalena was the only daughter of Ezra, the Great. She was the fruit that was never to sampled until an Alpha won her hand in the competition that was to be held at her 18th moon.  Now with her festival for her birthday about to start, who will win the right to claim her?

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Drama, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 15365
Read Count: 6989
Published: May 24 2014
Updated: July 13 2015


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Team Maddox!!! I seriously think they're mates. I think she'll realise soon! I also LOVEE alexi but just not for her. Does she have any ebony beautiful cousins? One that could match him? Hahaha as you can see I love interracial 😍😍 but seriously Maddox is amazeballssss with his bold statements and hot and bothered looks. Maybe he already knows that they're mates ? That's why he's so calm? Like he is sooooo calm. He's just always watching her which is so hot, her wolf reacts well to him ;) 

loved it ! New fan! Defffssssss can't wait for more xx



Author's Response:

I definitely can write a squeal for Alexi because he does deserve love too, lol. And she does have a lot of family I think that I can definitely introduce some of them in this story if I remember. And about Maddox just wait and see.

Reviewer: Gordana Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 02 2015

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

MADDOX IS HER MATE!!!AHHHHH YASSSS GET ON THAT LMAO

Reviewer: Gordana Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 15 2015

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Summary:

In a world built on blood and violence, where the merciless thrive, falling in love carries with it its own special set of risks.  Never was that truer than for Carter Gerring, an electronics expert with a unique skill-set.  Carter is hired by Larry Hooks, a ruthless underworld kingpin with a number of potential legal problems he wants to disappear.  While eliminating the various forms of incrimination Hooks and his men create, Carter finds himself falling for the boss’s daughter.

 Tamryn Hooks is the much-loved daughter Larry Hooks would gladly kill to protect.  For most of her life, she’s been shielded from many of the harsh realities of her father’s business.  Then, a seemingly innocent favor for her doting father places her in the middle of an impossible situation she sees no way out of.  As Tamryn searches for a solution and an escape, her dilemma is further complicated by an ongoing feud with her sister and her deepening feelings for Carter, the unassuming intellectual with a dark reputation.   

 When Carter and Tamryn find themselves entrenched in the mire of her father’s criminal enterprise, the secrets they and others keep, and their need for one another, will their forbidden love be their saving grace?  Or will it be the Achilles’ heel that ultimately leads to their demise? 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 70686
Read Count: 14883
Published: June 06 2014
Updated: February 01 2015


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

CHAPTER FOUR *NEW FAN ALERT ALERT*

OMFGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG this is really dark and emotional and freaken awesome!

First of all- i love your main female character Tamryn. We dont fully know her yet, but I love the person you've portrayed her to be. my heart aches for her... you can see how much she loves and cares for Carter, even though she knows she cant. I feel like her life is so controlled on so many levels, that she's going to snap soon. Her dad... i find him so cunning. I mean who can be so ... mobster like and be all 'no bullshit' YET at the same time, full act like a gentleman who is in love with his wife who he is or isnt with? He confuses me the most i must say. I hate how he wont let Tamryn choose who she wants to be with. I would love for her to be with Carter! well not right now ... since he's not in me good book until he treats her like a queen that she is ! lmfao OOOOOOH i got so mad when he shoved her so hard. I was like "OOOOH YOU BETTER NOT GO BACK TO HIM!!!" LMFAO i wanted her to stand up for herself and she did... when she chose to ignore him and shit. I think she's stronger than her sister personally... but she hasnt shown it. I hope she makes carter beg... lmfao She deserves the best, and if there's another guy who shows her interest... maybe that would set carter off lmfaoooooo i loveeee when they go cray cray and the girl is like zzzzzz hahahah

Larry doesnt "spoil" Shauna. that is literally an understatement. He seriously over does it and it annoys the crap out of me ! Like yeah the little bitch wants carter, but clearly the boy doesnt want her! goodness meeeeee

shauna is the WORST MOST EVIL DEMONS SPAWN FUCKEN WITCH BITCH SHIT i've ever heard of. i hateeeeee her!! omfgggg she is pure evil. If she were my sister... ohhhhh shit would go downnn! hahahahah I hate how she treats tam :( she's so evil and is a little bitch who is so jealous and crazy. This is what makes me so happy about the whole carter situation. She wants him so badly, but he doesnt even like her.

carter ... well you havent gained any points back yet. I do ship you and tam ... i call you TAMER ... hahahahah anywho it's not easy ... because her dad is a bloody psycho but try your hardest to make him see that you aint going with that hoe shauna. I hope he saves tam ...

