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The Right to Remain Broken by Kmaj
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 302]
Summary:

 

Esther Hendrickson has loved teaching young children, mainly because she cannot have children of her own. What was once society's trophy wife, her abusive past has led her deep into dementia, but the love of hardened FBI agent A.J. Thomas may be just what she needs to heal her torn heart.

 



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 20
Completed:No
Word count: 46765
Read Count: 75332
Published: June 14 2012
Updated: January 03 2015

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Title: Chapter 11: H is for Hurricane

Loving the story so far!! Glad AJ has an interest in her and seems up to the challenge.

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Date: July 15 2012
Title: Chapter 12: I is for Intimacy Issues

Wow, Esther sure took a lot from that scumbag of a husband. Hope he gets what's coming to him. Also hope both him and his family are exposed for the cruel person he is.

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Date: July 31 2012
Title: Chapter 14: K is for Kisses

Loved the update but she needs to tell him the truth about being married!! Her mother sounds real scary!!

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Date: August 10 2012
Title: Chapter 15: L is for Leftovers

I don't think he's gonna be happy that she didn't tell him she's married. Hope he can handle what he finds in that file. Esther has alot of explaining to do.

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Date: August 17 2012
Title: Chapter 16: M is for Medical History

Interesting!! Wonder how deep this plot goes? Hope AJ blasts the lid off the deceptions!!

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Date: November 15 2012
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The Better Life by FindingMyself
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 424]
Summary:

She despised celebrities, maybe even hated them. That was until she met him. 



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 22
Completed:Yes
Word count: 88706
Read Count: 298100
Published: June 18 2012
Updated: April 23 2013

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Interesting start!! Wonder what's up with Alicia being underhanded with Keyshia? Strippers?

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Date: June 18 2012
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Loving this story so far!!

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Date: August 04 2012
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Loved the update but she needs to be careful how she treats Jason by trying to use Carter to make him jealous. This may not have a good ending for her.

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Date: August 11 2012
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Wow, what a complicated relationship!! Looks like Jack has everyone under his thumb and making all miserable. He needs a reality check! Hope Jason and Keyshia can make it work.

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Date: August 30 2012
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Wow, things have really gone in a tailspin. Wonder if Keyshia and Jason will find their way back to each other?

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Date: September 04 2012
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Interesting update. Jason needs to man up and decide who he wants. I agree with Keyshia, I don't know if Eric is being upfront with her. Can't wait until the next update!

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Date: September 14 2012
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Oh oh, she has some explaining to do!! Don't trust Eric either!! Where was he when she was trying to call him? Great update!!

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Date: October 16 2012
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Loved the update!! Eric and his sister are no good and i hope their plans backfire!!

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Date: November 12 2012
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21-Part 1

Loved the update and the fact that he and his mom are in a good place.

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Date: April 13 2013
One Last Time by RoseEnraged
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 30]
Summary:

 

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A cop and a assistant discrict attorney hot moment.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1206
Read Count: 7777
Published: July 01 2012
Updated: June 17 2017

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Title: One Last Time

Interesting start. More Please!

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Date: July 04 2012
More Than What I Wanted by PharmD
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 17]
Summary:

 

Kenny Okami didn't grow up in the best circumstances, but he never used that as an excuse.  As a mixed martial arts fighter, he has worked hard and now he has it all; including the money, cars, clothes and an endless supply of some of the most beautiful women in the world.  Sidelined by an injury, he meets Kelsey Williams a 2nd year residency at Massachusetts General Hospital.  Kelsey has been hurt before, can she let go and allow herself to be loved the right way? Kenny will discover that Kelsey is more than he ever wanted and everything he never had.

 



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 3427
Read Count: 2329
Published: July 06 2012
Updated: July 06 2012

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Title: Chapter 2: Meet the Cast

Me likey!! More please.

Author's Response:

Thank you!  I will!

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Date: July 07 2012
Remembering Marley by JLeshay
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 25]
Summary:

While investigating the murder of Marley Preston, Carl Townsend finds himself falling for her mother and developing a close friendship with her older brothers who will stop at nothing to avenge her death.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Taking a short break from this story
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 7430
Read Count: 3039
Published: July 14 2012
Updated: April 05 2013

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Me likey!! More please. I hope they get the bastard too!!

