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Real name: Wanda C Dixon

Member Since: April 01 2009

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Born and raised in Louisiana, presently living in San Antonio, Texas with husband and three kids. I am a big fan of all sports, NFL, MLB, NBA, track and field,  tennis you name it I will watch it. I love to read and happy to have found this site!!




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Penny with a Hole in It by intellectual titmouse
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*** This story will be removed for editing in preparation for publication. ***

Kendra Dentaris is scared of her luck. At twenty-nine, she's the head graphic designer of a popular gaming website, the brand-new owner of a gorgeous downtown condo, and independent to the bone. And she may be in a relationship that's actually going somewhere. That's if Chase McGuire would stop cheating on her.

According to her best friend Prince, he's totally going to propose. That had to be why he invited her out to a remote village out in western Pennsylvania for the weekend. But Kendra takes a wrong turn and the life she knew before literally disappears.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Friendship, Mystery, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 48
Completed:No
Word count: 51365
Read Count: 169013
Published: September 28 2010
Updated: August 25 2014

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Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Nice update.  I like Prince. Chase knows she is supposed to meet him there, I don't understand why he wouldn't check to see if something happened to her once she didn't show up.

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Date: October 11 2010
Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28

These country bumpkins aren't ignorant, Tabbie knew how to cover Dax's outburst. Kendra got the phone and it's working I'm assuming but not once on the ride back did she look at it to see what was on it in order to help her get more of her memory back. She's starting to remember, since she knew what kind of work she did, but it looks look like all she was excited about was coming back home to Deleon. I doubt Deleon really had work to do that prevented him from going to the mall with them, but was too afraid to go for fear that she would remember. Remembering means he would be losing her back to her old life with the first call from her phone or first name from her phone that she recognized. Could that be why pa didn't want to go either, he would be losing a daughter. Love this family.

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Date: January 23 2011
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

Thanks for the update. Wondering who she will eventually fall for. DeLeon is pining for her as well as Dax, but right now she seems more interested in Dax.

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Date: November 14 2010
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Hilarious how they talk to each other.

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Date: October 08 2010
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Kendra has no idea what she is going to be in for when she heals. She has three men looking at her with more than friendship on their minds and one mean lady. Great update.

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Date: October 09 2010
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Dax or DeLeon. Dax may want more but I don't think she is looking at him in that way.

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Date: October 08 2010
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

DeLeon is checking her out. Pa talks a lot but he seems like he is going to be gentle and caring with her. Great update.

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Date: October 08 2010
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

I like the pic of Deleon. Is Dax going to be a daddy or is she using him?

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Date: December 24 2010
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

Thanks for the update. Wondering who she will eventually fall for. DeLeon is pining for her as well as Dax, but right now she seems more interested in Dax.

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Date: November 14 2010
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

DeLeon is afraid to be around her because of how he is starting to feel for a complete stranger.  Everyone in town is enamored with  her. Great update.

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Date: November 13 2010
Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27

Only the beginniing, Prince. I love this family, they speak their minds.  I cracked up when both Dax and Pa told her she stinks. Love is in the air, after only 4 days.

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Date: January 10 2011
Title: Chapter 1: Intro

She doesn't seem to be all that fond of Chase. Great beginning.

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Date: October 06 2010
Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31

This is going to be a hot mess with all of them. Awesome update.

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Date: March 20 2011
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

I've always been a DeLeon fan. He is too funny, always throwing her over his shoulder. He is willing to step aside and let baby brother have her , but what about him he obviously has feelings for her as well. Who is Sammy?

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Date: December 07 2010
Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29

Maybe Cat and Sheriff Hope need to get together. Poor Deleon he is scared to death about losing her. Little does he know Ken is not tied down to anyone, so she is all but his.

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Date: January 23 2011
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

 They both want her, what is going to happen to the brotherly love for each other?

Author's Response: that'll be one of the more interesting conclusions, won't it? i'm excited too! cuz honestly, i'm not sure how this will end. these characters are a little volatile right now.

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Date: November 25 2010
Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 34

She has to be okay, this family cannot have anymore heartache.

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Date: July 10 2011
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

That's a bunch of evil ass women. Well they will not be getting the opportunity to do away with Kendra, too many people will be looking out for her and that includes their own men. With all the updates you gave us this weekend, you will not get a complaint from me this week about not having an update. Enjoy your week!

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Date: December 13 2010
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

He is the bestest. He is as perfect a gentlemen that he can be with how he grew up.  She has a whole town full of women hating on her. I crack up everytime he calls her crazy-ass. Sammy is no longer his dog, she has found himself a new owner. wonderful update.

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Date: December 13 2010
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

I cracked up when you said he carried her out of there over his shoulders. He needs a whole lot of work on how to treat a woman. Love him though.

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Date: November 29 2010
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

Dax isn't the one and neither is Prince. Sammy loves her some Kendra, this could be DeLeon's way to get closer to her, if he learns how to talk to her. Cat needs to get a hint and be gone.

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Date: December 12 2010
Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26

Even if you don't get another one to us, this one will hold me over. DeLeon is a sweetie, even with all of his roughness. Kendra will be the one to bring back the old DeLeon. Too far gone with each others bodies, to worry about protection. What will the outcome of this love-making session. Awesome update.

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Date: January 10 2011
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

DeLeon's a mess. He needs some lessons on how to treat a woman.

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Date: November 28 2010
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25

Kendra's making new firends all over the place. Sweet update. Love how protective Sammy is with her too.

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Date: January 02 2011
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24

Sounds like a plan. Thanks for the update. Happy New Year.

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Date: January 01 2011

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