Penname: rockyro [Contact]

Real name: jo polson

Member Since: July 20 2013

Membership status: Member

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just a lover of reading




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Summary:

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Natalie is finally in the collage of her dream couldnt be happier right? wrong! shes been rommed with not one but two boys ones a sweetheart and oness an asshole did i forget there russian and their bothers! what will happen will there be love between the three?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Threesome+
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 3012
Read Count: 5495
Published: July 19 2013
Updated: July 22 2013


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Hey, I love the storyline,  and where the story is going, but I have to say the writing has alot of mistakes, the grammer and the use of some words is wrong, I think it would be beneficial if you got  a beta reader to correct your mistakes.  Don't be discouraged from this reveiw because I do think that you have a good storyline

Reviewer: rockyro Signed
Date: July 21 2013

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