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*** This story will be removed for editing in preparation for publication. ***

Kendra Dentaris is scared of her luck. At twenty-nine, she's the head graphic designer of a popular gaming website, the brand-new owner of a gorgeous downtown condo, and independent to the bone. And she may be in a relationship that's actually going somewhere. That's if Chase McGuire would stop cheating on her.

According to her best friend Prince, he's totally going to propose. That had to be why he invited her out to a remote village out in western Pennsylvania for the weekend. But Kendra takes a wrong turn and the life she knew before literally disappears.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Friendship, Mystery, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 48
Completed:No
Word count: 51365
Read Count: 168992
Published: September 28 2010
Updated: August 25 2014


Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

I agree with Amy. Wow, I can see the drama coming especially if and when Prince finds her.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 10 2010

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 415]
Summary:

 

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When the lines are drawn, will you risk your life to cross them for love?

In the Summer of 1988, tragedy hits home for Charlene Jacobson and her father when her little brother is killed playing a game of basketball in their Detroit housing projects.  She soon finds herself living in the small rural town of Millersville, Georgia, with her estranged grandmother. Millersville is a place where time stands still and the racial divide is as prevalent as the 1950s.  Secrets, lies, and betrayal lurk in every corner. Yet, through it all she finds solace in the arms of Ryan Quinn, a white senior track star and the son of the town Sherriff.  

Will their love cross the finish line?  

EDIT:  Crossing the Finish line has been removed from this site and a revised version with added new content has been published on Amazon Kindle Vella (as of November 2022) under the penname, Shelly B Williams. To those of you who have left reviews, added me to your Favorite Authors and Story Alerts, and helped to make CTFL one of the Top Ten Most Favorited Stories on Valent Chamber, I trully appreciate all the support you have shown me over the years. I hope you will continue to support me as I begin the next phase of my journey as a published author. I couldn't  have done this without you. 

Much Love!

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Challenges: Deep, dark, and mysterious
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 5758
Read Count: 214681
Published: November 07 2010
Updated: January 09 2014


Title: Crossing the Finish Line

Loved the update! Wow, Ryan is in a tough spot. Why is he hanging out with a jerk like Danny??? Danny is nothing but trouble.

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Date: February 06 2011

Title: Crossing the Finish Line

Love the story so far but why is she trying to be so tough??? Yeh, I know she doesn't want to leave Detroit but....... She needs to let go of the hostility and just be herself.

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Date: November 08 2010

Title: Crossing the Finish Line

Hope Ryan gets himself together but he really needs to ditch that racist jerk Danny. He is BAD news!!!

Author's Response:

Thanks, baha_malo, for reading.  I just updated and hope you have chance to read and review.

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Date: November 11 2010

Title: Crossing the Finish Line

Wow, talk about teenage angst!! Ryan is in love. Poor Charlie, hope whatever decisions she makes doesn't cause too much drama. Hmmm, wonder what's the connection between their dads???

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Date: May 30 2011

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 90]
Summary:
 

Aurora Dupree walked into Port Charles for one reason only:  To find her biological father.  But what she got in return was something that she in a million years would have never suspected.



Table of Contents
Categories: Daytime Television, General Hospital
Characters: Original Character(s), Other
Classification: Alternate Universe, General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: La Bella Mafia
Chapters: 14
Completed:No
Word count: 22539
Read Count: 16254
Published: November 09 2010
Updated: May 06 2012


Title: Chapter 9: Acceptance

Hope she doesn't regret staying. Carly and Elizabeth have been bitches to Rory. They both need a reality check.

Author's Response:

I don't think she is going to regret it.  And Carly will eventually come around...I hope...LOL.  And Elizabeth, will probably always be a bitch.  And Aurora is going to be that person to give them both that reality check.  Thanks so much for the review!

 

-Rina

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 13 2010

Title: Chapter 3: I'm Your Daughter...

Shazam! I bet he didn't see that one coming. He was very rude to her. If he really is her dad, maybe he can make it up to her.

Author's Response:

Shazam is right!  LOL!  No one saw that one coming.  Trust me Sonny is going to have to do a LOT of groveling to get back into Rory's good graces...LOL.

 

Thanks so much for the review.  -Rina

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Date: November 09 2010

Title: Chapter 2: Intro

Liking the mysterious start. Hmmm, is that her dad???

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Date: November 09 2010

Title: Chapter 6: Appointement

Loved the update! I agree with Rory those people definitely got problems. Can't wait until the results.

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Date: November 10 2010

Title: Chapter 7: New Living Arrangements

What the heck is up with Elizabeth and Jason??? Rory needs to stay clear of them both.

Author's Response:

Hmmmm, that's a really good question.  What is wrong with them?  And I agree.  I don't Rory to be the cause of anything between Jason and Liz.  Thanks for the review.

 

-Rina

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 11 2010

Title: Chapter 10: Boredom & Threats

Hmmm, wonder who's the stranger?? He sure was scary!!!

