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[Reviews - 276]
Summary:

The Demon Seed

Babies should be a blessing. But not all of them are.

Kickass banner by Missus James

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Horror
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: BDSM, Character Death, Dark Fic, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Spring Baby-Fic Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:No
Word count: 28219
Read Count: 50619
Published: March 29 2011
Updated: September 04 2013


Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

Oh oh, looks like she jumped out of the pot into the fire.

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Date: July 12 2011

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[Reviews - 335]
Summary:

 

You have had life mapped out at a young age. Get into a performance arts college. Own your own dance studio and stay away from boys.... But what happens when you meet the love of your life?  Then come to find out he has a girlfriend? But, he has eyes for only you...

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 30
Completed:No
Word count: 181242
Read Count: 80217
Published: April 05 2011
Updated: December 24 2017


Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Dance Reactions

Interesting update.

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Date: May 02 2011

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Feeling You

Me likey!! More please.

Author's Response:

Yeah! So glad you like it this means a lot to me thank you and thank you for rating it as well ..
Thanks again for reviewing.. update coming soon. :)

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Date: April 05 2011

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Butterflies

Loved the update.

Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm so glad you like I will update soon! Promise!

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Date: April 12 2011

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Tryouts

Interesting update.

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Date: April 26 2011

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 You're Loosing It J

Loved it!! Jalena sure rocked the try outs!!

Author's Response:

She sure did that girls gots skills.... :) 

Glad your loving it thank you for reviewing!

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Date: May 11 2011

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Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 373]
Summary:

 

Sara Richards lives in Ōsaka, Japan. She becomes embroiled in the drama and comedy of clashing cultures, traditional philosophies and modern ideas as she is reunited with the past. She struggles to navigate the tempestuous waters where East meets West and a love lost but not forgotten that may never be regained, while keeping her eye on the one point in the sky that can lead her the peace of dry land. Her Bright Ōsaka Star.

 

Fabulous Banner by Music!!!

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Drabbles
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Inspirational, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Fluff, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Spring Baby-Fic Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 20
Completed:No
Word count: 72940
Read Count: 167962
Published: April 05 2011
Updated: June 27 2012


Title: Chapter 9: Hachi (8)

Interesting update. Three is definitely a crowd and Sara may have to move on with Kamir if its ment to be.

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Date: May 08 2011

Title: Chapter 8: Sichi (7)

Loved the update. Glad all went well at the school. Can't wait for her parents to reach.

Author's Response:

They are here!!! :)

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Date: May 06 2011

Title: Chapter 2: Ichi (1)

Me likey!! More please.

Author's Response:

All right then!

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Date: April 06 2011

Title: Chapter 4: San (3)

I really do love the story especially the mother son interaction. Sara's parents are too funny...had me cracking up!!! Glad the talk between Sara and Kaoru stayed positive. Maybe this talk will allow Kaoru to be happy and live her life to the fullest. She needs to talk to Yuki and stop running away. Awesome story so far.

Author's Response:

I always think there must be a special bond in single-parent homes. I don't know. Glad you liked Sara's parents, they WILL be back. Thank you!

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Date: April 12 2011

Title: Chapter 5: Yon (4)

Loved the update. Hmm, looks like Kamir is making his move. Not sure what's going on with Yuki but he needs to figure out what he wants.

Author's Response:

EXACTLY!!! Very insightful of you.

Thanks!

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Date: April 20 2011

Title: Chapter 6: Go (5)

Glad Sara called Yuki's mom on her high handedness. Poor Shouda!!!

Author's Response:

Yeah. Thank you! :)

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Date: April 22 2011

Title: Chapter 7: Roku (6)

Definitely loved the update. Sad to see Sara having such a touch time adjusting to the situation. Hope everything works out in the end. Can't wait until Percy arrives...she needs some support.

Love your Japan video. Very nice!

Author's Response:

Thanks! I am happy to say that Darren Percy has arrived! :)

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Date: April 30 2011

Title: Chapter 10: Kyu (9)

Great update but wonder what Kamir was up to . Was he deliberately antagonizing Yuki???

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Date: May 15 2011

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 207]
Summary:

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Shenai always wanted to be with Jeremy but with so many obstacles in her way it was impossible. Now that Jeremy’s father has passed away he’s rushed the next girl that best fit his father description to the altar. Shenai sees her window of opportunity with Jeremy quickly boarding up and wants to take the nails off the boards that are going keep her away from Jeremy forever but she doesn’t have the will to do it. Shenai truly believes after Jeremy is married; her life will be over but little does she know it’s only the beginning of chaotic a life and just maybe she might get what she’s always wanted in the beginning.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Taking a short break from this story
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 19
Completed:No
Word count: 38343
Read Count: 37563
Published: April 21 2011
Updated: February 02 2014


Title: Chapter 9: It’s About to Happen

What a mess!! Hope that worry finishes in her hurry so that Shenai can lick her wounds in private. Jeremy is a shit if he marries Jade.

