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[Reviews - 338]
Summary:

She was only a debt to him... or so she thought.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:No
Word count: 26251
Read Count: 83611
Published: February 23 2014
Updated: July 08 2015


Title: Chapter 5: Five

Interesting story so far.

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Date: May 28 2014

Title: Chapter 4: Four

Wow, this story is getting interesting ! Can't wait to see what happens next!

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Date: March 03 2014

Title: Chapter 2: Two

Loved the update! Interesting...Wonder why is he treating her so different?...Can't wait to see what happens next!

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Date: February 24 2014

Title: Chapter 1: One

Wow, Interesting start! More please.

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Date: February 23 2014

Title: Chapter 7: Seven

Loved the update! He knew she was going to try to escape. Now she's in trouble!

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Date: November 30 2014

Title: Chapter 8: Eight

Interesting update! She better prepare herself for some sexual torture!

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Date: December 06 2014

Title: Chapter 9: Nine

Oh...didn't expect that beating! Hope he didn't hurt her too badly.

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Date: December 08 2014

Title: Chapter 10: Ten

Interesting update but not unexpected that he would do something like that. Hmm, wonder who came into the room?

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Date: December 08 2014

Title: Chapter 16: Sixteen

Glad they seem to be coming to some sort of understanding. Love the update!

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Date: February 23 2015

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 59]
Summary:

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Sometimes the best things in life aren't real



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Friendship
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Fluff, Original Characters, Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:Yes
Word count: 5912
Read Count: 8521
Published: February 23 2014
Updated: March 11 2014


Title: Chapter 2: Great Expectations

Loved the update! She might be a figment of his imagination but she's making him think and hopefully allow him to open up more.

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Date: February 25 2014

Title: Chapter 10: Resolutions

Loved this story...glad things worked out in the end.

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Date: March 11 2014

Title: Chapter 8: Dinner Plans

Glad he's making progress!

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Date: March 07 2014

Title: Chapter 9: Market Fresh

Glad he continues to make strides with Sky's encouragement!

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Date: March 09 2014

Title: Chapter 6: Lonesome

Glad she's back. Hope she can help him some more.

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Date: March 05 2014

Title: Chapter 6: Lonesome

Glad she's back. Hope she can help him some more.

Author's Response:

She's got plans for him

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Date: March 05 2014

Title: Chapter 5: Gone

Great update! Oh oh, wonder what happened?

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Date: March 03 2014

Title: Chapter 1: The Fourth

Interesting start! More please.

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Date: February 23 2014

Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 14]
Summary:

 

 

This story takes place when Aaliyah Wyndham is a twenty-year-old intern, working in Los Angeles for the summer while staying with family friend, Lucas D'Alessandro. Lucas seems to have gone a little Hollywood since he left South Carolina. It's all about the girls, the cars and the money. How will Aaliyah enjoy living with L-Money?

There there is the mysterious guy she meets while waiting at the airport. She's surprised to find that he isn't some sarcastic jerk after all. He's Fuminori Kawaguchi, someone whose friendship she thought lost to her a long time ago. The two will renew their acquaintance as they bond over the summer, when they're not both working towards their futures.

Their summer romance is complicated by Lucas' overprotective nature, and by his rampant hypocrisy. I mean, how many women will Aaliyah have to watch him turn away at the door before he stops shadowing her on dates? Doesn't he understand that she's all grown up, now, and that she can handle herself?

How will she cope with the unwelcome fame that comes along with being The Next Big Thing's apparent love interest? Will Fumi continue modeling, or will he return to his studies, and pursue the future his family expects of him, the future he's always thought he wanted?

Most of all, what will happen in the future? Is this just a summer romance, or can their hearts stand the test of time and distance? Find out in A Summer Heart.

This story is a free prequel to Amended Hearts, but is a standalone. You do not have to read Amended Hearts to understand this story, but you may want to read it, anyway, to find out what ultimately happens to Aaliyah. It may be published, but will remain free to read in its entirety.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction, Miscellaneous
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 3863
Read Count: 29330
Published: March 18 2014
Updated: April 12 2014


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 You'll Find Unexpected Friends...

Interesting story so far! More please.

Author's Response:

I'll be updating this weekend.

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Date: March 18 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 40]
Summary:

Illyana is a young wolf during an age of lone wolves and fewer females...



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:No
Word count: 15180
Read Count: 10911
Published: March 19 2014
Updated: January 20 2015


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Loving this story so far! More please.

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Date: March 20 2014

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Interesting plan they came up with. Hope they can pull it off without too many problems. Great update!

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Date: December 28 2014

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Oh oh, can't wait to see what happens next.... Is this new pack peaceful or are they going to challenge them?

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Date: March 31 2014

Rated: Members ONLY: 17 and Older
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Summary:

I was saved by him. Saved by a ghost. A Specter. And while I lived my life in his debt, hoping to one day do right the wrong that was done to me, I became just like him. A Ghost. A Specter.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 20504
Read Count: 2330
Published: March 26 2014
Updated: April 29 2014


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Interesting start! Can't wait to see how this all connects.

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Date: March 27 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 52]
Summary:

 

Warrick Mungo was a senior in college at Wolfpax University. Son of the Alpha Rex, or Alpha King, he enjoyed all of the benefits of his position as Royal Enforcer and Captain of the Claw Ball team. He was the youngest of fourteen sons. Why did he have to be the one to receive the Alpha Rex gene, anyway? It was always the eldest son of the Alpha Rex and his true mate. Everybody knew that. Warrick just didn't understand how his parents expected for him to put any effort into locating his mate so that he could settle down, when there were so many interesting flavors still left to sample. Then there was The Problem. The one that seemed to unnerve even his father. Everyone thought that if he just found his Regina, his balance, The Problem would be automatically under control. He isn't so sure that just meeting his Regina will make everything right. What if she fears him, too? What if his responsibilities put her in danger? All he knows for sure is that he's not ready to meet her...yet.

 

     Thandie was in a category all her own. A certified genius of geniuses, she had come to the university on a mission to find her purpose in life. You'd think that four PhD's would have done that already, but no. She was bored again, and a bored Thandie was a terror that her Alpha simply could not allow. So when she turned eighteen, he sent her to the territory of the Alpha Rex while she attended Wolfpax U. Socially awkward, overweight and haphazardly dressed, and then there's The Other Part that shall not be named outside of the pack house. Let's just say that she had always stood out. Her pack, and her Alpha, always loved and protected her tender and loving heart. The Alpha even sent fifty Enforcers to University with her just for her protection from...well her own clumsiness for starters. They were also in place to stop others from discovering...well, The Other Part. How will she cope with leaving home to go away to school for the first time ever, without her beloved brother, Theo? How will she cope with the path she must walk to get there? Moreover, is she ready for the possibility that she will finally meet her mate?

 

*Note: When I finish it, This Book Will Be Published. If someone offers me a contract, I will not finish posting it online. I'm sorry for any disappointment this may cause, but I really believe in this story. I hope you guys will support me, anyway, and help me to polish it until it shines.



Table of Contents
Categories: Books, Original Fiction, Miscellaneous
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe, Supernatural
Genre: None
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: A Scientific Rejection
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 19523
Read Count: 9898
Published: March 31 2014
Updated: May 09 2014


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Twenty-One And A Mate?

Loving this story so far!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

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Date: April 10 2014

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: A Little Boredom

Loved the update! Can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response:

I'm so glad.

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Date: April 14 2014

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: A History Lesson for Little Pup

Me likey! More please.

Author's Response:

I'm glad you're enjoying it. Another chapter just posted.

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Date: April 01 2014

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.