Author's Response:

Thank you. More to come :)

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Date: July 15 2012
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Loved the update. Hope they catch the bastard!!

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Date: July 19 2012
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Loved the update. More please! Wonder where the dirtbag is hiding?

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Date: September 11 2012
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Loved the update and hope the boys don't get themselves in trouble!

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Date: April 06 2013
The Boat House by readlover
Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 26]
Summary:

 

Fourth of July; all boats will be out on the water and no one will be there to interrupt us. The rocking motion will help us on our love voyage and you can scream & moan as loud as you want, while the fireworks burst in the air.

 

 

 



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:Yes
Word count: 5162
Read Count: 32148
Published: July 17 2012
Updated: May 19 2013

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Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Interesting. He really seems to love her very much.

Author's Response:

love is in the air. Thanks baha_malo

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Date: August 07 2012
Proud Of Being In Love With You by Adi Milano
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 174]
Summary:

 

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Christopher Fitzwilliam is a 30 something bachelor who had recently decided to give up on love after his fiancée broke his heart after sleeping with one of his closest friends. Now back in NYC, he has to deal with Laurence, his best friend, who has decided that match-making him with someone is his new hobby. And to add to that, poor Christopher has to deal with an annoying young woman named Allegra who he seriously cannot stand but she's so hot he wouldn't mind carrying things with her in his bedroom. Read as Christopher, a socially-awkward guy, discovers friendship, love and drama.

© Adi Milano, 2012.

 

 



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Un-betaed
Series: Love and Pride
Chapters: 24
Completed:Yes
Word count: 55911
Read Count: 234403
Published: July 18 2012
Updated: October 05 2012

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Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 3: Green-eyed Monster

Its an interesting story so far but why is Laurence so pushy? He needs to back off a bit and let things happen naturally. I get that they are friends but Chris just seems to give into every suggestion of Laurence eventhough it makes him uncomfortable. Allegra seems to be an interesting person but I guess time will tell if things really work out for them.

Author's Response:

Laurence is a bit of a jerk. Chris listens to him, although it doesnt want to admit. Laurence is Christopher conscience. He knows his best friend and figures out immediately that he likes Allegra, even though Chris in denial. He just wants his friend to be happy, however, it doesn't understand that he really is annoying and that Chris can't stand him when he acts like that.

Will things even work about between then? I can just tell you that they'll have a sort of friendship for a while...will it blossom? Who knows.

Thank you for taking the time to review.

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Date: July 19 2012
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 5: Meetings

Glad Laurence gave Chris his space. It was getting annoying. Hmmm, wonder if Blake is the reason she running hot and cold to Chris?? Chris needs to continue to give her space as she doesn't seem ready to deal with him. Hope she doesn't hurt him.

Author's Response:

I know. Laurence was really getting on everyone's nerves. But try to understand him. He knows Chris so well and he just wants him to be happy, even though Chris doesn't want to listen to him. He clearly was in denial before. Now he admits that he wants her.

Blake is...well I can't tell you exactly, but you'll find out in the next chapter, so don't worry.

And Chris will give her space...to some extent. I just can tell you that Allegra and he will be close friends....maybe more?

Thank you for reviewing. I really appreciate it.

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Date: July 19 2012
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Falling Stars by KarenaAngel
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 219]
Summary:

He loved to see them suffer. The pitiful humans that they desperately need to survive. Oh how she would suffer the girl who was nothing but a twinkling star, and he knew just as good as anyone that stars were never meant to stay. They were destined to fall and look beautiful as there innocence fades away.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Science Fiction
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content , Threesome+, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 23
Completed:No
Word count: 60375
Read Count: 132818
Published: July 23 2012
Updated: June 18 2014

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Title: Chapter 4: Growing Obsession

Me likey!! More please.

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Date: July 30 2012
Title: Chapter 4: Growing Obsession

Interesting story so far. More please.

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Date: July 31 2012

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.