They both need to stop thinking about Carol's reaction and concentrate on their relationship. Good chapter.
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Mackenzie's right, Carol is a bitch.
Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed Still can't wait for Carol's reaction.
Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed Carol didn't take it too bad. LOL! Hope they become a couple.
Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed Smart girl! She knows she's interested in Scott.
Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed Going to meet the parents?! Scott is serious about MacKenzie.
Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed Can't wait for Scott to meet Grandma. Great update.
Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed Good to know Grandma likes Scott.
Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed Glad they were able to get some without interruption! Thanks for the update.
Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed Always the odd woman out, Keisha Barrett, for once wanted to be the woman on the arm of the man of every woman's dreams. Who knew a lunch date with her girlfriends could hold the answer to her dreams.
Ethan Carrington, British international businessman and confirmed bachelor, was tired of the lifestyle he had been living. Expensive cars, trendy night clubs, leggy models/actresses, and gold diggers were the norm until the day her meet her...
Brandi seems to be a bitch! I like how Ethan stepped in! Great start!
Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed It's official, Brandi is definitely a bitch! Loving the story!
Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed Can't wait for their date! Congrats to your daughter!
Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed Great update! Happy New Year! Congratulations on the birth of your nephew!
Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed I like Ethan. They make a good couple and I hope he makes it to the BBQ. Great update.
Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed Good for Ethan breaking Darrin's nose!
Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed Now that Jacob is gone, will Nikki finally propse? Inquiring minds want to know.
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A'isha is a fashion designer by trade. Though she is in a business filled with superficial spoiled brats and air heads she is different. At 5’3 tall and what most would call a plus size girl she is far from the norm in her line of business, a tulip amongst roses. She shy’s away from the spot light and always has a kind word for everyone she meets her beauty shines from an inner light that refuses to be extinguished.
Elton is a prominent plastic surgeon. Making money from the insecurities of women and men alike in A’ishas line of business has been his way of life for many years. In every person he meets he can spot their flaws in an instant, but meeting A’isha changes his life. Opening his eyes to the possibility of someone who didn’t need to be changed in any way, someone dare he say it perfect.
When the two meet sparks fly and lives are changed forever.
(The Banner is a temp until I can make something better. I just wanted to give the reader an idea of the characters I have in mind.)
I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the start.
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Natasha Roberts is a paediatrician with a healing touch and warm smile at 30 years of age, she is a beautiful woman with a broken spirit which she keeps hidden. When with her group of friends she is the listner, understander and the one her friends depend on for all the answers. Her secret is she that is unable to have children which is the reason her ex-husband gave her for their divorce, she lives to heal children even if it reminds her of what she can never have.
Angelo Luciano Salvatore is a mob boss and the head of the Salvatore Crime Family. He likes to think of himself as a business man when most would call him a ruthless bastard. The day his wife died he become a heartless shell who begins to neglect his son turning to his business for comfort. Until his son is taken to the hospital for a simple check up and is found to have the very disease that killed his mother Polycystic kidney disease. which in time would have killed him if not for Natasha who falls in love with the Christopher’s loving soul and finds herself as a match to donate one of her own kidneys to save his life. When Angelo meets Natasha he is cold and hurtful , Natasha in turn gives him a piece of her mind. Hands on her hips her eyes spitting fire she tells him off then walks away leaving Angelo to reflect on her words and the beautiful woman that Saved his son and made him whole once again.
(The Banner is a temp until I can make something better. I just wanted to give the reader an idea of the characters I have in mind.)
I'm liking it already! Bring on the rest!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review, Im glad you enjoyed the story thus far. Sorry for the long wait
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*** This story will be removed for editing in preparation for publication. ***
Kendra Dentaris is scared of her luck. At twenty-nine, she's the head graphic designer of a popular gaming website, the brand-new owner of a gorgeous downtown condo, and independent to the bone. And she may be in a relationship that's actually going somewhere. That's if Chase McGuire would stop cheating on her.
According to her best friend Prince, he's totally going to propose. That had to be why he invited her out to a remote village out in western Pennsylvania for the weekend. But Kendra takes a wrong turn and the life she knew before literally disappears.
Enjoying the story so far!
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When the lines are drawn, will you risk your life to cross them for love?
In the Summer of 1988, tragedy hits home for Charlene Jacobson and her father when her little brother is killed playing a game of basketball in their Detroit housing projects. She soon finds herself living in the small rural town of Millersville, Georgia, with her estranged grandmother. Millersville is a place where time stands still and the racial divide is as prevalent as the 1950s. Secrets, lies, and betrayal lurk in every corner. Yet, through it all she finds solace in the arms of Ryan Quinn, a white senior track star and the son of the town Sherriff.
Will their love cross the finish line?
EDIT: Crossing the Finish line has been removed from this site and a revised version with added new content has been published on Amazon Kindle Vella (as of November 2022) under the penname, Shelly B Williams. To those of you who have left reviews, added me to your Favorite Authors and Story Alerts, and helped to make CTFL one of the Top Ten Most Favorited Stories on Valent Chamber, I trully appreciate all the support you have shown me over the years. I hope you will continue to support me as I begin the next phase of my journey as a published author. I couldn't have done this without you.
Much Love!
This was a good start!
Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed I'm liking this story very much!
Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed I see the bitch of the story has been introduced. Hope she gets that well deserved Detroit beatdown!
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