I FUCKEN LOVE THIS !!! WHOOOO HOOOOO !! more carter and tam pleaseeeee ! even if it's just them arguing lmao i'll love you forever and ever hahaha xxx



Author's Response:

Thanks for the thoroughly entertaining review, Gordana!  I could feel your enthusiasm for the story while reading it, and it did my little writing addicted heart good.

Larry is a man with many faces.  His love for the women in his life is probably is only and greatest weakness, especially Shauna.  He does whatever is necessary to protect Tamryn but indulges Shauna--sometimes to her detriment and others.  But I wouldn't assume his plans to help her get Carter are as altruistic as they might seem just yet.  

You will definitely get more Carter and Tamryn in future chapters.  I'm glad you'll take them any way you can get them, because I'm not sure what readers will want to see happen between them after they read the next chapter and meet Tamryn's rescuer (an unknown male by majority vote).  Stay tuned...

Thanks for reading, reviewing, and voting!

Reviewer: Gordana Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 22 2014

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

SAYY NOOOOO!!! NOOOOOO TO THE HOEEEE!!! if he says no then it'll stay the same!! but if he says YES, and he is in love with tamryn... oh my goodness shit will be horrible. She'll be beyondddd crushed!! i mean i almost cried in this chapter lmao their forbidden love hurts my heart so much . it's so sad and tormenting the fact that they have to do all this shit to make sure they stay alive. I really want Carter to beg TAM ... i really want to see him all upset over her and hurting. wanting something so badly. I mean seven longgg months of waiting, only to be stopped once again by the stupid hoe SHAUNA . goodness me. PLEASEEEEE DONT LET THEM BE INVOLVEDDDDD!!!

it'll crushhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh tam :'(

Reviewer: Gordana Signed
Date: July 21 2014

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

WHAT. HAVE. YOU. DONE. TO. ME?!

WOWWSERSSS!! I WOULDNT OF EVER GUESSED THAT TO HAPPEN!!! Damn girl you sure got me good! i'm so happy !! He's undercover?!!! DAYUMMM !! carter or whatever name he goes under is soooooooooooooo amazingly sexy, and now just got 82931928294 x better. Knowing now that he has fallen for Tamryn... it's sooooo bloody heartbreaking watching the two, dance around each other. Now I see why he could never be with her (like his reason) because they are at opposite ends of this war.

I think she will react coldly towards him, and find this a betrayal... She would never sell him out like Shauna the whore would, because her heart is pure and she is NOT her fathers daughter. She is her own person. And she is someone who wouldnt do that to someone she has fallen for deeply, EVEN though he has been keeping a HUGE secret from her. Her reaction will be his undoing... he hasnt fully came out to her yet, but in this chapter he told her "We move forward from here.  No going back.” And i totally believe him. She said to him that she knows he's not using her to get to her father, but will this change her mind? I am beyond happy that you've brought this in !! ahhhhhh he's soooooo fucken smart lmao His raw feelings for her, and her feelings for him... makes me want to curl up in a ball and cry lmao because i think he loves her so much that he doesnt want to put her in danger by acting on it. BUT they've been dancing for too long, and now they just wanna be together :') hahahaha i cannot wait to read their scenes together as a couple!! i so badly cannot wait for the arguments and shit lmao

I'M SO HAPPY HE IS WORKING WITH AARON !! OMGG this made me extremely happy !! hahaha

THE HOE HAS GOT TO GO!! I dont want her completely out of the picture, but honestly i hope Tamryn fights back. I died from happiness when carter shamed her the fuck out ! SHAME HOE ! HE DONT WANT THAT USED STANK PUSSY ! HAHAHAHAHA honestly i hope the dad finds out that it was her!!! pleaseeeeee i need someone to make her regret her actions !!!

AND FINALLY I JUST LOVE THIS SO FREAKEN MUCH YOU MAKE ME SO HAPPYYYY WHENEVER I READ THIS !! HAAHAH LOVEEEE ITTTTT



Author's Response:

Your reviews are so passionate and entertaining.  I love it.  The beginning of what could be Shauna's end will be revealed next chapter.  And you will get to see Carter and Tamryn together as a couple, along with lots of other developments.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Gordana!!!