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Date: November 17 2010

Title: Chapter 12: Close Encouter

Great update. Hmmm, looks like they're feeling each other. Good thing Elizabeth walked in when she did. Jason really needs to deal with Liz though.

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Date: November 29 2010

Title: Chapter 11: Manny Ruiz

Oh nooo, that psycho has his eye on Aurora but not in a good way. I really hope they deal with Manny and can protect Rory.

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Date: November 25 2010

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 92]
Summary:

 

 

Like A Bee To Honey

 

Ares, The Greek God of War meets Irene Hart a woman who brings fire and her own brand of peace to his life. Can he win this battle and convince Irene that he's more than a fighter and a lover but a man to keep for all eternity?

Disclaimer:All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Erotica, Family
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 29
Completed:No
Word count: 141131
Read Count: 14560
Published: November 29 2010
Updated: January 21 2012


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Love that the ladies are giving the men a chance. Hope they don't hurt the women. Love how this story is progressing.

Author's Response:

Hey Baha_Malo thank you for hanging tough.

The guys know that the Hart sisters are different from the women that they usually meet.

I don't think they will intentionally set out to hurt Irene or Percy but things have a way of happening and the guys may be vulnerable in this situation as it is out of the realm of what they are used to as well.

Thank you for appreciating the story. I appreciate you reading, enjoying and reviewing.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 20 2010

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Poor Irene...if she only knew Ares was messing with her dreams.

Author's Response:

Hey Baha_Malo I think she got her own back at Ares. He was the one that had to pull back and get out of the too hot kitchen.

Thanks for reading, enjoying and reviewing.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 11 2011

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Loving the start of this story.

Author's Response:

Hello Baha_Malo I am glad to see you are still on the journey with me. Irene and Ares just cried out for their own story and while Percy and Damon are sorry to see them go I think you'll agree it was necessary.

Thank you for reading, enjoying and reviewing.

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Date: November 30 2010

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 5]
Summary:

 

MM 

Remember your mortality

 

Never in a million years did Liam Bourges think that the most mudane of his patients would end up turning his life completely around and make him face his demonds.

Siobhan will get the answers that she needs, even if it means causing pain to loved ones and absolute strangers, and it all begins with one, Liam Bourges

 

 

All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of LuKohana. LuKohan is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended. 


 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 1183
Read Count: 8411
Published: December 07 2010
Updated: December 07 2010


Title: Chapter 2: I will either find a way or make one

Interesting start.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 07 2010

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 287]
Summary:

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"Power is the ultimate aphrodisiac.”- Henry Kissinger

 

In the game of social politics not everyone has power and some don’t understand the power they wield. The power to make and break lives rest in the hands of one man but be careful, he is always watching.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 18
Completed:No
Word count: 36415
Read Count: 69897
Published: December 14 2010
Updated: November 09 2012


Title: Chapter 11: A Mother's Woe

Its an interesting story so far. Not liking Amelle right now, allowing Harry to abuse her like that at the table. It was disgusting!!!  Is her love for David really so sad that she allows him to dictate to her about decisions in her life??? He's a mama's boy and Harry's an abuser and manipulator. He railroads people and disrsepects them. He needs a reality check and glad his mom started to get him back on track. He's really NOT a likeable character. But it would be interesting to see if Amelle dumps mama boy and move on. Who knows??? Maybe with the big man himself(Harrison).

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Date: February 16 2011

Title: Chapter 15: And So It Begins

Thanks for the update. Hope Amelle can help Olivia but she needs to stop using David. If she wants Harrison then she needs to step unto the plate. Poor Daved ,if he only realized he's a security blanket rather than lover and soulmate.

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Date: August 20 2011

Title: Chapter 12: The Gift that I give

Loved the update! I'm liking Rozlinn. Something is abit off with David. I can't quite put my finger on it but I guess time will tell. He doesn't act like a man in love. Harrison seems more into her. Wonder who the mystery woman is and what is she up to???

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Date: March 16 2011

Title: Chapter 13: Building Bridges

WTH is wrong with Harrison??? Did he hook up with Basha previously??? Or does he think she told Amelle some secret of his??? Great update.

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Date: April 06 2011

Title: Chapter 14: Interlude: Before We Dance, The Old Maids Meet

Hmmm, interesting update!! Basha is up to NOO GOOD!!!

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Date: April 24 2011

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 111]
Summary:

Smiling got her through the deaths of her parents. Therefore smiling will get her through her guardian's wedding. Not that she loves him or anything...

 

 

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Family, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:Yes
Word count: 8390
Read Count: 18203
Published: December 20 2010
Updated: March 24 2012


Title: Chapter 5: Until We Bleed Part 1

Oh oh, what a mess! Tobias has some decisions to make and needs to be honest with himself. He needs to stop playing with Serena's emotions. He knows he shouldn't marry Melissa.

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Date: January 06 2011

Title: Chapter 2: The Runner

Oh this looks like its gonna be good!! I'm liking the start.

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Date: December 21 2010

Title: Chapter 2: The Runner

Oh this looks like its gonna be good!! I'm liking the start.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 21 2010

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.