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Falling Stars by KarenaAngel
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 219]
Summary:

He loved to see them suffer. The pitiful humans that they desperately need to survive. Oh how she would suffer the girl who was nothing but a twinkling star, and he knew just as good as anyone that stars were never meant to stay. They were destined to fall and look beautiful as there innocence fades away.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Science Fiction
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content , Threesome+, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 23
Completed:No
Word count: 60375
Read Count: 132818
Published: July 23 2012
Updated: June 18 2014

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Title: Chapter 6: The world is mine.

Interesting update!! Vita is a sicko!! He raped Aza and im sure he'll rape Carla if he wants to. He seems to get off on control over them. Does he really think they will love him after his pyscho behavior? He doesn't know the meaning of the word love and will never know if he doesn't change his behavior!! Poor Aza!! No wonder he's the way he is after dealing with Vita. Sad situation.

Author's Response:

Yes it is.  Thank you for the review.

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Date: August 13 2012
Title: Chapter 7: Bonding

Interesting update.

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Date: August 17 2012
Title: Chapter 8: Destiny Revealed

Oh nooo, poor Carla!! Hope she survives with her mind intact. Wow, Vita sure has alot of control over Aza. Can't wait to read what happens next!

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Date: August 20 2012
Title: Chapter 10: Princess.

Wow, killing his father!!, what a turn of events!! He claims to love Aza and Carla. Hope they all can make it work eventually.

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Date: August 29 2012
Title: Chapter 11: Consuming Warmth

Loved the update. Hmm, maybe Ruasu was right and Vita is cracking up!

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Date: September 07 2012
Title: Chapter 13: Family Affair

How sad Aza's life seem to be. Hope he can find some happiness with Carla.

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Date: October 01 2012
Title: Chapter 14: Comfort of Home

Poor Carla!! Feel for her but she's gonna be sorry when Vita catches up with her!

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Date: October 17 2012
Title: Chapter 19: Conspiring, who is he loyal too

Loved the update! Glad she wasn't badly injured. Hope Ruasu is truto the prince and doesn't betray him. Also hope the medicine she's being given doesn't harm her.

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Date: January 22 2013
Title: Chapter 21: Sorry

Loved the update! Hope Carla survives the wedding!

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Date: April 21 2013
Drawn Together by Outlawstar615
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 113]
Summary:


Nia Jones, an amazing designer at Sohma Graphics, has strong feelings for her boss. She doesn't think they'll ever be reciprocated. In fact, she thinks he hates her. They both realize otherwise when his suave older half-brother is abruptly added to their lives.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:No
Word count: 20126
Read Count: 22683
Published: July 23 2012
Updated: May 26 2014

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Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Loving this story so far!

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Date: July 30 2012
Noah's Orders by Kmaj
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 68]
Summary:

Noah Bianchi has been in lust for his new secretary Eliza from the moment he met her, but how will he introduce her to his dominant lifestlye? By bending her over his desk of course.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: BDSM, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Challenges: Chains & Whips Excite Me
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 7176
Read Count: 8087
Published: July 26 2012
Updated: August 10 2012

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Title: Chapter 1: Come Into My Web

Interesting update!! He's a control freak but I guess that's what she likes!!

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Date: July 31 2012
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Just Ordinary by Forks and Knives
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 193]
Summary:

Carmen Shelly preyed on married men and usually won her sought after prize. Business is booming until her partner sets his sights on her single sister.

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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:Yes
Word count: 41535
Read Count: 39606
Published: July 29 2012
Updated: February 28 2016

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Title: Chapter 2: One - Target sighted

Interesting start. Can't wait to read more.

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Date: July 30 2012
Title: Chapter 3: Two -The Invasion

Wow, Carmen is sooo evil. I hope she gets what's coming to her and her plans for Nichole backfires on her.

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Date: July 31 2012
Title: Chapter 4: Three Counter-attack and the retreat

Loved the update. Carmen needs a ife lesson and all her scheming needs to bite her in the butt. She's a miserable soul to be so vindictive to her sister.

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Date: August 16 2012
Title: Chapter 6: Five- Drawing a line in the sand

Loved it!! Richard is going in for the kill. Carmen is crazy!! She needs to be checked!

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Date: September 18 2012
Title: Chapter 8: Seven- Going off the deep end

Loved the update! Glad Nichole and Richard are making progress. Hope all of Carmen's plans backfire on her and that this Victoria person gets to give her a reality check too.

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Date: March 21 2013
Twice The Fool by Brenda1257
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 282]
Summary:

 

Cara Nightingale had made the same mistake twice.  Could she recover from past mistakes and get her life in order?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:Yes
Word count: 66737
Read Count: 81072
Published: August 07 2012
Updated: October 15 2012

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Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 What God has joined together...

Loving the update!! As well as Anja!! Stphen seems like he's the ever ready battery!!

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Date: August 14 2012
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 In Enemy Territory

Oh oh!! I see Douglas and family were up to no good. Poor Cara!! Stephen really gave her something unique BUT was that a good or bad thing for them as a couple??!! He sounded upset with her!! Can't wait for the next update!!

Author's Response:

He wasn't upset with her, he was upset with himself.  He had no idea that he'd be blindsided by his uncle and cousin and that most of all, Gena would say such a thing to Cara and give her that visual.  He is already a bit insecure because Cara has ran from him twice.  He was worried that after Gena's statement that the'd have a major setback in their relationship.  He wanted her to understand that she is unique because he wants her and only her to become his wife.  Yes, a lot of his extended family members are up to no good, but he's determined that no one is going to separate him and Cara.  Thanks for the review.

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Date: August 30 2012
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Why Do Fools Fall in Love?

Me likey!! More please. Hope she gets the courage to tell him. Hope he helps her.

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Date: August 08 2012
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 A Meeting of the Minds

Loving this story so far. More please.

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Date: August 10 2012
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 The Visit

Loved the update and glad they love each other. Hope she and Anja can mend fences. Can't wait for the families to meet. Look forward to the next update!

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Date: August 11 2012
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Let No Man Put Asunder

Loved the update but hope uncle Douglas doesn't upset the apple cart!

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Date: August 17 2012
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Handling Uncle Douglas

Loved the update. Hopefully uncle Douglas will come around and stop with his small minded ways of thinking. Loving Cara and Stephan!!

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Date: August 29 2012
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 In Enemy Territory II

Loved the update. Glad to see how the families are supporting each other.

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Date: September 01 2012
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 The Persistent Fool

Loved the update but uncle Douglas needs to learn when to leave things alone!! He's a trouble maker!!! Glad all left and gave them some space, he needed it. It was too many cooks in that kitchen!

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Date: September 14 2012

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