Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45
I never left my review with the intention to discourage you so if that's what I did, I personally apologize. It's your story you take it where you please, post the chapters. If this ends up being a 200 chapter story then do that. You have plenty of readers who love this story and will follow if until you can think of no more. Don't me a few readers undermine your entire creation. You've made an entire world for these characters and they deserve whatever ending you give them. In my review i have nothing altogether constructive to say because I really don't know where the story was going. Not saying it has to be to the point and short, but I've read long stories with clear and concise complexity. Literally, when I read your story I get confused. And that's entirely personal. I don't even consider it a big deal, I apologize if you do.
Anyway, I thought I would come clear things up since my review was negative. I still wont continue with the story (I should have stopped at the rape scene because I've been a victim of abuse and I don't like reading about it--again personal), but you still have my support because every writer on here deserves that. We are already a disenfranchised part of the literary world and even in our stories we've been reduced to sex symbols and skin tones and hair textures. So you keep making Jodi human and keep portraying men as insecure beings who mess up too. Not every rich man is Prince Charming and not every lonely black woman is just shy. Thank you for that and I wish you completion and the very best.
Author's Response: Thanks for giving me an opportunity to address your comments.
Please don't be apologetic for your review. It actually wasn't that negative. There were quite a few readers that shared your views and believe me, their wording wasn't as diplomatic as yours! :)
Your review helped to prompt my request to the readers. I have taken every one of the responses seriously and will definitely take suggestions under consideration. I have a pretty good idea of what I need to do in order to proceed without compromising the way I've written the story.
I have actually been sitting on it for years.
Please forgive me, Idiotendial, if any of the chapters somehow triggered something from your past. I have used this as a platform to deal with issues that I carry from my own abuse. Jodi's character is very difficult for me to convey to the reader. I feel her with every fiber of my being - like I said I have had to dig really deep.
I have truly tried to remain sensitive to those who have suffered from any tragic events. The world in which we live can be beautiful but it can also be very ugly...
Thanks again for your comments and please return to "Lonely" when you feel that you are up to it.
Reviewer: idiotendenial Signed
Date: June 03 2014