I fucking love you Jackson!!!!! PLEASEEEEEEE PLEASEEEE DO NOT GO BACK TO YOUR EX !!!! PLEASEEEEEEEEE!!!! 

I died a little when she started to break down and Jackson just ditched everything and went for her... But she retreated and went back to her room. I really want their relationship to grow.... I want them together 😭😭 I really hope she realises how much feelings she has for him. 

TEAM JACKSON!!! So beautiful when he just kissed her stomach, and she just cried. Bloody hell where's my Jackson at?

loved it so much!!!!! So amazing 

CHAPTER 3- CONTINUED REVIEW (SORRY DIDNT FINISH)

I believe that they have a deeper connection then what is actually shown. I reallyyyyy believe that Jackson is forming way way deeper feelings, and she just doesnt want to admit it or anything. Yes they did say they use each other for sexual pleasure, but i mean I honestly believe there is so much more to this than they lead on.

I LOVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE DONT TAKE JACKSON AWAY! I REALLY WANT TO SEE HIM ALL ANGRY AND PASSIONATE AND POSSESSIVE AND LOVING. I seriously think she has control of their... whatever it is happening between them. which i LOVEEE!! i hate when the females are set out to be submissive and little push overs. Thats why i love your characters! im reading your other story as well (WHICH IS AMAZING) and i love innocent tam is... but she takes NO SHIT from carter!

just like this amazing female! i LOVEEE YOUR WORK !

OMG.... He's seriously one of those hot guys who are sooooo nice but are freaks in bed. Which is sooooo fucken hot. I'm so serious when I say ... Dayummmmm. His dirty talk was ... So on point. He sureeeee would like to eat that cake hahahaha can't wait for more 

THAT GIRL ISNT YOUR BESTFRIEND!! SHE IS A LOSEERRRRR WHO IS OBSESSED WITH A GUY WHO WOULDNT GIVE HER A SECOND GLANCE. I'm already so freaken into this!! Soooo good :D Darren is crazy but in a very hot way. I love how she didn't back down!!! Good girl! I really dislike it when they make the girl so weak and so obedient! This chick is anything but that hahaah I freaken loveeee

GOD MOST DEFINITELY GAVE YOU STYLE! how is it possible that i feel so emotional over this one chapter? as if you've led me through this long journey when it's barely begun? I honestly want to say how much i fucken love this chapter and this story! PLEASEEEE PLEASEEEE continue to update and give me more fuel for my already built love for both of your main characters! I love how aria is back home... i mean you can see the happiness in her sister and mum's face. It is so beautiful!

Aria is a beautiful person who has a beautiful soul. I feel so sad and upset for her... i mean yes she was the one to make the decision to leave and yes the 15 years of pure hell was indeed her punishment ... but seeing how hurt and distraught she still is? really did make me feel so sorry for her. will we ever get to see her drunk and letting loose? ;) i'd loveeeee to see his reaction lmao

for justin... my goodness he must've loved her something beyond human measures. He was never over her, and how he waited? fuck so many women would kill to have a man like that. who loved unconditionally. who cherished her like a queen. who waited her every move. who loved without restrictions or restraint. Obviously his anger and pent up resentment was right since she never once gave him that closure he needed and craved for 15 long years! he loved her so much that even though she left him broken, he still worried for her safety.

one thing i cant wait to see... is a territorial justin lmao he seems like a passionate lover. which is a HUGE YES! a passionate, territorial lover. i think now that she's back in town... it'll be difficult to not want her. I hope she stays... and kind of just tries not to pay him attention lmao NOT IN A BAD WAY but in a way that makes her able to avoid being hurt by seeing him with someone else you know?

i fucken love their obvious chemistry and connection... their love when they were younger was pure. very rare to find.

PLEASE DONT LEAVE ME HANGING FOR LONGGGG!! I LOVEEEEE THIS SO MUCH!!! SO FUCKEN AWESOME!

No don't end it here pleaseeeeeeeeee

NEW FAN ALERT!! OMGGGG SERIOUSLY THIS IS AMAZINGLY HEART ACHING! I almost cried to be honest lmao my heart truly aches for Lyssa. I beg of you, please dont allow her to go back to him so easily. I love how she fought back and truly never backed down. She went in and began to soothe his beast, who seems to love and miss her so much. I feel so sorry for her :( She is seriously running away, but what kind of life is that? like she said: when will it end?

i honestly dont think he would give up on her and i hope and pray that he doesnt. He is her true mate, but he is now mated to another. When he said that thing about his dad??? like how he explained to him that his WOLF found someone who could give him a pup, it did make me feel so much better, knowing that it wasnt his fault or doing. but it still doesnt make up for the fact that she is now broken over this.

I know that he is heart broken and is aching for her too... but he wouldnt understand the pain SHE felt when he mated another and also bore a baby to someone other than herself. That would've killed me. And for him to expect her to sit around and welcome him into her bed and heart again? i think that is selfish. She has be dragged through hell. And look now? She is welcoming her first death against her own uncle's decree! she is looking for a way to break the bond and to end her constant heart ache and misery. I love how persistent he is, and how he has placed so many people out there to seek her. In the end, it'll all come down to the two of them facing off i think. that's the only way she can go back. He is the only one strong enough to take her on. OR the vampires will go to her... even her uncle might call to her. I dont know but im just glad she's putting up an amazing fight.

summary- basically i want him to suffer some more lmao i really want to see her happy pleaseeee!!! as in can silver head wolf meet with her or something? can she meet a new friend? i also cant wait to see alpha male all hot and bothered! and territorial over her! that would be so hot.

sorry for the long comment ! but im a new fan!!! and i cannot wait for more!!!

p.s that last bit killed me... her running from him and beginning to block him out, whilst he cries out and chases her through the barriers... so heart breaking ughhh loved it

Go shyla! You're crazy and ballsy but I love you for it! Hahahahaha Matt sure will feel like shit soon and I hope he comes begging!

