Penname: fcho4506 [Contact]

Real name: Fauzia Choudhry

Member Since: November 30 2014

Membership status: Member

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Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 65]
Summary:

He was stuck, having a midlife crisis before the ripe age of fifty. But then he met her. And she became much more than life. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 29164
Read Count: 30443
Published: November 28 2014
Updated: March 13 2015


Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I am liking your story a lot and the characters and would like to see how they develop.  The age difference only makes the story very interesting.  Plz update soon.

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Date: March 04 2015

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Plz update soon.....

Reviewer: fcho4506 Signed
Date: March 04 2015

Title: More Than Life

The story is good but there is just too much inner dialogue and self reflection which is dragging the story down.  Can the story move past his ex wife and have more interaction between Jamica and ken.  More dialogue would be nicer and less description to keep the story interesting.  Plz keep Jamica's backstory brief so the story could move into the present. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for your observation. This is something I have been mapping out in my head for the past two chapters-- how to keep the dialogue brief. The story wont move past his marriage, however, but there will be more interaction between Ken and Jamica. Thank you! :}

Reviewer: fcho4506 Signed
Date: March 13 2015

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 53]
Summary:

He was a bad boy who was used to getting whatever he wanted.

She was the good girl who refused to bow down to his ways.

Together they clashed.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Dark Fic
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 9292
Read Count: 10875
Published: December 01 2014
Updated: March 16 2015


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Detention

Just a few things : university's do not have principals they have Deans and you do not get detention in university you get suspension depending on your offense.

Reviewer: fcho4506 Signed
Date: March 17 2015

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Detention

Just a few things : university's do not have principals they have Deans and you do not get detention in university you get suspension depending on your offense.

Reviewer: fcho4506 Signed
Date: March 17 2015

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 44]
Summary:

Daniel has always been late for everything in his life. He's been late for puberty, dating girls, and even the "monkey in the bush". When he discovers his new neighbor next door is a woman, a very pretty woman, will he take a chance and ask her out? Or will his former bully, Nick Young, beat him to it?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 7978
Read Count: 10466
Published: January 23 2015
Updated: May 12 2015


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Very good.  Keep up the humor.  So funny. Update soon plz.

Reviewer: fcho4506 Signed
Date: January 25 2015

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

This is funny.  You write well. 

Reviewer: fcho4506 Signed
Date: January 25 2015

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Oh my goodness.....poor Daniel.....this is just so funny.

Reviewer: fcho4506 Signed
Date: February 10 2015

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 22]
Summary:

 

 

Are you born with your demons? there with you from inception, to birth, sentient beings living inside you? or are they created through experiences, molded and fed by time, dormant yet thriving in the dark catacombs of repressed memories until they becomes too prevalent to ignore? I want to know because my demons have become my neighbors. Like pilgrims they've landed in the New world of my being, settled there long before I knew their intentions. They've consummated with my fear to create children that now feel like relatives, their lineage carved so deeply into the fibers of my being that nothing can uproot them now.


Until he comes along with his sun hot radiance and completely eclipses the flickering candle that is me. He's lucifer before the fall beautiful but the devil is in the way he looks at me. In the way he brands me with his touch and possesses my soul with just a kiss.


Cole Larsen is my beginning and my end. Protector, friend and lover, he becomes my sole religion. At his side I become fearless, in worshiping him I find myself. But nothing is forever. Moments are ephemeral. No matter how much you want them to last, time eventually catches up to you.


We ran out of time.




Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 2726
Read Count: 1741
Published: February 05 2015
Updated: February 05 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

The story seems interesting but too much self monologue....just drags the story...try to build the plot without too much introspection but with dialogue and simple description.

Reviewer: fcho4506 Signed
Date: February 05 2015

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 256]
Summary:

Working as a Home Health Aide and struggling to make ends meet. All Aries Washington wanted to do was prove the child she had three years ago, was in fact the son of Cameron Marino. She didn't have any delusions about them putting their differences aside and falling madly in love. Why would she? Cameron was engaged to her ex best friend Ambrosia, A.K.A Ms. Perfect. So imagine her surprise when he not only demands she moves in with him, but marry him too.