Author's Response:

thank you

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Date: August 31 2011

Title: Chapter 7: Everyone Lies

Oh hell nooo, Jeremy wimped out and Jeremiah won. Run Shenai, RUNNNNN!!! Jerry isn't worth the effort if he doesn't fight for you. Jade is a liar, marrying Jeremy under false pretenses. Can't wait until the crap hits the fan.

Author's Response:

THANK YOU!!!

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Date: May 08 2011

Title: Chapter 9: It’s About to Happen

Wow, he's actually going through with the wedding!! What a jerk!! Hope Shenai doesn't make an ass of herself!!! If he doesn't want to fight for her, he's not worth her effort. She needs to keep her mouth shut and get the hell up on out of there as fast as her Louboutins can take her.

Author's Response:

:) Thank you baha_malo !

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Date: June 17 2011

Title: Chapter 2: Twins

Me likey!! More please.

Author's Response:

Glad you like.. update coming soon 

Thanks 

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Date: April 22 2011

Title: Chapter 3: In the rhythm

Loved the update. Why is Jeremy torturing himself ??? He isn't in love with Jade. It doesn't make any sense!!! His father is DEAD. He needs to make himself happy. What a mess!!

Author's Response:

:) Thank you!!!

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Date: April 24 2011

Title: Chapter 5: The Best Shower Ever Taken

Wow, that was a hawt scene!!! Hope Jeremy has some clarity after making love to Shenai. He needs to be honest with himself. If he goes through with this marriage to Jade...SHAME on HIM!!!Don't like Jeremiah much as he knows Jeremy's heart desire but is encouraging him to marry Jade. He doesn't have his brother's back. Maybe he doesn't want his brother to be happy.

Author's Response:

THANK YOU!

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Date: April 26 2011

Title: Chapter 6: Caught in the Mix

Jeremiah was guilt tripping him and if he doesn't realise that he's a fool. He needs to open up his eyes and see that Jeremiah is jealous of his friendship/relationship with Shenai.

If Jeremy marries Jade Shenai needs to cut him out of her life cause it will only lead to problems and heartache for her. She needs to move on with her life and be happy elsewhere

Author's Response:

THANK YOU!!!! 

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Date: May 01 2011

Title: Chapter 8: A Friend In Need

Wow!! I loved the update. Those gifts he gave her were amazing but its a pity it wasn't himself. Wonder if she's gonna become preggers??? If she goes to the wedding I hope she stays strong and show them all she's a better woman than what they thought.

Have a feeling if he goes through with this wedding he's gonna regret it bigtime especially if he ever discovers Jade's lies.

Author's Response:

THANKS!!!!

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Date: May 21 2011

Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 4]
Summary:

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Grandpa Amethyst and Grandma Kendra have strong love, and vow after an incident to make love to each other for the rest of the lives, even now in their old age. When they have to take care of their four year old granchild, their love life is being challenged. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Drabbles
Genre: Family, Inspirational, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3252
Read Count: 7171
Published: April 22 2011
Updated: April 22 2011


Title: Chapter 2: Love Forever

That was a cute story. It had me cracking up!! Suwana is a stalker!!!:)

Author's Response:

Thank you.. lol yes Suwanna was a little stalaker.. 

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Date: April 22 2011

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 4]
Summary:

Teresa has to spend her weekend completing her assignments for her Major British Writer’s class. What happens when stress, wine, and sleep deprivation are mixed together? Nothing good…

All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Movies, Books, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Erotica
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2464
Read Count: 1766
Published: April 27 2011
Updated: April 27 2011


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Interesting short.

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Date: April 28 2011

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 439]
Summary:

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Ellie finds herself living the life that she could only imagine in her dreams. She has graduated from college with a degree in accounting, she is with the man she loves who is just as succesful, if not more than her, and he has just asked her to marry him. What more could a girl ask for? What could go wrong? Everything begins to change once she meets his family and realizes they dont like her. Can this break up their relationship? What is she to do? What about their "family" business? Will their marraige go on? After being on top the only place left to go is down, and Ellie is sure on her way there.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Work in Progress
Series: Mafioso Series
Chapters: 28
Completed:No
Word count: 50333
Read Count: 89293
Published: May 20 2011
Updated: May 28 2014


Title: Chapter 18: so sorry dont hate me !

Thank you for the info. Look forward to the update whenever you get a chance.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed
Date: August 08 2011

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.