Penname: BABYBELL [Contact]

Real name: MAY

Member Since: November 26 2013

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 1032]
Summary:

   

 

A virtual wallflower for most of her life, what will Sasha do when she encounters the first man to ever make her want to be noticed? Dmitri is a man used to being surrounded by the most beautiful things, including women. Will he accept Sasha, a woman who is usually overshadowed by the beauty of her friends? Is he capable of noticing that while her beauty may not be as blatant, it should still be treaured? This is the story of a wallflower and the man she loves.

 

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Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2670
Read Count: 196744
Published: May 31 2013
Updated: November 25 2015


Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

the new sasha is fab , more of her dating and happy , i realy hope DIMITRI gets to see her again  , good for nadia . i wonder who Dimitri is talikg to or has been keepin tabs on her

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Date: January 22 2014

Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

omg you gotta make him eat humble pie ,  dont make her gve in so quickly Dimitri needs to work for it and treat like right

Reviewer: BABYBELL Signed
Date: February 18 2014

Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

update update , suspence is  unbearable lol

Reviewer: BABYBELL Signed
Date: February 09 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 238]
Summary:

This is the sequel to Tess and Jay; they have been married for two years now, and are happy. However with Tess being very busy all of the time and Jay trying to make a name for himself in the company, sometimes they just don't have the time to be as close as they use to be. Combined with this and Jay's new beautifual assistant, Tess' old insecurities are beginning to creep in. Can this marriage survive the strain?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 20
Completed:No
Word count: 52947
Read Count: 28571
Published: November 29 2013
Updated: January 18 2014


Title: Chapter 5: Bitter Cold...

more more and soon , pretty please

Reviewer: BABYBELL Signed
Date: December 02 2013

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 97]
Summary:

*Revamped and revised version of former story The Assistant*

 

Marissa Jacobs is the assistant to her tyrannical boss Ron Kincaid who is going through a bitter divorce. As the holiday season approaches, her will and sanity is tested by Ron. When Ron shows up at Marissa's apartment drunk, Marissa makes it her mission to help Ron see there is more to life than just being bitter and mean. Of course, she wasn't expecting to fall in love with him.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language
Series: None
Chapters: 22
Completed:No
Word count: 28046
Read Count: 54399
Published: December 12 2013
Updated: December 24 2015


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

The way you are depicting Ron is too exagerated , he needs to mellow down a bit . This is the making of a good story  the charecters and dialogue needs to be believable . Ron comes across as too vicious , you can write him as hostile find away of this coming accros , i know it a story but try and make them have more pesronality , emation  

please read this book 

No Compromise  by Rochelle Allers :

 

PS  please continue wrtting , I would love to continue reading your work 



Author's Response:

Okay, I will keep that in mind...I will try to write Ron with more emation...thanks!

Reviewer: BABYBELL Signed
Date: December 14 2013

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