"Marisol IS my first love" - BRANDON I COULF FLY KICK YOU THROUGH THE PHONE! Does he understand how loyal and loving and beautifully caring Di is? Does he understand that she is one in a billion ?! Girl I love Brandon but right this moment, I would've walked and made him bury himself in his feelings. She is all for him and unfortunately until he stops hitting in to Marisol the hoes life and being her knight in shining armour, Di will leave him. I honestly hope she kicks off and runs- he'll lose his mind without her and quite frankly, he needs to. He loves her and all but she's right. He just drops everything and goes to Marisol's rescue! 

Shes a better woman than me lmao I wouldn't of gone home and let him panic and stay away going crazy. 

PLEASE YOU CANT LEAVE ME WITH THIS CLIFF HANGERRRR

LOVED IT THANK YOU

You love to break my heart into little pieces dont you? 

i hated thinking about how much this stupid Mari-whore meant and means to Brandon. The annoying part is how right the mum is. She knows her son and knows how in love he was with her and heart broken he was after she dragged him through hell on a number of occasions. 

But 

She noted how “I’ve seen him with other girls, and…” She waved some unbidden thought or, perhaps, hesitation away, voice softening with sentiment.  “Well, with you is the happiest my sweet boy’s ever been.”

I love that she made effort to try and explain to Diya that her son has never been happier with anyone... She could see how much this had already affected her and wanted to comfort her. 

I honestly want Diya to take some time away... dont even tell him. I think she needs to have some alone time because she is heart broken. How would Brandon feel if she was constantly dropping everything to go help out a male friend everytime he called? How would he feel if she was continuously choosing this male friend without even realising it
? 

Brandon also needs to see how much he loves and cares for Diya without her being there. He needs to see that he cannot always go running to Marisols aid. Diya is a queen and will not come second to anyone. 

i really want Diya to stand strong ... i LOVE and definitely ship them together of course! but! i want her to have to go away and clear her mind. Make him realise his own mistakes. Marisol needs to go. 

LOVED IT!!!! ALWAYS CHECKING FOR YOUR UPDATES!!! PLEASE tell me if there is somewhere to buy this book and i will hahaha love love love! thank you always! 

This chapter is just heart wrenching! She's obviously feeling disgusted and so affected by what just happened- the one person she didn't want to know was waiting for her. It kills me that Brandon obviously didn't know what happened and kept pushing, thinking it was something he could help her with. 

But... nothing he could've done would've helped besides him not being there. Like he said in the end of this chapter- he couldn't/wouldn't leave her. So she left. 

I feel so so so devastated for her. This would be sooooo horrific to deal with. Once again instead of communicating, silence was all they knew for a whole week! They really really need to work on this. Questioning her about her whereabouts? Are you out of your damn mind?! You DIDNT check up on her! You go around with your "friend" who is trash by the way! And think it's ok? Nah! 

AND of course MARI-WHORE AGAIN?!!her brats too zzz honestly can't feel for them 👀 (I swear I'm not a hater on kids lmao) I can only cheer on the sideline for so long before I just put down these damn Pom poms! (As in ive been rooting for Brandon Hahahaha) I really really reallyyyyy hope he opens his damn eyes. 

This is the time for him to bloody realise that she can walk out on him and not look back. Is that the life he wants? One without her? NOPE! So he needs to BEG AND GET OPEN YA EYES! She is basically almost out the door in this relationship and if he doesn't stop with this Marisol shit, then prepare to lose her. BECAUSE I DONT THINK YOU'LL COPE WELL MATE!!! 

Breathhhhhhheeeeereeee innnnnn!! Hahahahahahaha so sorry so much pent up anger lmao I really really want them to end up together- but my girl is so hurt right now. He needs to act... fast. 

I LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS! I literally check daily for your updates!!! SUCH A HUGE FAN!!! If you ever publish any of your work, please let me know. I will support 100%!! LOVE! And thank you so much for the heart wrenching update! Loved it ��

You don't understand how fast I clicked when I saw this update!!  

Diya, my girl definitely needs to heal. Time away from everyone, from her family and from Brandon will do her good. 

It's traumatic what she went through and I know she'll get through this, but she definitely needs time. Her sisters and dad are just deadbeats I can't stand them. Seriously I wanted to jump through the screen and fight her lol 

Manny is being her support system and I'm happy he's there for her- but I definitely don't want them together romantically... our girl needs to heal. 

Brandon... I know everyone wants her to ditch him - which at this time, I think she should remain apart - but I think they need to deal with their demons first before they can ever be happy together. He deserves the hate right now no lie

They NEED to actually talk and HEAR each other, but Diya needs to rip Brandon a new one. She isn't guilty- she never cheated. Homeboy however, kept this HUGE piece of info away from her. I don't think he should be forgiven so easily. 

But- I definitely do hope they're endgame after they've healed. I just want her to be happy and also Brandon but Marisol needs to go. 

Such a huge fan!! Legit love love love!

I can't wait for the update!!!