Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45
I personally like the story, and its great so continue it please. I never get a chance to write a review, so here it is. I love the characters, Jodi seems relatable in regards to what she's going through. I can't wait to see how her character develops, I would really like to see her get some girlfriends at some point and maybe throw in some relatives, see those relationships get mended. I like the fact that it's drawn out, makes the story seem really real. Forget about the people who say "its going nowhere". Those are people that's use to mundane boring stories such as: girl meets boy, they become a couple, fall in love, have babies, get married yada yada etc... Make the story as long as you want to. Loyal readers will be there to read till the end. Great story, keep up the good work. You're a great author.
Author's Response: Wow, Bebae! I am humbled by your words. Thanks so much for reviewing today. I am very invested in this story and want to take it to the end.
I think that this story needs to get out there. It is very real to some. Lives aren't always glitz and glory. It can be very ugly, as sad and negative as that may sound.
Again, thanks and I look forward to updating soon.
Reviewer: bebae Signed
Date: June 03 2014