Penname: Michmom2 [Contact]

Real name: Krista

Member Since: June 30 2013

Membership status: Member

Bio: Love to read and watch Sci-Fi, Paramormal and Romance stories.  


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COLORLESS by marchpisces92
Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

 Camille Jackson was rejected since birth over her dark skin complexion. She has grown a tough skin and doesn’t get attached to anyone because of how some people have viewed her without even getting to know her. However Camille opens her heart to a baby in need and for the first six months Camille has grown to love the baby as if she were her own. That is until the baby's biological father comes into the picture.

Hiram Whitfield Jr was brought up in one of the most well known Ku Klux Klan families in the south and as the only son he feels the pressure to carry on his family's tradition. After finishing his prison sentence all Hiram wants to do is change his life for the better and be a good father to his child. If that means being disowned by his bigoted family then so be it. Ironically enough Hiram would have never thought that Camille would be the one to be his rock and strength to do so.

 

 



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Inspirational
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 51
Completed:Yes
Word count: 107887
Read Count: 215323
Published: October 09 2014
Updated: October 25 2015

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Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 39

Love this family. I'm so glad they are all safe and happy.

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Date: August 14 2015
Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 40

I'm so happy for them. Such a great story. 

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Date: August 20 2015
Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 41

So good.  Those mean ass old hags....I just can't stand them

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Date: September 25 2015
Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 42

Great chapter, sad but necessary for Savvy to hear those things.

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Date: September 29 2015
Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 45

Oh I'm crying.  It was perfect. Those Baxters are a mean bunch, even the grandkids.  It's terrible and not one of them feels bad fir Camille or thinks differently! So sad.

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Date: October 14 2015
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Adaline:The Silent by sha2011
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 286]
Summary:

SEQUEL to Sasha: the Wallflower. Adaline Lang is an up and coming photographer with more than her own set of problems. During her cousin's wedding she comes face-to-face with the man that she had fallen in love with as a child. Only to find out he was in love with someone else. What will she do to finally be heard and convince him that the perfect women he has been looking for is standing right in front of him?

Dominic Vikhrov is caught between a rock and a hard place. The woman he has fawned after for so many years has finally returned to the United States. But he isn't the only one who is fighting for her heart. Never one to lose, Dominic has his eye on the prize no matter the cost. But will his tunnel vision blind him to something even greater?



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:No
Word count: 37246
Read Count: 40809
Published: October 24 2014
Updated: November 20 2015

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Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

Loved this update. Addy feels more confident but she deserves some love too. She can be friends and hang out with Dominic. But she should date the other guy.  I think that could make Dominic jealous!!  Carla would hate it!!! Lol. But if she does end up with Dominic he'll have to choose her over Carla and Dina. He'll need to show Addy she's the one he wants!!! Ok I need more updates!!  Thanks.  :)

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Date: November 20 2015
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Love Ed Sheeran!! Hmmm...I don't think the baby is Dominic' s. Why would she be so mean to him if it is his baby?? I like that Adeline is going out trying to start a friendship/relationship with Dominic. But he's so torn up and lovesick over Dina... I just don't want her to get hurt.  Good update.

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Date: March 27 2015
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

I'm glad Dina told him because now he can move on.  Adeline is coming at the perfect time.  They are friends and can grow from that. I think she will become so important to his life and grow to love her romantically.  I do think they both will probably date around a little, but rely on each other for an emotional connection that will grow. It will probably scare him, but when he realizes what he has in Adeline I think he'll be all in!!  Love the update...can't wait to read more.

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Date: January 23 2015
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Loved this chapter.  This scene does help him turn off his feelings for Dina.  Ok so who could the father be???

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Date: April 06 2015
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Good start! That Carla is a piece of work

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Date: October 24 2014
Title: Chapter 1: Cast

Please let Addy move on. She needs to date anyway because she has no experience with it. Also Dominic is an ass right now. He deserves that Audrey chick.  Murphy seems like a good first boyfriend.  I want Adaline to be happy and Dominic is too full of himself to make anyone happy!!! How could he just stand there letting people say stupid stuff??! I'm so disappointed in him.

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Date: July 03 2015
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

Maybe Adeline needs to date Murphy. Dominic is so much more experienced and it may make him jealous. I love Dominic though but he's so hung up on Dina.  Happy about the update can't wait for the next one!!

