Penname: bayoumomma [Contact]

Real name: Wanda C Dixon

Member Since: April 01 2009

Membership status: Member

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Born and raised in Louisiana, presently living in San Antonio, Texas with husband and three kids. I am a big fan of all sports, NFL, MLB, NBA, track and field,  tennis you name it I will watch it. I love to read and happy to have found this site!!




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Summary:

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Shenai always wanted to be with Jeremy but with so many obstacles in her way it was impossible. Now that Jeremy’s father has passed away he’s rushed the next girl that best fit his father description to the altar. Shenai sees her window of opportunity with Jeremy quickly boarding up and wants to take the nails off the boards that are going keep her away from Jeremy forever but she doesn’t have the will to do it. Shenai truly believes after Jeremy is married; her life will be over but little does she know it’s only the beginning of chaotic a life and just maybe she might get what she’s always wanted in the beginning.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Taking a short break from this story
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 19
Completed:No
Word count: 38343
Read Count: 37567
Published: April 21 2011
Updated: February 02 2014


Title: Chapter 2: Twins

I like the start of it. Why couldn't Jeremy love her the way he loved the others, after all they were friends.



Author's Response:

Thanks... 

he does love her.. 

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 22 2011

Title: Chapter 3: In the rhythm

Awesome. Tell each other, please don't go through with the wedding.



Author's Response:

Thanks... Wait and see what happens 

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Date: April 22 2011

Title: Deal With it

Good update. I hope he doesn't go through with the wedding. He has to be man enough to make his own decisions, and not let his dad who is no longer here have tha major an effect on his life.



Author's Response:

Thank you!!!

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Date: April 24 2011

Title: Chapter 5: The Best Shower Ever Taken

Hot, and Jade is no more.



Author's Response:

Thank you!!!!

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Date: April 26 2011

Title: Chapter 8: A Friend In Need

Jeremy is about to make the biggest mistake of his life. Thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

Thank you !!!

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Date: May 20 2011

Title: Chapter 10: The Wedding

She was bout to let the cat out of the bag. Poor Shenai. I woild have never agreed to do this.

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Date: July 05 2012

Title: Chapter 11: After the Reception

You're right , for me anyway, I did not like it. She sleeps with both brothers in two days, I thought she had more respect for herself. If they had grown closer overtime, that would be different, I get she was drunk, but not drunk enough to not know what she was doing.

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Date: July 05 2012

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Ellie finds herself living the life that she could only imagine in her dreams. She has graduated from college with a degree in accounting, she is with the man she loves who is just as succesful, if not more than her, and he has just asked her to marry him. What more could a girl ask for? What could go wrong? Everything begins to change once she meets his family and realizes they dont like her. Can this break up their relationship? What is she to do? What about their "family" business? Will their marraige go on? After being on top the only place left to go is down, and Ellie is sure on her way there.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Work in Progress
Series: Mafioso Series
Chapters: 28
Completed:No
Word count: 50333
Read Count: 89298
Published: May 20 2011
Updated: May 28 2014


Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 10 pt 2

Marta has no intentions of letting her go, once she gets there.

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Date: June 20 2011

Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 9

proud of her for walking away, but can she stay away? What worries me is if her life isn't already in danger, because she has  been associated with him.

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Date: June 17 2011

Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 10 pt 1

She loves him to much. I figured he would be the one to break and call her first.

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Date: June 17 2011

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 3

I don't mind them. Keep them coming. Bianca is going to cause trouble.



Author's Response:

Bianca is the type of girl that trouble follows because she causes it, though she doesnt realize she does. I think her character is going to be a lot of fun to watch her development. 

Thank you for reading! 

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Date: May 26 2011

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 5

If only mom  would come around, I doubt that will be happening anytime soon. His line of work is dangerous, so he needs to tell her soon. He wouldn't want it on his conscience if something happened to her.

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Date: May 27 2011

Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I love it. Happy that at least one side of the family will be okay, because I doubt his will be so accepting. Please continue.

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Date: May 21 2011

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Nick cannot start his marriage off with lies. He needs to come clean. I'm very suspicious of him right now, not a good vibe.

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Date: May 25 2011

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 2

I am wondering how much he loves her. It dosn't feel real to me. He has been talking rough to her since they got to his hometown.



Author's Response:

I think nick is a complicated character. He has trouble showing emotion due to what he has grown up around. I think that's why he is so messed up. His feelings for Ellie will become clearer in the coming chapters I feel. I think the audience will also be able to understand why she loves him, because right now he is coming off as a complete asshole that is not worth her time.  

There is much to come!!!!

Thank you for reading. It means so much to me :) 

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 25 2011

Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

thanks for clearing this up for me. I think he does, especially if he is bringing her home to meet the family knowing how they may react to her.

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Date: May 25 2011

Title: Chapter 5: The lombardi family pics.

I hope she has at least one of them that will be on her side.

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Date: May 26 2011

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 4

His family is a mess. No reason to be so rude, what happend to getting to know a person first? Happy he stood up for her.

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Date: May 27 2011

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 6

He has no choice but to tell her now, if not she needs to walk away. There can be no secrets.

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Date: May 29 2011

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 7

He could have told her the rest. she had better be careful or she will lose this baby. She needs to come clean as well.

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Date: June 08 2011

Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 12

Talking things over usually helps, if only thay had done that in the beginning.

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Date: July 07 2011

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Summary:

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Having chosen modeling over ministry, Jeremy Ferguson had often felt his father's scorn and disapproval.  Now he was coming home to visit and bringing the love of his life, Aura Vanderleigh who happens to be black.  Growing up in South Carolina, Jeremy knows what his father's reaction will be even if he is a minister!

 

The Preacher's Son is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2009 BRAnderson

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Racism
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2681
Read Count: 129095
Published: July 31 2011
Updated: June 02 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Facing Family

While reading the other reviews, and the mention of all your other stories, I had to see what else I was missing. I have started two others but haven't finished them yet. I've found another one to love.

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Date: October 08 2011

Title: The Preacher's Son

Bad on both sides. lol

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Date: October 08 2011

Title: The Preacher's Son

So happy mom will not be a problem, hoping dad comes around and soon. If being a minister is not what he has been called to do, then it cannot be forced upon him.

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Date: October 08 2011

Title: The Preacher's Son

She handled that beautifully. Loved how his sister embraced her.

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Date: October 08 2011

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.