Reviewer: Gordana Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 09 2014

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

GO with Carter! i think it'll give her time to actually let off steam... to put HIM in his place. Make sure he knows how she feels... i mean i'd want to be able to let it alllllllllll out. The two are mad for each other, but under the circumstances, it's literally like forbidden love. I really want her to be mad at him and make him feel like shit lol but then they can go and be all horny and shit hahahahah

AAROONNNN!!! ok so at first i was like YASSSSS!! GO WITH HIM FOR NOW !! but then when i continued to read, and realised aaron is a taken man? i was like NO. The one thing i dislike are cheaters and abusers. And he unfortunately is cheating on his fiance EMOTIONALLY. I was like WAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH !! because he is honestly amazingggg! and im pretty sure he and his fiance wont last... because their relationship changed once they moved in together. I mean what will happen when they get married? they will be forever stuck with each other. He is so protective and caring. I love how skilled he is. It's so amazing how these amazingly talented and strong fighters are so smitten by Tam. You'd honestly think they'd go for her whore of a sister -_- who i hope gets a beat down by tam. AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH AND WILLIAM LEVI IS FUCKEN AMAZINGGGG!! I DONT KNOW HOW TAM KEPT HER PANTIES ON HHAHAHAAH

jokes jokes carter all the way

but i do think he should suffer a little ... i mean come on... i really want to see a jealous carter lmao

Larry ... is seriously crazy. I dont understand him... he is one hell of a cold mofo but his weakness is most defffff his family. I just dont understand how he cant see how much of a trouble Shauna is? she is horrible and literally the devil.

Carter ... i loved how it showed how much panic and how much he freaken cares for her. He wants that whole life with her ! it makes me go insane thinking about it. He really really wants to be with her but he knows that their chances of being together is like 1% lmao I just dont understand why Larry wont allow others to date tam... come on man ... give carter a chance. . . lol and i loveeee how he made larry second guess himself. it was pure genius. I FUCKING SMILEEDDD SO MUCH when i read how he couldnt bring up her name or anything because his feelings would show ! and also how he hasnt seen her for a while- he believes its been too long! loveeeee it

and tam. I feel so sorry for her honestly. She has been dragged into this life and had no say in it whatsoever. She has a devil sister who seriously needs a hiding, a father who is the devil's sidekick and a man who she loves but cant do so because of his chosen lifestyle, dad wouldnt allow it, he is a freaken hard ass who hurt her, made her mad as hell and now shes ignoring him (WHICH IS FREAKEN GOOD)and not only will her dad kill him, her sister would be after her. The reason why i say the dad is the devils sidekick is because he has a soft spot somewhere in that cold heart of his. shauna has none. She thinks only about herself and wants her sister dead. She is pure evil

So my vote is for her to go with carter ONLY because it gives them alone time- time for her to make him feel like shit, make him jealous and go crazy AND THEN have make up sex hahhahahahahhaha OR AS CARTER SAID MAKE LOVEEEEE

i just think he needs to learn... that time when he shoved her... and she was like hellllll no... i was cheering her on. I think she is right to ignore him and make him feel little.

if not carter... then on her own? it'll still give carter time to see her... so she can punch him in the face

HAHAHAHHA

LOVED IT. CANNOT POSSIBLY WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER



Author's Response:

Thanks Gordana! Your reviews deserve previews and popcorn.

I don't know if Aaron has crossed the line into emotional infidelity yet.  I don't consider it cheating until inappropriate feelings are entertained or acted upon.  After all, you can't help what you feel, only what you dwell on and do.  I guess you could say he's crossed the line by staying on as her contact after realizing he cares more than he should.  But asking her to be reassigned would be disastrous for her.

Carter's and Aaron's attraction defies the odds in Tamryns favor, or maybe not.  Most men love to feel needed and to be a hero.  Tamryn provides that, even if unintentionally.  Shauna doesn't, but Gunner still wants her in some form or fashion.  Different strokes...  Aaron seems to care about Tamryn because he feels the need to protect her while Carter feels the need to protect her because he cares.  We'll see which prevails. 

The reunion between Carter and Tamryn is not likely to be a happy one, but I don't know how much fight she'll give him considering someone's after her he's taken on the responsibility and the risk of protecting her.  We'll see...

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Gordana!!!  So glad you're enjoying the story.

Reviewer: Gordana Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 08 2014

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

chapter 5- continued

and also ! I really want to see carter and aaron meet. Or somehow find out about aaron. Because then he'll realise that he has major competition and this is what he gets for getting with her damn sister... even if he didnt want to. WAIT (he did right? i mean before the time he pushed tam out? )

Larry needs to see how crazy Shauna is. I really want to see his reaction when he realises that it was his own daughter who dared to do that to his little tammy.