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Date: June 13 2015
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

Good.  At least he dumped the tramp and came back to apologize.  Also I'm proud of Adaline. She told him how she felt and kissed him. Big brave move!!! He isn't ready and he doesn't deserve her yet!! Let her experience life some, then he can come begging and pining away for her! Great update. 

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Date: July 21 2015
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

Wow. Well first I'm happy you're back. Second, this chapter was insane, in a good way! Now Addy will know Dina, Dominic is gonna tell about the little daughter, and poor Sasha!! What's wrong with the baby??! Please just let her be nervous and scared.  I don't want the baby to be in danger...I'm stressed out!!

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Date: November 15 2015
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Choosey Lover by CaramelGal
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 298]
Summary:

 

Elle always played it safe. She was used to being in control. Every accomplishment in her life was meticulously planned. The only thing she didn't have reign over was her stale love life. When an old flame from a past complicated relationship comes back into her life, she soon finds out everything doesn't go as planned---and that secrets will always come to light.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 28
Completed:No
Word count: 78339
Read Count: 69611
Published: November 03 2014
Updated: March 09 2015

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Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

That was hot. Can't wait until Dean gets back.



Author's Response:

You’re not the only one. Apparently most of the other reviewers are rooting for his return too. Thanks for reviewing Michmom2.

CG

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Date: January 13 2015
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

:)   that was good and Elle' s costume was hot!!



Author's Response:

Thanks and I’m definitely a fan of that catsuit too. Thanks again for reading and reviewing Michmom2!

CG

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Date: December 09 2014
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

So glad I gave this story a chance.  It's really good.  I like how the relationship is growing between Elle and Dean, plus the flashbacks are great!! Update soon



Author's Response:

Excited to hear you like it so far! The flashbacks are the essence of Elle and Dean’s current budding relationship, so it’s great to know you’re enjoying them. I'm working on the next two chapters as we speak. Thanks for reading and reviewing Michmom2.

CG

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Date: November 20 2014
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

Wow they went downhill fast.  Obviously he's still pissed about the past and she really didn't want to acknowledge his feelings on the subject.  Of course I think they will come back from this, but it seems like it might be awhile.  Hopefully he or she won't start dating someone else in the meantime.  Good chapter.



Author's Response:

That was fast, huh? Dean definitely has some neglected sentiments about the ordeal, since Elle’s swept it under the rug for SO long. How long it'll take them to get it together will depend on Elle, since the ball is in her court. Thanks for reading and reviewing Michmom2.

CG

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Date: November 24 2014
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

Cant wait for them to talk again!!  Thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

You won’t have to wait long. I’m thinking of updating earlier than usual. Thanks in return for your enthusiasm, reading and reviewing Michmom2.

CG

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Date: December 03 2014
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

Haha, she's jealous. Good update.



Author's Response:

Yep, good and green with envy! Thanks for reading and reviewing Michmom2.

CG

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Date: December 06 2014
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

So good! I'm glad she remembered his birthday. Now she needs to apologize and get back on his good side.  I need longer chapters!! :)  great update



Author's Response:

Thanks and wow. I thought I was writing too much lol. I guess I’ll have to make them longer, huh?  Thanks for reading and reviewing Michmom2.

CG

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Date: December 12 2014
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

Why??! I guess she isn't ready, but as soon as he finds someone else she'll be crying. Oh well. Good chapter. 



Author's Response:

You know how she is! Jealously is a funny thing especially in Elle’s case. Thanks for your continued support, reading and reviewing Michmom2.

CG

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Date: December 17 2014
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

Oh I'm going crazy!!! I love Dean and Elle...they need to get it together quickly.  They've already wasted years, now they are pretending to ignore each other. Her text should of said "I miss you, if you feel the same meet me somewhere in 20mins" then let Dean come. They need to fix this and they need lots of romance.  Love the story!!



Author's Response:

Tell ‘em Michmom2! They definitely need a push in the right direction. Glad to know you love it. Thanks so much for being a devout reader and reviewer.

CG

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Date: December 20 2014
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

Pretty good, but I wish they made more progress in this chapter.  Now they'll wait until New Year's and he'll take that girl as his date and Elle will be pissed.  Then they will be avoiding each other for another 3 months.  



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Date: December 23 2014
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

Yay now we're getting somewhere!!



Author's Response:

I’m glad y’all are feeling this smedium plot twist lol. Thanks for reading and reviewing Michmom2.

CG

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Date: January 06 2015

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