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Welcome to the Family by philipa1234
Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

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Ellie finds herself living the life that she could only imagine in her dreams. She has graduated from college with a degree in accounting, she is with the man she loves who is just as succesful, if not more than her, and he has just asked her to marry him. What more could a girl ask for? What could go wrong? Everything begins to change once she meets his family and realizes they dont like her. Can this break up their relationship? What is she to do? What about their "family" business? Will their marraige go on? After being on top the only place left to go is down, and Ellie is sure on her way there.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Work in Progress
Series: Mafioso Series
Chapters: 28
Completed:No
Word count: 50333
Read Count: 89293
Published: May 20 2011
Updated: May 28 2014

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Title: Chapter 15: Ellie's friends photos

Love the pics.

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Date: June 22 2011
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 10 pt 2

Sad that Nick is spiralling out of control. He needs to get a grip if he wants Ellie back. Hmmm, wonder what Martha has up her sleeves??? Glad she put her pride aside to help Nick by speaking to Ellie whom she treated like shit. Also glad Ellie agreed to at least talk with him.

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Date: June 20 2011
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 11

Love the update.Glad Ellie was able to talk to Nick abit before that skank came up in the room. WTH is Bianca's problem. She needs to grow the hell up and get a life and stop giving Ellie the evil eye. Ellie isn't responsible for Nicky's action.

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Date: June 23 2011
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 10 pt 1

Loved the update! Wow Nick seemed to have spiraled out of control and Elle is depressed ,poor thing! Hope they can make it work.

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Date: June 17 2011
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 12

Loved the update. The scenes are ok to me as you've written them. Hmmm, Nick needs to give Ellie some feedback and be truthful.

I'm really not liking Bianca right now. She needs to grow the hell up and stay out of Nick's business. I'm sure she wouldn't like him all up in her business and being a jerk to a guy she was interested in.

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Date: July 08 2011
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Me likey!! More please.

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Date: May 21 2011
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Hmmm, Nicky seems abit shady to me. Hope he's genuine with his feelings for Elle. The reception she hopes to gain from his parents might not happen. He needs to be upfront with her about his family.

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Date: May 24 2011
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 2

Hmmm, she was definitely out of control!! Does she really want to marry him??? Both of them seem to have issues they need to sort out before marrying if they still decide to do it but she was acting bitchy!!

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Date: May 25 2011
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 3

Wow, so far so good with the famil;y meeting but Bianca is coming off as a b*tch. At least his parents were diplomatic even if they aren't exactly thrilled. Hope Nico checks her. As his sister she should be happy for him even if she doesn't like the girl.

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Date: May 26 2011
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 4

Wow, what an explosion!! Martha was an azz!! And Bianca is acting out like a child. She really is something if she thought her actions were gonna endear her to Nico. Just childesh!! Both of them were stupido!!! They risk losing Nico because they can't get over themselves. Chris was right, Martha was the ring leader and started all the drama. So sad.

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Date: May 27 2011
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 5

Great update!! Glad Bianca and Ellie seem to be bonding. Hope Nico tells her the truth sooner rather than later.

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Date: May 28 2011
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 6

Oh oh!! Hope Sammy is ok. Nick needs to tell her the truth soon especially if her life is potentially in danger. Wonder who was doing the shooting???

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Date: May 30 2011
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 7

WTH??? Why did they take Nick??? So glad he told her about the family business but wished she had shared the news about the baby with him. Hope she stays safe.

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Date: June 09 2011
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 8

Unexpected and sad for Ellie. I figure this may alter her perception of things. Wonder if she'll leave?? Will they be able to get beyond this?

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Date: June 10 2011
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 9

Yes I expected it but he obviously wasn't!! Wonder what happens now??? Do they remain separated or will they come together again??

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Date: June 13 2011
BIG! by readlover
Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

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 A symbol of satisfaction plus the embodiment of attraction…..  Just like age aint nothing but a number, theses five women will learn that size is nothing, but a number through the situations they endure to find their happily ever after.

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Books, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Inspirational, Poetry, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 19410
Read Count: 12021
Published: May 25 2011
Updated: January 08 2012

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Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Hope Sean doesn't mess up and glad Setel getting a chance with Nisha.

Author's Response:

We will see. Thank you!!

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Date: September 16 2011
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Hope Khita gives Marcio a chance. Loved the update.

Author's Response:

Thank you much!!

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Date: September 16 2011
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

The update had me cracking up!! Loved it!!!Niqweh and Shenlle were hard on their men.:) Poor souls just looking for some loving.

Author's Response:

some loving coming soon. Thanks 

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Date: June 17 2011
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Interesting start.

Author's Response:

Thank you!!

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Date: May 25 2011
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Loved it!! I want me a Setel too!! Twana needs to cool her hormones and tone it down a notch!!

Author's Response:

lol.. thank you !!

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Date: June 10 2011
Retired
Bouquet de Fleurs (Bouquet of Flowers) by tpeezy22
Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

Six months after being attacked, Grace moved to Paris with her boyfriend, Henri. Once there, she must overcome adjusting to French life, working with her crazy new boss, and move on with her life. Henri is trying to find the right time to propose to Grace, but will her pride and his family get the better of her?

 

Sequel to Floraison d'Amour (Blossoming Love)



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 50
Completed:Yes
Word count: 90875
Read Count: 33725
Published: May 25 2011
Updated: September 15 2014

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Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Great update. More please.

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Date: July 25 2011
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Hope meeting the mom goes well. Also hope those nightmares stop soon.

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Date: August 18 2011
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Wooohoooo!! Henry popped the question!!! Glad Grace said yes.

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Date: July 09 2011
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Awh how sweet!!

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Date: July 04 2011
Title: Chapter 1: Cast Pics

Me likey!! More please.

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Date: May 27 2011

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.