The final moments of the last day of Magdalen's former life.
Holy crap Batman! I love it and can't wait for more!
Thanks Dallas5star! No plans to continue this one at the moment, but I never know when inspiration will hit.
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He made a promise to protect her. Can he keep it? Can he keep her?
Damn that's good.
Thank you so much!
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Chance Gyllenborgh seems to have it all. A pregnant, loving girlfriend, a close knit family, and great life.
Angelina Walker is running. She's a top chef and restaurantuer and a workaholic. She throws herself into work to avoid her personal life. Needing a break, she settles down in a town and meet a variety of different people, including Chance.
Things seem great at first glance but Below The Surface is where monsters lie and sociopaths dwell.
This is going to be good. Everyone seems so innocent. I can't wait to see how this is going to turn out!
Reviewer: Dallas5star SignedI was not prepared......
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This is why I love Matt. Those parents are just snobs. Even if Madison was white and a ballerina she would still get the nasty treatment maybe not as much, but she still wouldn't have been good enough. I agree w another reviewer, something is up w Dougie. He is on the watch list.
Hi Dallas5star,
Dougie on the watch list, had me cracking up that! And yes, the Bradleys are 'very selective of those they socialize with', ha darned snobs! Thanks for reviewing.
K.
Reviewer: Dallas5star SignedCharity had a dark past that nearly condemned her. Running away was her only option from her demons, but it seemed to have landed her on the doorstep to the one man that took control and demanded her body without promise of love....
Wesley Riggs was no saint, Vice President of the Monarchs MC saw to that. His world consisted of bloodshed, his Harley Davis and the chaos from whiskey and women. He made no apologies. The only thing that mattered was the club, until she came and turned his life up on its axis, breaking his shield that masked him for years... how could she tame a beast even if it wants to devour her.
Pulling a Florida Evans, Damn, damn damn!!!!!
LOL!!! i hope that's good!! thank you for the feed back!
Reviewer: Dallas5star SignedSequel to "Love, God & Ultimatums"
Ok, I maybe wrong but I don't feel an ounce of pity for Marisol. She KNEW the risk because she had been to the shop over some years. She knows Diya is a threat to her imaginary relationship with Bran. It is just away for her to pull Brandon out his relationship. Next, Diya needs to grow up. She is coming off immature by her actions. She needs to give Brandon the full disclosure why she is really protecting him from her family. He may not like it, but at least he will have the full picture. Then I can find out the scoop w Brandon's family. Finally Brandon, he needs to open his eyes. Marisol is trying to get w him. She has been waiting around for him to finally see her. She knew the others were fly by night chicks, but Diya is something more an actual threat. So Bran needs to realize what's going on and put Marisol in her place.
In Marisol's mind, the walk wasn't much of a risk. It was a short one in a normally safe neighborhood. No one anticipated what went down. In insisting she not walk alone, Brandon was just being his normal protective self. Diya will eventually explain to Brandon all the secrecy surrounding her family. How and when is the only question. And you might be right about Marisol. We'll definitely see. Thanks Dallas5star!
Reviewer: Dallas5star SignedI stayed up and reread the whole thing. Everything is falling into place w these two. I felt Di's fear, love and anger. I loved how their relationship has grown. It seems as if they are so concerned about protecting each other from their lives, that they miss out on sharing their life w each other. Brandon loves so hard. I was so scared he was going to push her away because of all that mess with Tyler. It explains so much why he he is so protective. You have made me fall further in love w these two. Can't wait to see how Diya's family will react.
You are so right. Brandon and Diya both have a habit of shutting one another out in an attempt to shield the other from the harsh realities of their lives/pasts/families. So far, they've found a way to be open and honest. But that might not always be the case.
The De la Roys will definitely get their facetime with Brandon. And when they do...well, you'll see.
Thanks Dallas5star!
Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed I have dreaded reading this based on the reviews. Damn you Brandon, damn you. After everything, the racism, fighting, her family, his family, this heffa that was always been shady from the beginning is the one. My heart breaks for Diya's pain. He came in where she hadn't let anyone in such a long time. He broke that trust w that one lie. You wrote this one cause I am passed in my feelings, heart broken and in despair
Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed I seriously want to find that heffa and beat her just cause. After all of this, he still won't let this chick go. And Rafe you know that heffa is trash. We still have to deal w the family's mess. This story is good. I am living for updates
Lol! Yep. The De la Roys are most certainly not done. In fact, they're just getting started.
Stay tuned and thank you, Dallas5star!
Update posted : )
Reviewer: Dallas5star SignedMy heart just broke
Aw, Dallas5star. Sending you virtual, COVID-free hugs.
Reviewer: Dallas5star SignedYou will definitely be lost if you don't read "Lonely". This is a continuation...
What would you do if you're lonely?
I was a lil confused because I thought she had gave Steve the boot in the last chapters. I wonder why she agreed to go back to a sexual relationship with him. I thought maybe she would still take some time for herself. I am curious to see where this story will lead.
Hello, Dallas5star! Please go back to Lonely and review the last chapter. It will refresh your memory :)
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Thoroughly revised and reuploaded!
Willow Carter is a plus-sized girl with lots of attitude and very low self-esteem. When her mother and oler sister force her to jog to slim down for her sister's wedding, she is attacked by a madman and rescued by a savior. But just because a man saves your life doesn't mean you should trust him. Soon she throws herself into a thrilling game of cat and mouse that brings more pain than pleasure and puts everyone she loves in harm's way.
