Penname: lannasage [Contact]

Real name: Olanna

Member Since: May 24 2014

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Born to sin by sweetrst1
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 56]
Summary:

Kylie and her best friend samantha uncover a secret about their families that they would have rather not known. After reaching the age where their curse is activated they will no longer be able to face the world as human beings. Instead they will have to learn to deal with the fact that they were dark creatures and meant to live a life of sin but Kylie has other things in mind.

 

This story may shock and surprise you and will contain twisted violence as well as odd sexual exploits. though it is graphic contains heavy christian spiritualiity. Just warning you!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Fantasy
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Femslash, Graphic Violence, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content , Spritualism, Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 24
Completed:No
Word count: 29218
Read Count: 14701
Published: October 14 2012
Updated: July 16 2017

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Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Hi, this is my first time posting a review on this site....just wanted you to know that your story is one of those I look forward to reading

  i don't think there was anything particularly wrong with any of the chapters and you're doing a great job so far.....

 oh, and what part of Africa Chidike from? cuz I'm African (Nigerian)...and in my language (Igbo) the name means God is strong.....meanwhile, the pic of Kianna is Genevieve Nnaji, a Nigerian actress *smiley*

 i wish Kianna had ended up with her fellow succubi though *wink*...great job still. I look forward to reading more



Author's Response:

I am so happy to be your first review for chidike I did not really look up the region of africa that I wanted him to be from so that is something that I am going to have to research, but I do tend to lean towards nigeria when I think of africa. I know that it is a much bigger place but that is where my childhood babysitter came from and I really admired her. Your review has just helped me figure out more of where I am going with this story so thank you! I looked up african names and meanings for Chidike and that is how I chose his name. Initially I was going to make Kianna end up with Rogelio, but I couldn't make it fit I think I want to change the image for chidike though because he is alot cuter in my headthanks again and have a good day!

 Reviewer: lannasage Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: February 19 2015
Fever by Limitlessly
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 45]
Summary:

Who knew Montana had so many temptations?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 5577
Read Count: 5086
Published: June 21 2015
Updated: June 23 2015

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great start, loving it so far. The warning of Threesome+ tells of good things to come. Was getting bored with all the one man-one woman stories.

  Nice to have something new and exciting to look forward to...and like Raptusmind said, we need an update ASAP

 Reviewer: lannasage Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: June 21 2015
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm guessing all three friends will share her...loved the description of Adam...seems like the calm and collected one

Wanted a lot more from this chapter, wasn't really digging the impromptu sex with Sawyer before a proper introduction to the other two guys. So hopefully we'll go full circle in the next and have a meeting of all four characters. Great work so far.

 Reviewer: lannasage Signed starstarstarstar
Date: June 23 2015

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