Aries had no idea that once she gave birth to her own little Marino, that, that meant she automatically belonged to the whole Marino family. With a group of people who take their strong family ties seriously, she's about to find out that once your in, there's no out. 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: Marino Family
Chapters: 12
Completed:No
Word count: 19092
Read Count: 53288
Published: May 14 2015
Updated: June 01 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You have not disclosed cameron's age, but given that he is a well established lawyer with his own firm and that he must have attended law school I would say he has to be at least 28 if not more.....am I Right?   

 

Reviewer: fcho4506 Signed
Date: May 15 2015

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 225]
Summary:

Part 2



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 11288
Read Count: 22097
Published: June 09 2015
Updated: October 05 2015


Title: Lovers' Dance Part 2

Love the update.  And thank you for putting in 2 chapters.  Can't understand Madi's masochistic tendencies....Matt loves her to death and she is not sure about marrying him but her own family has shot her down and she keeps on running back to them....urgh. ..so not liking madi....she is ready to please all those who hurt like portia but is hesitant about being with Matt the one seriously good thing in her life....even dante has pointed this out to her.....maybe she needs to discuss this issue with her psychotherapist. .....plz keep the updates coming.....can't wait

Reviewer: fcho4506 Signed
Date: July 29 2015

Title: Lovers' Dance Part 2

IF madi is hung up about family she should just marry Matt and start her own family, instead of just waiting for aunt cleo to accept her.  Here is a delicious man who loves her to death and wants to marry her and she keeps running to people who don't want her.   One minute Matt is her soul mate next she is not so sure she will marry him......grating.  hope she moves past this.  Love to know more about the mystery woman at the performance, who is trying to hurt madi and what is going on with Geoffrey and his plans for madi....thanks for the update.

Reviewer: fcho4506 Signed
Date: July 29 2015

Title: Lovers' Dance Part 2

Thanks for the update.  Madi is finally growing up.  She has realized that Matt is in for the long haul and yes he is dominant and alpha but there is such a warm soft side to him which only madi is privy to.  Glad their relationship is moving forward and madi is learning to put aside her insecurities about Matt.   Matt for all his bossy ways is still stands by her.  Good on her.  More plz

Reviewer: fcho4506 Signed
Date: July 31 2015

Title: Lovers' Dance Part 2

Oh this just so oolong good.  Please, please, please update sooner rather than later....

Reviewer: fcho4506 Signed
Date: September 02 2015

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Just to add I am so glad they eloped and for once decided what is best for them.....This is after all between them and to hell with whoever is against them which includes dante. ....He is so irritating. ..As if madi cannot make up her own mind.....just love these two......so glad Matt is in Madi's life, the only one who gives her balance.  Perfect. Plz update soon.  

Reviewer: fcho4506 Signed
Date: September 02 2015

Title: Lovers' Dance Part 2

I just keep reading the story so far over and over again......plz update soon.  

Reviewer: fcho4506 Signed
Date: September 17 2015

Title: Lovers' Dance Part 2

Thank you for the update. Love it.  Matt is just so.......where do you get men like Matt Now?   Madi's conversation with Jeremy was so funny.....love how they communicate together.  Can't wait for the next update.   Something tells me their new found bliss is going to be short lived.   Loved the reactions from the family.  Typical Grumps. ...though he in his own way seems to have Madi's back.  Well if portia gets up to more tricks only Grumps would be able to stave it off.  What is the reason for the discord between will and portia Though?   It is more than just his infidelities.   I guess all in good time.  

Reviewer: fcho4506 Signed
Date: September 28 2015

Title: Lovers' Dance Part 2

Thanks for the update. Great as usual.  From the looks of it, honeymoon is over for m&m.  Matt is in for a rude shock RE madi not wanting a baby. And madi is starting to regret getting married.  Hopefully she will not try and mess things up for herself and Matt because from the looks of it Matt is completely smitten with her. 

