Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Just Breathe
I think it's rather pathetic of her to have ttorch for the friend when he's clearly showing he's disinterested. He's gushing about his romantic date and beautiful gifts to his fiance and she still wants him? I know you'll probably make him break up with the fiance so that he will be in a relationship with her or give her a meaningless relationship as she waits for him to ' come to his senses' anyway that's the plot for many stories here. It paints women in a bad light and maybe it's a reflection of how pathetic we've become in society.
Author's Response: I haven't had the time to look at the reviews, but I must say that I agree with your statement. At the time that I wrote this story, it was never meant for Cole to be with anyone other than Kit and it still isn't. Laura is never developed as a character. But overall, I'm happy with the outcome of my story and don't foresee me making any changes. Keep being honest. I'm very happy that you were. I'm looking forward to hearing more from you.
Reviewer: freader Signed
Date: July 28 2017