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Right Place, Wrong Time by Bryleigh Lisette
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 101]
Summary:

Leslie West is a quiet beautiful southern belle who just moved up to New York, Blake Caldron is a fashion guru who can't seem to keep his eyes off of a new church attendee. Due to certain circumstances he needs to watch from a far... But for how long?



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Rape, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 18
Completed:No
Word count: 28720
Read Count: 33058
Published: August 14 2011
Updated: December 31 2013

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Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3- Don't Hide From Me

Hmmm, his words should be the clue to her that something's up. She needs to find out more about him before investing anymore of her time. Does his mom suspect anything??? He needs to decide what he wants, her or his marriage?? She's gonna be crushed when she finds out.

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Date: August 15 2011
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8- No BS

Why is Leslie so dumb?? Why make things more complicated. She knows she doesn't love Marco. She's using him and will make him miserable. She's so wrong for that. Still not trusting Kim. I'm abit suspicious about that pregnancy. Blake better get that DNA before Kim messes him up.

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she's a lost child in the city

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Date: August 24 2011
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7- Back in the NY Groove

Hmm, I don't know if I trust Kim with this baby issue. They don't seem to have a good marriage. With all the travelling she's been doing , is it really his??? I have some doubts but I could be wrong. Hope Marco didn't make Leslie preggers. Sorry is getting complicated now. Can't wait to see what happens now.What a mess!!

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Date: August 23 2011
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10- Show Down

Interesting story so far. Why is Kim lying to Blake?? Marco has anger issues. He has too much baggage.

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Date: September 04 2011
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4- The Longest Day

Hmm, love the update but those two men in her life seem full of drama/issues. It would be interesting to see which one she ended up with if any.

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Date: August 18 2011
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2- The Introduction

WTH is going on here? Hope Leslie finds out more about him before her heart gets broken. He needs to be honest with Leslie and not lead her on!! He's NOT a single man. Are there issues with his marriage???

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Date: August 14 2011
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5- Time in Italy

Wow, this love triangle is about to get more intense. I feel the drama is coming.

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Date: August 20 2011
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Claiming Mina by crocuslady
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 332]
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Lucas Spaulding waited three years before he could claim his woman his mother brought into their privilaged home. She swore that she would never leave, now it looks like she needs to be reminded who she belongs to. she's on notice. Lucas is on the hunt and he doesn't intend to play fair.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Chains & Whips Excite Me
Series: The Alphas of Spaulding Inc.
Chapters: 12
Completed:No
Word count: 41598
Read Count: 74122
Published: August 17 2011
Updated: July 26 2012

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Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Loved the update. Luke is about to claim his woman!! What are they??? What's the secret?? Can't wait to see what Mrs S is up to.

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Date: August 19 2011
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Me likey. More please.

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Date: August 18 2011
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Loved the update!! Can wait to see what her past reveals!

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Date: May 06 2012
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Loved the update and can't wait for the next chapter!

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Date: May 03 2012
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Good Things in a Small Package by Brenda1257
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 670]
Summary:

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Amaris Manning was a woman that was over six feet tall.  Julian Arrington was just a little over five six.  They were attracted to one another from the beginning, but would it be a good fit?  She was sexually repressed.  He was sexually promiscuous. She was looking for a relationship and he was avoiding one at all costs. She was black and he was white.  They were totally opposite in every way, yet their hearts didn't seem to hear their heads talking!

 

Good Things in A Small Package is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2011 BRAnderson

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 38
Completed:Yes
Word count: 169606
Read Count: 140135
Published: August 22 2011
Updated: August 28 2014

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Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 12 My Actions Speak Louder Than My Reputation

That was a a beautiful update especially between Amaris and her mom. Soooo glad Daniel has opened his eyes. Hope Tam pulls it together for him. Just hope that all is well mentally too.

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Date: September 15 2011
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 10 There Really Is No Place Like Home

Hope Julian isn't biting off more that he can chew by taking the whole crowd to eat. At least her family is receptive of him eventhough some of them seem money hungry.

Author's Response:

The only money hungry one is Seleah. (Her children follow her lead)  The mom is just happy that her baby has found someone she considers a great catch. Thanks for the review. 

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Date: September 09 2011
Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 Family in Full

Loved the update! Enjoyed reading this story! Sad to see it come to an end but glad things worked out for everyone. Will look forward to the epilogue if you do decide to do one. Thanks for sharing!!

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Date: September 01 2014
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 3 Seeing the Real You

Hope Tam and Amaris find happiness.

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Date: August 24 2011
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 2 Leaving Your Comfort Zone

Wow, Julian is like a firecracker....hot to trot. Amaris doesn't stand a chance with this seducer. Hope he doesn't hurt her.

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Date: August 23 2011
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 7 Learning You All Over Again

Loved the update. Poor Tam!! Daniel gots lots of begging to do.

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Date: September 04 2011
Title: Chapter 2: Prologue

Me likey!! More please.

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Date: August 22 2011
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 1 The Size of Things

Loved it!! Go Julian!! Amaris isn't gonna know what hit her. Hope Julian reconciles with his family soon.

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Date: August 22 2011
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 11 There Really Is No Place Like Home II

Loved the update. Amaris' family is too much. They had me cracking up!! Poor Tam!! Hope Daniel survives and things work out for them!!

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Date: September 12 2011
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 5 Revealing the Hidden Part of Me

Loved the update.

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Date: August 31 2011
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 9 Doing What Comes Naturally

Loved the update. Tam definitely playing with fire. She needs to tell Daniel the truth.

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Date: September 08 2011
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 15 So You Think You Know All About Me II

Feeling bad for Seleah! Looks like Dem is gonna find out some things on his own. I hope it doesn't mess with his head. Hope Seleah finds some peace. Glad Daniel got his groove back!!

Author's Response:

I know...we see the train wreck coming, but Dem is stronger than Seleah thinks.  He's no longer a child (he keeps telling her this), but you know how Moms can be.  She does love Dem, she's just conflicted because she has never dealt with what happened to her.  Thanks for the review.

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Date: September 21 2011
Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 25 A Lesson in Intimacy

Love it!!

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Date: October 28 2011
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 4 Sinking in Deep and Liking It

Hot diggity damn!! What an update!! Loved it.

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Date: August 25 2011

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.