You have me in tears, but this needed to happen. I was so worried about Sebastian. He is so vulnerable. Surprised that he actually told Willow the truth, this goes back to the scene where he was reminding himself about her. I don't trust that joker Jasper. He was sent there for a specific purpose. Thank you for this update. I am so looking forward to the next part.
Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed Ok, this makes sense. The version before had me wondering if she ever missed Simon or anything. This is really tying together so nicely. I can't wait to see how this will continue to evolve. Still glad he got what he had coming. And Sebastian, no words other than I freaking love him. Who is your muse for him? He is scary, but you can't help but be drawn to him. Want to draw him out. You are doing your thing, I love love it. And by the way my muse for Willow is me lol.
At the time I was writing Save Me From Myself, it was a simple NANOWRI project that spiraled into something else. I wanted to concentrate on the actual relationship between Willow and Sebastian and their obstacles. In which the whole Simon situation was very rushed and not given a lot of thought. This time around, I want to focus some more on Simon's situation so that the reveal is better. My muse for Sebastian is Charlie Weber with a beard from How to Get Away with Murder. When I saw him on the show looking dark and sexy, he was my ultimate inspiration for even writing the story the first time. His show character and Sebastian share a lot in common when it comes to doing dark and dirty things to protect the people he cares about. And LOL, sometimes my muse for Willow is me too. But in all actuality, the real muse is Anita Marshall.
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I have been waiting for an update on this one. This is one of my favorite stories of the Chamber. This rewrite is so good. Willow was one of the few characters that I could connect with and I feel so many of her issues about her weight.You get more invested in Willow and Sebastian. There is more building in their connection. Love the introduction of her friends and how he interacts with them. That ole mother and sister need their acts tuned up. I can't wait to see how this will go. You are doing a beautiful job with this.
OMG, thank you so much. It makes me so happy to know that this story is a favorite of yours. I am so glad that you are able to relate to Willow. I do too. I think she has very common struggles that so many women deal with on a daily basis. It is a wonderful thing when you can identity with a chapter. I am glad that you like the new additions. I hope you like all the new additions, twists, and turns to come.
Reviewer: Dallas5star SignedWillow's reaction is very realistic. That is one of the biggest draws that I have with this story. You have woven a beautiful tale of darkness, sensuality and realism. I love it.
Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed This is a brief story about revenge. The prey and the victim's names are not included.
Now this how, you get your revenge. I would love to see this more flushed out with the characters. How long was she there, why he took her. Very well written.
Hello, I posted this scene because I wanted to see if readers would be interested in this story. If so, I planned to write the entire story after I've completed the one I'm currently invested in. I was surprised by all the great responses, and I thank each and every one of you for enjoying the scene. I shall return with a more fleshed out story, from beginning to end, in the future. Thank you again. ~ Virginia Gilbert
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What will a woman do when her back is up against a wall? Will she take the beating or will she charge forward? Follow the story of Ariana as she escapes an abusive relationship and tries to redefine herself. As she moves back to Texas, she struggles with adjusting to a life without the abuse. Take this journey as she tries to move forward with her life because she refuse to let her past control her future.
Ah, you have to finish this one. Ariana needs her story to be told. She may give someone else the courage to get out of their situation.
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"We all exist to a certain degree Nathan."
I will have to check out more. I hated when she died. They had a connection that was beautifully done even to the end. You could feel his hurt as he grieved her.
Reviewer: Dallas5star SignedThe saga of a southern family rooted in forbidden love told through the eyes of the biracial daughter Beatrice.
I have always been wary around these types of plots, but wow you have pulled me into the story. I am pulling for Bea & Teddy. Eleanor needs a 2016 check. Levi right now he needs to stay at the big house. I am not really feeling him right now!
Reviewer: Dallas5star SignedWhen Wilhelmina "Mina" Porter comes back into thier lives after ten years; Wide reciever Reid Stone finds himself questioning who Blake McCarthy is as a person again. Mina was Reid's best friend and maybe even more. Blake was also his best friend, teammate and almost like a brother to him. However one secret that Mina has been harboring for the past decade could very well force Reid to pick one friend over the other.
That rat Bastard. Oh I can't wait until he gets his.
Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed Emily has never wanted a man so bad until Elijah Smith. An Illinois born and bred small town bad boy who grew up just down the road from her. The only problem is, he's her childhood and high school bully. So when he comes around with flowers, muscles, and tattoos she isn't so willing to forget his torturous ways so easily.
I agree good snippet. Would love to see how this one turns out.
Reviewer: Dallas5star SignedI agree good snippet. Would love to see how this one turns out.
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COMPLETED! (CHAPTER 30 & 31 UPDATED ON 4/20)
Thirty-seven-year-old Sugar Wallace used her bitter divorce as a sweet inspiration to pursue her lifelong dream of opening a trendy dessert and wine restaurant called Sugar Mama. Her friends and family want her to dive back into the dating game, but Sugar refuses to open her heart to another. Not when the man she gave her heart to for eighteen years of marriage crushed it after cheating on her with a young Instagram model. She's perfectly content with a busy life of running a successful business. Then one night, she witnesses a forty-six-year-old beaten man get pushed from a car and everything changes.
Why can't I find a guy like Chef? He will keep you on your toes. My favorite kind. Loving this story. Can't wait to see how this will enfold.
LOL, wait until you see what Chef has up his sleeve.
Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed Why can't I find a guy like Chef? He will keep you on your toes. My favorite kind. Loving this story. Can't wait to see how this will enfold.
He is a handful, LOL!
Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.