Reviewer: fcho4506 Signed
Date: October 05 2015

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Grrrr madi.....the issues madi has with everything in her life.....she must have Dr brown on speed dial...

Reviewer: fcho4506 Signed
Date: October 06 2015

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Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 122]
Summary:

The year 2016 looks promising for Faith Jamison she's finally going to acheive her purpose in the world and feel good about herself for the first time in her life. Women are now finally allowed to train to be Navy SEALS. Faith isn't going to let that oppurtnuity slip by her not when she sees a future that is brighter than her painful past.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Inspirational
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 25940
Read Count: 51731
Published: September 29 2015
Updated: March 21 2016


Title: Chapter 4: BUTTERFLY

She is 15 and he is not her father.......how come the hospital did not alert child services?  You need ID to verify you are a family member....and Howard cannot profess to being her husband because the hospital would also alert the cops.....I mean the hospital was not even suspicious....she was pushed....There had to bruising.  The hospital was not even remotely suspicious.   Really........

Reviewer: fcho4506 Signed
Date: October 09 2015

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 18]
Summary:

A 21-year old college grad accepts a scholarship to study in Russia. During her time there she makes lasting memories with the community. Upon returning stateside she finds that there is one aspect of her trip that won't let her go. And she finds that maybe it's just what she needs.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 2139
Read Count: 4116
Published: March 15 2016
Updated: April 20 2016


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Like to see where you go with this

Reviewer: fcho4506 Signed
Date: March 15 2016

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 7]
Summary:

ELIZABETH GRIFFIN 

NOW AVAILABLE  WWW.ELIZABETHGRIFFIN.NET



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3570
Read Count: 5088
Published: April 05 2016
Updated: May 27 2017


Title: Chapter 1: A Teaser

Is it an international edition?  Because your other books are available on amazon australia  but not the temporary mistress.  Could u possibly post it on amazon international so that I can buy it in sydney.  Thanks.



Author's Response:

Hi fcho4506,

It will be available internationally in May 2016.  You will be able to buy it then.  Thanks.

Elizabeth Griffin

Reviewer: fcho4506 Signed
Date: April 07 2016

Title: Chapter 1: A Teaser

Is it available internationally or only in the US?



Author's Response:

Hello,

Thanks for checking out THE TEMPORARY MISTRESS.  It will be available in May 2016 as an ebook on www.amazon.com, www.bn.com, www.kobo.com and www.allromance.com.  I hope you enjoy.

Elizabeth Griffin

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Date: April 06 2016

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 11]
Summary:

When Celine's two best friends take her on a wild ride out to Las Vegas, she comes to the realization that something that happen in Vegas are best left there. However, some situations have a tendacy to follow you home. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 2474
Read Count: 3133
Published: April 06 2016
Updated: August 07 2017


Title: Chapter 1: Looking Ain't Free

Do continue......so far it sounds really interesting.  

Reviewer: fcho4506 Signed
Date: April 07 2016

Rated: Members ONLY: 17 and Older
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[Reviews - 185]
Summary:

Coming home can be harder than staying away sometimes.

Home has now been published on Amazon and there's quite a bit more added from where I had originally ended this story. Hope you all enjoy it.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 21
Completed:No
Word count: 21
Read Count: 18591
Published: June 10 2016
Updated: October 06 2016


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hi k carr great update as usual and thanks for your reponse.  All is well with me and looking forward to ld2.  Ld1 already a part of my kindle library.  Just a request, if you plan to publish ld2 on amazon please make it an international edition so that I am able to buy it in Australia.   That said keep writing please as it is a joy to read your books.



Author's Response:

Hey fcho4506,

It's lovely knowing you enjoy my work. I had assumed once published via KDP it becomes available on all their markets including amazon.com.au. Will def look into that before LD2 goes live.

K.

Reviewer: fcho4506 Signed
Date: June 12 2016

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.