I cant wait to see Carters face either though... because he will see it as someone else trying to take what is his lol Aaron as much as im starting to love you, i only want you as her friend, an older brother kind of? but for now... stick around and make carter think twiceeeee about letting Tammy go far lmaoooo

OOOH ONE MORE THING - I FREAKEN WANT TO SEE SHAUNAS REACTION TO THIS!! AHAAHAHHAHA OOOHHHH BITCH IS GOING TO GO INSANEEE!! HAHAHAHA SHAMEEE BITCH!!! sorry ... the hate for shauna is realllllll.

Carter better tell Larry how much he doesnt want Shauna... or i'll start shipping aaron with her. .. or someone else lmao



Author's Response:

Lol.  I love your continuations. 

Carter was never with Shauna before the night her threw Tam out.  But what happend that night has yet to be revealed.  And your wish to see Shauna's reaction to Tam going with Carter will be granted.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Gordana!

Reviewer: Gordana Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 08 2014

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I honestly hope the dad doesnt try to kill carter... I really see a little bit of hope in him accepting it. I think he loves Tammy enough to allow her that happiness. but then again... her mum did say to her to end it or else her father would end carter's life which is sooooo sad and heart breaking. I can see tam leaving carter just to save his life, but i highly doubt carter would ever allow her to.

Shauna ... needs to go. I hate that she's still in the picture. She is the devil and she has no problem in showing it.

Carterrrrrrr oh how i love you! he has now basically told her he isnt letting her go even if it means fighting against her dad! i can imagine him breaking down at the thought of her leaving him. I think he is much more dangerous than he puts out to be. I really cannot wait to see more of the two of them.

I love how her mum didnt disapprove of it! the only reason she said for them not to stay together was because she knows what her husband (?) is capable of which is so bad. PLEASEEE DONT ALLOW ANYONE TO GET BETWEEN THEM!! 

i loveeee it!! so freaken amazing! so so so good xxxx

i predict shauna getting caught out by her dad... or her sister actually standing up for herself. ummmmm i really hope that carter and tam have more scenes togetherxxx



Author's Response:

Larry accepting Carter as Tam's mate is pretty much a no go.  Him accepting Aaron was a miracle, and he's not involved in the life.  That and Hooks has plans up his sleeve.

Shauna's reign of terror will come to a close.  The only question is how and when.

Carter is dangerous and determined to have Tam.  But even he has his limits.  She just may push him to them with this Aaron situation. 

I can't make any promises about people or situations not coming between them, but I can say you haven't seen the last of Carter and Tam together. 

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Gordana!

Reviewer: Gordana Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 02 2015

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Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

Zoey Vance woke up in the hospital with no memory of her life before that moment. She doesn't even know her own name. Now she has to try and put the pieces of her life back together with the help of the man who hit her with his car that fateful night. As her memories start to return she wonders if she is better off not knowing who she really is. 

Brian Preston is consumed with guilt, the woman just ran out into the street with no warning. He coudln't avoid hitting her. He feels it is his personal responsibility to care for her until she can care for herself and moves her in with him and his fiance, Macy. As time wears on he starts to wonder if he wants her around to ease his guilt or if there aren't bigger emotions at play.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 33
Completed:Yes
Word count: 77720
Read Count: 103525
Published: July 19 2014
Updated: October 14 2018


Title: Chapter 17: Trust Your Gut

Go Brian go!!! Wahhhh their hearts are in it. I feel like crying for both. She's so confused and Brian come on mannnnn. Figure it out. Leave that trick. Living it and loving it lmao 

Reviewer: Gordana Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 28 2016

Title: Chapter 25: Uninvited Pt. 1

BRIAN KICK HIS ASS! She's going to remember him being an asshole but don't let him take her! Hell to the no! Omg I want to scratch his eyes out hahahah I highly doubt Brian is going to step aside so easily lmao not after that session 😉😉😉😂 SOOOO EXCITEDDDDD! Thank you for updating! It was such a good chapter. 

P.s died when Brian went ham on that whore maibitch lmao he was so close to not being a gentleman haaahah good man for not smacking the shit out of her. Henry loser pisssss off liar! 

 

...hahahaha my ship still sails!!! 



Author's Response:

Brian went through too much to just give up, hopefully we see a whole new side of him in the next few chapters. 

Reviewer: Gordana Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 05 2017

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